高中英语建议信写作PPT课件
2019高中英语作文写作指导-- 建议信(共34张) PPT课件 图文
S1: I _q_u_a_rr_e_ll_ed__w_it_h my parents and I
feel they only care about my __s_tu_d_y__
S2: __M_y__w_e_i_g_h_t _keeps increasing and My classmates often_l_a_u_g_h_t_a_t me.
4.建议信结尾常用句式：
1. I hope that my suggestions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.
2. I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals / suggestions. I will be more than happy to see improvements later.
Complimentary close(结束语), Signature
Yours sincerely, Robert
实际操练
假如你是某英文周报“PLEASE TELL ME” 专栏的 编辑Robert。南县一中高三年级学生Xu Meili因最 近感觉学习压力大，成绩下降，和父母经常吵架而 写信向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解 2、提出建议并给出理由 注意： 1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
You should not only concentrate on your study but also you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports. Not only should you concentrate on your study but also you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports.
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
...
talk in English
Brainstorming
read English books
ways to improve English
watch English films
have a good attitude
listen carefully
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
to sum up 观点 in my opinion, as far as I'm concerned, from
my perspective
Write a draft(草稿） by groups.
Step5: write a draft（草稿）
para1：Purposes and Problems
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua, ————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————
Best wishes.
Yours,
xxx
Step1：analyze (审题)
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
在此输入您的封面副标题
chemistry
math physics
English
假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信 中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很 苦恼。请写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学 习。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；
高中英语作文 如何写建议信 PPT课件
2.表达建议常用句式： ★ Firstly , why not do… ? If you do this , you will… ★ Secondly, you should /can do …. Then / That way you will do … ★ Thirdly , it would be a good idea if you do … By doing this ,you can do… ★ Last but not least ... ★ As far as know I am concerned , you’d better do … ★ In my opinion , you can do …
can …..
首段：针对对方对自己的信任简单表示感 谢，也可以表明自己的诚意。 中段：围绕对方的困惑、烦恼等问题，结 构清晰，用语科学的提出建议，注 意充分考虑到对方的实际问题，表达 选择得体用语，切忌生硬牵强泛泛而谈。 尾段：简单的寄予希望，希望自己的建议 能对对方有所帮助
1.开头常用句式： ★ I am sorry that you are having trouble /difficulty /problems in making friends. ★ I know you are having trouble with ... ★ I am glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on … ★ However ,the situation is easy to change if you take my advice… ★ Here are some tips to help you . ★ I think you can make it if you follow the advice below .
高中英语必修1 writing 建议信 共15张PPT
罗列观点：
• Firstly/ First of all / To begin with/ In the first place/on the one hand/ For one thing…
• Secondly/ Besides/ What’s more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/ on the other hand/ For another/ Next…
Sentence patterns（句型） Body: give your advice & reasons
1. It’s helpful/important to…… 2. It would be a good idea to…… 3. I would like to suggest that…..sb (should) do sth.
1. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.
2. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. 3. I’m sure if you take my advice, you will…
join join in take part in
join 加组织，成为其中一员 join in 加入活动(小），游戏 join sb. in doing sth. 加入某人做某事的队伍中 take part in 参加活动（大） eg. ____jo_i_n___ the army ____jo_i_n___ me in playing football __jo_i_n__i_n_ the game
高中英语写作建议信完整ppt课件
• 4.If I were you, I would .... • 5.When it comes to such a situation,
I would like to suggest that you should ... • 6.As to..., I suggest that you should....
.
建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 2. 2. I hope what’s mentioned above might be
步
骤 Step3. Form a passage and polish
.
范文讲解：
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。 假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类 图书(popular science books)和文学类图 (literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个 词的信，推荐这类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
need any help.
.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题；一两个句子；概括性；
整
暗示性
体
三 2. Body
部 分
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
小结；呼应主题 .
