2018年作文复习专题-----感谢信

三元整合导学模式英语学科导学稿
班级 组别 姓名 座位号
主编人：韦倩 审稿人：高三英语备课组 编写时间：2017-04-09
一、课型：写作课——感谢信
二、学习目标：
1. 掌握写作的审题思路
2. 记住应用文写作之 感谢信的写作框架和常用句型
3. 学会如何拓展内容，灵活写作
三、学习重点和难点:
记住应用文写作之感谢信的写作框架和常用句型
学会如何拓展内容，灵活写作
四、课时安排：2课时
五、教学步骤：
（一）文体概述
感谢信是指在日常学习和生活中，当收到馈赠、邀请、赴宴、照顾、慰
问、祝贺时，给对方道谢的信件。

感谢信应写得真诚、具体、及时。

通常包括以下内容：感谢的原因→对方给予的帮助或礼物→对方的帮助对自己
的意义→给出细节→再次致谢。

（二）必备词汇及短语、句型
1. thank gratitude
2. accept sincere
3. be grateful to sb. for sth.
4. be thankful to sb. for sth.
5. express my thanks for sth.
6. express my gratitude for sth.
7. I am writing this letter to thank you for …
8. I am writing to express my thanks for
9. I’m grateful to you for your encouragement…
10. Thanks to your help, I overcame the difficulty…
11. Without your help, I would not have succeeded in…
12. You are so helpful and warm-hearted, and please accept my sincere thanks.
13. 我写这封信是为了表达我对……的感谢
____________________
14. 请接受我诚挚的谢意……____________________
15.我真诚地感激…… _____________________
16.非常感谢你给我寄来的礼物。

18.我写这封信是为了表达你帮我提高英语口语的谢意。

19请再次接受我诚挚的谢意。

20. 我谨借此机会感谢您给予我们的及时支持和帮助。

（三）感谢信的结构
第一段：表达写信的目的是表达感谢之情
第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助；
第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。

（四）解题步骤：
1）审题：
确定写作的类型---应用文—感谢信？
确定话题、人称：第一，第二人称。

时态：现在时，过去时
2)列提纲：用自己的话将题目要求的要点陈述出来。

①开头：问候、自我介绍、写作目的
②内容：如果题目给出比较详细的写作要点，把这些要点整理成完整的几个
句子；如果题目没有给出比较详细的写作要点，你可以结合题目进一步详细说明事情经过并赞赏对方给与的帮助或款待。

③结尾：再次表达感谢还可表达回报愿望
3）写作：
4）检查：①是否写完要点；②是否有语法错误。

（五）例题：
假定你是李华，去年是一名交换生(exchange student)去美国学习，得到布朗一家的照顾，回国后写一封感谢信给布朗夫妇，要点如下：
1. 感谢生活上的关心，克服了思乡病。

2. 感谢学习上的帮助，口语进步很大。

3. 欢迎到中国做客。

注意：1. 词数100左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

1）审题：（写信类型）
人称：
时态：
2）列提纲：用自己的话将题目要求的要点陈述出来。

第一段：问候
写信目的(共2 句话左右) 第二段：（题目给出三个要点,把这三个要点整理成完整的句子，适当扩展成5句话左右）
①
②
③
④
⑤
第三段：再次表达_____________还可表达回报愿望。

(2 句话左右)
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brown,
How are things going with you recently? I am writing to express my thanks to you for giving me a chance to live in your family while I was an exchange student in America!
That was such a hard time for me during my stay in America. but you were so kind and warm hearted to take care of me, which did let me overcome my homesickness. Besides, you help me a lot in my study and my spoken English got great progress. Thanks to your help, I won the first place in the English Speaking Competition of the city.
Please accept my sincere thanks again. If there is a chance, welcome to China. I am willing to be your guide to show you around. I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
课堂作业（一）
假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的Mr. Brown的资助，可以重返校园。

你给Mr. Brown写了一封信，内容如下：
★收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感激；
★在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励；
★决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；
★盼望见到Mr. Brown，希望他寄来一张照片。

注意：1. 书信应包括以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 词数：100左右
课外作业（二）
假定你是李华，现在是华南师范大学(South China Normal University)大一新生你高三时在王老师的帮助下，英语进步很大，为表示感谢，给王老师写一封感谢信。

要点如下：
1. 梦想成真，考上理想大学。

2. 因为王老师的辅导和鼓励，英语由差变好。

3. 对老师表示祝福。

注意：1. 词数100左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

课外作业（三）
假设你是李华，昨天下午参加了才艺大赛（Talent Show），并获得一等奖。

你的外教Mike曾给与你不少建议和帮助。

现在请你向正在美国度假的Mike 写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 告知获奖；
2. 介绍参赛情况；
3. 表达获奖感受。

注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

课外作业（四）
假设你是李华，你的班主任莫老师在你高中三年给了你很多帮助，在你毕业之际，给莫老师写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1.环境适应方面
2. 学习方面
3. 生活方面（与人相处等）
注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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•课外作业（一）
•Dear Mr. Brown，
•I am Li hua. I am writing to express my gratitude for your helping me.
With the help of you , I have returned to school.
•Thank you so much for the money and books you sent me. I have been working hard since I went back to school. with the help of my teachers, I have made great progress in my studies. They often praise me and encourage me. I have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress. I would like to meet you in person to express my thanks to you, but I have no opportunity to do so. Would you please send me a photo of yourself?
•Please accept my sincere thanks again and best wishes to you!
•Yours Sincerely,
•Li Hua
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•课外作业（二）
•Dear Mr. Wang,
•How is everything going with you?I am writing to express my thanks for helping me improve my English.
•Without your help, I would not be a student of South China Normal University. I still remember the days when you taught me English in Grade 3 of senior school. My English was once poor, but you were very patient with me and tried to tutor me after class. My English was greatly improved because of your encouragement. W ithout your help, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges.
•Again, I sincerely thank you for your help! Wish you be healthy and lead
a happy life!
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•Yours,
•Li Hua
•课外作业（三）
•Dear Mike,
•I’m writing to express my gratitude to you. If it had not been for your assistance，I would not have been given the first prize in the English Talent Show yesterday afternoon.
•Before it was my turn I watched others and got very nervous. But when I was on the stage, I thought of all your efforts to help me during the past few months and gradually calmed down. Although the question-and-answer section was the most challenging part, I got through it quite smoothly by remembering all your suggestions.
When the judge announced the result, I was very excited, but it was really a pity that
you were not there.
•Please accept my sincere thanks ag ain. I’m looking forward to your return to China.
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•课外作业（四）
•Dear Mr. Mo,
•I’m writing to express m y sincere thanks for your help in my high school.
•I still remember that it was you who noticed me and had a friendly talk with me when I feel upset because I didn’t adjust myself well to the new school. What’s more, you encouraged me to make more friends and told me how to get along with my classmates. For my study, you not only asked me to reflect on it after each examination, but also you urged me to continue to work hard in order to make more progress. In addition, you were always willing to give me a hand whenever I was in trouble in life.•My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description. Please accept my warmest thanks again.。