读后续写微技能训练之心里活动描写.ppt
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读后续写微技能之情感描写 课件-2023届高三英语写作专项
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. A burst of horror held me entirely in its power, making me unable to move an inch. Extremely frightened, I felt my legs trembling and my palms sweating. At the sight of the polar bear’s bloody mouth, she was rooted to the ground,with her face pale with fright. The furry creature launched an attack on the fence, instantly leaving a narrow opening on it.Terrified and scared,we let out a cry of horror with tears streaming down ,hoping someone would come to our rescue. Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.
读后续写情感表达微技能课件-高三英语二轮复习
例句2：听到他们的话时， 他高兴地几乎跳了起来， 热泪盈眶。
The moment he heard what they said, he was so delighted/pleased/ cheerful/overjoyed that he almost jumped up with tears filling his eyes.
Situation 2: 当我荣获一大笔奖学金时...
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sb be so +adj+that 从句（面部表情） sb be so+ adj+that从句（身体语言）+ with 复合结构 sb be so +adj + that sb felt as if。
When she learned the children’s ideas, she was so pleased/delighted/overjoyed that she smiled brightly.
仿写：当她看到孩子们为她做的美味早餐时，她非常开心。
_S_h__e_w_a_s__so__d_e_l_ig_h_t_e_d_w__h_e_n_s_h_e__sa_w__t_h_e__b_re_a_k__fa_s_t__ _m__a_d_e_b__y_h_e_r_c_h_i_l_d_r_en__. ________________________
读后续写微技能训练之心里活动描写
He covered his mouth to hide his yawn. Our mouths dropped open in surprise. She folded her arms and stared at him. She jumped to her feet at the news. She picked her way carefully along the stream. He paced back and forth. She screamed that there was a snake.
6、当主持人宣布她获奖时，她的激动之情溢于言表。 When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide
ex_c_i_t_e_m__e_n_t_took hold of her.
7、如痴如狂的自豪和喜悦已经渐渐化作轻柔、甜蜜和无 言的欣慰----是那种深沉隽永，说不清、道不明的心满意足。 人人脸上都流露着平和而圣洁的幸福表情。
我心里仿佛被个无形的大石压住，嘴巴不听的颤抖。脑子 一片空白。
5、My heart seemed to __j_u_m__p__out of my throat, my legs
were too weak to stand, and I almost __f_e_ll___down several times.我的心像是要从喉咙口蹦出米，腿软得儿乎站不住， 好几次差点摔倒。
unrelenting arrow into my heart. 我目瞪口呆，完全没有了反应，只觉得四周空荡荡的，寒 风像无情的箭，扎进我的心窝里。
1、He turned to me, with his eyes full of__h_o_rr_o_r__. 他转过身来,眼里充满了恐惧。 2、Her face turned _p_a_l_e___and stood there tongue-tied. 她脸色苍白地站在那里,舌头打结。
高中英语读后续写微技能指导续写的一致性公开课PPT课件
Language apprinally, on the morning of his graduation, his father called him into his private study, telling him how proud he was to have such a fine son and how much he loved him.
Angrily, he raised his voice to his father and shouted, “You know what I want. With all your money you give me a Bible?” He then stormed out of the house, leaving the Bible there untouched. From then on, he never returned home. Many years passed and the young man was very successful in business. He had a beautiful home and a wonderful family. One day, when his son quarreled with him, he was reminded of his father. Realizing his father was very old and that he had not seen him since that graduation day, he thought perhaps he should go to see him. But before he could make the arrangements, he received a telegram telling him his father had passed away, and had left all of the possessions to him. He needed to come home immediately and take care of things.
读后续写微技能(9)心理活动描写-2021年高考书面表达读后续写精讲精炼课件(48张)
读后续写微技能（9） --心理活动描写
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读后续写微技能（9）--心理活动描写
一、心理描写的原则 1.落实“细微处”描写 在描写人物心理活动时,一定要突出细节,所有的感情都体现在
“细微处”,所以尽量不用笼统的词,如smile, cry等,而用相关的细节 性词汇或词组,例如:
①Lily smiled happily. ②Lily wore a shining smile on her face. 分析:①句中“smile”是一个笼统的描述微笑的词汇,而②句中使 用了wore a shining smile,用词组的形式更加突出细节,展示了细微 和精致的“微笑”。
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【迁移应用二】 One day, my brother and I were alone in our apartment.The reason was that my parents had both gone for a ball party and had left me in charge of everything.I was doing my homework while my younger brother was watching TV.All of a sudden, the doorbell rang.Ding-dong! Ding-dong! My younger brother had rushed to the door before I decided to answer the door.We both thought that our parents had come home.As a result, he unlocked the door and opened it. Outside of the house stood a man who wore a black raincoat and black rubber boots.He looked no different from other people and he said that he was a salesman and asked politely if our mother or father was at home so he could talk with them.