书面表达如何写？ 三 Step 1 List the key points
人教高中英语必修1Unit1建议信(共25张PPT)
giving advice
建议信
1.基本框架： 开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向 对方陈述自己的观点。(state your idea)
主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行 分析并说明理由，并提出自己的建议。 (reasons and evidence)
5. As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion/As for me, it would be wise to take the following action. 6. I wonder if you have considered the following tips. 7. When it come to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you (should) do …
连接词
• First • Second • Besides • The last but not the least
• 注意衔接词使用: 表先后次序： • First, second, third….Finally • Firstly, secondly，…eventually • to begin/start with, at last
• ⑦Only by practicing more can we learn English better. Only when you try your best will
you have a good command of English. ⑧ It is a wide vocabulary that helps you improve your Engleter来信中得知，他一直因为自己 身体太胖而苦恼，请你用英文给他 写一封Email，提出你的建议。
高中英语建议信写作 PPT课件 图文
2. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn Chinese well.
3. I have received your letter saying that you hope to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you. / Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问Байду номын сангаас是 很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
【篇中句】介绍详情、提出具体建议。
（可参考课本P7, part 2写作指导）
1. I'd like to suggest that 我想要建议……
2. It would be a good idea to do sth. / Doing sth. will also help to... 做某事是不错的主意。/ 做某事也有 帮助于……
高一写作专题一： 建议信
一、文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让 对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有 关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要 合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建 议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合 理性和说服力。
建议信的写作步骤：
首段：表明写信意图。陈述事由，简 单介绍自己，注意语气。
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
高中英语必修1 writing 建议信 共15张PPT
1. 天气情况 2. 食物 3. 交通
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Dear Nathan, Glad to hear from you. You said in your letter you would come to
my city to do a research. To make you stay here safe and comfortable, I’d like to offer you some advice.
First, it can be quite cold here in winter, so it’s better for you to wear heavy clothes when you are out. Second, Chinese food may appear strange to foreigners like you, so you are supposed to learn to adapt to the food here and gradually you will find it delicious. What is the most important is the traffic. In China, we drive on the right— different from the usual practice in your country. So be sure to have it in your mind when you have a chance to drive.
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Sentence patterns（句型） Body: give your advice & reasons 1. It’s helpful/important to…… 2. It would be a good idea to…… 3. I would like to suggest that…..sb (should) do sth.
高中英语写作-建议信.ppt
I wish you great success and rapid progress in learning Chinese．I am
expecting to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Zhang Peng
• It is necessary for you to ... • In my opinion, it would be better to ... • As far as I'm concerned, you'd better ... • If I were you, I would ... • It should be a good idea to ... • What's more, it will be helpful to you that ... • Why not ...
Li Ming
范文（3） (One possible version)
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
段尾常用表达
• I hope you will find these suggestions
useful / helpful/ practical. • I believe that you will take my suggestions
into account / consideration. • I'd appreciate if you accept my advice. • Waiting for your good news. • I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句） I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
transition words（过渡词）
转折 however, but, on the contrary 因果 so, therefore, for this reason, as a result,
as a consequence 结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in conclusion,
problems which person(第几人称) what type(什么体裁） what topic(什么主题）
what tense （写作时态）
conclusion first person
suggestion letter suggetions of learning English
simple present tense
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
---江西省寻乌中学 卢文华
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
高中英语选修7-1建议信 PPT课件 图文
谢谢！ 学妹给我打电话，说她又换工作了，这次是销售。电话里，她絮絮叨叨说着一年多来工作上的不如意，她说工作一点都不开心，找不到半点成就感。 末了，她问我：学姐，为什么想 找一份 自己热 爱的工 作这么 难呢？ 我问她上一份工作干了多久，她 说不到 三个月 ，做的 还是行 政助理 的工作 ，工作 内容枯 燥乏味 不说， 还特别 容易得 罪人， 实在不 是自己 的理想 型。 我又问了她前几份工作辞职的原 因，结 果都是 大同小 异，不 是因为 工作乏 味，就 是同事 不好相 处，再 者就是 薪水太 低，发 展前景 堪忧。 粗略估计，这姑娘毕业不到一年 ，工作 却已经 换了四 五份， 还跨了 三个行 业。 但即使如此频繁的跳槽，她也仍 然没有 找不到 自己满 意的工 作。 2 我问她，心目中理想型的工作是 什么样 子的。 她说， 姐，你 知道苏 明玉吗 ？就是 《都挺 好》电 视剧里 的女老 大，我 就喜欢 她样子 的工作 ，有挑 战有成 就感， 有钱有 权，生 活自由 ，如果 给我那 样的工 作，我 会投入 我全部 的热情 。 听她说完，我尴尬的笑了笑。 其实每一个人都向往这样的成功 ，但这 姑娘却 本末倒 置了， 并不是 有了钱 有了权 有了成 就以后 才全力 以赴的 工作， 而是全 力以赴 工作， 投入了 自己的 全部以 后，才 有了地 位名望 钱财。 你要先投入，才会有收获，当你 真正投 入做一 件事后 ，会明 白两件 事：首 先你会 明白， 把一件 事认认 真真做 好，所 获得的 收益远 大于同 时做很 多事； 你会明白，有人风风火火做各种 事仍未 有回报 ，是因 为他们 从未投 入过。 从“做 了”到 “做” ，正如 “知
【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
Step5: write a draft（草稿）
para3：hopes and wishes
1. I believe you will take my advice into consideration. 2. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 3. I hope you will find these suggestions useful/ helpful. 4. I do hope that my ideas will work.
