【读后续写公开课】读后续写《The Last Delivery》课件
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cover. (运用“It was not until...that...”的强调句型)
Share your story!
Group disscussion. Try to infer and write down key words, phrases or sentences on the paper and then put them into a complete story.
(运用..too...to...句型))
② __T_i_r_e_d_a_n_d__h_u_n_g_r_y___, the old porter couldn’t go any further in this heat of the
noon.(运用形容词作主语补足语)
2.妻子尴尬地站在那里，满脸涨得通红。
The rich couple :
1. The rich couple didn’t mind paying a lot for the party. ( T )
2. The rich couple showed great sympathy to the old porter and paid
him immediately . ( F )
Para. 2 Upon hearing that, the husband had tears in his eyes and turned to his wife.
New Information
① What did the husband say to his wife? ② How did the wife react to her husband’s words?
4. 那时，她才意识到不能以貌取人。 ① __O_n_l_y_t_he_n_d_i_d_s_he__re_a_liz_e______ that we can’t judge a book by its cover. (运用“only+状语”放句首的倒装句句型) ② _N_o_t_u_n_ti_l _th_e_n_d_id_s_h_e_r_ea_l_iz_e______ that we can’t judge a book by its cover. (运用“Not until”放句首的倒装句句型) ③I_t w__as_n_o_t_u_n_ti_l _th_e_n_th_a_t _sh_e_r_e_al_iz_e_d_____ that we can’t judge a book by its
① The wife stood there with embarrassment, and she felt the blood rushing to her face
________________________________________.
(运用并列句结构)
feeling the blood rushing to her face
written in her red face. (运用So...that放句首的倒装句型) ③ _T_h_e_h_o_n_es_ty__of_t_h_e_o_ld_p_o_r_te_r _d_id_s_tr_ik_e_t_h_e _w_if_e_a_g_r_ea_t_d_ea_l____________, guilt written in her red face. (运用强调谓语动词句型)() ④ _It_w__as_t_h_e_h_on_e_s_ty_o_f_t_he_o_l_d_p_o_rt_er_t_h_at_s_tr_u_ck__th_e_w_i_fe_a__gr_e_at_d_e_a_l __________, guilt written in her red face. (运用强调句句型)
3. The rich couple regarded the old porter to be a thief when he
couldn’t appear in time . ( T )
Let’s discuss!
1.Discuss with your partners and raise some reasonable questions according to the given sentences . 2. Discuss with your partners and form your writing ideas .
the blood rushing to her face
________________________________________.
(运用介词with的复合结构)
3.老人诚实的品质让妻子深受触动，脸上写满了愧疚之情。 ①T_h_e_o_l_d_p_o_rt_er_w__as_s_o_h_o_n_e_st_t_h_at_t_h_e_w_i_fe_w__as__st_ru_c_k_a_g_r_e_at_d_e_a_l ________, guilt
We can’t judge a book by its cover.
Task2: Interpretation of writing ideas 写作思路解读(1)
was struck dead with shame
was about to add more contemptuous comments
2._F_i_n_a_ll_y_, he settled for $15 . 3._O__n_e_h_o__u_r___ passed , _tw__o_h_o__u_rs___ passed . 4._Im__m__e_d_ia_t_e_ly__, they went back to the market to inquire
Continuation Writing
The Last Delivery
Interpretation of the Text (6 elements)
when
where
how
A story
who
why
what
Interpretation of the Text 文本解读 (Who)
Strangers
a rich couple
confused,responded at once,
The porter
The Micro-skills Training in writing ：
1.又累又饿，老人在灼热的大中午再也走不动了。
① The old ___w_a_s__to_o__ti_r_e_d_a_n_d__h_u_n_g_r_y__to_____ go any further in this heat of the noon.
written in her red face. (运用…so...that...结构) ②_S_o_h_o_ne_s_t_w_a_s_th_e_o_l_d_p_o_rt_e_r _th_a_t _th_e_w_i_fe__w_a_s _st_ru_c_k_a__gr_e_a_t d_e_a_l________, guilt
② The wife stood there with embarrassment,
________________________________________. with the blood rushing to her face
(运用现在分词作状语) ③ The wife stood there with embarrassment,
Task1:Interpretation of the given sentences (首句解读)
Para. 1 The angry wife asked him, “Where is that old thief? This
is our f.”
