中考英语复习--比较级最高级总结及练习

中考英语复习--比较级最高级总结及练习
形容词、副词比较级和最高级知识详解专练
一、概说
英语中的形容词和副词有三个等级，即原级、比较级和高最级。

比较级主要用于两者比较，最高级主要用于多者比较。

二、比较等级的构成
1. 通过加后缀-er和-est构成。

单音节和部分双音节词通过加后缀–er和-est构成比较级和最高级
原级比较级最高级
tall(高) taller tallest
quiet(安静的) quieter quietest
early(早) earlier earliest
注：
(1) 若原级以字母e结尾，则只加-r和-st：fine—finer—finest。

(2) 若原级以“辅音字母+y”结尾，则应将y改为i，再加-er和-est构成比较级和最高级：dry—drier—driest。

(例外：shy(害羞的)—shyer—shyest)
(3) 若原级为重读闭音节结尾，且末尾只有一个辅音字母，则双写这个辅音字母后加词尾-er 和-est构成比较级和最高级：big—bigger—biggest。

2. 通过在其前加more和most构成。

多音节和部分双音节词通过在其前加more和most构成比较级和最高级：
原级比较级最高级
difficult(困难的) more difficult most difficult
dangerous(危险的) more dangerous most dangerous
bravely(勇敢地) more bravely most bravely
注：
(1) 有的双音节词(如 clever, common, gentle, handsome, happy, narrow, polite, quiet, shallow, simple, stupid，often, seldom)可以有两种方式构成比较级和最高级级：
clever—cleverer / more clever —cleverest / most clever
often—more often / oftener—most often / oftenest。

等。

(2) 某些带有否定前缀un-的三音节词(如uncommon, unhappy, unpleasant, untidy等)可以用两种比较级形式：unhappy—unhappier / more unhappy — unhappiest / most unhappy。

三、形容词与副词比较等级的不规则变化
1. 常见的不规则形容词与副词的比较等级变化
原级比较级最高级
good(好的) better best
well(好，健康的) better best
bad(坏的) worse worst
badly(坏地，恶劣地) worse worst
ill(有病的) worse worst
much(多) more most
many(多) more most
little(少) less least
far(远) farther / further farthest / furthest
注：
包含good, well, bad, ill的复合词形容词(如good-looking, well-known, well-built, bad-tempered 等)，通常将good, well, bad, ill 改为比较级和最高级，不过也可用more和most 的形式：
good-looking — better-looking / more good-looking—best-looking / most good-looking。

2. farther, further与farthest, furthest 的用法区别
(1) 表示距离时，四个词都可用：
I can throw much farther [further] than you. 我可以比你扔得更远。

(2) 若用于引申义，表示“更进一步”、“此外”等义，则只能用 further：
We’ll further discuss it. 我们会进一步讨论它。

Are there any further questions? 还有问题吗?
(3) further 可用作动词，意为“增进”、“推进”等(其他几个词一般不这样用)：
His support furthered my career. 他的支持促进了我的事业。

3. elder, eldest & older, oldest 的用法区别
(1) old 通常的比较级和最高级分别是 older, oldest。

可用于人或物，可用作表语或定语，可与 than 连用：
I’m （two years ）older than he. 我比他大（两岁）。

The cathedral is the oldest building in the city. 这座教堂是城里最古老的建筑。

(2) elder 与 eldest 主要用于家人之间表明长幼关系。

通常只用于人而不用于物，只用作定语而不用作表语，也不与 than 连用：
This is my eldest son (daughter). 这是我的大儿子(女)。

His elder brother (sister) works in a clothing factory. 他哥哥(姐姐)在一家服装厂工作。

注：在美国英语中也可用 older, oldest 表示长幼关系：older brother 哥哥
(3) elder 与 eldest 的区别是：
前者指两者中年纪较大的, 而后者指三者或三者以上的年纪最大的。

如：
one’s elder son指两个儿子中年纪较大的一个，one’s eldest son指三个或三个以上的儿子中年纪最大的一个
(4) elder 和eldest 作为形容词，通常只能用作定语，不用作表语；但若不是用作形容词(即其后不接名词)而是用作名词，则可以用作表语(此时通常有冠词或物主代词修饰)：
I’m the eldest in the family. 我是全家年纪最大的。