problems which person(第几人称) what type(什么体裁） what topic(什么主题）
what tense （写作时态）
conclusion first person
suggestion letter suggetions of learning English
simple present tense
1.I’m glad to receive your letter, asking for my advice on how to ...
2.My suggestions are as follows. 3.I've received your letter, saying... 4.Here are some suggestions for you. 5.You have asked me for my advice on how to…
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
高中英语建议信课件
高中英语建议信课件Slide 1:Title: Writing a High School English Advice LetterSlide 2:Introduction:- Introduce the topic of writing an advice letter in high school English- Explain the purpose of an advice letter and its importance in communicationSlide 3:Structure of an Advice Letter:- Addressing the recipient: include the recipient's name and position- Salutation: use formal language and appropriate titles- Opening paragraph: introduce yourself and your relationship to the recipient- Body paragraphs: provide detailed advice and suggestions- Conclusion: summarize the advice and offer any additional support if needed- Closing: use appropriate formal language and sign offSlide 4:Language Tips:- Use formal language: avoid slang, contractions, and abbreviations - Avoid personal pronouns: focus on the recipient's needs and use the appropriate noun/pronoun- Be specific: provide specific examples, suggestions, and experiences to strengthen your advice- Use transition words: to organize your ideas and create coherence in your writingSlide 5:Content Tips:- Identify the purpose of your advice letter: is it to provide support, offer solutions, or give suggestions?- Assess the recipient's needs: write advice that is relevant and helpful to the recipient- Offer alternative perspectives: consider different viewpoints to present a well-rounded image of the situation- Be empathetic and supportive: show understanding and offer encouragement- Avoid judgment or criticism: focus on constructive feedback and positive solutionsSlide 6:Example: IntroductionDear Mr. Johnson,I am writing to you as a concerned student at XYZ High School. I have been aware of the challenges faced by students when preparing for college entrance exams, and as I recently went through this process myself, I wanted to offer some advice and guidance on how to navigate these stressful times.Slide 7:Example: Body Paragraphs1. Create a study schedule: Develop a routine that allows for dedicated study time while also including breaks for rest and relaxation. This will help you manage your time effectively andavoid burnout.2. Seek support from teachers: Approach your subject teachers for additional help and clarification on challenging topics. They have valuable experience and can provide guidance tailored to your needs.3. Practice previous exam papers: Familiarize yourself with the exam format and style by practicing previous years' papers. This will improve your confidence and help you identify areas that require extra attention.4. Stay motivated: Surround yourself with supportive friends who share similar goals. Organize study groups, join online forums, or form discussion groups to discuss difficult concepts and keep motivation levels high.Slide 8:Example: ConclusionIn conclusion, I believe that with careful planning, support from teachers, and focused practice, you can successfully tackle the challenges of college entrance exams. Remember to stay positive and believe in yourself. If you have any further questions or need additional guidance, please do not hesitate to reach out to me. Slide 9:ClosingSincerely,[Your Name]Slide 10:Tips for Proofreading:- Check for grammar and spelling errors- Ensure the flow of ideas is logical and coherent- Verify that the advice is clear and relevant- Edit for clarity and conciseness- Use appropriate punctuation and capitalizationSlide 11:Conclusion:- Recap the key points discussed in the presentation- Emphasize the importance of writing an advice letter in high school English- Encourage students to practice writing advice letters as a means of improving communication skillsSlide 12:Thank you!。
高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇 (共34张PPT)
第一段：得知缘由，说明目的 Mark本学期选修了汉语课程，需要学习建议 基本思路：得知你本学期选修了汉语课程， 我向你提出一些建议。
潜在词汇及句型
本学期
为...提供... 得知..., 某人做了某事
this term/ semester provide sb. with sth. Hearing/ Knowing/ Learning that..., sb. does sth.
