英语中考英语作文专题复习课件
中考英语复习专题 写作指导课(共17张PPT)
Structure of a good composition
1.Beginning (点题 尽量做到引人入胜) 2.Body(详写 行文连贯 语言丰富) 3.Ending(扣题 要升华 有亮点)
一档文标准
12-15分 包含所有要点,能围绕内容 要点适当发挥,内容具体、丰富; 应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇, 用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、 表达清楚;没有或几乎没有语言错 误,具备较强的语言运用能力,达 到了预期的写作目的。
5.A: His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. B: To his surprise, his dog was saved at last. 请思考上面这些句子运用的什么方法使句子 更生动?
1.结合语境,选择恰当的 词或短语 2.巧加修饰词,使句子更 加生动
中考英语复习专题 写作指导课
How to beautify the composition?
My Day off I had a bad day off. I studied for a math exam. I stayed up. So I slept late. I got up and went to school. But it was Sunday. That was too bad.
Compare two compositions. Which do you think is better? My Day off
How was my day off? It was terrible. I studied very hard for my math exam last week, so I slept late. Can you believe it? When I woke up, it was already 9 o’clock. I got up quickly and hurried to school without breakfast. But when I got to school, I found nobody was there. Suddenly I realized it was Sunday! You can’t imagine how embarrassed I was!
初三英语总复习英语写作指导ppt课件
• 提示词:family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, feel proud of
举例 审清主题
• 人称:第一人称 • 时态:一般现在时,一般将来时
(个别使用一般过去时也可。) • 主题:做家务 • 文体:记叙文
teacher at school ,and so do I. My favorite teacher, Miss Lu, is a 30year-old young lady of medium height, with big eyes and long straight hair. She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes. And a big smile can always be found on her round face.
举例 初写文章
Summer vacation is coming, I want to learn how to cook. I want to cook for them. I think they will feel proud of me.
人物故事类的一些句子感受
• She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes.
大作文—复习策略 选题
人物故事 自己,家人,朋友,老师… 学习提高 学习的科目,遇到的困难和麻烦… 健康生活 疾病和卫生,食品健康… 计划愿望 暑假计划,学习计划…
大作文—复习策略 选题
初三英语作文复习PPT
动笔前理清思路
• • • • • 1、细审题 2、获取写作要点 3、分析要点内容(优劣利弊要求几点) 4、思考文章布局(段落、字数、中心句) 5、写作(注意 1 、书写工整 2 、一 些亮点句式和文段过渡词句的使用 、行文流畅) 3 • 6、细读检查并纠错(时态、语态、名词单 复数、人称性别、短语及单词的拼写包括 大小写等错误)
Let’s have a try
动笔前理清思路
• • • • • 1、细审题 2、获取写作要点 3、分析要点内容(优劣利弊要求几点) 4、思考文章布局(段落、字数、中心句) 5、写作(注意 1 、书写工整 2 、一 些亮点句式和文段过渡词句的使用 、行文流畅) 3 • 6、细读检查并纠错(时态、语态、名词单 复数、人称性别、短语及单词的拼写包括 大小写等错误)
看 例 文 找 问 题
who only (also)
【参考范文】
主要问题小结
1.审题不清 2.句子结构错误,语言表达不规范,中文式英语 和语法错误现象较严重。 3.谋篇布局能力弱,文章结构不严谨。文章主要 由单个句子堆砌而成,缺乏整体性和流畅性, 缺乏恰当的连词和过渡语。 4.拼写错误较多,书写不规范,潦草,卷面不整 洁。 5.有的学生部分或全部抄袭阅读理解或完形填空 中的内容等。
语言有少量错误,行文基本连贯, 表达基本清楚。
说明: 语言表述:单词拼写、标点符号、大小 写等错误, 每两处扣0.5分,同一错误不 重复扣分。其它情况酌情扣分。 词数(1分):全文词数不足80个扣1分。 卷面(1分):卷面不整洁,书写凌乱, 扣1分。 本大题的最后得分如有0.5分,则入为 整数。
初三 英语 作文 复习 一、 二
书 面 表 达
话题项目表
1. 个人情况(Personal information): 姓名、年龄、身高,家庭情况,所在的学校、班 级、工作等 2. 家庭、朋友和周围的人 (Family, friends and people around): 3. 周围的环境(Personal environments) 4. 日常生活(Daily routines) 5. 学校生活(School life) 6. 兴趣与爱好(Interests and hobbies) 7. 个人情感(Emotions) 8. 人际关系(Interpersonal relationships) 17.语言学习(Language learning) 18.自然(Nature) 9.计划与愿望(Plans and intentions) 19.世界和环境(The world and the 10.节假日活动(Festivals, holidays environment) and celebration) 20.科普知识与现代技术(Popular 11.购物(Shopping) science and modern 12.饮食(Food and drink) technology) 13.健康(Health) 21.热点话题(Topical issues) 14.天气(Weather) 22.历史与地理(History and 15.文娱与体育(Entertainment and geography) sports) 16.旅游和交通(Travel and transport) 23.社会(Society) 24.文学和艺术(Literature and art)