He was the elder of the two sons. 他是两个儿子中较大的。

四、原级、比较级和最高级结构
1.原级比较形容词、副词的原级即原形。

（1）表示两者在某一方面相同
主语+ be / 行为动词+ as + 形容词 / 副词原形+ as +比较对象
如 This dress is as beautiful as that one.
Linda sings as well as Amy.
（2）表示一方在某一方面不及另一方时
A+ be + not + as / so + 形容词原形+ as +B
A+ don’t / doesn’t / didn’t +行为动词原形+ as / so +副词原形+ as +B
如Tom isn't as / so tall as me.
I don't sing as / so loudly as my sister.
（3）原级前可用very，quite，too等副词修饰。

如 I'm very hungry.
My sister runs quite fast.
It's too hot here.
2.形容词或副词比较级的使用：
1) A + be + 形容词比较级 + than + B
如I’m more outgoing than you. 我比你更外向。

2) A + 实义动词 + 副词比较级 + than + B
如 Tom jumps higher than Jack. 汤姆比鲍勃跳得更高。

3)当询问两者中谁更 / 哪一个更 / 什么更……时，
常用句型“Who / Which / What + be + 形容词比较级, A or B?”
“Who / Which / What + 行为动词 + 副词比较级, A or B?”。

如 Which is better, the red pen or the black pen?
Who dances better, you or your sister?
4) ~ + be + the 比较级 + of the two. （两个之中比较…的那一个，~包含在两个之中）
Tom is the taller of the two. = Tom is taller than the other boy.
5） much / a lot / even / far + 比较级
A compute is much more expensive than a bicycle. 计算机比自行车贵多了。

6）形容词和副词的比较级可以单独使用。

如 Are you feeling better today?
Try to do better next time.
3.形容词的最高级的用法
①~ + be + one of the +最高级 +复数名词，表示“最……的……之一”。

The Yellow River is one of the longest rivers in China. 黄河是中国最长的河流之一。

Lu Xun is one of the greatest writers last century.
②.…最高级+of (in)…(三者及以上范围的)
Of all the movie stars, I think Zhang Ziyi is the best.
③~ + be + the 最高级 ~ that 某人 have/ has ever + 过去分词。

This is the most interesting book that I have ever read.这是我看过的最有趣的书。

This is the worst film that I have seen these years.
④Which/Who is the + 最高级,A ,B or C ?
Which is the biggest , the moon, the earth or the sun ?
⑤…+ be +the + 序数词 +最高级 +单数名词 + 范围”，表示“……是……。

的第几……”。

She is the second tallest student in our class. 她是我们班第二高的学生。

The Yellow River is the second longest river in China.
注意：最高级前可以有序数词来修饰。

Which is the first most useful invention? 哪一个是第一个最有用途的发明?
如果形容词最高级前有物主代词，指示代词，名词所有格时，则不必加定冠词the
Yesterday was my busiest day.
4.比较级和最高级的转化
① 比较级+than + any other + 单数名词。

例如：
Zhang Lei is taller than any other student in his class.→ Zhang Lei i s the tallest student in his class.
② 比较级 + than + the other + 复数名词
比较级 + than + the rest of + 复数名词
比较级 + than + any of the other + 复数名词
比较级 + than + any other + 单数名词
（比较双方属于同一类别或同一范围内。

即表示“同一范围内的一者比其他的更......”）。

例如：
Mike is young er than the other boys in his class.→ Mike is the youngest boy in his class.
She goes to school earlier than the other girls.她比其他女孩早上学。

He works harder than any other student.她学习最用功。

China is larger than any of the other countries in Asia.中国是亚洲最大的国家
③ 比较级 + than + any + 单数名词
（比较双方不属于同一类别或同一范围内。

即表示“不同范围内的一者比其他任何一者都更......”）。

Shanghai is larger than any city in Africa 。

Mr Smith is fatter than anyone else in his office.→ Mr Smith is the fattest in his office.
④比较级 + than + anything/ anyone else
George did more work than anyone else.乔治干活最多。

Tom cared more for money than for anything else汤姆最喜欢钱。

⑤never +比较级。

例如：
I have never seen a better film.→This is the best film I have ever seen.
I have never slept better .→This is the best sleep I have ever had.
5.倍数的表示方法
(1) 用“数字 + times + as + 原级 + as +比较对象”来表示。

如：
Their house is about three times as big as ours. 他们的房子大约有我们房子三倍大。

(2) 用“数字 + times + the size / length / depth / height / width + of +比较对象” 来表示。

如：Your office is three times the size of ours. 你的办公室是我们办公室的三倍大。

(3) 用“数字 + times + 比较级 + than + 比较对象”来表示。

如：
He runs three times faster than Jack. 他比杰克跑得快三倍。

注：若指两倍，以上各句型中的“数字+times”则应换成twice。

如：
This room is twice the length of the other, but much narrower. 这个房间的长度是那个房间的两倍, 但窄得多。

6. 表示“越来越……”时，用“比较级 + and + 比较级”。

如：
Your English is getting better and better. 你的英语越来越好了。

It’s becoming more and more difficult to find a job. 找工作越来越困难了。

7. 表示“越……就越……”时，用“the + 比较级，the + 比较级”。

如：
The younger you are, the easier it is to learn. 年纪越轻，学习越容易。

The more money you make, the more you spend. 你挣的钱越多，花的钱也越多。

8. 比较级和最高级的常见修饰语
(1) 比较级的修饰语有far, even, still, a lot, lots, a great deal, a bit, rather, three times, any, no, very much 等：
This is very much better. 这个好得多。

Japanese is much [far] more difficult than English. 日语比英语难多了。

He knew a great deal more than I did. 他所了解的比我了解的多得多。

He works hard, but she works still harder [harder still]. 他工作很努力，但她工作更努力。

(2) 最高级的常见修饰语有 (by) far, much, nearly, almost, not quite, by no means, very, second, next 等：
He is far more careful than I am. 他比我仔细得多。

This is by the best news for a long time. 这是很久以来最最好的消息。

This is much the most important. 这是最最重要的。

I think this is the very best dictionary. 我想这是最最好的词典。

The Yellow River is the second longest river in China. 黄河是中国第二长河流。

Of the three boys Jim is by no means the cleverest. 在这三个男孩子中，吉姆绝不是最聪明的。

注：very不能修饰比较级，却可修饰最高级，但它与一般的修饰最高的副词有所不同，即它要放在最高级前定冠词之后，而不是之前(另外，second, third, next等也要入在定冠词之后)。

五、使用比较等级应注意的几点
1. 使用比较等级的基本原则。

不作比较用原级，两者比较用比较级，多者比较用最高级：He is very tall. 他很高。

(尽管“很高”，但没有比较，故用原级)
He is very short, but taller than me. 他很矮，但比我高。

Among the three short girls, Mary is the tallest. 在这三个矮姑娘中，玛丽是最高的。

2. 不能使用双重比较等级。

即构成比较级时不能既加词尾-er，又在其前加more；构成最高级时不能既在词尾加-est，又在其前加most，如不能说more better, most earliest 等。

不过“比较级+and+比较级”这样的形式却完全可用：
I am getting fatter and fatter. 我越来越胖了。

We’re going more and more slowly. 我们越走越慢了。

3. 使用比较等级要注意合乎逻辑。

请看两组正误句：
(1) 我的电脑比她的贵。

误：My computer is more expensive than her
正：My computer is more expensive than hers.
析：从逻辑上说，应该是my computer 与 her computer 作比较，而不是my computer 与her 比较。

上面正句中的hers=her computer。

(2) 上海人口比中国其他城市的人口要多。

误：The population of Shanghai is larger than that of any city in China.
正：The population of Shanghai is larger than that of any other city in China.
析：从逻辑上说，Shanghai在China范围内，或者说Shanghai也是China范围内的一个城市，若不用other，则句意为“上海的人口比中国任何城市的人口都多”，
4. 本身已含有比较意味的词语通常不用于比较级
Which do you prefer, tea or coffee? 茶和咖啡, 你更喜欢哪样?
She is junior to me. 她比我年纪小。

5. 比较级前冠词使用规律。

比较级前通常不用冠词，但有时也用，这主要见于以下情形：(1) 当比较级后接名词时，比较级前可能用冠词，此时的冠词不是修饰比较级，而是修饰其后的名词：
Which is the larger country, Canada or Australia? 中国和澳大利亚，哪个国家更大？
(2) 当要特指两者中“较(更)…”时，比较级前通常要带定冠词，此时可视为比较级后省略了有关的名词或代词one，即定冠词实为修饰被省略的名词或代词one：
This dictionary is the more useful of the two. 在两本词典中，这本更有用。

(3) 在比较级前用the表示程度(通常有表示原因、理由或条件的短语或从句)：
I feel the better for my walk. 散了一下步我觉得舒服多了。

I love him all the more for [because of] his faults. 正因为他这些缺点，所以我越发爱他。

(4) 用于“the+比较级，the+比较级”，表示“越来越……”：
The sooner, the better. 越快越好。

The more dangerous it is, the more I like it. 事情越是危险我越喜欢。

(5) 当by far用于修饰比较级且置于其前时，比较级前要用the：
He’s by far the cleverer stude nt. 他是个聪明得多的孩子。

It’s by far the quicker to go by train. 乘火车要快得多。

注：by far若用于比较级后，则通常不用the：
It’s quicker by far to go by train. 乘火车要快得多。

（6）在形容词最高级前通常有the：
This is the best room in the hotel. 这是这个宾馆里最好的房间。

(7) 当最高级形容词用作表语(尤其是当在which后)且不带比较范围时，the有时(尤其是非正式场合)可以省略：
This dictionary is (the) best. 这本词典最好。

但是，当处于表语位置的最高级带有比较范围或带有限定性修饰语时，其前的the通常不能省去：
This dictionary is the best I could find. 这是我能找到的最好的词典。

(8) 当要对同一个人或事物在不同情况下进行对比时，处于表语位置的最高级形容词前不能加the：
Vegetables are best when they are fresh. 蔬菜新鲜时最好吃。

比较：He’s bu siest on Sunday. 他星期天最忙。

(他与自己平时比)
He’s the busiest of all the people. 在所有人当中他最忙。

(他与别人比)
(9) 在副词最高级前可用the，也可省略：
Among them, he studies (the) hardest. 在他们当中，他学习最刻苦。

(10) 与形容词的最高级一样，当要对同一个人或事物在不同情况下进行对比时，副词最高级前也不能加the：
She works hardest when she’s doing somet hing for her family. 她为自己家干活时最卖力。

比较：Of all the workers, he works (the) hardest. 在所有工人中，他干活最卖力。

6. than后的省略。

(1) 若than 所连接的两个待比较的句子有相同成分，通常有所省略，
如说He is much taller than I (am). 而不能说He is much taller than I am tall.
但是，若所连接的两个待比较的句子没有相同成分，则不能省略，否则意思会有所变化。

比较：
He swims faster than I run. 他游泳比我跑步还快。

He swims faster than I. 他游泳比我(游泳)快。

(2) 有时用于类似以下这样的省略句：
Don’t eat more than is good for you. 不要吃得过量。

More food is wasted than is eaten in this canteen. 在这个食堂里浪费的食品比吃掉的还多。

Some of the stories were really more than could be believed. 有些故事实在认人难以相信。

More people own houses these days than used to years ago.
与几年前相比，目前有更多的人自己有房子。

为了便于理解，可以认为这类省略句的than后省略了what(但实际上这个what通常不宜补上，除非在英国某些方言里)，但也有人认为在一些类似情况下than有点像关系代词，引
导一个类似于定语从句的句子(但又不完全像定语从句，因为有时其前没有先行词)，这类省略句通常不能补上所缺的主语或宾语(因为than就充当了主语和宾语)。

另外，还有以下这样的省略形式(即不仅省略了主语，而且省略了助动词)：
He returned three days earlier than expected.(=…than he was expected.)
他比所预料的早回三天。

形容词、副词（原级、比较级和最高级）练习
用适当形式填空：
1. Bob is _________ (young) than Fred but ___________ (tall) than Fred.
2. Ying Tian is not as ___________ (tall) as Yong Xian.
3. Almost all the students' faces are the same but Li Deming looks _______ (fat) than before the holidays,
4.Which is _________ (heavy),a hen or a chicken?
5.-- How _________ (tall) is Sally?
-- She' s 1.55 metres ________ (tall). What about Xiaoling?
-- She' s only 1.40 metres ________ (tall). She is much _______ (short) than Sally.
She is also the _______ (short) girl in the class.
6. He is ______ (bad) at learning maths. He is much _______ (bad) at Chinese and he is the _________ (bad) at English.
7. Annie says Sally is the ________ (kind) person in the world.
8. He is one of the_________(friendly) people in the class, I think.
9. A dictionary is much _________ (expensive) than a story-book.
10. An orange is a little ______ (big) than an apple, but much ________ (small) than a watermelon.
11. The Chang jiang River is the _______ (long) river in China.
12. Sue is a little ________ (beautiful) than her sister.
13. My room is not as _________ (big) as my brother' s.
14.--How difficult is physics?
--I' m not sure.
-- Is it ________ (difficult) than maths?
-- I don’t think so.
15. --Annie plays the piano very ___________ (well).
-- Sue plays it _____ (well) than Annie. And Sally plays it the __________ (well).
16. Saturday is my _________ (busy) day in a week.
17. Her mother is getting ____________(fat) and ________ (fat).
18. I think it’s too expensive. I’d like a _____________ (cheap) one.
19. He comes to school much ____________ (early) than I.
20.This book is not as _____________ (interesting) as that one.
21. Your classroom is __________(wide) and _________(bright) than ours.
22. Practice as __________ (much) as you can.
23. The ________ (much), the ____________ (good).
24. Nowadays English is _________( important ) than any other subject, 1 think.
25. Most of the students think a lion is much ________(dangerous) than a bear and it is the __________ (dangerous) animal in the world.
改错：
1. He is as taller as I am.
2. She is a little thiner than she looks.
3. Bob is heavier than any other boys in the class.
4.The girls study the better than the boys.
5. It is one of the most interesting book than I have ever read.
6. He says Mary is most friendliest person in the class.
7. Which city is most beautiful, Beijing or Guangzhou?
8. Jack works hard. Mike works very harder than Jack.
9. London is the bigger city in Britain.
10.Bob plays football badly but Fred plays football much badlier than Bob.
单项选择
1. This box is________ that one.
A. heavy than
B. so heavy than
C. heavier as
D. as heavy as
2. When we speak to people, we should be __________.
A. as polite as possible
B. as polite as possibly
C. as politely as possible
D. as politely as possibly
3. This book is______ that one, but______ than that one.
A. as difficult as; expensive
B. as more difficult as; more expensive
C. as difficult as; more expensive
D. more difficult as; as expensive
4. I think the story is not so ______ as that one.
A. interesting
B. interested
C. more interesting
D. most interesting
5. His father began to work______ he was seven years old.
A. as old as
B. as early as
C. since
D. while
6. I think science is _______ than Japanese.
A. much important
B. important
C. much more important
D. more much important
7. This pencil is______ than that one.
A. longest
B. long
C. longer
D. as long
8. My mother is no _______ young.
A. shorter
B. longer
C. little
D. few
9. These children are ________ this year than they were last year.
A. more tall
B. more taller
C. very taller
D. much taller
10. It was very hot yesterday, but it is_______ today.
A. even hotter
B. more hotter
C. much more hot
D. much hot
11. Mrs. Black has got_______ instead of getting any better.
A. more bad
B. a little worse
C. much badly
D. a lot of worse
12. When we arrived, we found the meeting room crowded with_______ students.
A. quite a few
B. only a few
C. few
D. a few quite
13. The house is _______ small for a family of six.
A. much too
B. too much
C. very much
D. so
14. Through the window we can see nothing but _______ buildings.
A. tall very many
B. very many tall
C. very tall many
D. many very tall
15. -What's your brother like?
-He is_______.
A. a driver
B. very tall
C. my friend
D. at school
16. The jacket was so_______ that he decided to buy it.
A. much
B. little
C. expensive
D. cheap
17. Our classroom is________ larger than theirs.
A. more
B. quite
C. very
D. much
18. The earth is about________ as the moon.
A. as fifty time big
B. fifty times as big
C. as big fifty times
D. fifty as times big
19. Your room is ________ mine.
A. twice as large than
B. twice the size of
C. bigger twice than
D. as twice large as
20. Your room is ________ than mine.
A. three time big
B. three times big
C. three times bigger
D. bigger three times
21. His father is________ than his mother. ;
A. older four years
B. as four years older
C. four years older
D. bigger four years
22. Maths is more popular than_________.
A. any other subject
B. all the subjects
C. any subject
D. other subject
23. China is larger than _________ in Africa.
A. any other country
B. other countries
C. the other country J
D. any country
24. Tom is stronger than ________ in his class.
A. any other boy
B. any boys
C. any boy
D. other boy
25. When spring comes, it gets_________.
A. warm and warm
B. colder and colder
C. warmer and warmer
D. shorter and shorter
26. By and by, _________ students in our class came to like English.
A. more and more
B. much and much
C. many and many
D. less and least
27. At last he began to cry __________.
A. hard and hard
B. more hard and more hard
C. harder and harder
D. less hard and less harder
28. When spring comes the days get _______ and nights ________.
A. short; long
B. long; short
C. longer; shorter
D. shorter; longer
29. _______ I look at the picture, _________ I like it.
A. The best; the more
B. The more; the less
C. The more; less
D. More; the more
30. _______ he read the book, _______ he got in it.
A. The more; the more interesting
B. The less; the more interesting
C. The more; the more interested
D. More; more interested
31. _______ you come back, _______ it will be.
A. The quicker; the best
B. The sooner; the better
C. Faster; the better
D. The sooner; better
32. I like_______ one of the two books.
A. the older
B. oldest
C. the oldest
D. older
33. Which is________ country, China or Japan?
A. the large
B. the larger
C. larger
D. largest
34. Of the two cups, he bought ________.
A. the smaller
B. the smallest
C. small D: smaller
35. Which do you like _______, tea or coffee?
A. well
B. better
C. best
D. most
36. This work is _______ for me than for you.
A. difficult
B. most difficult
C. much difficult
D. more difficult
37. Which do you think tastes _______, the chicken or the fish?
A. good
B. better
C. best
D. well
38. The Great Pyramid is about 137 metres high today, but it was once__________.
A. higher
B. highest
C. high too
D. more high
39. Don't you think it ________ not to write the letter?
A. well
B. better
C. best
D. good
40. The book is ________ of the two.
A. thinner
B. the thinner
C. more thinner
D. the thinnest
参考答案：
I. 1. younger, taller 2. tall 3. fatter 4. heavier
5. tall, tall, tall, shorter, shortest
6. bad, worse, worst
7. kindest 8. friendlier 9. more expensive
10. bigger, smaller 11. longer 12. more beautiful
13. big 14. more difficult 15. well, better, best
16. busiest 17. fatter, fatter 18. cheaper 19. earlier
20. interesting 21. wider, brighter 22. much
23. more, better 24. more important 25. more dangerous, most dangerous
II. 1. taller -→ tall 2. thiner → thinner 3. boys -→ boy
4. the better → better
5. book → books
6. most friendliest → the friendliest
7. most → more 8. very → much 9. bigger -→ biggest
10. badlier → worse
III. 1. so/ as young as 2. one year older 3. much brighter
4. more, more dangerous
5. better
Ⅳ 1 . 1-5 D A C A B 6-11 C C B D A B 12-17 A A D B D D 18-21 B B C C
22-24 A D A 25-28 D A C C 29-31 B C B 32-34 A B A 35-40 B D B A B B
二、英语书面表达专项训练
2．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Jack 给你写邮件表达了想参加你校暑期为外国学生举办的汉语夏令营的愿望，希望你告知活动举办的具体时间地点，活动安排以及你的建议。

提示词语： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare
提示问题：● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?
● What activities will be held at the Chine se Summer Camp?
● What is your advice for Jack?
Dear Jack,
I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our
school this summer holiday .
.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.
The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:
First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.
Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.
What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.
If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。

学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。

2.例文点评：该题要求写作体裁为书信格式，所以例文用第一人称I进行写作，在文章结尾也按照标准书信格式进行了收尾。

文章时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。

文章条理分明，三个要点提示都已表达清楚，并进行了适当拓展，所给单词也都全部用上。

3.高分亮点：
短语：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。

句型：被动句型，现在分词作状语，主语从句。

3．“持之以恒，方得始。

”坚持是一种可贵的品格。

生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。

某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。

谈淡你在初中生活中坚持的一件事（爱好，习惯……），你是怎样做的，以及你的感受。

提示词语：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud
提示问题：1. What did you do?
2. How do you feel?
It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.
【答案】It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.
When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes，I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I'm ready for any challenges in the future.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是材料作文，根据所给提示写一篇自己在初中生活中坚持做的事；文中写明自己是怎么做的并谈谈自己的感受。

【详解】
1.本篇要求根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自己坚持做的一件事，根据提示，描写“What did you do?用一般过去时，描写How do you feel?用一般现在时。

书写时要紧扣主题，文句通顺。

2.本例文开篇立即点明自己的坚持做的事是“跑步”，正文部分详细地描写了自己起初跑步总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到现在比以前会跑；结尾谈了这件事对自己的影响；文章结构清晰，前后呼应。

3.本例文出彩之处在于用了很多的短语和重点句型。

比如：固定搭配、固定句型It's +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不
定式in order to；try my best to；状语从句so…that …；比较级do much better in …、feel more confident等；短语多彩、文句表达多样。

4．李华的英国笔友Jessica来信说, 她想了解中国的传统节日中秋节。

假如你是李华, 请你给Jessica写一封信, 介绍该节日。

内容须包含以下所有要点：
1. 中秋节的时间；
2. 中秋节的传统习俗及庆祝方式：全家人一起吃饭, 赏月, 吃月饼等；
3, 我最期待的活动。

要求：1.80--100词〔开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）；2.语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整。

Dear Jessica,
I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to
you.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jessica,
I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories. For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
本篇写作是以书信的方式向笔友介绍中国的传统节日中秋节，要用一般现在时来写。

全文可分两大部分，第一部分写中秋节的时间、传统习俗及庆祝方式，第二部分写我最期待的活动。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。

5．小明在朋友圈发了一段文字，表达了自己的苦恼，假如你是他的朋友，请回复他，表达你的观点，并给他一些你的建议。

要求不少于80个字。

Hi, Xiao Ming!
【答案】例文Hi, Xiao Ming!
In my opinion, you have to take a long talk with your parents. On the one hand, You should let them know that you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself. Interest comes first, and one can do better in everything if it is connected with their interest. So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school.
On the other hand, you should be understanding with your parents because they really care
about you. They want you to be better. But everything may happen if you attend Zhong Kao. If you fail, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be realized. That’s the worse thing nobody wants to see.
Simply put, keep your dream! Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in my opinion，have to do，take a long talk with，on the one/other hand，enough to do，connect with，care about，want you to be better，both …and，be able to，ask for help等。

而并列结构Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!和You should let them know that you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for y ourself./ So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school./ If you fail, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be realized.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

6．书面表达
我们在生活中总是面对着各种各样的压力，这会严重妨碍我们的学习和生活。

某中学生英文报正开辟专栏讨论中学生如何减压。

假设你叫李华，请从以下几个方面，用英语写出你的具体做法，向该栏目投稿。

1.与他人交流；
2.参加体育运动；
3.参加娱乐活动；
4.其它减压方式。

参考词汇：stressed adj.有压力的
注意：
1.词数80-120左右；
2.文中不得出现真实人名及学校名；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear editor,
There are many ways for us high school students to relax ourselves.
Yours,。