Sb. be more than pleased to do sth. 某人非常乐意做某事 to acquire a good knowledge of sth. 精通某事物
第二段：提出建议，给出理由
1.认真听讲，积极练习 原因：语言学习离不开大量的练习 2.广泛阅读 原因：有助于扩充词汇量 3.欣赏影视作品 原因：可以获取习惯用语
To begin with, there is no better way to learn a language well than to listen attentively to your teacher in class and constantly practise after class as mastering a language does require a great deal of practice. Besides, I think it beneficial if you read as much as possible, which contributes a lot to enlarging your vocabulary. Finally, you can gain idomatic Chinese through movies and songs.
高中英语如何写建议信课件
Clear structure and logical rigor: The suggestion letter needs to have a clear theme and logical structure, with coherent paragraphs and each paragraph revolving around the theme.
Appropriate Language Use
The letter employees apply language and vocabulary, reflecting a high level of English proficiency
Common Error Analysis
Vague Content
Some letters lake specific suggestions or ideas, making them difficult to understand or act upon
Informal Tone
Some letters use inappropriate language or colloquialisms, which can understand the letter's authority and credibility
Using official language
Use formal language
Suggestion letters usually require the use of formal and professional language to express respect and importance towards the other party.
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结尾段：表达希望采纳建议并期盼回 复。
二、写作结构
【篇首句】说明写信目的。
1. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.
your listening and spoken English quickly.
试着在课外用英语和同学交流。只有这样，你 才能很快的提高英语听力和口语。
9. Last but not least, you should develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt
3. The best way to... is to... 最好的办法就是去做……
4. You'd better do.../not do... 你最好/最好不……
5. It's necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. ; more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高 中学好英语，我写信给你建议。
3. I have received your letter saying… Here
are some suggestions which I hope will be
of some help to you. / Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you. 我已经收到了你的来信，信上说…。这里是一些建议， 希望会对你有帮助。/ 可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
4. You have asked me for my advice about how to learn Chinese, and I will try to make some suggestions here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给 出一些建议。
5. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记， 以便下课后可以及时复习。
7. As is known to all, vocabulary is of great importance. You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.
在你来亲眼看到这些地方之前，你有必要读一些关于这 些地方的书。有了关于这璧地方更多的知识，你将会更 好的理解中国的历史和文化。
6. First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class
so that yousoon as you can after class.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是 很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
【篇中句】介绍详情、提出具体建议。
（可参考课本P7, part 2写作指导）
1. I'd like to suggest that 我想要建议……
2. It would be a good idea to do sth. / Doing sth. will also help to... 做某事是不错的主意。/ 做某事也有 帮助于……
众所周知，词汇是非常重要的。你应该早上花 半小时的时间背单词和朗读课文。
8. What’s more, try to communicate
with your classmates in English out
of class. Only in this way can you improve
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应 新的学校生活。下面是一些建议。
2. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.
最后但也是很重要的一点是，你应养成记日记 的习惯，这会帮助你提高英语写作，也会帮助 你复习学过的单词和短语。
高一写作专题一： 建议信
一、文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让 对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有 关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要 合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建 议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合 理性和说服力。
建议信的写作步骤：
首段：表明写信意图。陈述事由，简 单介绍自己，注意语气。