初三英语第二学期书面表达英语作文汇编单元测试提优卷

初三英语第二学期书面表达英语作文汇编单元测试提优卷
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·广东中考模拟）马上要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍的。

班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School” 主题班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。

请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。

My Life At School
How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school.
【答案】My Life At School
How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.
In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.
I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题，写一篇发言稿。

题目中利用表格的形式，展示
了文章的具体内容，学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。

审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达需要使用正确时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。

内容应主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回忆；然后是不开心的事情；最后展望自己未来的高中生活。

表格中有非常具体的提示，但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语，应把他们变成自己的话，并用英语表达出来。

写作时应注意：文章中应包括表格中的所有信息，不能遗漏要点；第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充，注意应合情合理，与上文很好地衔接。

另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯，用完整的句子表达。

句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次。

同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并展望了未来。

短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰。

短文分三段，第一段基本是题目中给出的开头，作者使用一句话引出下文；第二段是主体，介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情；最后一段对未来进行了展望。

各部分内容安排合理，有层次、有条理。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，注意了动词正确形式的变化。

句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。

语言准确、得体，表达自然、流畅。

短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.等。

2．（·北京中考模拟）“友善”是一种美德，它犹如阳光和雨露照耀并滋润着美德的形成。

同学们，请奉献你的友善，为创建和谐社会做出贡献。

某英文网站正在开展以“友善待人、快乐生活”为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你对他人提供善意帮助的经历。

主要内容包括:你对友善行为的认识和理解，你平时做哪些友善的事情，以及你这样做的美好愿望。

提示词语:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society
提示问题:What do you think of showing kindness to others?
How do you help them kindly in your daily life?
What do you dream about being kind to them?
It's our duty to show kindness to others around us.
_________________________________________________
【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be ki nd to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our community, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.
I believe our society will become better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，谈谈生活中你对他人提供善意帮助的经历。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

3．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达
近年来，越来越多的中学将一些电子产品例如电脑、手机，甚至iPad 等引入了课堂。

在提高教学质量的同时也使得教育更加多样化。

但人们对此的看法褒贬不一。

请根据以下表格，在英语课上和同学谈谈你的看法。

要点：
要求：1.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2.短文必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥；
3.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into class．We can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by computer.____________________________【答案】Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into class．We can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by computer.It save some people and protect the environment. Students can watch videos on the computer.Therefore they are active in class. Some people think students shouldn’t use computers in puters are too expensive.It is easy for students to fall into the games.
I think students should use iPad in class.The teachers don’t allow students to play games in class.It is good for students to use iPad in class.
【解析】
【详解】
根据题意近年来，越来越多的中学将一些电子产品例如电脑、手机，甚至iPad 等引入了课堂。

在提高教学质量的同时也使得教育更加多样化。

但人们对此的看法褒贬不一。

请根据以下表格，在英语课上和同学谈谈你的看法。

我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

【点睛】
这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。

如Some people think students shouldn’t use computers in puters are too expensive.It is easy for students to fall into the games. The teachers don’t allow students to play games in class.这些重点短语和句型，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

4．（·重庆中考模拟）假如你是李华，你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难。

请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。

要求：
1.80—120 词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考要点：
1.活动情况简介（时间、内容……）;
2.遇到的困难（如：缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……）；
3.请求帮助的事项。

Dear Nick,
How’s everything going?
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________
Yours,
Li Hua 【答案】Dear Nick,
How’s everything going?
Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I’m very interested in it. There are many different activation in the festival such as reading good English books. sharing good stories and so on. It’s a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don’t have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?
I expect to hear from you soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇书信作文。

假如你是李华，你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难。

请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。

首先要注意书信的书写格式，文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。

在写作时，要注意理顺要点，防
止漏写；注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求。

参考要点：
1.活动情况简介（时间、内容……）;
2.遇到的困难（如：缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……）；
3.请求帮助的事项。

5．（·云南中考模拟）书面表达
提示：转眼间三年的初中生活即将结束，在这三年的学习与生活中一定有些让你难忘的人或事物。

请以“ An Unforgettable …”为题，写一篇英语作文，记叙你难忘的人或事物以及你的感受。

要求：1. 请先将题目补充完整后再作答；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 将短文写在答题卡上。

写在本试题卷上无效。

【答案】Everyone has an unforgettable thing in his life. So do I.
when I was a middle student, I celebra ted my mother’s birthday for her. I cleaned the room, mopped the floor and also bought a present for her. I waited for mum at home after doing all these things. When mum came back, I jumped to her and gave her the present and said happy birthday to her. Mum was so happy and surprised that she hugged me for a long time. This is an unforgettable thing in my life because this was the first time I did the housework and felt how tired to do the job and this was also the first time I noticed mum was so happy that she even cried. Though I was tired, I felt happy.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇话题作文。

