2014~2015学年度 最新 中考英语书面表达专题《应用文》书信及电子邮件 写作指导
2014中考英语书面表达(1)及参考范文
2014中考英语书面表达（1）及参考范文该精品搜集了历年的联考、竞赛，中考模拟、真题中的以及2013年9月以后的一些书面表达，都有参考范文，该精品共56篇文章，共69页。
中考书面表达（1）【2014福建省南安市英语模拟试题（1）】书面表达（15分）众所皆知，节约是一种美德。
但是如今，校园浪费也成为一个越来越严重的问题。
粮食的浪费，资源的浪费，时间的浪费……同学们，让我们从小养成勤俭节约的好习惯，从我做起，抵制浪费。
请你以“Stop Wasting at School ”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，说说我们在校园里怎样减少浪费，制止浪费。
温馨提示：1、所给词不计入总词数。
2、语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯。
3、文中不能出现真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称等相关信息。
参考词汇：serious, resources (资源), save, reduce…Stop Wasting at SchoolAs we know, saving is a good behavior. But nowadays, wasting has become a【参考范文】Stop Wasting at SchoolAs we know, saving is a good behavior. But nowadays, wasting has become a more and more serious problem.When I pass the school dining hall, I can see there’s so much food left on the plates. Some students forget to turn off the tap after washing hands. Lots of paper which can be used is seen on the ground. Also, some students waste time playingcomputer games…All these are harmful to us. As a student, we should have good habits of saving resources. We must set a good example to reduce waste at school. It’s our duty to let everyone know our country is lack of resources. So stop wasting from now on!评分原则：1、本题总分为15分，其中内容和语言占13分，词数占1分，书写占1分。
中考英语书面表达——应用文
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【人教版】2014届英语一轮复习指导(写作指南+实例解读)：写作专题 应用文(电子邮件)
Heqe is good news foq you.Ive decided to go to see you afteq the English speech contest.I am looking foqwaqd to seeing you. Best wishes to you and youq paqents!
谢谢观看！
教材复习篇
必修四 Units 1~2
写作专项辅导——应用文（电子邮件）
电子邮件是因特网时代人们进行书面交流的主 要文体，其内容与书信没有区别，可以是记叙 一件事情、讨论一些问题，说明某个事理、解 释某个原因等，究其实质，就是记叙文、说明 文、议论文在实际生活中的应用。电子邮件没 有复杂的格式，只有称呼、正文、结束语、签 名等ible veqsion： Deaq Tom， How time flies！It has been a month since you came to Beijing.How is eveqything going on with youq life and
山东高考)假设你是李华，你 的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月 份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛 speech contest)，你在资料搜 集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下 要点给Tom写一封电子邮件： ．询问Tom的生活和学习情况； ．谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙； ．告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。
What excited me most is that I will go to Beijing to attend an English speech contest to be held in summeq holiday in July foq middle school students.But unfoqtunately，Im encounteqing many difficulties in
英语作文14讲第五讲应用文--书信、电子邮件
英语作文14讲第五讲应用文--书信、电子邮件应用文是人们在生活、学习、工作和社会活动中经常使用到的，是为解决实际问题、处理具体事务而写的，它要求实用、真实、准确，还要求格式规范。
人们阅读应用文时，一般不包含欣赏的因素，只要求文通、字顺、事明即可。
所以，应用文要写的简洁明了，事实清楚，对内容、格式作周密具体的考虑和安排，以免因疏漏而贻误事情。
应用文在实践中已形成了各种较为固定的形式。
中考经常涉及的英语应用文主要有书信、电子邮件、发言稿、通知等。
考生有必要熟悉有关应用文的写作知识，了解有关应用文的写作要求，从而掌握有关应用文的写作诀窍。
I. 书信1. 写作指导英文书信一般由以下五部分组成：（1）信头（Heading）：即写信人的地址和写信的日期、要写在信纸的右上角；（2）称呼（Salutation）：指对收信人的称呼，写在左上角，顶格写；称呼后面的标点一般用逗号“，”；（3）正文（Body of the letter）: 信件的主体部分。
写在称呼的下一行，一般由左边第三或第五个字母处开始写起；【注意】近些年来，中考增加了一种较为灵活的书信写作形式，即：写回信。
这类题型中，书信正文的开头除简单的问候（How are you?/ How’severything going?）外，应该总结一下上封来信中提出的问题、需求等，使读者更清楚地了解这封回信的意图。
（4）结束语（Closing）: 指正文下面的结尾客套语。
位置应低于正文一、二行。
一般从信纸的中间稍右写起，第一个字母大写，末尾用逗号。
常用的结束语有Y ours sincerely, Y ours, Sincerely yours, Y ours truly等；（5）署名（Signature）: 写在结束语的下面。
练习题：圣诞节快到了，你收到了一封来自圣诞老人的信。
根据来信内容及提示信息，完成回信正文部分的开头、主体和结尾。
Dear Tom (Mary),Not long from now, I'll be leaving the North Pole for my long trip on Christmas. Although it's a long journey, I am still eager to visit you in Beijing soon.My elves (精灵) tell me that you have received a high mark in your final English exam this year, that's excellent! I think you are such a smart boy (girl) for your age. I'm so proud of you!I must go now to check on the busy little elves in the workshop where they are making all the toys and gifts for the good boys and girls. Let me know what present you want for the coming Christmas. We will be loading (装) the sleigh(雪橇) soon and heading your way!I’m looking forward to your message.Merry Christmas and Warmest Wishes!Santa Clause(1) 正文开头的提示：很高兴/兴奋收到您（圣诞老人）的来信。
2014~2015学年度_最新_中考英语书面表达专题《应用文》书信及电子邮件_写作指导
2015年中考英语书面表达专题《应用文》书信及电子邮件【写法指导】◇【题型设置与意图】书信及电子邮件是中学英语应用文的重要体裁之一，也是中考书面表达中的常见题型。
书信实用性强，格式固定，常见的书信包括一般信件、感谢信、邀请信、推荐信、求职信、回信等。
主要考查学生对书信格式的掌握和叙述或表达事件的能力，主要以考查一般现在时态为主。
◇【写作角度与注意事项】写作书信及电子邮件时首先要注意书信的格式。
书信通常包括以下几个部分：1．信头。
即写信人的地址和写信的日期，要写在信纸的右上角。
2．称呼。
指对收信人的称呼，写在左上角，顶格写；称呼后面的标点一般用逗号。
3．正文。
正文是信件的主体部分。
写在称呼的下一行，正文的每一段开头一般都顶格写。
4．结束语。
结束语通常是指正文下面的结尾客套语。
位置应低于正文一、二行。
一般也是顶格写，末尾用逗号。
常用Yours sincerely，Yours等。
5．署名。
署名写在结束语的下方。
写作演示◇【真题再现】(2014·成都)假如你叫李华，是某中学初三学生。
你计划在毕业考试后去英格兰旅行。
请根据下列提示给你的英格兰笔友写一封信，告诉他你的安排并就相关问题向他询问。
提示：1．考试结束后和父母一起去英格兰旅行；2．计划在英格兰停留10天；3．向他询问英格兰的风俗习惯；4．请他建议去英格兰的哪些地方旅行。
注意：1．信的开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数；2．词数：60左右。
Dear Ben，How is everything going?I am looking forward to your reply．Yours，Li Hua【写作思路】1．中心人称：第一人称2．主体时态：一般现在时态3．要点梳理：旅游安排；风俗习惯；名胜【语句构建】称呼→Dear Ben，正文→Thanks for your letter．／I have received your letter．I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam．We＇d like to be in England for ten days．I don＇t know about England．I hope you can provide me with some information a bout the customs of England．结束语→I＇m looking forward to your reply．署名→Yours，Li Hua／Yours sincerely，Li Hua【写作模板】称呼：Dear Kate／teacher／Mr．Wang署名：Yours，Li HuaYours sincerely，Li Hua【范文展示】Dear Ben，How is everything going? I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam．We＇d like to be there for ten days．But I don＇t know about England．I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England．I would like to travel toexciting places in England．Please introduce some interesting places to me．I am looking forward to your reply．Yours，Li Hua【名师点评】范文格式正确，要点齐全，语言简明扼要，既说明自己的计划，又提出了自己需要帮助的要求，是一篇很好的书信范文。
中考英语专题 书面表达
写作指导
4.成文
How to Make Our Weekends More Meaningful? Life on weekends is an important part of our daily life. How can we make our weekends more meaningful? Here are some of my suggestions. First of all, the weekend is a great time for family to get together. It's good to help our parents do some housework. That can help us understand each other better and show our love for them. Secondly, we should spend time developing our interests and hobbies at the weekend. For example, I would like to choose some books to read and communicate with others after reading. Thirdly, we can take part in volunteering activities, like visiting the old people's home or doing some cleaning in public places. Last but not least, to make ourselves healthier, taking exercise is a good choice. In short, let's make good use of our weekends!