中考英语作文课件(19张)
Language expression and polishing
A
Use accurate and vivid vocabulary and phrases to express ideas
Pay attention to the diversity of grammar and sentence structures, avoid repetition and monotony
Overview of Middle School Entrance Examination 01 English Composition
The Importance of Middle School Entrance
Examination English Composition
High proportion of
Question review and conception
01
Carefully read the question, understand its meaning and requirements
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Determine the theme and intention of the article, ensuring that it matches the requirements of the title
中考英语作文课件 (19张)
汇报人:XX 2024-01-24
目录
• Overview of Middle School Entrance Examination English Composition
• Writing Steps and Techniques • Common errors and
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中考英语专项复习书面表达英语大作文演示课程PPT课件
写句子
学 好
淡蓝色的海水轻轻地拍打着沙滩,一 浪盖过 一浪, 连绵不 绝,源 源不断 。海水 在人们 的心中 无非是 易怒的 。可是 ,在现 在的我 眼中, 如同母 亲的手 温柔的 抚摸着 这岸上 的一切 生灵。 贝壳与 螃蟹戏 玩着, 玩累了 ,便躺 在柔软 的沙上 睡上一 会儿。
英 语 的 建 议
看英语 电影、 听英语 歌曲
与外教 交谈
把单词 写在纸 条上
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英 语 的 建 议
看英语 电影、 听英语 歌曲
与外教 交谈
把单词 写在纸 条上
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学 好 英 语 的 建 议
看英语 电影、 听英语 歌曲
与外教 交谈
中考英语专项复习书面表达英语大作文演示PPT演示课件
(2) You should start it with greetings or a question (1)每天在纸上写四到五个单词
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把单词写在纸条上
写句子
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川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑 廊下, 或单独 一人, 或三三 两两。 有的低 头私语 ,有的 莞尔窃 笑,没 有大声 的喧哗 和吵闹 ,似乎 谁都不 愿破坏 平和的 气氛。 放眼长 长的一 条街道 ,逛街 的人都 好象在 做服装 秀,尤 其是那 些披红 戴绿穿 着入时 的少男 少女, 是中山 路上最 亮丽的 风景。
川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑 廊下, 或单独 一人, 或三三 两两。 有的低 头私语 ,有的 莞尔窃 笑,没 有大声 的喧哗 和吵闹 ,似乎 谁都不 愿破坏 平和的 气氛。 放眼长 长的一 条街道 ,逛街 的人都 好象在 做服装 秀,尤 其是那 些披红 戴绿穿 着入时 的少男 少女, 是中山 路上最 亮丽的 风景。
中考英语作文复习ppt
Questions should be based on real life scenarios and contexts to ensure that the students are prepared for the types of challenges they will face in the actual exam
Example 3
Analysis
The simulated test questions cover a range of writing tasks, including descriptive writing, critical thinking, and language regulation They are designed to assess the student's ability to use English effectively in different contexts
Techniques
03
Use descriptive language to create vivid images, and show ratio than tell by depicting scenes and characters
An argumentative essay presentations a point of view and defends it through logical reasoning and evidence
Detailed description
Summary: Use advanced sentence structures and vocabulary to improve language proficiency.
初中英语作文写作课(精编版)-PPT课件(共17张)
Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
第七步: 誊
誊文章,规范整洁
书 写 注 意 事 项: 1、规范书写,字母饱满圆润,格式正确。 2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、 或用修正液覆盖现象——给人一种凌乱的 感觉 3、一旦写错,规范修改——用一条斜线 划掉即可。
eg: He can speker speak English very well.