根据以“ An Unforgettable …”为题，写一篇英语作文，记叙你难忘的人或事物以及你的感受。

文章时态用一般过去式时，人称主要为第一人称。

本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。

在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构
是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求。

6．（·湖南中考模拟）书面表达
假如你校英语社团即将举办为“My hobby” 的征文活动，请你根据下面的提示问题写一篇短文介绍你的爱好，然后参加此活动。

提示问题：
1. What’s your hobby?
2. Why do you like it?
3. When did you start it?
4. How do you benefit from（得益于） it?
要求：
1. 紧扣主题，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
2. 不少于80词。

My hobby
【答案】My Hobby
I have many hobbies, such as singing, listening to music, reading and so on. But my favorite hobby is swimming. Because I think it is cool and relaxing. In summer days, it's always very hot. We can’t do any sports but swim. So I often go swimming with my friends in my hot summer. I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old. And now I am a good swimmer. Last year I got the first prize in a swimming competition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one day.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇作文按照要求可分为4块儿内容，首先指出我的爱好是什么But my favorite hobby is swimming.，接着说明为什么喜欢这个爱好Because I think it is cool and relaxing....., 然后I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old.我开始这个爱好的时间，最后Last year I got the first prize in a swimming competition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one day.自己的收获以及期望. 中间用到短语such as…,以及连词because…., when….and…等，使文章表达清晰，也具有连贯性，时态运用正确，是一篇不错的文章。

7．（·黑龙江中考模拟）（A）话题作文：现在视力不好的人越来越多，有的孩子很小的时候就戴上了眼镜。

从小保护好眼睛很重要。

六月六日是“全国爱眼日”。

请你结合实际生活写一篇题目为“It’s important to protect our eyes”的英文稿。

内容：（1）眼睛的重要性；
（2）保护眼睛的措施：①不要长时间读书看报；
②不要在太强或太弱的光线下看书；
③坚持做眼保健操。

【答案】It’s important to protect our eyes
The eyes are the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness.
How to protect our eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better not
read in strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary.
Follow my advice and form a good habit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，阐述眼睛的重要性以及如何保护眼睛。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如the window of our mind, had better do, remember to do, keep away from, what’s more, follow one’s advice, it’s time t o do以及it is adj to do。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

8．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
三年初中生活即将结束，在你学习和成长的路上一定得到了不少人的鼓励，支持和帮助。

虽然你就要和一些人说再见了，但总有些人是你一生都难以忘记的。

请以I’ll never forget _______为题，谈谈你最难忘的人。

老师、好友，家人，同桌还是……
基本信息：（1）Who is he/she?
（2）What kind of person is he/she?
（3）What did he/she do for you ?
（4）Why is he/she unforgettable?
参考词汇：loving, strict, understanding, patient, friendly, generous, reliable, intelligent, optimistic, humorous, confident, honest, helpful…
要求：1.补全标题；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名
3. 介绍他/她的具体情况以及对你的影响；
4. 词数不少于70词。

I’ll never forget _______
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________
【答案】I’ll never forget my English teacher
In my junior school life, many people have helped me. The person I want to thank most is My English teacher-Ms Lee.
Ms Lee is kind and outgoing. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset, she cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，谈谈你最难忘的人。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如help sb with, be in trouble, encourage sb to do, with one’s help, make great progress, become interested in, once以及cheer up。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

9．（·武汉外国语学校中考模拟）书面表达
长跑是人们热衷的体育活动之一。

武汉马拉松（Wuhan Marathon）因独具特色的赛道及赛
事组织已成为一年一度的全程盛事。

假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom想知道关于武汉马拉松的一些事情。

请用英文给他回一封电子邮件，介绍这项赛事。

内容包括以下要点：
1.马拉松是非常流行的国际体育项目；
2.通过马拉松，人们可以强身健体，还可以结识新朋友；
3.首届马拉松于年举行，吸引了很多人的关注；
4.赛通途径多个武汉著名景点,如：中山大道、东湖绿道、黄鹤楼，被视为最美的马拉松赛道；
5.补充一至亮点个人想法。

注意：1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2.次数60-80，邮件的开头已给出，不计入总次数；
3.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译
参考词汇： event n.项目 track n.赛道 Greenway n.绿道
Hi Tom，
I hope you're doing well. In your email, you asked me someting about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________
Li Hua
【答案】Hi Tom，
I hope you're doing well. In your email, you asked me something about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information. Marathon is a very popular international sport. Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.
I think the people in Wuhan likes the event.Most of them want to take part in it.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Tom写一封电子邮件，给他介绍关于武汉马拉松的一些事情。

题目中给我们列出了具体的写作内容，我们可以按照这些提示来组织语言，并增加一些内容，使文章更加充实。

其中第五条需要学生们自己发挥想象力，补充一到两点的个人想法，这一部分是不受限制的，学生们可以自由发挥，但需要注意内容需要与全文大意连贯起来。

通过审题可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时态为主，根据表达需要灵活运用，并使用适当的人称，注意谓语动词的正确形式。

写作时需注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译题目中的内容，应从句式的整体结构出发，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型。

在文章中还应使用一、两个高级句型或复杂句式，提升文章档次。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、表达流畅。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给Tom写电子邮件，介绍了关于武汉马拉松的事情。

首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，并对信息进行加工、处理和补充，使文意更加清楚、连贯。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时态为主，个别句子使用了过去时态，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范。

文章句式以简单句为主，表达简洁、明了，穿插使用了复杂句式，如宾语从句、定语从句等。

调整文章节奏，提升了文章档次。

文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. 、The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. 、The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.、I think the people in Wuhan likes the event.等。

10．（·甘肃中考模拟）今天手机在我们日常生活中已广泛使用。

但中学生在学校是否应该持有手机，一些学生和老师有不同的观点。

你们学校的校刊英文版正在就此举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。

要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；`
2. 必须包含表格所给的提示信息，并作适当发挥；
3. 词数：80-100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life
today.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________
【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents
and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school.
Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily. Some teachers are against it．They think that some students can't control themselves and often play games. What's worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students' eyes.
In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.
【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏。

需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

如but, so, then等。

可以适当使用高分句型。

【点睛】
高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我认为正确的方式使用手机对学生是有帮助的。

I think+宾语从句。

It is+形容词 for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是…的。

11．（·广东实验中学中考模拟）书面表达
农历五月初五，我们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化——端午节The Dragon Boat Festival”一系列主题活动，请你邀请外国友人Amy来校参加。

请你根据以下提示用英文给她写一封电子邮件。

内容包括：
参考词汇：农历：Chinese Lunar calendar
Dear Amy,
I am writing to tell you a piece of good news, there will be an exciting event next
month.______________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Amy,
I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festival---the Dragon Boat Festival. I’m happy to share what I know about it with you.
The festival has a history of more than 2000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragon-boat races and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat, etc, wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Quyuan, a great poet in history.
In a word, we all love t he festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如learn from，want to know something，the Chinese traditional festival，the Dragon Boat Festival，share with，more than 2000 years，according to，a kind of，in memory of，In a word，look back on history，get together with family，in the near future等。

特别是I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festival---the Dragon Boat Festival./ we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family./ I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future.等多种从句结构的运用，是本文的最大亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

12．（·扬州市竹西中学中考模拟）写作
“百善孝为先”,孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德。

某英语报社正在举办以“弘扬中华传统文化”为主题的征文活动,请你以“We should honor our parents”为题,写一篇短文参加征文活动。

内容包括:
What do you often do for your parents?
Why should we honor our parents?
How should we honor our parents?
要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

We should honor our parents
As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of
China.____________________________
【答案】We should honor our parents
As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China.I honor my parents.I often help my parents do housework in my spare time.I think it's our duty to honor our parents.Our parents take much effort to raise us, so it's important for us to honor them.They love us so we should love and respect them.
First of all, we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of us.Then, we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after working.Next, we should respect them and never talk to them rudely.We'd better communicate with them patiently if we have different opinions.It's also important to tell our parents we love them.
【解析】
【分析】
本题要求考生以“我们应该尊敬我们的父母”为题结合所给的内容要点，写一篇作文
【详解】
这是篇材料作文，主要内容要点已给，所以考生要围绕着要点，进行写作，不要遗漏，当然顺序可以适当调整。

这篇作文又句型亮点，例如：As we know，…众所周知；.I think it's our duty to do sth等等，其次文章结构也比较清晰，例如第二段的衔接词，First of all，Then，Next，使用的简单而恰当。

13．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达
暑假即将来临,对于如何安排孩子初中毕业后的第一个假期,家长们和孩子自己有着各自的想法。

根据下表提示,写一篇英语短文,描述他们的不同看法,同时发表你自己对暑假安排的观点。