河北2014-2015中考英语作文
2014B)书面表达（计10分）91. 请阅读Tony从美国发来的电子邮件，并根据所给提示和要求，以李华的名义回复。
Hey Li Hua!How are you doing? I’ve been busy since I came back from China. Guess what! I’m learning Chinese cooking, and I really enjoy it提示：（1）Ask Tony something about his Chinese cooking.（2）Answer his question about Mid0 Autumn Festival.要求：（1）邮件旭包括所有提示内容，课适当发挥。
（2）邮件中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。
开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）词数：60~80参考词汇：the lunar calendar(阴历), moon cake, watch the moon. The symbol of reunion(团圆的象征) Hi, Tony,Good to hear from you! It’s amazing that you’re learning _________________ ______________________________________________________________Hi, Tony,Good to hear from you! It’s amazing that you’re learning Chinese cooking. Why are you interested in it? How are you learning? And what can you cook? Hope to enjoy your dishes next time!Yes, we really have Mid-Autumn Festival. It’s on August 15th of the lunar calendar. It’s one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together for a big dinner that day. We usually eat moon cakes while watching the moon at night. We believe the full moon is the symbol of reunion. Bye for now, Li Hua.2015英语课上，老师要求同学们介绍个人周末计划。
中考英语书面表达专题《应用文》书信及电子邮件
2015年中考英语书面表达专题《应用文》书信及电子邮件【写法指导】◇【题型设置与意图】书信及电子邮件是中学英语应用文的重要体裁之一，也是中考书面表达中的常见题型。
书信实用性强，格式固定，常见的书信包括一般信件、感谢信、邀请信、推荐信、求职信、回信等。
主要考查学生对书信格式的掌握和叙述或表达事件的能力，主要以考查一般现在时态为主。
◇【写作角度与注意事项】写作书信及电子邮件时首先要注意书信的格式。
书信通常包括以下几个部分：1．信头。
即写信人的地址和写信的日期，要写在信纸的右上角。
2．称呼。
指对收信人的称呼，写在左上角，顶格写；称呼后面的标点一般用逗号。
3．正文。
正文是信件的主体部分。
写在称呼的下一行，正文的每一段开头一般都顶格写。
4．结束语。
结束语通常是指正文下面的结尾客套语。
位置应低于正文一、二行。
一般也是顶格写，末尾用逗号。
常用Yours sincerely，Yours等。
5．署名。
署名写在结束语的下方。
写作演示◇【真题再现】(2014·成都)假如你叫李华，是某中学初三学生。
你计划在毕业考试后去英格兰旅行。
请根据下列提示给你的英格兰笔友写一封信，告诉他你的安排并就相关问题向他询问。
提示：1．考试结束后和父母一起去英格兰旅行；2．计划在英格兰停留10天；3．向他询问英格兰的风俗习惯；4．请他建议去英格兰的哪些地方旅行。
注意：1．信的开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数；2．词数：60左右。
Dear Ben，How is everything going?I am looking forward to your reply．Yours，Li Hua【写作思路】1．中心人称：第一人称2．主体时态：一般现在时态3．要点梳理：旅游安排；风俗习惯；名胜【语句构建】称呼→Dear Ben，正文→Thanks for your letter．／I have received your letter．I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam．We＇d like to be in England for ten days．I don＇t know about England．I hope you can provide me with some information a bout the customs of England．结束语→I＇m looking forward to your reply．署名→Yours，Li Hua／Yours sincerely，Li Hua【写作模板】称呼：Dear Kate／teacher／Mr．Wang署名：Yours，Li HuaYours sincerely，Li Hua【范文展示】Dear Ben，How is everything going? I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam．We＇d like to be there for ten days．But I don＇t know about England．I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England．I would like to travel to exciting places in England．Please introduce some interesting places to me．I am looking forward to your reply．Yours，Li Hua【名师点评】范文格式正确，要点齐全，语言简明扼要，既说明自己的计划，又提出了自己需要帮助的要求，是一篇很好的书信范文。
中考英语应用文写作范文
中考英语应用文写作一、电子邮件假设你是Liu Ming,下面是你的笔友Zhang Ping给你发来的e-mail,请你也用e-mail给Zhang Ping回信。
所写内容的词数在80个左右。
Dear Liu Ming,I’m very happy that you’re going to stay with us for the weekend. Will you come by bus or by train ?When are you arriving? What do you look like? And what are you going to wear? Please tell me so that I can recognize you when I meet you at the station. By the way, what’s your favorite food, drink and fruit? I hope you’ll enjoy y our stay here. Please write to me soon.Zhang Ping【参考范文】Dear Zhang Ping，Thanks for your last e-mail. I’m going to your hometown by bus on Friday. I’m arriving at about 4:00 in the afternoon. You can meet me at the bus station. Sorry I forgot to send you a picture of mine by e-mail. I’m tall and a little thin. I’ll wear a red T-shirt that day. Don’t think too much about food. Home cooking is just OK. I like orange juice best and bananas are my favorite fruit. I’m sure we’ll have a lot of fun together. Oh， I can’t wait.Liu Ming二、便条明天是Alice的生日，她准备举行一个生日聚会并邀请Kate参加，但Kate不得不待在家里照顾生病的妈妈。
中考英语写作电子邮件专项训练
电子邮件1．假如你是李华，你的网友Tommy正经历此次上海疫情，他很紧张，不知道该如何来防御病毒。
请你按照下图要点给他写一封回信，告诉他在疫情期间要Stay Calm Stay Healthy.注意事项：1.邮件内容根据图示自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意，不得使用真实信息；2.图示中举例部分非限定内容，仅供参考；3.词数在80词左右，邮件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________2．假如你是李华，上周六早上九点你的笔友Peter给你打电话但你没有接到，请给Peter写一封电子邮件，包含以下内容：1. 解释未接电话的原因（当时正在养老院参加志愿活动）；2. 发送邮件的原因（由于天气寒冷你感冒了，嗓子疼）；3. 介绍你的志愿活动情况（1~2条）和感受；4. 上个月与父母争吵了，因为从不做家务，现在知道了做家务的好处。
2014年中考英语书面表达热点话题
2014中考英语重点热点话题作文参考及应用文的书写参考例文一、有关留守儿童：（一）、“留守儿童”问题是近几年社会关注的热点话题。
假如你是一名农村留守儿童——小伟，请你现在给你父母写封信，告诉他们你的近况和一些想法。
“留守儿童”的心事：1. 父母外出，一人在家，孤独寂寞；2. 看到别的孩子和父母在一起非常快乐，很羡慕；3. 有一次因没有足够的时间做饭，上学迟到，受到老师和同学的误解。
“留守儿童”的笑声：1. 老师和同学经常鼓励，在学习和生活上给予了很大的帮助；2. 政府给留守儿童过中秋节。
注意：1. 词数：80词左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
