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[with带一个OR几个静止的数值]
In 1979, beef was the most popular of these food, with about 225 grams per person per week.
Three of these countries shared similar figures with 6.63% in Turkey, 6.51% in Spain and 6.43% in Ireland respectively.
tendency to focus on details
评分标准－Coherence and Cohesion
合理分段 有逻辑 连接词
评分标准－Lexical Resource
正确自然 拼写正确 同义词替换
评分标准－Grammatical Range and Accuracy 语法正确 句式多样
总体介绍－题目要求
a. 抓特征；而不是罗列所有信息 b.有比较；而不是孤立信息 c. 客观；不加个人观点！
总体介绍－题型分类&考题频率
2014（48） bar-12 line-8 table-11 pie-2 map-6 flow chart-6 mixed-3
评分标准－Task Achievement
6-presents an overview with information appropriately selected
- clearly presents and adequately highlights key features but details may be irrelevant, inappropriate or inaccurate
雅思写作-小作文篇
雅思写作考什么？
Task 1小作文 Task 2大作文
时间(1h)
20min
40min
字数 题型
150words
250words
graph
argumentation/r eport
占分比例
1/3
2/3
Task1课程安排
总体介绍（题目要求，题型分类&考题频率） 评分标准 框架结构 语言点（词汇，句式，连接词） 真题范例
文章结构
一、Introduction(2句)：改写题目+overview(最好有)
1. 改“显示”(永远一般现在时!)(shows) illustrates, describes,
provides information about
2. 改关键词
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
the total number of minutes of telephone calls the time spent on different types of telephone calls
题型一：Bar chart
真题范例
The charts below show USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.
剑6P98
Sample essay (187 words)
The first bar chart illustrates the number of marriages and divorces in America from 1970 to 2000, while the second one displays different marital status of American adults in the years 1970 and 2000.
relatively longer than that of females.
Example
题目：The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
5-recounts details mechanically with no clear overview; there may
be no data to support the description -presents but inadequately covers key features; there may be a
关键词改写练习
1. The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
2. The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Sample: The line chart illustrates the average length of life of men and women in the UK between 1901 and 2005.
+ It indicates that the average life span of females was
People in Turkey spent on food, drinks and tobacco with the largest percentage, which was 32.14%. There was a slight increase in both nuclear and solar/wind, which rose by 3q and 2q respectively.
4. 回到原点
-dropped back to the initial level, which was...
时间写法
1. 报年份－from...to.../between...and...
2. 算年数－during/over/in/throughout the two decades over the span of 5 years
3. 用代词－during this/that period during these/those years
数据写法一、介词
[from, to表示趋势起终点]
The number of divorces increased from 1m in 1970 to almost 1.5m in 1980.
Sample：The line graph illustrates the percentage of the people who are 65 and over in Japan, Sweden and USA from1940 to 2040. It indicates that the proportion of senior citizens will go up dramatically in all the three countries during this period.
There was an overall slight increase in both nuclear and solar/wind (up by 3q and 2q respectively).
数据写法三、定语从句
The next two decades witnessed a steady fall to the initial level, which was 1m in 2000.
二、Body(<=7句)：描述图片细节信息
1：分段合理！
a.多个图：几个图就分几段 b.一个图：按趋势；题中分类元素
2：逻辑清晰！
a. 比较&对比 b. 时间先后
c. 总分
3：连接词明确！
a. 段与段的衔接 b. 句与句的衔接
c. 句内衔接
三、结尾段(1句)：总结总体特征，不加个人观点！
1. 段首要有连接词 2. 明显总体特征(与第一段不同) 3. 禁止一切个人观点(分析原因，预测未来等)
1. 最值
-The percentage of married people was the largest among the four groups of American adults. -Married people were the dominant group among all the American adults.
Example:
Overall, it can be seen that Japan is predicted to be the country
with the largest proportion of elderly people by the year 2040.
句式－数字比较(高分必备)
够字数
w 不跑题
完成问题
7-presents a clear overview of main trends, differences or stages
- clearly presents and highlights key features but could be more fully extended
3. 改时间
between 1995 and 2005; from 1995 to 2005 in the year 1995; in the years 1995 and 2005
4. 地点可改(一般不用)
in three different countries in Japan, Sweden and USA
2. 倍数关系
-doubled/tripled/quadrupled/quintupled from...to... -increased five-fold from...to... -rose seven times as much as...
3. 等量
-stood at the same level, which was... -the amount of...equaled that of...
[by, of 表示趋势数值差]
The proportion of married people decreased by 11% to about 59% in 2000. The proportion of married people underwent a decrease of 11% to about 59% in 2000. There was an 11% decline to around 59% in 2000 in the proportion of married people.
[at表示在一个点上OR带一个静止数据]
The number of marriages leveled off at 2.5m (million) during the first decade. In 1979, beef was the most popular of these food, at about 225 grams per person per week.
数据写法二、（ ）
The next two decades witnessed a steady fall to the initial level (1m) in 2000.
People in Turkey spent on food, drinks and tobacco with the largest percentage (32.14%)
3. The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
overview-明显总体特征
题目：The graph below shows the life expectancy for males and females in the UK from 1901 to 2005.
