大学英语四六级图画作文写作策略
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➢ 第一段:引言/起始,图画描述,3句
1. 总体描述:人物/动物/事物+动作+环境
1句
2. 挖掘细节词、串连成句:
1句
3. 文字说明/象征寓意:
1句
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➢ 第二段:主体段,意义阐释分析,5句
1. 主题句:象征寓意,1句
2. 论证:3句 1)因果论证 2) 影响论证 3) 举例论证
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As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in
front of the blackboard stands a teacher,
teaching mathematics, however, one of her
students holds the opinion that the knowledge
he is learning might be outdated by the time
he's in the job market. (42 words)
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As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in the classroon stands a teacher, asking her student to read a work of literature as if he were reading a long text-message, while the student feels rather unpleasant. (37 words)
extremely, highly, most, particularly, quite ) amusing 令人发笑的 ridiculous 荒谬可笑的 impressive 印象深刻的 exaggerative 夸张的
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修饰动词的副词
graphically/ vividly生动地 symbolically象征性地 clearly / explicitly清晰地 subtly巧妙地,精细地
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第一段第二句由图片描述上升到文字说明或寓意的 阐释
①Simple and funny as the cartoon is, it reflects that .... ②The picture implicitly(含蓄地,暗示地) raises the question of the importance of ....
he's in the job market.
The picture implicitly raises the question of the
importance of the fundamental skills students learn in
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travel.
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第二段: 即主体段落
如何写?
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topic sentence
development: sub idea 1
development: sub idea 2
brief conclusion
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Linking devices
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As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in the picture stands a boy, worried about disposing of nuclear waste, while his father instructs him to empty the dustbin in his room first.
③The picture illustrates the real meaning of ....
④Undoubtedly, the drawing has symbolically revealed a serious problem in our daily life, ....
⑤The cartoon conveys the meaning that A is like the process of B. (比喻类)
3. 寻找中心事物周围相关的事物,并进行简 单的描述。
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第一段常用首句句式
As is shown/ depicted/ portrayed in the picture/ cartoon,....
The picture above vividly describe.... The drawing above does demonstrate
Simple and funny as the cartoon is, it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking big.
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As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in front of
blackboard stands a teacher, teaching mathematics,
however, one of her students holds the opinion that the
knowledge he is learning might be outdated by the time
大学英语四级图画作文
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四大要素
描述、寓意、分析、评论。
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写作框架
第一段:描述图画中的信息和表达的含义。 第二段:具体分析图画中暗含的社会现象。 第三段:一般视具体的试题而定,有的要求给出
自己的评论、有的要求举例、有的要求提出 自己的建议以及针对现象应该采取的措施。
message, while the student feels rather unpleasant.
The primary purpose of the picture above is that due
attention should be paid to the importance of basic
The picture implicitly raises the question that life,
which is full of ups and downs, happiness and sorrow,
oppotunities and challenges, is never an easy road to
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描述图画的形容词
thought-provoking发人深省的 enlightening 有启迪作用/使人感悟的 compelling/striking/intriguing引人注目/引起兴趣 profound含义深刻 =far-reaching implications instructive有益的(=informative)(搭配adv.:
③The picture seems to be humorous at first glance/sight , but on second thoughts (=after reconsideration), you can find the fact that_____.
④ The primary purpose of the pictures above is that due attention should be paid to ....
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描述图画的常用词
有关图画的名词 描述图画的形容词 修饰动词的副词 “寓意”、“字幕”如何翻译?
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替换picture的词语
drawing 指用线条或色彩绘成的图画。 cartoon 指幽默或讽刺性漫画。 portrait 指肖像,只用于指人。 illustration 插画
As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in the
classroon stands a teacher, asking her student to read a
work of literature as if he were reading a long text-
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➢ 主题句(全段核心,全文关键) ①The symbolic meaning of the picture is to show us
that importance should be attached to....
②The purpose of the drawer is to show us that due attention has to be paid to ....
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寓意
implications/ message
have a profound implication be pregnant with meaning entertain a deep thought
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字幕
caption: words printed with an illustration or a photograph in order to describe or explain it (附於插图、照片上的)说明文字
1) We are informed by the caption that “___”. 2) The caption reads/indicates that “___”.
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描述图画时需要遵循以下步骤:
1. 寻找出图画的中心事物,并确定中心事物 的位置。
2. 描述中心事物,可以从动作和状态两个方 面来描述。
certain thought-provoking social phenomenon. What does the author intend to convey by describing... is that ....
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As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in the picture stands a boy, worried about disposing of nuclear waste, while his father instructs him to empty the dustbin in his room first. (33 words)
3. 小结:概括论证,总结本段
1句
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➢ 第三段:结论段,建议措施等,4句 1. 结论句:1句 2. 针对双方提建议:2句 3. 包装结尾、展望未来:1句
Only in this way can we solve this problem. It is high time that we solved this problem.
skills.
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As is vividly depicted above, in the cartoon walk two travellers, travelling across mountains and grasslands with heavy baggages on their shoulders.
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As is vividly depicted above, in the cartoon walk two travellers, travelling across mountains and grasslands with heavy baggages on their shoulders.