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读后续写微技能（9）--心理活动描写
一、心理描写的原则 1.落实“细微处”描写 在描写人物心理活动时,一定要突出细节,所有的感情都体现在
“细微处”,所以尽量不用笼统的词,如smile, cry等,而用相关的细节 性词汇或词组,例如:
①Lily smiled happily. ②Lily wore a shining smile on her face. 分析:①句中“smile”是一个笼统的描述微笑的词汇,而②句中使 用了wore a shining smile,用词组的形式更加突出细节,展示了细微 和精致的“微笑”。
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【迁移应用二】 One day, my brother and I were alone in our apartment.The reason was that my parents had both gone for a ball party and had left me in charge of everything.I was doing my homework while my younger brother was watching TV.All of a sudden, the doorbell rang.Ding-dong! Ding-dong! My younger brother had rushed to the door before I decided to answer the door.We both thought that our parents had come home.As a result, he unlocked the door and opened it. Outside of the house stood a man who wore a black raincoat and black rubber boots.He looked no different from other people and he said that he was a salesman and asked politely if our mother or father was at home so he could talk with them.
读后续写微技能训练之心里活动描写19页PPT
读后续写微技能训练之心里活动描写
1、合法而稳定的权力在使用得当时很 少遇到 抵抗。 ——塞 ·约翰 逊 2、权力会使人渐渐失去温厚善良的美 德。— —伯克
3、最大限度地行使权力总是令人反感 ；权力 不易确 定之处 始终存 在着危 险。— —塞·约翰逊 4、权力会奴化一切。——塔西佗
5、虽然权力是一头固执的熊，可是金 子可以 拉着它 的鼻子 走。— —莎士 比
ENDLeabharlann 16、业余生活要有意义，不要越轨。——华盛顿 17、一个人即使已登上顶峰，也仍要自强不息。——罗素·贝克 18、最大的挑战和突破在于用人，而用人最大的突破在于信任人。——马云 19、自己活着，就是为了使别人过得更美好。——雷锋 20、要掌握书，莫被书掌握；要为生而读，莫为读而生。——布尔沃
1、合法而稳定的权力在使用得当时很 少遇到 抵抗。 ——塞 ·约翰 逊 2、权力会使人渐渐失去温厚善良的美 德。— —伯克
3、最大限度地行使权力总是令人反感 ；权力 不易确 定之处 始终存 在着危 险。— —塞·约翰逊 4、权力会奴化一切。——塔西佗
5、虽然权力是一头固执的熊，可是金 子可以 拉着它 的鼻子 走。— —莎士 比
ENDLeabharlann 16、业余生活要有意义，不要越轨。——华盛顿 17、一个人即使已登上顶峰，也仍要自强不息。——罗素·贝克 18、最大的挑战和突破在于用人，而用人最大的突破在于信任人。——马云 19、自己活着，就是为了使别人过得更美好。——雷锋 20、要掌握书，莫被书掌握；要为生而读，莫为读而生。——布尔沃
超实用高考英语专题复习：高考英语读后续写微技能之句式升级(表情感或心理活动)课件
升级表达： Apparently, it was their patient care and grand love that promoted a sense of well-being from the heart, in that the feeling of being incredibly blessed are definitely crucial to the old.
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二.表示沮丧的句子升级
基础表达： It is very depressing that in an important exam, you can’t
write down half of what you know. 升级表达：
Nothing is more frustrating than freezing up during an important test, knowing all the answers but getting so excited at the sight of the text that half of what actually know never gets written down.
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十三.表示无法理解的句子升级
基础表达： Many adults are interested in Harry Potter, which makes me
puzzled. 升级表达：
It is beyond my understanding that many adults should be so crazy about (keen on) Harry Potter.
升级表达： I guess most of you are feeling mixed emotions: pride at
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二.表示沮丧的句子升级
基础表达： It is very depressing that in an important exam, you can’t
write down half of what you know. 升级表达：
Nothing is more frustrating than freezing up during an important test, knowing all the answers but getting so excited at the sight of the text that half of what actually know never gets written down.
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十三.表示无法理解的句子升级
基础表达： Many adults are interested in Harry Potter, which makes me
puzzled. 升级表达：
It is beyond my understanding that many adults should be so crazy about (keen on) Harry Potter.
升级表达： I guess most of you are feeling mixed emotions: pride at
高中英语优质课读后续写描写技能让喜怒哀描写更有画面感精品PPT课件
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I was so delighted that I couldn't help jumping up and down. So delighted was I that I couldn't help jumping up and down.
moved exhaustion
with tears blurring her eyes with foot shaking.
模糊 blu(r视on线e’s)vision
To my surperise/amazement, he nodded his head，not understanding a word.
body hand reach伸o出ut o手ne’s hand hold握on住e’s手hand raise举on起e’s手hand rub o搓ne手’s hand
How to make moods descriptions picturesque?
I was so delighted that I couldn't help jumping up and down. So delighted was I that I couldn't help jumping up and down.
moved exhaustion
with tears blurring her eyes with foot shaking.
模糊 blu(r视on线e’s)vision
To my surperise/amazement, he nodded his head，not understanding a word.
body hand reach伸o出ut o手ne’s hand hold握on住e’s手hand raise举on起e’s手hand rub o搓ne手’s hand
How to make moods descriptions picturesque?
读后续写训练范例ppt课件
without a second glance. Out of the old sedan came a young mother with three small children
in tow（紧随着）. Her clothes looked as worn out as her car, yet she stopped in front of the
examples of kindness.
One time on the day before Christmas many years ago when I was a minimum wage mill（工厂）
worker, I found myself with very little money and very little time to buy my small children a few simple toys. I knew that they would have to be cheap ones and I hoped my children would
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Paragraph 2: In that second a warmth touched me, my jealousy and
hatred（憎恨）left me, and all the love and joy that are Christmas filled me. I fished a bill out of my own purse, dropped it in the Salvation Army kettle, and wished the bell ringer a merry Christmas. I found a few fun things to give my kids and drove home with my heart singing. I knew it was going to be a wonderful Christmas. I could hardly wait to see my children enjoying the presents bought for them, including a special gift—love for those in need.
in tow（紧随着）. Her clothes looked as worn out as her car, yet she stopped in front of the
examples of kindness.
One time on the day before Christmas many years ago when I was a minimum wage mill（工厂）
worker, I found myself with very little money and very little time to buy my small children a few simple toys. I knew that they would have to be cheap ones and I hoped my children would
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Paragraph 2: In that second a warmth touched me, my jealousy and
hatred（憎恨）left me, and all the love and joy that are Christmas filled me. I fished a bill out of my own purse, dropped it in the Salvation Army kettle, and wished the bell ringer a merry Christmas. I found a few fun things to give my kids and drove home with my heart singing. I knew it was going to be a wonderful Christmas. I could hardly wait to see my children enjoying the presents bought for them, including a special gift—love for those in need.
高三英语读后续写心理活动微技能训练课件
I felt so scared that my face turned pale and I was trembling.
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② I looked for him everywhere , but I could barely see his figure. I was exhausted and stood there, thinking of the happy days we spent together. I
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Describe emotions in different Situations 2
I was playing mobile phone games in class, suddenly, I found my teacher just behind me, I(My)_______________ I was frightened/scared/feared/panicked/was
1.sob bitterly 2.hold back one’s tears 3.cry one’s heart out
害怕： frightened/scared/feared/panicked
1. too scared to move an inch 2. frightened to death
情绪描写
吓得动弹不了
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Describe emotions in different Situations 3
He made a stupid mistake in class, all the students laughed at him, so he__________________
He felt so angry that his face turned red and glared at us. He felt so angry that he rushed out of the classroom, slamming the door furiously behind him.
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② I looked for him everywhere , but I could barely see his figure. I was exhausted and stood there, thinking of the happy days we spent together. I
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Describe emotions in different Situations 2
I was playing mobile phone games in class, suddenly, I found my teacher just behind me, I(My)_______________ I was frightened/scared/feared/panicked/was
1.sob bitterly 2.hold back one’s tears 3.cry one’s heart out
害怕： frightened/scared/feared/panicked
1. too scared to move an inch 2. frightened to death
情绪描写
吓得动弹不了
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Describe emotions in different Situations 3
He made a stupid mistake in class, all the students laughed at him, so he__________________
He felt so angry that his face turned red and glared at us. He felt so angry that he rushed out of the classroom, slamming the door furiously behind him.
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tired surprised angry excited cautious upset/uneasy frightened
1、当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。 When she knew the result of the test, she felt extremely___e_x_c_it_e_d_/_jo_y_f_u_l_.
6、当主持人宣布她获奖时，她的激动之情溢于言表。 When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide
ex_c_i_t_e_m__e_n_t_took hold of her.
7、如痴如狂的自豪和喜悦已经渐渐化作轻柔、甜蜜和无 言的欣慰----是那种深沉隽永，说不清、道不明的心满意足。 人人脸上都流露着平和而圣洁的幸福表情。
12、我欣喜若狂，三步并作两步就跑过去。 I was __o_v_e_r_jo_y_e_d__and ran three steps at once.
1、她分手了，她伤心不已。 She broke up with her husband,
and she felt extremely ___s_a_d_____.
B4 confuse, regret, depressed, content, astonish, bored, curious, frown, anger, yawn
B5 delight, thrill, uncertain, exhausted, delighted, guilty, dilemma
and she was overcome with _s_a_d_n_e_s_s_/_so__rr_o_w_s_/_g.rief 2、我的心似乎被撕裂了。
My heart seemed to be___t_o_r_n___.
3.孤独和悲伤不断涌上心头
The __l_o_n_e_l_in__e_s_s__and grief comes in waves
4.他激动起来，神采奕奕，兴高采烈。
He was well stirred up now,__c_h_e_e_r_f_u_l_, even gleeful.
stir up v. 激起，煽动
5、她发现自己获得了教学奖之后，有些得意忘形。 She was walking on __a_i_r_____after she found out she'd won the teaching award.
The wild intoxication of pride and __jo_y___had sobered to a
soft, sweet, silenபைடு நூலகம் _d_e_l_ig_h_t__---a sort of deep, nameless,
unutterable___c_o_n_t_e_n_t_. All faces bore a look of peaceful,
4.他静静地站着,眼泪顺着面颊流了下来
He stood silently, tears __r_o_ll_i_n_g_/_s_tr_e_a_m__i_n_g__down his
cheeks.
5、I feel like I am __fl_o_a_ti_n_g__in an ocean of sadness. 我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
her eyes twinkled with __e_x_ci_t_e_m_e_n_t_/_jo_y__. 2、没有什么能使我更开心了。
Nothing would please me____m_o__r_e_.
3. 她的心中洋溢着幸福之情。
Her heart was brimming (v. 盛满;)over__h_a_p_p_i_n_e_s_s_.
10、我高兴得无法形容。
I was pleased__b_e_y_o_n__d___description
11、她脸上的微笑像钻石一样闪闪发光
The smile on her face ___s_h_o_n_e____like a diamond. She __w_o_r_e____a shining smile on her face.
He covered his mouth to hide his yawn. Our mouths dropped open in surprise. She folded her arms and stared at him. She jumped to her feet at the news. She picked her way carefully along the stream. He paced back and forth. She screamed that there was a snake.
读后续写微技能指导之一
Sophia
B1 calm, concern, freighten, be tired of, grateful, loneliness, shock, upset
B3 sadness, weep, curiosity, glare, sign, stare, rude, scream, cheer up, terrify, terrified, pleased
holy happiness.
8、当她默默祈祷时，喜悦的泪水涌上眼眶 Tears of joy _fl_o_o_d_e_d__her eyes as she prayed silently
9、因高兴她的脸明亮起来 Her face___b_r_ig_h_t_e_n_e_d_u__p_/l_it__u_p__ with pleasure.
B6 melt, bad-tempered, tough, breathless, desperate, disappointed, ashamed, embarrassed, awkward, unconscious, tremble, anxious, anxiety, panic,
Using actions to describe the feelings