① What was the new porter’s reaction when hearing the angry wife’s words?
New Information
② Where was the old porter? ③ What happened to the old porter?
④ Why did the old porter ask the new porter to help deliver the goods?
Interpretation of the given information(首句解读)
a rich couple
glaring at her resentfully
The porter
Interpretation of writing ideas 写作思路解读(2)
regretted, stood there embarrassed
smiled and continued his delivering in the sun
③ What a life lesson did the wife learn?
What lesson can we get from the story?
We should respect everyone regardless of their financial and social status.
a rich couple
The porter
Read for the three clues
1.Time 2.Plot 3.Emotions
Task 1: Reading for the time (when)
1.__Af_te_r___ purchasing everything they wanted
5.__U_p_o_n__ hearing that ,the husband had tears in his eyes
Task2: Reading for the plot (summary)
A rich couple was t_h_r_ow__in_g(throw) a big party at their house ,so they went shopping at the market . After_p_u_rc_h_a_si_n_g_(purchase) everything they wanted , they called a porter _w__h_o__was an old age ,unhealthy looking _t_o_c_a_rr_y (carry) their stuff to their house for a mere $15 . They waited __an_x_i_o_u_sl_y_(anxious) for their stuff, __b_u_t___the old porter didn’t appear all the time . They took _i_t____for granted that the old porter was a thief . Upon hearing the news from another porter ,they were struck dead with_e_m__b_a_rr_a_s_sm__e_n_t (embarrass) , feeling the blood__r_u_sh_i_n_g__( rush)to their face .
Contiunation Writing
• Writing Criteria:
• 1.Your story should be coherent(连贯)，logical and reasonable. • 2.Your writing should be rich in vocabulary and sentence pattern.
Task3: Reading for Emotions(T/F)
The old porter : The old porter was unwilling to deliver the stuff for a mere $15
though he was poor and unhealthy . ( F )
Share your story!
Group disscussion. Try to infer and write down key words, phrases or sentences on the paper and then put them into a complete story.
(运用..too...to...句型))
② __T_i_r_e_d_a_n_d__h_u_n_g_r_y___, the old porter couldn’t go any further in this heat of the
noon.(运用形容词作主语补足语)
2.妻子尴尬地站在那里，满脸涨得通红。
The rich couple :
1. The rich couple didn’t mind paying a lot for the party. ( T )
2. The rich couple showed great sympathy to the old porter and paid
him immediately . ( F )
Para. 2 Upon hearing that, the husband had tears in his eyes and turned to his wife.
New Information
① What did the husband say to his wife? ② How did the wife react to her husband’s words?
4. 那时，她才意识到不能以貌取人。 ① __O_n_l_y_t_he_n_d_i_d_s_he__re_a_liz_e______ that we can’t judge a book by its cover. (运用“only+状语”放句首的倒装句句型) ② _N_o_t_u_n_ti_l _th_e_n_d_id_s_h_e_r_ea_l_iz_e______ that we can’t judge a book by its cover. (运用“Not until”放句首的倒装句句型) ③I_t w__as_n_o_t_u_n_ti_l _th_e_n_th_a_t _sh_e_r_e_al_iz_e_d_____ that we can’t judge a book by its
① The wife stood there with embarrassment, and she felt the blood rushing to her face
________________________________________.
(运用并列句结构)
feeling the blood rushing to her face
written in her red face. (运用So...that放句首的倒装句型) ③ _T_h_e_h_o_n_es_ty__of_t_h_e_o_ld_p_o_r_te_r _d_id_s_tr_ik_e_t_h_e _w_if_e_a_g_r_ea_t_d_ea_l____________, guilt written in her red face. (运用强调谓语动词句型)() ④ _It_w__as_t_h_e_h_on_e_s_ty_o_f_t_he_o_l_d_p_o_rt_er_t_h_at_s_tr_u_ck__th_e_w_i_fe_a__gr_e_at_d_e_a_l __________, guilt written in her red face. (运用强调句句型)
3. The rich couple regarded the old porter to be a thief when he
couldn’t appear in time . ( T )
Let’s discuss!
1.Discuss with your partners and raise some reasonable questions according to the given sentences . 2. Discuss with your partners and form your writing ideas .
the blood rushing to her face
________________________________________.
(运用介词with的复合结构)
3.老人诚实的品质让妻子深受触动，脸上写满了愧疚之情。 ①T_h_e_o_l_d_p_o_rt_er_w__as_s_o_h_o_n_e_st_t_h_at_t_h_e_w_i_fe_w__as__st_ru_c_k_a_g_r_e_at_d_e_a_l ________, guilt
We can’t judge a book by its cover.
Task2: Interpretation of writing ideas 写作思路解读(1)
was struck dead with shame
was about to add more contemptuous comments
2._F_i_n_a_ll_y_, he settled for $15 . 3._O__n_e_h_o__u_r___ passed , _tw__o_h_o__u_rs___ passed . 4._Im__m__e_d_ia_t_e_ly__, they went back to the market to inquire
Continuation Writing
The Last Delivery
Interpretation of the Text (6 elements)
when
where
how
A story
who
why
what
Interpretation of the Text 文本解读 (Who)
Strangers
a rich couple
confused,responded at once,
The porter
The Micro-skills Training in writing ：
1.又累又饿，老人在灼热的大中午再也走不动了。
① The old ___w_a_s__to_o__ti_r_e_d_a_n_d__h_u_n_g_r_y__to_____ go any further in this heat of the noon.
written in her red face. (运用…so...that...结构) ②_S_o_h_o_ne_s_t_w_a_s_th_e_o_l_d_p_o_rt_e_r _th_a_t _th_e_w_i_fe__w_a_s _st_ru_c_k_a__gr_e_a_t d_e_a_l________, guilt
② The wife stood there with embarrassment,
________________________________________. with the blood rushing to her face
(运用现在分词作状语) ③ The wife stood there with embarrassment,
Task1:Interpretation of the given sentences (首句解读)
Para. 1 The angry wife asked him, “Where is that old thief? This
is our f.”
① What was the new porter’s reaction when hearing the angry wife’s words?
New Information
② Where was the old porter? ③ What happened to the old porter?
④ Why did the old porter ask the new porter to help deliver the goods?
Interpretation of the given information(首句解读)
a rich couple
glaring at her resentfully
The porter
Interpretation of writing ideas 写作思路解读(2)
regretted, stood there embarrassed
smiled and continued his delivering in the sun
③ What a life lesson did the wife learn?
What lesson can we get from the story?
We should respect everyone regardless of their financial and social status.
a rich couple
The porter
Read for the three clues
1.Time 2.Plot 3.Emotions
Task 1: Reading for the time (when)
1.__Af_te_r___ purchasing everything they wanted
5.__U_p_o_n__ hearing that ,the husband had tears in his eyes
Task2: Reading for the plot (summary)
A rich couple was t_h_r_ow__in_g(throw) a big party at their house ,so they went shopping at the market . After_p_u_rc_h_a_si_n_g_(purchase) everything they wanted , they called a porter _w__h_o__was an old age ,unhealthy looking _t_o_c_a_rr_y (carry) their stuff to their house for a mere $15 . They waited __an_x_i_o_u_sl_y_(anxious) for their stuff, __b_u_t___the old porter didn’t appear all the time . They took _i_t____for granted that the old porter was a thief . Upon hearing the news from another porter ,they were struck dead with_e_m__b_a_rr_a_s_sm__e_n_t (embarrass) , feeling the blood__r_u_sh_i_n_g__( rush)to their face .
Contiunation Writing
• Writing Criteria:
• 1.Your story should be coherent(连贯)，logical and reasonable. • 2.Your writing should be rich in vocabulary and sentence pattern.
Task3: Reading for Emotions(T/F)
The old porter : The old porter was unwilling to deliver the stuff for a mere $15
though he was poor and unhealthy . ( F )