劝说性作文1

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黄金模板 Dear _____,
I’m writing to persuade you to ______.
First of all, I think it would be better if ______. What is more, ______. Last but not least, ______.
• I’m looking forward to your reply.
•
Yours,
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Li Ming 12
Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom. We know you’re afraid that we may be exposed to unhealthy websites. Actually every coin has two sides. We still think that surfing the Internet can bring us much more advantages.
劝说性的书信写作 persuasivewriting
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文体分析：
劝说性的书信写作,其目的是向某个 组织或个人提出劝说性的建议，是一种 应用文体。
先提出建议，随后给出充足的理由劝 说对方接受你的建议，提出的理由要合 情合理，用词要恰当，既要委婉礼貌， 又要有说服力，而且要有清晰的结构层 次。
if ... • 4. Here I’d like to give my advice on ... /
I would like to suggest that ... • 5. If I were you, I would ... • 6. As far as I am concerned… • 7. In my opinion…
make good use of it. Furthermore, we
can broaden our horizons by reading
various news online. Last but not
least, as high school students, we are
building up our sense of judgment.
注意：1. 词数：120左右； 2. 信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。 3. 信中要包括下表中的所有内容： 建议学校开通网络的原因：
1. 有利于查找资料； 2. 浏览新闻，了解信息； 3. 作2021/为5/27高中生，我们正在形成自己的判断力。 11
• Dear Headmaster,
• I’m writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom.
Given chances, we are sure that we
will learn how to stay away from
unhealthy websites.
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I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision. I’m looking forward to your reply.
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基本结构和内容： 首先点明写信的目的是提劝说
性的建议，（第一段） 然后讲清楚建议的事项、理由、
具体建议和措施，（第二段） 最后再一次提出希望，礼貌结
束全文。（第三段）
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常用句型
• 1. I’m writing to persuade you to ... • 2. I’m writing to …. • 3. First of all, I think it would be better
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• First of all, I think it would be better
if we can surf the Internet, because
there is a wide range of learning
resources on the Internet. We should
Yours,
Li Ming
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疯狂 写作
假设你是李萍，你的好友王强最近沉迷于
电脑游戏不能自拔，严重影响了学习和身心
健康。请你给他写一封书信劝他戒掉这注意：开头结尾已给出，不算入总词数， 100词左右。
提示句型和词组：1.being addicted to the
one thing... and for another…, Last but
not least
• 表解释as a matter of fact，to be honest，
in this case，namely， in other words
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表转折(al)though, however, on the contrary, but, in spite of, nevertheless, yet, otherwise, despite, while, instead
computers is harmful to your study and health.
2.break away from the computer games. 3. take
more exercises 4.participate more social
ac2t0i2v1/5i/2t7ies.
表递进 moreover，what’s more，in addition，besides，apart from，on one hand, on the other hand，not only…but also
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表因果
因 because, for, for this reason, as, since, on account of, thanks to , due to, owing to
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• Dear Wangqiang,
• I feel worried when I hear that you are playing computer games a lot recently.
• I’m looking forward to your good news.
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学会运用过渡衔接词
• 表层次 First of all，firstly, to begin with, in the first place， second, secondly, to start with， in the first place ， and in the second place，for
果 as a result, thus, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as a consequence (of),
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• 表总结： in a word, in conclusion, to conclude, finally, in short, to sum up, all in all
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• 常用句型
• 8. Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.
• 9. I would appreciate it if you take my advice.
• 10. I would be grateful if you take my advice.
I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
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实战演练:
假如你是李明，学校领导和教师因为担心同学们浏 览不健康的网站，关闭了教室内电脑的网络浏览功 能，你们感到很难过。请你给校长写一封信，劝说 校长同意开通教室内的网络。