In 1979, beef was the most popular of these food, with about 225 grams per person per week.
Three of these countries shared similar figures with 6.63% in Turkey, 6.51% in Spain and 6.43% in Ireland respectively.
tendency to focus on details
评分标准－Coherence and Cohesion
合理分段 有逻辑 连接词
评分标准－Lexical Resource
正确自然 拼写正确 同义词替换
评分标准－Grammatical Range and Accuracy 语法正确 句式多样
总体介绍－题目要求
a. 抓特征；而不是罗列所有信息 b.有比较；而不是孤立信息 c. 客观；不加个人观点！
总体介绍－题型分类&考题频率
2014（48） bar-12 line-8 table-11 pie-2 map-6 flow chart-6 mixed-3
评分标准－Task Achievement
6-presents an overview with information appropriately selected
- clearly presents and adequately highlights key features but details may be irrelevant, inappropriate or inaccurate
雅思写作-小作文篇
雅思写作考什么？
Task 1小作文 Task 2大作文
时间(1h)
20min
40min
字数 题型
150words
250words
graph
argumentation/r eport
占分比例
1/3
2/3
Task1课程安排
总体介绍（题目要求，题型分类&考题频率） 评分标准 框架结构 语言点（词汇，句式，连接词） 真题范例
文章结构
一、Introduction(2句)：改写题目+overview(最好有)
1. 改“显示”(永远一般现在时!)(shows) illustrates, describes,
provides information about
2. 改关键词
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
the total number of minutes of telephone calls the time spent on different types of telephone calls
题型一：Bar chart
真题范例
The charts below show USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.
剑6P98
Sample essay (187 words)
The first bar chart illustrates the number of marriages and divorces in America from 1970 to 2000, while the second one displays different marital status of American adults in the years 1970 and 2000.
relatively longer than that of females.
Example
题目：The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
5-recounts details mechanically with no clear overview; there may
be no data to support the description -presents but inadequately covers key features; there may be a
关键词改写练习
1. The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
2. The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Sample: The line chart illustrates the average length of life of men and women in the UK between 1901 and 2005.
+ It indicates that the average life span of females was
People in Turkey spent on food, drinks and tobacco with the largest percentage, which was 32.14%. There was a slight increase in both nuclear and solar/wind, which rose by 3q and 2q respectively.
4. 回到原点
-dropped back to the initial level, which was...
时间写法
1. 报年份－from...to.../between...and...
2. 算年数－during/over/in/throughout the two decades over the span of 5 years
3. 用代词－during this/that period during these/those years
数据写法一、介词
[from, to表示趋势起终点]
The number of divorces increased from 1m in 1970 to almost 1.5m in 1980.
Sample：The line graph illustrates the percentage of the people who are 65 and over in Japan, Sweden and USA from1940 to 2040. It indicates that the proportion of senior citizens will go up dramatically in all the three countries during this period.
There was an overall slight increase in both nuclear and solar/wind (up by 3q and 2q respectively).
数据写法三、定语从句
The next two decades witnessed a steady fall to the initial level, which was 1m in 2000.
二、Body(<=7句)：描述图片细节信息
1：分段合理！
a.多个图：几个图就分几段 b.一个图：按趋势；题中分类元素
2：逻辑清晰！
a. 比较&对比 b. 时间先后
c. 总分
3：连接词明确！
a. 段与段的衔接 b. 句与句的衔接
c. 句内衔接
三、结尾段(1句)：总结总体特征，不加个人观点！
1. 段首要有连接词 2. 明显总体特征(与第一段不同) 3. 禁止一切个人观点(分析原因，预测未来等)
1. 最值
-The percentage of married people was the largest among the four groups of American adults. -Married people were the dominant group among all the American adults.
Example:
Overall, it can be seen that Japan is predicted to be the country
with the largest proportion of elderly people by the year 2040.
句式－数字比较(高分必备)
够字数
w 不跑题
完成问题
7-presents a clear overview of main trends, differences or stages
- clearly presents and highlights key features but could be more fully extended
3. 改时间
between 1995 and 2005; from 1995 to 2005 in the year 1995; in the years 1995 and 2005
4. 地点可改(一般不用)
in three different countries in Japan, Sweden and USA
2. 倍数关系
-doubled/tripled/quadrupled/quintupled from...to... -increased five-fold from...to... -rose seven times as much as...
3. 等量
-stood at the same level, which was... -the amount of...equaled that of...
[by, of 表示趋势数值差]
The proportion of married people decreased by 11% to about 59% in 2000. The proportion of married people underwent a decrease of 11% to about 59% in 2000. There was an 11% decline to around 59% in 2000 in the proportion of married people.
[at表示在一个点上OR带一个静止数据]
The number of marriages leveled off at 2.5m (million) during the first decade. In 1979, beef was the most popular of these food, at about 225 grams per person per week.
数据写法二、（ ）
The next two decades witnessed a steady fall to the initial level (1m) in 2000.
People in Turkey spent on food, drinks and tobacco with the largest percentage (32.14%)
3. The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
overview-明显总体特征
题目：The graph below shows the life expectancy for males and females in the UK from 1901 to 2005.