高中英语应用文之求助信

求助信
整体阐述：
求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时请求别人帮助所写的信件。

高考的求助信包括请求帮忙修改作品、解决学习问题等。

案例分析：
(全国卷Ⅲ改编)假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。

给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。

邮件内容包括：
1.剧情简介；
2.指导内容；
3.商定时间地点。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。

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Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going? I'm writing to ask you for regarding advice regarding a play we have adapted from our textbook.
The play is about how money influences the attitude of people treating others. However, what we' re uncertain is whether the plot is complete. Besides, we are eager to know how to correct our tone and pronunciation in order to perform the play perfectly. Therefore, I'm wondering
if it is convenient for you to guide us at ten am tomorrow in the school hall.
I’d appreciate it if you could do us a favor. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，下周将参加英语模联(MUN)活动,请你用英语给外教Henry 写封邮件，内容如下：
1.借用《英语时事新闻字典》( Dictionary of English Media);
2.请教英文演讲技巧；
3.请求当面指导。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。

Dear Mr Henry,
How is everything going these days? ①___________________________________ (我写信向你求助).
While preparing to attend MUN next week, I have some difficulty with concepts and expressions of the current affairs and speech skills. I'm wondering if I could borrow your Dictionary of English Media. ②_________,I'm at a loss how to make my speech convincing and persuasive. Could you be so kind as to offer me some advice?
③_______________________________________________________________ (如果你抽时间面对面指导我，我将不胜感激).
Yours,
Li Hua
求助信素材
一、夺人眼球开头句(开篇表意)
1. I'm writing to seek help from you/ ask you to do me a favor, as I meet with/ come across some problems while planning a Green Campus campaign.
我写信请你帮忙，因为我在策划一个绿色校园运动时遇到了一些问题。

2. I am eager to get your timely help. /I'm eager for your timely help.
我渴望得到你及时的帮助。

3. The reason why I am writing to you is that I wonder if you could do me a favor.
我写信给你是想知道你能否帮我。

4. Faced with/ In face of so challenging a problem, I have no alternative but to turn to you for help.面对这个难题，我只得向你求助。

二、亮点出彩篇中句
1. What bothers me is that I am at a loss/ have no idea how to review what I have learned by myself at home.
困扰我的事情是我不知道如何在家里复习功课。

2. I have much trouble/ bother in concentrating on online classes, making me really frustrated.
我很难专心上网课，使我很苦恼。

3.I'm stuck and wondering if you could offer me some practical advice as I know you have organized similar activities.我被难住了，知道你组织过类似活动，所以我想知道你是否可以给我一些实用的建议。

4. I feel greatly stressed, so would you be kind enough to offer me some advice on how to relieve stress?我现在压力很大，你能给我一些减压的建议吗?
5. Learning you have rich experience in organizing opera performances, I was wondering if you could lend me a hand.
我知道你组织话剧演出经验丰富，因此我想知道你是否能帮我。

6. I find it difficult/ challenging/ tough for me to fit in with others in the new surroundings.
我发现在新的环境中我很难与他人融洽相处。

三、韵味无穷结尾句(表达感谢，期待回复)
1. I would be very grateful if you could take the trouble to help me deal with the problem.如果你能费心帮我处理这个问题我将不胜感激。

2. Your timely help/ assistance will be highly appreciated.非常感谢你及时的帮助。

3. I’d appreciate it if you could give me some guidance/ instructions/ help/ assistance.如果你能给我一些指导/帮助，我将不胜感激。

满分作文：
Dear Allen,
How is everything going these days? I'm writing to seek help from you. With the summer vacation approaching, I intend to take a part- time job in a foreign company.
Though I have written my application letter and resume as required, I am at a loss whether they are well written. Ther efore, I’m wondering if you could spare some time and take the trouble to polish my application letter and resume.
I’d appreciate it if you could take the trouble to help me. Eagerly looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，昨天晚上在图书馆自习回来后，发现你的一本英语词典不见，现写邮件给图书馆管理员Ms. Jenkins，请他们帮忙寻找。

要点如下：
1.写信的目的；
2. 英语词典对你的意义；
3. 如果找到请他们帮忙保管好。

2.注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Ms. Jenkins,
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假定你是李华，本学期你校开设了英语口语课，但是你不太适应外教的授课。

你决定给英国朋友Andrew写一封邮件，寻求他的帮助。

要点包括：
1.告知困难；
2.寻求求助。

注意：
1.写作词数应为80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Andrew,
_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________
答案：
仿写答案：
①I’m writing to seek help from you
②Futhermore
③I’d appreciate it if you could spare some time to give me face-to-face instructions. 实战演练1
I am Li Hua. I studied in the library last night. But when I came back to my dorm, I suddenly realized that I had left my English dictionary behind in the library.
It is a precious gift from my American teacher. Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favor. Would you please be so kind as to look for the dictionary for me? If you can find it, please keep it. And I will get it back tomorrow afternoon. I will appreciate it if you could offer me a hand.
Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.
Yours,
Li Hua 实战演练2
Dear Andrew,
I’m writing to share with you a problem I’m currently facing. This semester, our school has introduced an oral English course, and I’m struggling to adapt to the teaching style of our foreign teacher. I find it challenging to understand his/her accent and follow the pace of the class. As a result, I’m feeling quite frustrated and I’m worried that my oral English skills won’t be effectively improved.
I was wondering if you could offer me some advice or tips on how to better cope with this situation. Perhaps you have some experience or suggestions that could help me improve my comprehension and communication skills in a foreign language environment.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua。