英语建议信 ppt课件
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《英语建议信G》课件
Professional Recommender
Ask a supervisor or manager who can provide insight into your work ethic and accomplishments.
Personal Recommender
Seek a friend or family member who can speak to your character and personal qualities.
Exaggeration or Misrepresentation
Be truthful and accurate when presenting the candidate's qualifications and achievements.
Conclusion: Writing an Effective Recommendation Letter
Key Elements of a Recommendation Letter
Learn the specific elements that should be included in different types of recommendation letters.
Academic
Professional
Summarize the key points and provide final recommendations for crafting recommendation letters that leave a lasting impression.
Be Specific
Provide specific examples and anecdotes to support your claims about the candidate.
建议信 英语作文精品PPT课件
be build a swimming pool. • Swimming is a good sport for students to
prevent illness from body.
• I think we can put it on the place where besides the playground, here has trees and flowers so that we can prevent students from the rain.
you
主体
• From my point of view/personally/as far as I am concerned
• I highly recommend that….. • On the one hand….on the other hand….. • Besides, it is necessary for us to…. • Consequently, I believe that….
• Only in this way can the students be more and more active.
• Only if swimming can we build our body to defeat diseases.
• It can help students save themselves or others when they drop into the water by accident.
• The students volunteer to/are willing to raise money to build the swimming pool.
• If you agree with what I said, we are willing to afford money to build the swimming pool no matter how much it will cost.
prevent illness from body.
• I think we can put it on the place where besides the playground, here has trees and flowers so that we can prevent students from the rain.
you
主体
• From my point of view/personally/as far as I am concerned
• I highly recommend that….. • On the one hand….on the other hand….. • Besides, it is necessary for us to…. • Consequently, I believe that….
• Only in this way can the students be more and more active.
• Only if swimming can we build our body to defeat diseases.
• It can help students save themselves or others when they drop into the water by accident.
• The students volunteer to/are willing to raise money to build the swimming pool.
• If you agree with what I said, we are willing to afford money to build the swimming pool no matter how much it will cost.
高中英语作文 建议信(共9张PPT)
16. 如能看到……我会非常开心的。
I would be more than happy to see…
17. 我建议…… _____________
I would like to suggest that…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
交朋友首先要对别人友善；
If I were you, I would… have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.
向某人征求意见________________________
制订计划
_______________________
பைடு நூலகம்
May I suggest that… 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国笔友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试（美国高考），心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得
3. 在做某事时遇到困难
__h_a_v_e__d_i_ff_i_c_u_l_t_y_/t_r_o_u_b__le__i_n_d__o_in__g_s_t_h4. .
向某人征求意见________a_s_k_s_b_._f_o_r__a_d_v_i_c_e_
5. 制订计划
___m_a_k__e_a__p_l_a_n__________
6. 认为……有用
find…__h__e_l_p_f_u_l_/u__s_e_f_u_l_/b__e_n_e_f_icial
7. 参加
tak__e_p__a_r_t_i_n_/_p_a_r_t_i_c_ip__a_t_e_i_n
8. 听从某人的建议 __f_o_l_lo_w___o_n_e_’_s_a_d__v_ic_e____
I would be more than happy to see…
17. 我建议…… _____________
I would like to suggest that…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
交朋友首先要对别人友善；
If I were you, I would… have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.
向某人征求意见________________________
制订计划
_______________________
பைடு நூலகம்
May I suggest that… 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国笔友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试（美国高考），心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得
3. 在做某事时遇到困难
__h_a_v_e__d_i_ff_i_c_u_l_t_y_/t_r_o_u_b__le__i_n_d__o_in__g_s_t_h4. .
向某人征求意见________a_s_k_s_b_._f_o_r__a_d_v_i_c_e_
5. 制订计划
___m_a_k__e_a__p_l_a_n__________
6. 认为……有用
find…__h__e_l_p_f_u_l_/u__s_e_f_u_l_/b__e_n_e_f_icial
7. 参加
tak__e_p__a_r_t_i_n_/_p_a_r_t_i_c_ip__a_t_e_i_n
8. 听从某人的建议 __f_o_l_lo_w___o_n_e_’_s_a_d__v_ic_e____
高考英语建议信教学课件(共14张PPT)
if only you can follow the advice below. 如果对方遇到一般问题，可以用以下开头：
I’m very glad to receive your letter and it’s my pleasure to offer you some advice on... . And I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
enlarge vocabulary
remember Chinese words improve spoken Chinese
How to write a letter of giving advice?
三段式：
Beginning：
suggestions
state your purposaedvice
Ideas
take a Chinese course watch TV and read books, newspapers in Chinese learn and sing Chinese songs
make more Chinese friends
Why learn from… practice with…
Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help improve
your spoken Chinese.
具体建议和理由
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. 总结，表希望
First, it is important to ____. As you’ll ____. Then, it also helps if you ____. Besides, it should be a good idea to ____. Because____. you can also ____. I’m sure that_____.
I’m very glad to receive your letter and it’s my pleasure to offer you some advice on... . And I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
enlarge vocabulary
remember Chinese words improve spoken Chinese
How to write a letter of giving advice?
三段式：
Beginning：
suggestions
state your purposaedvice
Ideas
take a Chinese course watch TV and read books, newspapers in Chinese learn and sing Chinese songs
make more Chinese friends
Why learn from… practice with…
Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help improve
your spoken Chinese.
具体建议和理由
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. 总结，表希望
First, it is important to ____. As you’ll ____. Then, it also helps if you ____. Besides, it should be a good idea to ____. Because____. you can also ____. I’m sure that_____.
高中英语必修1 writing 建议信 共15张PPT
罗列观点：
• Firstly/ First of all / To begin with/ In the first place/on the one hand/ For one thing…
• Secondly/ Besides/ What’s more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/ on the other hand/ For another/ Next…
Sentence patterns（句型） Body: give your advice & reasons
1. It’s helpful/important to…… 2. It would be a good idea to…… 3. I would like to suggest that…..sb (should) do sth.
1. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.
2. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. 3. I’m sure if you take my advice, you will…
join join in take part in
join 加组织，成为其中一员 join in 加入活动(小），游戏 join sb. in doing sth. 加入某人做某事的队伍中 take part in 参加活动（大） eg. ____jo_i_n___ the army ____jo_i_n___ me in playing football __jo_i_n__i_n_ the game
人教高中英语必修1Unit1建议信(共25张PPT)
A letter of
giving advice
建议信
1.基本框架： 开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向 对方陈述自己的观点。(state your idea)
主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行 分析并说明理由，并提出自己的建议。 (reasons and evidence)
5. As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion/As for me, it would be wise to take the following action. 6. I wonder if you have considered the following tips. 7. When it come to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you (should) do …
连接词
• First • Second • Besides • The last but not the least
• 注意衔接词使用: 表先后次序： • First, second, third….Finally • Firstly, secondly，…eventually • to begin/start with, at last
• ⑦Only by practicing more can we learn English better. Only when you try your best will
you have a good command of English. ⑧ It is a wide vocabulary that helps you improve your Engleter来信中得知，他一直因为自己 身体太胖而苦恼，请你用英文给他 写一封Email，提出你的建议。
giving advice
建议信
1.基本框架： 开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向 对方陈述自己的观点。(state your idea)
主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行 分析并说明理由，并提出自己的建议。 (reasons and evidence)
5. As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion/As for me, it would be wise to take the following action. 6. I wonder if you have considered the following tips. 7. When it come to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you (should) do …
连接词
• First • Second • Besides • The last but not the least
• 注意衔接词使用: 表先后次序： • First, second, third….Finally • Firstly, secondly，…eventually • to begin/start with, at last
• ⑦Only by practicing more can we learn English better. Only when you try your best will
you have a good command of English. ⑧ It is a wide vocabulary that helps you improve your Engleter来信中得知，他一直因为自己 身体太胖而苦恼，请你用英文给他 写一封Email，提出你的建议。
英语书面表达之建议信幻灯片PPT
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12. 有所好转 __c_h_a_n_g__e_f_o_r_t_h_e_b__e_tt_e_r____
英语书面表达之建议信幻灯片 PPT
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Look at the pictures. Do you think her English is good? If we write a letter to help her, what kind of letter should we write? A letter of thanks B letter of giving advice C letter of application. D letter of invitation
13. 依我看来 i_n__m_y__o_p_i_n_io_n__/ _v_ie_w____
14. 15.
我我建已议收…到…你的I_w_来o_u_信l_d_，l_ik_得e_t_知o__s你u_g_…g_e__s__t__t_h__a__t_…___. __
I have received your letter saying that you…
只有这样才可以学好英语。
These sentences can your composition more excellent!
建议信 优秀习作欣赏分析：
Dear Peter,
高中英语必修1 writing 建议信 共15张PPT
假如你是李华，你的朋友Nathan将来你的 城市做一项调查研究，写信询问你相关注 意事项。请你回信，内容包括：
1. 天气情况 2. 食物 3. 交通
1
Dear Nathan, Glad to hear from you. You said in your letter you would come to
my city to do a research. To make you stay here safe and comfortable, I’d like to offer you some advice.
First, it can be quite cold here in winter, so it’s better for you to wear heavy clothes when you are out. Second, Chinese food may appear strange to foreigners like you, so you are supposed to learn to adapt to the food here and gradually you will find it delicious. What is the most important is the traffic. In China, we drive on the right— different from the usual practice in your country. So be sure to have it in your mind when you have a chance to drive.
4
Sentence patterns（句型） Body: give your advice & reasons 1. It’s helpful/important to…… 2. It would be a good idea to…… 3. I would like to suggest that…..sb (should) do sth.
1. 天气情况 2. 食物 3. 交通
1
Dear Nathan, Glad to hear from you. You said in your letter you would come to
my city to do a research. To make you stay here safe and comfortable, I’d like to offer you some advice.
First, it can be quite cold here in winter, so it’s better for you to wear heavy clothes when you are out. Second, Chinese food may appear strange to foreigners like you, so you are supposed to learn to adapt to the food here and gradually you will find it delicious. What is the most important is the traffic. In China, we drive on the right— different from the usual practice in your country. So be sure to have it in your mind when you have a chance to drive.
4
Sentence patterns（句型） Body: give your advice & reasons 1. It’s helpful/important to…… 2. It would be a good idea to…… 3. I would like to suggest that…..sb (should) do sth.
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
Enjoy one possible version from your classmate.
a good composition
structure contents language
beauty
be attractive, finished in a limited time!
Homework
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句） I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
5. In this way, you can make great progress in English.(改为倒装句） _O__n_ly_ in this way, _c_a_n_ you make great progress in English.
Step6. polish your writing（润色）
How to polish your writing？
Polish your composition by improving your handwriting（书写）
Polish your composition by improving your language
【课件】英语建议信课件(共23张幻灯片)
Chinese words more easily. What’s more, you can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write me in Chinese next time.
• 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学 好中文。请你根据下列要点写 回信。
• 要点：⑴ 参加中文学习班；⑵ 看中文书刊、电视； ⑶ 学唱中 文歌曲； ⑷ 交中国朋友。
• take a Chinese course
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
First, you had better show your friendliness to others.
It is good for your to make friends. 两个简单句
First, you must be friendly to others if you want to make friends with others.状语从句
写作模板 第二段： (建议及理由) 1. Here are a few suggestions. 2.I’d like to share some advice
with you. 3.In my opinion/As far as I am
concerned, it would be wise to take the following actions.
人教版高中英语必修一Unit1Friendship建议信课件(共11张PPT)
Made by Echo
衔接: 1.To begin with,…and then…besides, …,what’s more,…
2.Firstly,… secondly, …thirdly,… ,finally,…
3.On the one hand, … on the other hand,…
Made by Echo
承上启 下
层层递进
结论
Now please think about your writing and begin!!!
Made by Echo
Made by Echo
8.As long as
Made by Echo
连词成句
你的看法：要尽快恢复心情，努力改变现 状，因为朋友和友谊在新的环境中显得尤 其重要。
I consider that Recover yourself from
You should
it as soon as possible
and
make an effort to change your present situation
Words and expressions in unit 1
upset ignore recover settle have got to go through calm(…)down
a series of in order to be concerned about face to face suffer from get along with join in
Writing
Friendship
Made by Echo
建议信开头： 1.I’ m sorry to hear that …. 2. I’m glad to receive your letter
衔接: 1.To begin with,…and then…besides, …,what’s more,…
2.Firstly,… secondly, …thirdly,… ,finally,…
3.On the one hand, … on the other hand,…
Made by Echo
承上启 下
层层递进
结论
Now please think about your writing and begin!!!
Made by Echo
Made by Echo
8.As long as
Made by Echo
连词成句
你的看法：要尽快恢复心情，努力改变现 状，因为朋友和友谊在新的环境中显得尤 其重要。
I consider that Recover yourself from
You should
it as soon as possible
and
make an effort to change your present situation
Words and expressions in unit 1
upset ignore recover settle have got to go through calm(…)down
a series of in order to be concerned about face to face suffer from get along with join in
Writing
Friendship
Made by Echo
建议信开头： 1.I’ m sorry to hear that …. 2. I’m glad to receive your letter
《英语建议信》课件
Example
Content
The letter is addressed to the human resources department of a company, suggesting ways to improve the recruitment process and attract more qualified candidates
Objectives
To provide learners with a clear understanding of the purpose and significance of learning English suggestion letters
Purpose and significance
02
Composition of suggestion letter
Start
Salutation
Start with a formal salutations, such as "Dear [Name]", to show respect and diversity
Introduction
Briefly introduce the purpose of the letter, for example, to provide suggestions for improving a certain aspect
Features
The letter is well organized and clearly outlines the problems and solutions It uses formal language and political tone, and it includes specific examples to illustrate its points
《英语建议信模版》课件
提出针对学校的具体建议，如加强师资队伍建设和优化教学环境。
案例二：给公司管理层提出建议
针对公司的管理问题，提出提高员工培训和改进绩效评估的建议。
案例三：给政府就环境保护的问题提出建议
针对环境问题，提出加强环境保护法律和政策、倡导绿色生活等建议。
总结
要点回顾
• 建议信的目的和重要性。 • 建议信的结构和写作原则。 • 常用句型和词汇。
《英语建议信模版》PPT 课件
本PPT课件将介绍英语建议信的模版和写作技巧，帮助您提高建议信写作能 力。内容包括建议信的概述、结构、常用句型和词汇，以及实例分析等。
建议信概述
1 建议信的目的
明确建议信的目标和意义，引发读者兴趣。
2 建议信的写作原则
介绍建议信的写作原则，确保信函准确、有效。
建议信结构
1 中心思想再次重申
简洁明了地再次强调信中的中心思想。
2 感谢信收信者
表达对收信者的感谢和赞赏。
3 祝愿
以祝愿的话语结束信函，展示良好的信函结尾。
常用句型和词汇
开头
中间段
• 我写信是要给你提些建议。
• 我想给你提一个关于... 的建议。
• 我建议你... • 你可以考虑...