Dear Mom and Dad，How are you these days? I miss you very much. I‟m writing to tell you about my recent situation（情况）while you are out.During the time you are away，I feel quite lonely，especially when watching other children playing with their parents happily. How I envy（羡慕) them！One day，I was late for school and misunderstood (误解)by my teacher and classmates because I had not enough time to cook a meal. However，to my joy(高兴)，my teachers and classmates always encourage me and give me a lot of help in study and life.What‟s more，on the Mid-autumn Festival，the local government held a special party for us. I was happy and deeply moved(感动).I miss you，Mom and Dad. But I can take care of myself. I’m looking forward to seeing you. YoursXiaowei（二）如今，在我们身边，父母均在外打工的留守儿童比比皆是。
中考英语 常考易错点 专题二十三 书面表达
书面表达知识清单一、应用文应用文是人们日常生活或工作中经常使用的文体,包括书信、电子邮件、通知、便条、启事等。
其语言重在实用,要求朴实、准确、简洁。
应用文在实践中逐渐形成了各自的格式,且各种格式都有一定的规范。
掌握应用文的基本结构和特点是学生应该具备的基本功之一。
【例1】(2014·浙江宁波)书面表达假如你是Mike,后天是父亲节,请你根据下面所给信息,写一封信,回忆去年夏天与父亲一起爬山的难忘经历,作为一份送给父亲的特殊礼物。
注意:1. 信中应包含所提供的信息,并展开合理的想象;2. 信中不能出现真实的姓名;3. 词数:80词左右。
(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)Dear Daddy,It's a gift for Father's Day when you are reading it.I still remember the day last summer whenNow, I want to say; I love you, Daddy. You raise me up!Happy Father's Day!Yours,Mike【参考范文】Dear Daddy,It's a gift for Father's Day when you are reading it.I still remember the day last summer when early in the morning. But,unluckily,it began to be cold and tired. So I couldn't help complaining. But you told me not to give up and put your coat on me softly,“We will reach the top.” You really cheered me up. What beautiful nature that I had never seen.Now,I want to say:I love you,Daddy. You raise me up!Happy Father's Day!Yours,Mike 二、看图作文看图作文,是以文字(中文或英文)和画面两种形式向同学们提供信息,有的是要同学们写,有的要填空或补全对话。
中考英语 第二部分 一 应用文
应用文在初中阶段，英语应用文主要包括书信（电子邮件）、日记、通知、便条、发言稿、调查报告、倡议书、海报、广告等。
应用文通常有一定的格式，而且不同类型的应用文，其格式也不同。
所以掌握一些应用文的格式并能熟练运用非常重要。
应用文的总体写作要求是：格式正确、语言简洁、精炼，无语法及词语搭配错误。
第一节书信（电子邮件）◆写作要求书信具有格式较固定、实用性强、适用范围广泛等特点。
英文书信一般由以下几部分组成：1. 信头：即写信人的地址和写信日期，要写在信纸的右上角。
顺序是先写地址，后写日期。
地址按照由小写到大的顺序书写，即门牌号→街名→城市→省份→国名。
如“江西省万载县康乐镇田下路159号”，英文写法是：159 Tianxia Road，Kangle Town，Wanzai County，Jiangxi Province；日期可按“日—月—年”的顺序或“月—日—年”的顺序写。
2. 称呼：指对收信人的称呼，写在信纸的左上角，顶格写；称呼后面的标点一般用逗号。
3. 正文：是信件的主体部分。
写在称呼的下一行，常在缩进两个空格处起笔。
正文第一段也可以顶格写，但以后各段应空两格。
4. 结束语：指正文下面的结尾客套话。
写在书信正文结尾下面低两行的位置上。
一般它均从正中或偏右处写起。
结束语的第一个字母必须大写，后面须加上逗号。
常用的结束语有Yours sincerely，yours，Sincerely yours等。
5. 署名：发信人自己的姓名，写在结束语的下面一行。
可与结束语齐头或略向右靠一点儿。
中考书面表达中的电子邮件类试题一般都要求写正文，其格式同书信。
开头第一行写称呼，顶格写，称呼后面一般用逗号；正文部分从称呼的下一行开始写起，从左边起空两格。
正文后面是结束语和署名，格式同书信。
◆注意事项收信人的姓名必须都写全称。
常用尊称的用法如下：⑴ Mr.（Mister）用于无职称的男子。
⑵ Mrs.（Misses）用于已婚女子。
中考英语应用文写作格式范文之书信
中考英语应用文写作格式之书信中考英语应用文写作格式范文之书信（一）书信（Letter）March 26th， 2009Dear Cathy，I like your program very much. It has a lot of interesting stories， attractive games and popular English songs. From your program we can learn many new words and expressions. We can improve our listening and speaking in English .We can also know more about the culture of other countries in the world. In a word，we learn a lot from your program.I‘m sorry to tell you that I can’t follow you easily sometimes because you speak little bit fast. It‘s also a pity that we can only watch your program twice a week.Thank you for giving us a lot of fun！ I wish your program a bright future！Yours sincerelyWangPing(二)电子邮件（e-mail）To：*****************Cc： NoneSubject： Re： Pen-pal wantedHello， Kayla，I’m Mike. I am 15 years old. I‘m glad to know that you would like to have a pen-pal. I also want to find a pen-pal from the Internet. When I’m free， I like to listen to the music， go hiking and play basketball. I‘m good at English and art .We can learn from each other and be good friends. I hope to hear fromyou often.Best。
初中英语书面表达练习(书信邮件类)
初中英语书面表达练习（书信邮件类）1、假设你是大明，你的笔友给你来信了。
请阅读以下来信，并根据内容写一封回信。
要求：1．80词左右；2．文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。
Dear Da ming,I’d like to tell you something about my “important gift”．It was a beautiful smile．When I was nine years old，I went to a new school．As a result，no one knew who I was．I felt lonely．Then one day when I sat at my desk unhappily as usual，a girl walked to me and smiled．Though she said no words，I felt the touch of something bright and friendly and it made me feel happy and warm again．After that she became my good friend．As we all know，everybody may feel lonely or be in trouble．Could you tell me something about your “important gift” that touched you or changed your life?Yours,Susan Dear Susan,_____________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________best wishesDa ming2、假定你是王林，你的英国笔友Heleri在做有关也界各国中学生如何过周未的调查。
中考英语作文分类训练：电子邮件
电子邮件1．假定你是李华，你的英国网友Mike给你发来电子邮件，询问合肥的最佳旅游季节。
请根据以下内容给Mike回复一封电子邮件。
要点如下：1.介绍合肥四季气候特点；2.你的建议：最佳旅游季节及至少两点推荐理由。
注意事项：1.词数80～100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,You asked me about the best time to travel in Hefei._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua 2．假如你是张玲，你的英国笔友Betty想了解你的新英语老师Ms. Zhou和你教室的样子。
应用文 - 日记,书信+电子邮件 备战2023年中考英语书面表达(写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累)
备战2023年中考英语书面表达（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累）第三章应用文日记+书信+电子邮件应用文是人们在生活、学习、工作中为处理实际事务,有着实用性特点,并形成惯用格式的文章。
它最主要的特点是应用性特别广泛,包括便条、通知、日记、书信等。
除此以外,应用写作时还要着重注意以下三个方面：1.明确写作目的.应用文是目的性特别强的文章,不同的应用文会有不同的目的.因而,在写作时,要清楚地知道这篇应用文是为何目的而写的。
2.遵循格式要求.应用文写作有着严格的格式要求,不同的应用文类型还会有所不同.在写作之前,要先弄清不同的应用文的格式要求。
3.注意时间的明确.应用文是在一定的时期内起作用的文章,因而在应用文中,时间要素的明确显得尤为重要。
Part 3日记写法点拨日记主要用来记录一天所经历的主要事情和过程,并表达自己的感受.英文日记的写作,要注意以下三个方面：1.格式要正确.在写日记正文之前,要依次有日期、星期及当天的天气情况.2.表达要清楚、准确、连贯.判断的标准就是通过阅读你的日记,看能否用简洁明了的英语把一天之中发生的事情以及你的感受准确无误地表达出来.日记记录的事情通常是已经发生了的,故常用一般过去时.3.文体要口语化.因为日记是写给自己看的,其内容多是记述自己亲身经历和亲眼看到的事或抒发自己的感情等,所以用第一人称写,把该写的东西写清楚即可.必备词汇1 月份January一月February二月March三月April四月May五月June六月July七月August八月September九月October十月November十一月December十二月2 天气情况sunny晴朗的cool凉爽的cold寒冷的rainy下雨的windy大风的cloudy多云的snowy下雪的foggy多雾的3 描述心情joyful欢喜的excited激动的delighted高兴的pleased开心的satisfied满意的comfortable舒适的bright明亮的terrible糟糕的horrible恐惧的frightened害怕的必备句型1 开头部分(1) It was the first day of our winter holiday.这是我们寒假的第一天.(2) One of my father's friends invited me to have a picnic today.今天,我爸爸的一个朋友邀请我去野餐.(3) On this weekend, my brother and I decided to help my mother with the housework.这个周末,我弟弟和我决定去帮助我妈妈做家务活.(4) Today, I realized that time was a very cruel thing.今天,我意识到时间是非常残忍的一样东西.(5) Today, our school had an opening ceremony in the school auditorium.今天,我们学校在学校礼堂举办了开学典礼.2 中间部分(1) It seemed to be an easy task for us, but later we had a hard time finishing it.它看起来像是一项容易的任务,但之后我们经历一段艰苦的时期才完成它.(2) I spent the whole day sweeping the floor and washing the clothes.我花了一整天来扫地、洗衣服.(3)Those red buildings and those green trees formed a beautiful picture.那些红色的建筑物和绿色的树木构成了一幅美丽的图画.(4)The night view was so beautiful that we all didn't want to go home.夜景是如此漂亮,我们都不想回家了.3 结束部分(1) I will be more diligent in this semester.这个学期我准备更加勤奋地学习.(2) We will treasure it at the bottom of our hearts.我们会把它珍藏在我们的内心深处.(3)What a nice day!多么美好的一天！(4)I was so moved by his speech.我被他的演讲深深感动了.(5) I did enjoy that game.我非常喜欢那个游戏.第2步：列提纲(1)开篇点题,概述整体情况；(2)描述在动物园游玩的经过；(3)表达你的心情和感受.第3步：参考词句(1) visit the zoo; classmate; by bus...(2) be full of; crowded; pavement; interesting; be interested in; talk with; get home...(3) have a wonderful time...第4步：连句成篇May 2,Sunday Fine Today I visited the zoo with several classmates. It took us half an hour to get there by bus.When we got there, the zoo was already full of people. It was very crowded on the pavements. There were many animals in the zoo. They were very interesting, and we were especially interested in elephants. They were very big, So they moved clumsily. We also talked with some foreign tourists in English. When we got home, it was time for lunch.I really had a wonderful time today.参考译文5月2日,星期天天气晴朗今天我和几个同学去了动物园.我们坐了半个小时的公交车才到达那里.当我们到达那里的时候,公园里已经有很多人了.人行道上非常拥挤.动物园里有很多动物.它们非常有趣,我们尤其对大象感兴趣.它们很大,所以它们移动时很笨拙.我们也和一些外国人用英语交谈了一下.当我们回家时,已经是午饭时间了.我今天过得很愉快.范文1May 31,Friday Fine Today, I saw something unpleasant on the bus.On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man get on. He was carrying a big thing. I gave my seat to the oldman at once. However, a young man standing nearby sat down immediately. So the old man had to stand. After a while, the young man took out a bottle of water, drank it up and threw the empty bottle on the floor.When I saw this, I got very angry. I think the young man should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean.参考译文5月31日,星期五天气晴朗今天,我在公共汽车上看到一些令人不愉快的事情.在回家的公交车上,我看见一位老人上了车.他拿着一件大的东西.我马上给这个老人让座.然而,一位站在旁边的年轻男子马上坐了下来.所以这位老人只能站着.过了一会,年轻男子拿出了一瓶水,喝完后将空瓶子扔在了地上.当我看到这一幕时,我非常愤怒.我认为这个年轻男子不仅应该尊重和照顾老人,还应该保持环境整洁.亮点词汇1 unpleasant /adj.使人不愉快的2 get on 上车3 have to必须；不得不4 take out拿出来；取出来5 respect /v.尊重出彩句型1 I saw something...我看见一些东西······2 I saw sb. do sth.我看见某人做某事.3 I gave my seat to the old man.我将座位让给这个老人.4 When I saw...,I got very angry.当我看见·.·,我非常生气.5 I think the young man should not only... , but also...我认为这个年轻男子不仅要······,还要···..·高分点评本文以日期、星期、天气等作为文章的开头部分,是一篇规范的英文日记.文中主要记叙了年轻男子占位、乱扔垃圾的事情,表达了作者对其的无限愤慨.文中的动作描写非常出色,如句子“The young man took out a bottle of water, drank it up and threw the bottle on the floor”就如同将当时的场景再现了一般,展现了作者扎实的语言基础.范文2May 10th,Sunday Rainy Today is Mother's Day. I prepared a lot of surprises for my mother.In the morning, I bought some flowers with my pocket money and put them in the vase. In the afternoon, I cooked a simple but delicious dinner for my family. After supper, I sang a love song for my mother and said “Happy Mother's Day” to her. Then I told her to take good care of herself and have a rest sometimes. I also promised to study harder and harder and to get good grades. Hearing my words, my mother was moved to tears.Today is a special day. It's warm and meaningful.参考译文5月10日,星期天雨今天是母亲节.我为妈妈准备了很多惊喜.早上,我用零花钱买了一些花,将它们放到了花瓶里.下午,我为家人煮了一顿简单又美味的晚餐.晚饭后,我为妈妈唱了一首情歌,并且跟她说“母亲节快乐”.然后我告诉她要好好照顾她自己,有时候也要休息一下.我也承诺要好好学习,取得好成绩.听到我的话后,妈妈感动得流下了眼泪.今天是特别的一天,温暖又有意义.亮点词汇1 prepare /v.准备2 surprise /n.惊喜3 pocket money 零花钱4 promise/v.承诺；许诺5 get good grades 取得好成绩6 meaningful有意义的出彩句型1 I cooked a dinner for...我为······煮了一顿晚饭.2 I sang a love song for...我为······唱了一首情歌.3 I told her to do sth.我告诉她要做某事.4 I promised to do sth.我承诺做某事.5 My mother was moved to tears.我的妈妈感动得流下了眼泪.高分点评本文是一篇格式规范的日记,包含开头各要素－日期、星期和天气,记述了母亲节时为妈妈庆祝节日的经过,蕴含着作者深深的情感.本文出色的另一个原因在于动词短语的使用,如“cook...for...”“sing a love song for...”＂promise to do sth.”等.Part 4 书信写法点拨书信,分为倡议书、感谢信、申请信等类别,写作时要注意以下几点：1.称呼.称呼就是对收信人的称谓.从左边顶格写,占一行.称呼一般在人名前加Dear,如Dear Mary, Dear Mr Gao, Dear Miss Li等.2.正文.正文是书信的主要部分.正文从称呼下隔一行开始,开头空4个字母的位置.正文的开始部分和结束部分通常是一些固定套语.3.结束语和签名.结束语写在正文下方的2-3行的位置,从信纸中央偏右的地方写起.一般用Yours,后加逗号,然后另起一行,写上写信人的姓名.签名通常要低于结束语一两行,也是从信纸中央偏右的地方开始写起.必备词汇1 常用结束语Yours sincerely您真诚的Yours truly您忠实的Yours faithfully您忠实的Yours ever你永久的朋友Your loving granddaughter你亲爱的外孙女2 提出建议advise建议suggest建议demand要求require要求request请求propose提议Call for呼吁recommend提倡3表达感谢thank感谢appreciate感激grateful感激的repay回报必备句型1 书信开头常用语(1) I'm very excited to learn that you will come to my home next week.知道你下周要来我家做客,我非常高兴.(2)How are you getting along with your classmates recently?你最近和你的同学相处得怎么样?(3) Now I tell you what I am going to do in the vacation.现在我要告诉你我假期将要做什么.(4) I'm writing to express my interest in your company.我写信来是表达我对你的公司感兴趣.(5) How is everything going on with you?你一切都顺利吗?(6) I'd like to tell you something about...我想要告诉你一些关于······的事情.(7) Here is the information about...这是关于······的信息.(8) I'm glad/happy/pleased to receive your letter.收到你的来信,我非常高兴.2书信结尾常用语(1)I’m looking forward to your letter.我期待你的回信.(2)I will never forget those days that we spent together.我不会忘记我们在一起度过的那些日子.(3) I wish you to have a happy holiday. 我希望你有一个愉快的假期.(4) Hope to see you again.希望再次见到你.(5)As the season grows colder, I hope you will take good care of yourself.天气越来越冷了,我希望你可以照顾好你自己.3 祝福语(1) Please give my best wishes to your parents.请转告你的父母我对他们最好的祝福.(2) Best wishes/regards to...最好的祝福给··...(3)I wish you a happy New Year.我祝你新年快乐.(4) I congratulate you upon your success.我祝贺你成功.(5) I wish you still further success.我希望你可以更加成功.美文引路题目:学校广播台开辟了“Thank you letter”英语专栏.假设你叫Chen Feng,你想在初中三年生活即将结束之际,向你的同学Lin Wei 表达一下感谢之情.请按下面的要求给你的同学Lin Wei 写一封感谢信,词数不得少于80词.要求：1.简述感谢的原因：2.适当举例说明Lin Wei 对你的帮助；3.谈谈自己的感受或想法、思路导航第2步：列提纲(1)简单描述感谢的原因；(2)举例子说明Lin Wei对“我”的帮助；(3)表达自己的看法和感受.第3步：参考词句(1) thank you; at the end of; helpful; each other...(2)forget; catch a high fever; stay at home; worry about; catch up with; close friends...(3) different; success...第4步：连句成篇Dear Lin Wei,I would like to thank you at the end of middle school life. You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.I will never forget that you have given me so much help. Last semester, I caught a high fever and had to stay at home for a week. When I was worrying about my lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject. With your help, I caught up with the others. Since then, we have been close friends.Thank you again. Even though we may go to different schools, we' ll be friends forever. I wish you success in the future.Yours,Chen Feng 参考译文亲爱的林薇：在初中生活即将结束之际我想向你表达我的谢意.自从我们认识以来,你一直非常友好,给了我很大的帮助.我将永远不会忘记你给了我很大的帮助.上个学期,我发高烧,必须在家待一个星期.当我担心功课的时候,你放学后来到我家,帮助我学习每一门课.在你的帮助下,我跟上了其他同学.从那以后,我们成为了亲密的朋友.再次感谢你.尽管我们可能会去不同的学校,我们将永远是朋友.我希望你以后取得成功.你的,陈风普通书信范文1Dear Tracy,I'm glad that you'll come to Guangzhou to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, but you will find it a little difficult because Chinese is quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese characters as possible. It's also important to do lots of reading and writing. Watching TV and listening to the radio will be helpful to your listening. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. For example, you can talk with your Chinese neighbors in Chinese. If you have any question, please ask me. I'm sure you' ll learn Chinese well.Hope to see you soon in Guangzhou.Yours,Xiao Ming 参考译文亲爱的特蕾西：我很高兴你将要来广州学习中文.中文非常有用,但是你会发现它有点难,因为中文和英文有很多的不同.你必须记住尽可能多的汉字.做大量的阅读和写作也很重要.看电视和听广播会对你的听力有帮助.你不仅可以从书本学习中文,还可以向身边的人学习中文.例如,你可以用中文和你的中国邻居交谈.如果你有任何的问题,请向我询问.我相信你会学好中文的.期望不久后在广州见到你.你的,肖明亮点词汇1 useful /adj.有用的2 (be) different from...与······不同3 Chinese character 汉字4 listen to the radio 听广播5 be helpful to...对···.··有帮助6 for example 例如出彩句型1 I'm glad that...我很高兴···...2 You will find it...你会发现···...3 It's also important to...做······也很重要.4 You can learn...not only from...but also from...你不仅可以从·····学习·,还可以从····学习·....·5 If you have any question, please ask me.如果你有任何问题,请向我询问.高分点评本文主要记述了给外国朋友学习中文的一些建议,叙述有条有理,逻辑连贯.规范的书信写作应包含称呼、开头套语、正文、祝福语、结束语和署名等部分,这些在本文也有所体现.本文使用了一系列提出建议的句型,如“You have to...”“It's also important to...”等,使文章内容更丰富并具有条理性.范文2Dear Tony,I have just received your letter. I am really excited that you are going to come to China to see me. In your letter, you asked my suggestions about your travel plan. I strongly advise you to go to Beijing and Guangzhou. There are many places of interest in Beijing, like the Palace Museum, the Great Wall. Guangzhou is famous for its delicious food. You can have a general understanding of China by visiting these two places.I hope you will enjoy your trip in China. I am looking forward to your coming.Yours ever,Chen Jie 参考译文亲爱的托尼：我刚刚收到了你的来信.知道你将要来中国看我,我非常激动.在你的信中,你问我关于你的旅行计划的建议.我强烈建议你去北京和广州.北京有很多名胜古迹,比如故官、长城.广州因它的美食而著名.通过参观这两个地方,你可以对中国有个全面的了解.我希望你可以享受在中国的旅程.我期待你的到来.你永远的朋友,陈洁亮点词汇1 receive one's letter收到某人的来信2 suggestion /n.建议3 travel plan 旅行计划4 be famous for...因······而著名5 general/adj.一般的,大体的出彩句型1 I am really excited that...我对······感到激动.2 You asked my suggestions about...你询问我关于······的建议.3 I strongly advise you to...我强烈建议你去······4 ... is famous for...······因·····而著名.5 Yon can have a general understanding of...你可以对······有个大致的了解.高分点评这是一篇回信,作者在信中回复了对朋友旅游计划的建议,格式符合规范要求,语气亲切而友善.文章词句使用地道,读起来流畅连贯,如句型“I am really excited about that...”“I strongly advise you to...”,显示了作者扎实的语言功底.倡议书范文1Dear Students,As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So we should try our best to keep our safety.Firstly, we mustn't bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Besides, do not have a bath in rivers or ponds without our parents' permission. And we should be friendly to others, so fighting is strongly banned. Moreover, we should always pay attention to the traffic on ourway to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers.In a word, it is very important for us to keep the safety rules above.Yours,Wang Qiang 参考译文亲爱的同学们：正如我们所知,安全是我们生活中最重要的东西.所以我们应该尽可能地保证我们自己的安全.首先,我们不能带管制刀具或管制物品到学校,因为这些物品可能会造成严重的问题.除此以外,没有父母的允许,不要在湖泊或池塘里洗澡.我们应该对别人友好,所以打架是被强烈禁止的.还有,我们在上学或回家的路上,要注意交通安全.还有就是,如果我们遇到紧急情况,我们一定要向警察或我们的老师寻求帮助.总而言之,遵守以上的安全规则对我们来说很重要.你的,王强亮点词汇1 safety/n.安全2 try our best to...尽我们最大的努力··....3 restricted /adj.受限制的4 permission /n.许可；允许5 ban /v.禁止出彩句型1 As we know,...就我们所知,··...·2 These things may cause serious problems.这些东西可能会造成严重的后果.3 We should be friendly to...我们应该对·····友好.4 We should pay attention to...我们应该注意······5 We must call for help from...我们一定要向······寻求帮助.高分点评本文从学生的安全问题入手,选题具有创新性,贴近学生们的生活,与学生们息息相关.在倡议方面,文章以有条理的逻辑顺序,提出了几项具有实用性的倡议.文章使用了较多精彩的句型,如“We should pay attentionto...”“We must call help from...”等,具有很大的可鉴性.范文2Dear Friends,In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should do everything we can to protect it. Firstly, we should plant more trees and flowers to make our city more beautiful. And always remember not to throw rubbish or pour waste water everywhere. As we all know, water is becoming less and less. So it's quite necessary to save water. For example, turn the tap off after washing. At last, we'd better ride a bike or take the bus when going out instead of driving a car.In my opinion, if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, our city will become nicer and cleaner!Yours,Chen Liang 参考译文亲爱的朋友：为了使我们的环境更加美丽,我们应该尽我们所能来保护它.首先,我们应该种更多的树和花,来让我们的城市更加美丽.切记不要随处倒垃圾或废水.正如我们所知道的,水(资源)越来越少了.所以节水相当有必要.例如,洗手之后要关掉水龙头.最后,我们外出时最好骑自行车或乘坐公共汽车,而不是开车.就我看来,如果每个人都尽力去保护环境,我们的城市将会变得更漂亮、更干净.你的,陈亮亮点词汇1 protect /v.保护2 throw rubbish 扔垃圾3 less and less 越来越少4 turn off关掉5 instead of而不是；相反6 in my opinion 就我看来出彩句型1 In order to...,we should...为了···,我们应该··....2 Always remember not to...记住不要......3 As we all know,...正如我们所知道的,....4 It's quite necessary to.........是相当有必要的.5 We'd better...我们最好·.....6 Our city will become nicer and cleaner!我们的城市将会变得更漂亮、更干净.高分点评本文抓住保护环境这一主题展开,这和我们的生活息息相关,从而拉近了与读者的距离.文章语言朴素简洁,通俗易懂,增加了倡议的力度.文中的句型丰富多彩,如祈使句“Always remember not to...”＂It's quite necessary to...”等,增加了文章的风采.感谢信范文1Dear Father,The Father's Day is coming and I would like to say “Happy Father's Day” to you.To support our family, you have to work very hard. Sometimes you are so busy that you can't even get home to have a meal. I feel very grateful for what you have done. I am very sorry that I can't spend that day with you at home. Please don't worry about me, for I will take care of myself at school. By the way, I am doing very well in my study.Anyway, I hope you will have a wonderful Father' s Day.Your son,Mai Liang 参考译文亲爱的爸爸：父亲节就要到了,我想对您说“父亲节快乐”.为了养活我们的家,您必须努力工作.有时候您忙得甚至不能回家吃饭.我非常感激您所做的一切.我非常抱歉不能在家和您过这个节日.不要担心我,我在学校会照顾好自己的.顺便提一下,我现在的学习非常好.无论如何,我希望您可以过一个很棒的父亲节.麦亮亮点词汇1 support /v.养活,供养；支持；支撑2 have a meal 吃饭3 grateful /adj.感激的；感谢的4 worry about 担心；担忧5 by the way 顺便提一下6 anyway /adv:无论如何；不管怎样出彩句型1 I would like to say...to...我想要对······说···..·2 You are so busy that...你是如此忙碌,以至于······3 I feel very grateful for...我对······非常感激.4 I am very sorry that...我很抱歉······5 I am doing very well in... 我在······上做得很好.高分点评本文以感谢信的方式,对爸爸为家庭所做的一切表达了感谢之意,饱含着对爸爸的浓浓深情.文章思路清晰,语气和缓并富有深情.作者有着扎实的英文运用功底,这都体现在文章各式各样的句式中,如“so...that...”“I am very sorry that...”等.范文2Dear the anonymous schoolmate,I don't get your name, but I want to express my sincere gratitude to you.Yesterday, I lost my school card on the playground. I didn't realize it until l got home after class. I was so upset, because it would be bothersome to register another one. But today, when I got to school ,the school guard told me that someone picked up my card and gave it to him. I was so excited to hear the news. You did not leave your name and I don't know who you are. But I am really grateful for what you did.Best wishes to you!Yours,参考译文亲爱的不知名的同学：我不知道你的名字,但是我想要对你表达我真诚的感激之情.昨天,我将我的校园卡落在了操场.直到我放学回到家后,我才意识到这件事.我非常难过,因为另外注册一张(校园卡)会很麻烦.但是今天,当我到达学校的时候,校警告诉我有人捡到我的卡,并交给了他.我听到这个消息时非常激动.你没有留下你的名字,我也不知道你是谁.但是我非常感激你所做的一切.致以你最好的祝福！你的,王欣亮点词汇1 sincere /adj.真诚的2 gratitude /n.感激；感谢之情3 after class课后；放学后4 bothersome/adj.麻烦的；烦人的5 register /v.登记；注册出彩句型1 I want to express my gratitude to...我想向··..··表达我的感激之情.2 I didn't realize it until...我没有意识到这件事,直到···..·3 The school guard told me that...校警告诉我··...4 I was so excited to hear the news.我听到这个消息时非常激动.5 I am really grateful for...我真的对······很感激.高分点评对同学帮助“我”的过程的回述是本文最为出彩的地方,不仅将前因后果有条理地呈现出来,还描述得非常生动.本文作为一篇感谢信,基本符合书信的写作要求,语气上也较为亲切真诚.文章词句十分精彩,例如“I didn't realize it until...”“I was so excited to hear the news.”等句式.申请信范文1Dear Sir or Madam,Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. I'd like very much to be a volunteer of the coming Chinese Culture Exhibition.In the beginning, I promise I would try my best to serve our distinguished guests from all over the world with enthusiasm. Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese culture, so I will be more familiar with the whole event, and I can better introduce the exhibition to our guests. What's more, I can express myself fluently and clearly in English, which will be a great help for communicating with international friends.To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer. I will do all I can if I could be accepted to be one.Yours,Li Yi 参考译文亲爱的女士或先生：谢谢你抽出时间来阅读我的信.我非常想成为一名即将到来的中国文化展览会的志愿者首先,我保证我会尽力热情地服务我们来自世界各地的尊贵的客人.另外,我有着丰富的中国文化知识,所以我会对整个展览更加熟悉,并且我可以更好地向我们的客人介绍这个展览.更重要的是,我能用英语流利清晰地表达自己,这将对与国际友人沟通大有帮助.总之,我相信我能成为一名合格的志愿者.如果我可以成为其中的一名志愿者,我一定会尽我所能.你的,李怡亮点词汇1 volunteer /n.志愿者2 enthusiasm /n.热情3 distinguished /adj.著名的；尊贵的4 be familiar with...对······熟悉5 exhibition /n.展览会6 fluently /adv.流畅地；流利地7 qualified /adj.合格的出彩句型1 Thank you for taking your time to...谢谢你抽时间来··...2 I'd like very much to be...我非常想成为···..3 I promise...我承诺··..4 I have a rich knowledge about...我对·····有丰富的知识.5 I can better introduce...to...我可以更好地向·.·介绍··....6 ...will be a great help for...将对·····大有帮助.高分点评本文的整个脉络非常清晰,可以清楚地看到作者的三个优势－服务热情、知识丰富和英语能力强,这无疑是申请信成功的第一步.第二,文章的书信格式非常正确,从称呼、固定套语到正文到结束语和署名,都给读者留下了完美的印象.范文2Dear Mrs. Brown,I'm Feng Yin from Dong Fang Junior High School. I'm very interested in your project and want to be a volunteer to help the students learn Chinese. I am warm-hearted and always ready to help others. I do well in Chinese. Last year, I won the first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition of my city. And I have many good ways to learn Chinese well. For example, we can listen to the radio and watch Chinese programs. Moreover, talking with local people is a fun and effective way to learn Chinese and its culture.If l can get the job, I can be a great helper. Thank you for your consideration.Yours truly,Feng Yin 参考译文亲爱的布朗太太：我叫冯茵,来自东方中学.我对你的项目非常感兴趣,想成为一名志愿者,帮助学生学习中文.我很热心,总是乐意帮助别人.我的中文很好.去年,我在城市的中文演讲比赛中获得一等奖.我有很多学好中文的好方法.例如,我们可以听广播、看中文节目.还有就是,和当地人交谈是一个学习中文和中国文化的有趣又有效的方法.如果我能成为志愿者,我会是一个很好的帮手.谢谢你的考虑.你真诚的,冯茵亮点词汇1be interested in...对······感兴趣2 (be)ready to...准备好(乐意做)3 .....for example 例如4 effective /adj.有效的5 consideration /n.考虑出彩句型1 I want to be a volunteer to...我想成为志愿者···.·2 I won the first prize in...我在···.··中获得一等奖.3 I have many good ways to...我有很多··..··的好方法.4 ...is a fun and effective way to........是.·····有趣又有效的方法.5 If I can get the job, I...如果我能得到这份工作,我·.....高分点评作者能紧紧围绕自己要申请的岗位,就自己的优势展开描述,这是抓住申请信的精髓的表现.其次,文章明晰的条理、清楚的结构也是使这篇申请信脱颖而出的重要原因.再者,文章的句型、短语多变,表达地道流畅,更是大大为本文加了分.Part 5 电子邮件写法点拨在进行电子邮件写作时,我们可以采取三步走的方法：1.与联系人寒暄,表明写作意图,引出话题.若与收信人较亲密,可以直呼其名,然后简单说明写信目的；若与联系人较为陌生,可以先说明自己的身份再引出写信的目的.2.详细阐述邮件内容,主次分明,详略得当.内容即写信人具体要说的话.可以是通知、致谢、叙事、致贺、邀请、提建议等,可以是一件事,也可以是几件事.3.首尾呼应,再次点明主旨,表示问候.简单概括邮件的主题,表达对收信人的美好祝愿,再次表明自己的写作意图,呼应开头,使文章结构更加严谨.必备词汇。
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2015年中考英语书面表达专题《应用文》书信及电子邮件【写法指导】◇【题型设置与意图】书信及电子邮件是中学英语应用文的重要体裁之一，也是中考书面表达中的常见题型。