Ending
Beginning
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
中考英语作文课件(19张PPT)
看法
我认为……
建议(至少3条) 1. 合理安排时间 2. 参加兴趣小组
3. ……
注意: 100词左右,广播的开头已给出,不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups
social activities, do sports, net bar
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our
第五步:集句成段,组段成篇
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For example
There are many things we can do. we can plan
play computer g2a.m迷es恋网吧,上网打游戏 watch too much.T..V... refuse to do homework
2. List some keywords about opinions.
not good for our health and study do harm to focus on Pay more attention to
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初三英语写作专题复习课课件
beginning linking words连词
key sentence
How glad he is! He can do many things of his own. He is going
to have a trip to Cuihua Mountain with his friend. He will also
Ending:
Step Five
根据提纲,写出文章,注意 使用好词好句和连接词。
评价: 请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。
A ( 13-15 分 ) :包含内容要点,语言基本无误,行文连 贯,表达清楚.
B ( 11-12 分 ) :基本包含内容要点,语言有少量错误, 行文基本连贯,表达基本清楚.
C ( 8-10分 ) :内容包含部分要点,语言虽有较多错误, 尚能达意.
D (6-7分 ) : 要点不明确,语言错误多,影响意思表 达.E (3-5 ) :只抄了提示词,错误百出,不知所 云.F ( 0-2分 ) :白卷或文不对题.
作者:_______得分:________评价人:_______
How to improve your writing
Step Four: Make an outline(提纲)
Title: _____________
Beginning:
Main part (正文):
Ending:
general总
to
Key sentence A: specific分
Key sentence B: specific分
to
general总
can make him excited
pop music movies
中考英语专题复习课件 作文 (共18张PPT)
一· 写作步骤
1.先审题: 弄清题目要求,确定体裁,拟 写提纲; 2.圈要点: 仔细观察,将情景中给出的要 点逐条列出 3.定基调: 确定时态,人称,开头,结尾 4.写全文: 运用熟悉的句型表达,使用恰 当的过渡词进行加工整理,使文章 连贯而流畅。
二· 词和句子的表达
1· 词和词组的运用:
(1) 尽量使用简单句; (2)学会使用意译法,将语义表达出来即 可,切忌与汉语提示一一对应,否则会写出中 式英语; 例如:我非常喜欢英语。 误 I very like English. 正 I like English very much. (3)语态,时态要准确无误,主谓要一致,主 语的人称和数要和谓语一致; 例如:我们应当尊敬父母,帮助他们做家务。 Eg. We should respect our parents and help them do some housework.
使用课本上学过的,最有把握的词和词组, 不会表达的单词用同义词代替。 例如: “不知所措” --- don’t know what to do “偶像”---- favorite singer or player “风和日丽”---It’s fine./ It’s a nice day.
2.句子的表达
中考英语作文评分标准
1.内容完整(80字左右)语句流畅, 无语法错误,书写规范,给9-10分 2.内容较完整,语句较流畅,基本无 语法错误,书写较规范,给6-8分 3.内容不完整,语句欠流畅,语法错 误较多,书写较规范,给3-5分 4.只写出个别要点,语法错误较多, 书写欠规范,给1-2分
满分作文展示
谋篇
成篇——衔接过渡, 润色成篇
根据信息提示明确写作要求
——就日益严重的学生近视眼问题写一篇 议论文发表自己的观点。 首先, 可就学生近视眼问题的调查结果引 出话题, 并分析造成学生近视问题日益严 重的几条原因; 其次, 提出几条预防形成近 视眼的有效方法。最后, 明确自己对此问 题的观点 ——知道保护眼睛的重要性, 养成正确使 用眼睛的良好习惯。
中考英语作文复习PPT课件
English Day!
Let’s practice speaking and writing English!
Writing is as important as speaking!
Writing 书面表达
中考考点要求: 1. 根据中文提示,写一篇60-70字左右的英文表达。 2. 内容完整,用词准确,句子通顺、连贯、单词
B:老师对我说: “下周请准时到校!” The teacher said to me, “Please come to school on time next week.” The teacher told me to come to school on time next week.
本课结束
A: Peter 出生于英国,去年来到中 国的一所中学教英语。
Peter was born Britain. Last year, he came to China. He taught English in a MiddleHe can’t walk as usual because of a traffic accident. He can’t walk as usual after a traffic accident.
One possible version: I’m a middle school student, and I am
interested in the computer. I turn on the computer as soon as I get home every day. Sometimes I play computer games, talk with my friends on the Internet or send e-mails to them. Though I like it very much, my parents stop me from doing that. They think I spend too much time on the computer. So I only play it for a short time after I finish my homework in the evening.
中考英语写作专题精讲课件(共39张PPT)
2.耐心指导;
3.热情鼓励;
4. .......
注意:
1. 词数80~ 100 ;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
应试策略
时间
地点
人物 经过
12
9
3
6
原因 结果
应试策略
01
列要点
02
03
人物 原因
I'd like to say thanks to my English teacher.
because
时间 once I failed. 地点 when She encouraged me. 经过 after that I turned to her for help.
结果
with her help I made progress.
应试策略
范文
Thank you, my teacher! I’d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Li, because she has helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam.When she found I was very worried, sh e encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I tur ned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I’ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English. Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever.
九年级英语中考专题作文复习课件
九年级英语中考专题作文复习课件Title: 9th Grade English Final Exam Review PresentationGood morning, everyone. Today, we will be going through a comprehensive review of the topics covered in the 9th grade English final exam. This presentation will help you understand the key concepts and skills needed to excel in the exam.1. Reading ComprehensionIn the reading comprehension section of the exam, you will be presented with passages to read and questions to answer. Make sure to read the passages carefully and pay attention to details. Look out for key information such as main ideas, supporting details, and author's purpose. Practice reading a variety of texts to improve your comprehension skills.2. VocabularyBuilding a strong vocabulary is essential for success in the English exam. Make use of flashcards, vocabulary lists, and word games to enhance your vocabulary skills. Learn new words and their meanings, synonyms, and antonyms. Practice using the words in sentences to improve your understanding and retention.3. GrammarGrammar is an important aspect of the English language, and you will be tested on various grammar rules in the exam. Review common grammar topics such as verb tenses,subject-verb agreement, pronouns, adjectives, and adverbs. Practice identifying errors in sentences and correcting them. Pay attention to punctuation rules and sentence structure as well.4. WritingThe writing section of the exam will test your ability to express ideas clearly and coherently. Practice writing essays, narratives, descriptive passages, and argumentative pieces. Pay attention to organization, coherence, and clarity in your writing. Use transition words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly. Proofread your work for grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.5. SpeakingIn the speaking section of the exam, you may be asked to present a speech, participate in group discussions, or answer questions orally. Practice speaking English regularly to improve your fluency and pronunciation. Work on your intonation, stress, and rhythm to sound more natural in English. Engage inconversations with classmates, teachers, and native speakers to build confidence in speaking.6. ListeningThe listening section of the exam will test your ability to understand spoken English. Practice listening to different types of audio recordings such as conversations, interviews, lectures, and news reports. Focus on key details, main ideas, and supporting information. Take notes while listening to aid in comprehension.In conclusion, this review presentation covers the essential topics and skills needed for success in the 9th grade English final exam. Make use of the tips and strategies provided to improve your performance and achieve your desired results. Remember to practice regularly, seek help from teachers or peers, and stay focused and motivated. Good luck with your exam preparation! Thank you for your attention.。
中考英语书面表达复习课件(150张PPT)
2)学习范文结构,列出写作提纲 A. 线状结构图 以8B 第二单元为例 “my best holiday”要求学生描
述难忘的假日经历。这类结构可以以时间发展为 进程,如下图:现状结构图.doc
B. 网状结构 9A第五单元的任务是 my favourite film star.要
求学生为某一电影网站投稿,描述一位最喜爱的 电影明星。教师可以用网状图帮助学生理清文章 结构,此类线索的诸要素之间往往没有先后顺序, 但多有主次之分,写作时要注意详略得当。网状 结构图.doc
Yours, Ann
Dear Julia, I am sorry to hear that you are ill. I think you should go to see a doctor and take some medicine. You should go to see a doctor and take some medicine. You should go to bed early and take a good rest. You’d better eat a lot of healthy food. You’d better not drink coffee. You should drink lots of water. It’s good for your health. And you’d better not go to school tomorrow. Please take good care of yourself. I hope you’ll be better soon. Yours, Ann
Main task主要是基于文体的写作训练,以记叙文为 主,包括写人、记事、编写故事等;另有部分应 用类文体,包含书信类,如邀请信、申请信、推 荐信、抱怨信等以及海报、网页设计、演讲稿等。 Main task的写作内容覆盖初中学生学习、生活、 和其他各个方面,涉及个人情况,家庭,朋友与兴趣与爱好,饮食健康,日常生活,学校生活, 文艺体育,语言学习,自然等话题。具体内容如
中考英语作文复习课件
9. as adv.同样地conj.①当…时候 ② 因为;由于 ③按照 ④prep.作为
as…as与…一样 such as 例如 as soon as possible尽早 as for至于 as if=as though好像,似乎 as soon as一…就… as long as 只要 as far as (指程度,范围)尽…,就…
5. 只要你努力学习英语,你的成绩肯定会有提高。 As long as you study English hard ________________________________, your grade will be improved.
6.他说他后天一到美国就打电话给我。 He says he will call me as soon as he arrives in America ________________________________the day after tomorrow.
③ My neck hurts(=aches). ④He’s hurt in soul.
4.advise vt. 劝告,提意见;建议;通 知 vi.提意见,商量
advise sb. to do sth. 建议某人做某事 advise that… 建议… (1)To help us improve English rapidly, my teacher advised us to read English magazines every day. (2) I advised that he should do more exercise and eat less meat.
③This football match is live.
7.allow vt.& vi.①准许,允许:②允许 (进来) ③准予
九年级英语中考专题作文复习课件
九年级英语中考专题作文复习课件9th Grade English Final Exam Review PresentationIntroduction:Welcome to the 9th Grade English Final Exam Review Presentation. In this session, we will cover all the important topics and skills that you need to know to excel in your English exam.I. Writing Skills1. Essay Writing:- Structure: Introduction, Body, Conclusion- Thesis Statement- Supporting Arguments- Transition Words2. Narrative Writing:- Setting, characters, plot- Dialogue, description, action- Use of sensory details3. Descriptive Writing:- Use of vivid imagery- Figurative language- Organizing detailsII. Reading Skills1. Text Analysis:- Identifying Main Ideas- Recognizing Supporting Details- Drawing Inferences2. Literary Devices:- Simile, Metaphor, Personification- Symbolism, Imagery- Irony, Foreshadowing3. Reading Comprehension Strategies: - Skimming and Scanning- Context Clues- Making PredictionsIII. Grammar and Vocabulary1. Parts of Speech:- Nouns, Verbs, Adjectives, Adverbs, Pronouns - Prepositions, Conjunctions, Interjections 2. Sentence Structure:- Subject-Verb Agreement- Sentence Fragments and Run-Ons- Punctuation rules3. Vocabulary Development:- Synonyms, Antonyms- Prefixes, Suffixes- Word Roots and OriginsIV. Speaking and Listening Skills1. Oral Presentations:- Eye Contact, Body Language- Clear Pronunciation, Voice Modulation- Organization of Ideas2. Active Listening:- Paraphrasing- Asking Questions- Engaging in DiscussionConclusion:In conclusion, mastering these skills and topics will not only help you prepare for the 9th Grade English Final Exam but also build a strong foundation for your future academic and professional success. Good luck with your studies!。
中考英语写作复习+课件
Version A: Overparenting is becoming quite common as more parents choose to provide too much help in children's study and daily life. (1分)
People hold different opinions on it. (1分)Some parents and children are for it (1分)because parents can make use of their strengths and provide necessary help(1分) and sometimes children are too busy with their study to do so many chores. (1分)Others are against it(1分) because children may lose chances to challenge themselves(1分) and it is not good for their growth(1分). I don't think we should depend on our parents too much(1分) because parents have their own work to do(1分)and we ourselves should be responsible for our growth(1分).(107 words)
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恰当的结尾——结构
简述现象——内容
总述(主题句)——结构
重要性及原因——内容 阅读习惯——内容
内容包括“全民阅读现状”,“阅读重要 性”以及“自我阅读习惯”较为全面的从 客观描述现象,到认知思考,再到自我情 况的牵引来谈论“阅读”。话题为“阅 读”。
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中考英语作文评分标准
第二档(一般,4-7分):能写出大部分内容要点, 有一些语言错误, 影响对写作内容的理解,行文不 够连贯, 但表达基本清楚,基本达到预期的写作目 的。
第一档(差,1-3分):只写出部分要点或与内容 有关的一些单词, 语言错误较多,影响意思表达, 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。 0分 未能传达给读者任何信息: 内容太少,所写 的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清, 无法评判。
make full use of, plastic bag 1. go to school on foot.(每天步行去学校)
2. remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans (离开教室时,关灯、电扇、电视等)
3. turn off the tap(关水龙头). ......
审→列→连→美→ 查→抄
第一步
2、明确写作的主要内容。 3、明确结构。
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节约资源,保护环境,从我们身总边分的小总事做起。Li Ming称是
一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生,假设你是他, 请以 “My Low-carbon Life”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,
要主点要:内(1)每容简天单步描行述上自学己; 的“低记碳叙生文活”。一般现在时
(2)离开教室时,。关灯、电扇、电视等; (3)不用水时,记得关水龙头,循环使用水; (4)充分使用纸张 (5)不使用塑料袋。 参考词:on foot, turn off, tap(水龙头), reuse,
make full use of, plastic bag 写作要求:(1) 内容包括所提供的信息及要点,可适
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对称顺序
是写简单句,以免错误 on one hand, on the other hand
转折顺序 but, however, though 因果顺序 because, as, thanks to, as a result (of)
3.是否符合英语习惯表达
4.时态是否正确
5.标点是否用对
6.人称是否用对
7.主谓是否一致
8.名词的单复数等
抄写。将检查后的作文整洁 地抄写在答题卡上
卷面整洁不一定加分, 卷面潦草一定要扣分。
How to write a good composition
开头:开门见山 (1-2句)
抓要点 找连接词 中间 造好句 连句成段 结尾:与主题相呼应 强劲有力 (1-2句)
当发挥,但不要逐条翻译;
(2) 不得透露考生姓名、学校等信息。
列:用简单的句子和短语列出文章的要点.
要点:(1)每天步行上学; (2)离开教室时,关灯、电扇、电视等; (3)不用水时,记得关水龙头,循环使用水; (4)充分使用纸张 (5)不使用塑料袋。
参考词:on foot, turn off, tap(水龙头), reuse,
Welcome to my class
Yes ! I am the best ! I am the best ! I am the best !
英语书面表达
书面表达:
中考英语中的必考题,占卷面总分的 12.5%,分值为15 分 。
How can we write a good composition?
For example, when I finish washing the
clothes, I use the water to clean the floor and water flowers。
常用的连接词
时间顺序 first, second, then, finally/at last, soon,
中考英语作文评分标准
各档次的给分范围和要求 第四档(很好,12-15分):覆盖所有内容要点,并适 当展开,语言无误或基本无误, 行文连贯, 表达清楚,具 备较强的语言运用能力,完全达到预期的写作目的。 第三档(好,8-11分):基本能写出全部内容要点,有 少量语言错误, 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求, 行文较连贯, 表达较清楚,达到预期的写作目的。
连:连词成句,造好句。 (1)每天步行上学
on foot → go to school on foot →
I go to school on foot every day.
美:恰当运用连接词,使文章层次清晰,各部分衔 接自然。 (3)不用水时,记得关水龙头,循环使用水
When I am not using wa括写t所e作r提要, I供求a的:lw信(a息1y)s及内要容点包, remember to turn off the tap. 可适当发挥 I often reuse water.
make full use of, plastic bag 写作要求:(1) 内容包括所提供的信息及要点,可适 当发挥,但不要逐条翻译;
(2) 不得透露考生姓名、学校等信息。
My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I like having a low-carbon life. a nice head(总) I go to school on foot every day. I always remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans when I a leave the classroom. When I am not using water, nI ice always turn off the tap. I often reuse water, for body example, when I finish washing the clothes, I use(th分e) water to clean the floor and water flowers. I never use plastic bags. I think saving paper is necessary, so I often make full use of paper. It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment. a nice tail(总)
条件 if, unless 递进顺序 what’s more, besides,
插入语 I think, I’m afraid, you know, as we all know
查:检查
1.格式是否正确
We all very like her .
2.词汇 是否用对 We all like her very much.
节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起。Li Ming 是 一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生,假设你是他, 请以 “My Low-carbon Life”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文, 简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。
要点:(1)每天步行上学; (2)离开教室时,。关灯、电扇、电视等; (3)不用水时,记得关水龙头,循环使用水; (4)充分使用纸张 (5)不使用塑料袋。 参考词:on foot, turn off, tap(水龙头), reuse,