结尾
• 我希望我的建议对你有 所帮助。
• 我祝愿你能成功实施这 些建议。
注意事项
1 使用恰当的语气和措 2 避免使用形式化的语
辞
言
确保语气恰当，措辞准确， 使建议信具有说服力。
避免使用过于正式和呆板 的语言，使建议信更加自 然和亲切。
3 遵守信件格式要求
遵循建议信的格式要求， 包括信头、引言、建议和 落款等部分。
实例分析
案例一：给学校提升教学质量的建议
案例二：给公司管理层提出建议
针对公司的管理问题，提出提高员工培训和改进绩效评估的建议。
案例三：给政府就环境保护的问题提出建议
针对环境问题，提出加强环境保护法律和政策、倡导绿色生活等建议。
总结
要点回顾
• 建议信的目的和重要性。 • 建议信的结构和写作原则。 • 常用句型和词汇。
《英语建议信模版》PPT 课件
本PPT课件将介绍英语建议信的模版和写作技巧，帮助您提高建议信写作能 力。内容包括建议信的概述、结构、常用句型和词汇，以及实例分析等。
建议信概述
1 建议信的目的
明确建议信的目标和意义，引发读者兴趣。
2 建议信的写作原则
介绍建议信的写作原则，确保信函准确、有效。
建议信结构
1 中心思想再次重申
简洁明了地再次强调信中的中心思想。
2 感谢信收信者
表达对收信者的感谢和赞赏。
3 祝愿
以祝愿的话语结束信函，展示良好的信函结尾。
常用句型和词汇
开头
中间段
• 我写信是要给你提些建议。
• 我想给你提一个关于... 的建议。
• 我建议你... • 你可以考虑...
结尾
• 我希望我的建议对你有 所帮助。
• 我祝愿你能成功实施这 些建议。
注意事项
1 使用恰当的语气和措 2 避免使用形式化的语
辞
言
确保语气恰当，措辞准确， 使建议信具有说服力。
避免使用过于正式和呆板 的语言，使建议信更加自 然和亲切。
3 遵守信件格式要求
遵循建议信的格式要求， 包括信头、引言、建议和 落款等部分。
实例分析
案例一：给学校提升教学质量的建议
高中英语建议信(共10张PPT)
❖ 有用词汇： 平台 Platform 开阔眼界 broaden
Third, it is a good way to enrich school culture as well.
one’s horizons 丰富 enrich －有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。
画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平台，开阔学生视野、丰富校园文化。 —单词、句子没有拼写、语法错误 practical writing (应用文). 有用词汇： 平台 Platform 开阔眼界 broaden one’s horizons 丰富 enrich I hope that you take my suggestions into consideration. correct grammar structures
4. nice handwriting
…
A good piece of writing
Accuracy （准确性）
—准确无误地表达作者意图 —覆盖要求的所有要点 —单词、句子没有拼写、语法错误
Excellence
（优良性）
－应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复 杂）语言地道
Second, It can also help to broaden students’ horizons .Third, it is a good way to enrich school culture as well.
❖ Thanks for reading my letter. I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration.
文), ending(结束语)and signature(签名). 3. tense :present / future 4. three paragraphs
Third, it is a good way to enrich school culture as well.
one’s horizons 丰富 enrich －有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。
画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平台，开阔学生视野、丰富校园文化。 —单词、句子没有拼写、语法错误 practical writing (应用文). 有用词汇： 平台 Platform 开阔眼界 broaden one’s horizons 丰富 enrich I hope that you take my suggestions into consideration. correct grammar structures
4. nice handwriting
…
A good piece of writing
Accuracy （准确性）
—准确无误地表达作者意图 —覆盖要求的所有要点 —单词、句子没有拼写、语法错误
Excellence
（优良性）
－应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复 杂）语言地道
Second, It can also help to broaden students’ horizons .Third, it is a good way to enrich school culture as well.
❖ Thanks for reading my letter. I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration.