书信实用性强，格式固定，常见的书信包括一般信件、感谢信、邀请信、推荐信、求职信、回信等。
主要考查学生对书信格式的掌握和叙述或表达事件的能力，主要以考查一般现在时态为主。
◇【写作角度与注意事项】写作书信及电子邮件时首先要注意书信的格式。
书信通常包括以下几个部分：1．信头。
即写信人的地址和写信的日期，要写在信纸的右上角。
2．称呼。
指对收信人的称呼，写在左上角，顶格写；称呼后面的标点一般用逗号。
3．正文。
正文是信件的主体部分。
写在称呼的下一行，正文的每一段开头一般都顶格写。
4．结束语。
结束语通常是指正文下面的结尾客套语。
位置应低于正文一、二行。
一般也是顶格写，末尾用逗号。
常用Yours sincerely，Yours等。
5．署名。
署名写在结束语的下方。
写作演示◇【真题再现】(2014〃成都)假如你叫李华，是某中学初三学生。
你计划在毕业考试后去英格兰旅行。
请根据下列提示给你的英格兰笔友写一封信，告诉他你的安排并就相关问题向他询问。
提示：1．考试结束后和父母一起去英格兰旅行；2．计划在英格兰停留10天；3．向他询问英格兰的风俗习惯；4．请他建议去英格兰的哪些地方旅行。
注意：1．信的开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数；2．词数：60左右。
Dear Ben，How is everything going?I am looking forward to your reply．Yours，Li Hua【写作思路】1．中心人称：第一人称2．主体时态：一般现在时态3．要点梳理：旅游安排；风俗习惯；名胜【语句构建】称呼→Dear Ben，正文→Thanks for your letter．／I have received your letter．I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing thefinal exam．We＇d like to be in England for ten days．I don＇t know about England．I hope you can provide me with some information a bout the customs of England．结束语→I＇m looking forward to your reply．署名→Yours，Li Hua／Yours sincerely，Li Hua【写作模板】称呼：Dear Kate／teacher／Mr．Wang署名：Yours，Li HuaYours sincerely，Li Hua【范文展示】Dear Ben，How is everything going? I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam．We＇d like to be there for ten days．But I don＇t know about England．I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England．I would like to travel to exciting places in England．Please introduce some interesting places to me．I am looking forward to your reply．Yours，Li Hua【名师点评】范文格式正确，要点齐全，语言简明扼要，既说明自己的计划，又提出了自己需要帮助的要求，是一篇很好的书信范文。
【实战演练】(一)假如你是杨佩，你的外教Mr．Smith想组织几名学生去一个学校参加助学和联谊活动，请你参考下列信息，以书信的形式向Mr．Smith提出申请，说明你打算如何参加这次活动并陈述理由要求：1．参考提示语，可适当发挥；2．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3．文中不得出现你本人的姓名、所在学校地址；4．60—80词(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr．Smith，I'm so excited to know that our school is organizing an activity to helpthe kids in a schoo1．Yours，Yang Pei(二)假设你是Dale，你的网友Cindy发来邮件，希望知道你最感谢的人是谁，现在请你给她回邮件，邮件内容包括：1．他／她的外表、兴趣爱好和职业等；2．感谢的理由。
要求：1．短文应包括所给内容，可适当发挥；2．语句通顺、意思连贯；3．词数80左右，邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Cindy，Thank you for sending me your photos．You wonder who the person I thank most is．Now let me tell you．Yours，Dale(三)假设你是张林，即将初中毕业，你的美国笔友Bob来信询问你的暑假计划，现在请你写一封回信，告诉他这个假期你会去爷爷奶奶家三个星期。
要求：1．至少写出你将要做的三件事；2．回信至少80词，信的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3．所给英语词汇仅供参考。
参考词汇：summer；grandparents；relax oneself；housework；visit；my friends and relativesDear BobSummer vacation is coming soon．How will you spend your holiday?Best wishes!Yours，Zhang Lin(四)目前，我国实施城市化的进程给从乡村(镇)迁入城市的大多数孩子带来诸多的问题，特别在交朋友方面尤为突出。
假如你是Lucy，你的朋友Tony发电子邮件请教你关于如何交朋友的问题，请你给他回复一封电子邮件提几点建议，词数约80左右。
要点：1．在小区内玩耍时，你可以主动与他们交流，与他们成为朋友，并告知家长；2．请求父母带你去图书馆或一些公共场所，既可认识更多伙伴又可参加文体活动；3．在星期天，可外出郊游等；4．总之，多参加交流活动，克服困难，保持耐心。
要求：1．涵盖所有要点，意思连贯，条理清晰；不得逐字翻译；2．书写规范工整。
参考词汇：first；second；third；in conclusionDear Lucy，I need some advice on how to make friends．I have just moved to a new city．I am 13．I don’t know anybody here and 1 want to make some friends．What’s the best way? Where can I meet people?Yours，TonyDear Tony，There are lots of things you can do．It takes time and patience to make friends．I hope you will find a best friend soon!Yours，Lucy（五）假如你是来自英国某中学的交换生Daniel, 你想参加英文报纸Jinling请根据该广告内容，用英语写一封电子邮件，询问与该班相关的具体信息，邮件内容应包括：1.培训班的起止时间以及周末是否上课；2.参观机器人公司的具体安排3.你还想了解到该培训班其他信息。
注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3.词数：80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/ MadamI’m writing to ask for information about the robot course for beginners at Starlight School.（六）假设你是李雷，你听说将有一批来自英国的交换生到泰州，他们想了解有关泰州中学生的课余生活。
请根据下表信息用英语写一封电子邮件向他们介绍相关2．所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥；3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
(参考词汇：《读者》Readers，侦探故事detective stories，游戏类节目game show，梅兰芳公园Meilanfang Park)Dear friends．I am glad to know you will come to Taizhou. I'll tell you something about our after-school activities._____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________Welcome to my hometown. I hope you will have a good time here. YoursLi Lei（七）假如你是某杂志社编辑Mr. Knowledgeable,根据中学生 Bob的来信内容，给他写封回信，帮助解决他所遇到的问题。
字数80—100，开头已给出。
Dear Knowledgeable,My problem is that I can’t get on with my family. My parents always say “no” to my ideas without any reason. So I often quarrel(吵架) with them.Also, my brother is not very nice to me. He always refuses to let me watch my favorite TV show. Instead, he watches whatever he wants until late at night. I don’t think this is fair. At home, I always feel lonely and nervous. Is that normal? What can I do?BobDear Bob,Knowledge able（八）假如你是王昆，你的美国网友Tom对中国的传统节日“春节”非常感兴趣，请你以“My Favorite Festival”为题，写一封E-mail.，给他做一介绍。