专题07 书面表达(含答案解析)---安徽省2017-2021年5年中考1年模拟英语试题分项汇编

5年（2017-2021）中考1年模拟英语试题分项详解（安徽专用）

专题07 书面表达(解析版)

一、2021年

七、材料作文

61．假定你是李华，曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括：

1.事情经过；

2.个人感悟。

注意：

1.词数80~100；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；

4.短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：pocket money (n.零花钱); meaningful (adj.有意义的)

Once I Was Praised

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【答案】One possible version

Once I Was Praised

Once I was praised because I did something meaningful with my pocket money.

One day, I happened to know some students in a school were hungry for knowledge but they didn’t have enough books. I decided to offer my help. With all the pocket money I saved, I bought some books online, and gave them away to the school. My parents were very happy and praised me when they heard about it. They said I did a meaningful thing.

I believe that every little bit helps. I will continue to do what I can to help others.

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Once I Was Praised”为题，结合提示进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍事情经过；第三段描述个人感悟。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

二、2020年

61．假定你是李华。某英文报“My Hometown”专栏面向中学生招募小记者，请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下：

1.熟悉家乡；

2.乐于交流；

3.擅长英语。

注意：1.词数80-100；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；

4.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：journalist (n.记者)；column (n.专栏)

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua 61．例文：

Dear Sir/Madam,

I hear your newspaper needs journalists for the column My Hometown. I hope to be a member of the team.

First, I know a lot about my hometown, such as its history and culture. Besides, I used to work as a journalist for my school newspaper and I did a very good job. I'm easy-going and always ready to communicate with others. Moreover, I have a good knowledge of English, and I'm skillful at expressing myself clearly in English.

I'm sure to be the right person you are looking for. I'd be thankful if I could get this chance.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

1. 题干解读：本题属于书信作文，信件的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据提示要点写一封自荐信介绍自己并申请成为小记者。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。

2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，先表达写信目的，然后根据要点提示介绍自己，最后再次点明确信自己是最合适的人。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。

3. 高分亮点：

单词和短语：hope to do sth.；a member of；such as；besides；used to do sth.；work as；do a very good job；be ready to do sth.；communicate with；moreover；have a good knowledge of；be skillful at；in English；look for。句型：and连接并列句；省略that的定语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。

三、2019年

Ⅺ．书面表达

66.假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安，请你用英文给他写封电子邮件，谈