文), ending(结束语)and signature(签名). 3. tense :present / future 4. three paragraphs
英语书面表达之建议信26页PPT
英语书面表达之建议信
11、战争满足了，或曾经满足过人的 好斗的 本能， 但它同 时还满 足了人 对掠夺 ，破坏 以及残 酷的纪 律和专 制力的 欲望。 ——查·埃利奥 特 12、不应把纪律仅仅看成教育的手段 。纪律 是教育 过程的 结果， 首先是 学生集 体表现 在一切 生活领 域—— 生产、 日常生 活、学 校、文 化等领 域中努 力的结 果。— —马卡 连柯(名 言网)
13、遵守纪律的风气的培养，只有领 导者本 身在这 方面以 身作则 才能收 到成效 。—— 马卡连 柯 14、劳动者的组织性、纪律性、坚毅 精神以 及同全 世界劳 动者的 团结一 致，是 取得最 后胜利 的保证 。—— 列宁 摘自名言网
15、机会是不守纪律的。——雨果
1、最灵繁的人也看不见自己的背脊。——非洲 2、最困难的事情就是认识自己。——希腊 3、有勇气承担命运这才是英雄好汉。——黑塞 4、与肝胆人共事，无字句处读书。——周恩来 5、阅读使人充实，会谈使人敏捷，写作使人精确。——培根
11、战争满足了，或曾经满足过人的 好斗的 本能， 但它同 时还满 足了人 对掠夺 ，破坏 以及残 酷的纪 律和专 制力的 欲望。 ——查·埃利奥 特 12、不应把纪律仅仅看成教育的手段 。纪律 是教育 过程的 结果， 首先是 学生集 体表现 在一切 生活领 域—— 生产、 日常生 活、学 校、文 化等领 域中努 力的结 果。— —马卡 连柯(名 言网)
13、遵守纪律的风气的培养，只有领 导者本 身在这 方面以 身作则 才能收 到成效 。—— 马卡连 柯 14、劳动者的组织性、纪律性、坚毅 精神以 及同全 世界劳 动者的 团结一 致，是 取得最 后胜利 的保证 。—— 列宁 摘自名言网
15、机会是不守纪律的。——雨果
1、最灵繁的人也看不见自己的背脊。——非洲 2、最困难的事情就是认识自己。——希腊 3、有勇气承担命运这才是英雄好汉。——黑塞 4、与肝胆人共事，无字句处读书。——周恩来 5、阅读使人充实，会谈使人敏捷，写作使人精确。——培根
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点睛之笔：
• Nothing is impossible to a willing heart! • Practice makes perfect • Never give up/lose heart • If you have any trouble, please turn to me for help. • I’d like to share my methods with you. • Only in this way, can you learn English well • read novels, magazines and everything to do with
4.I am writing to you for the purpose of ----5 I am writing to share some advice with opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action.在下认 为， 如果你能采取以下措施，将是一种
语信件的基本格式。 b．这类文章的基本时态多
用一般现在时和一般将来时。
写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句
A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图)
1．After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that … 2．I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter
记好笔记 Set / write down Make/take notes
课后认真独立完成作业
Finish your homework by yourself/on your own/don’t copy 每天进行英语听说练习
Practise listening and speaking every day
书面表达如何写？
三 Step 1 List the key points
个
Step 2 Make sentences
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学 的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议， 帮助他学好英语。
内容提示：1. 一定要做好课前预习
写作步骤
首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单 介绍自己，注意语气。
主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点， 然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情 况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要 让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。
结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注 意有礼貌使读者容易接受。
建议信写作的注意事项： a．这类文章一定要符合英
提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。
give you some advice on English/learning English/how to learn English
I will give you some suggestions which I think may be helpful to you.
2. 课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记
3. 课后认真独立完成作业
4. 每天进行英语听说练习
5. 加强课外阅读扩大词汇量
第一步：列举要点
• 英语学的不大好
You are not good at English You don’t do well in English You have difficulty with English You are not getting along well with English
明智的选择。
B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议， 井然有序。 1.first，firstly，secondly…．then， after that，in the end．finally．。 meanwhile ．．．
2 .I think it would be more beneficial if
加强课外阅读扩大词汇量
Enrich/enlarge your vocabulary.
• 注意衔接词使用: • 表先后次序： • First, second, third….Finally • Firstly, secondly，…eventually • to begin with/ to start with, at last
A letter of giving advice
写作攻略 1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建 议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个 问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给 某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或 忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提 出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语 气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明 扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
Here are my suggestions/tips on ….
做好课前预习 preview Prepare/ make preparations for Look through 课堂上认真听讲 Listen to the teacher carefully Pay attention to what the teacher says carefully
you could ------我想如果你能-----可能会更好
建议信结尾常用句式
1.I believe you will take my advice into account. 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful. 我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/ 有用/有帮助。 3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。
• 递进关系： furthermore；moreover； not only...but also...； not...but...；, besides； in other words；on the one hand...，on the other hand...； meanwhile； at the same time；