初三英语下学期书面表达训练单元 易错题难题专题强化试卷检测
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初三英语下学期书面表达训练单元易错题难题专题强化试卷检测
一、中考英语书面表达训练
1.书面表达
我校决定让学生轮流打扫厕所,以此作为教育学生的一种方式。
这件事在学生中引起了强烈的反响,请你把下列不同意见整理成一篇书面材料,报告给学校。
同意:1.多数学生是独生子女,不会做事。
2.学生应该学会做艰苦的工作。
3.学会理解和尊重清洁工人的劳动。
不同意:1.很脏,容易使学生生病。
2.不是学生应该做的事情。
3.打扫教室就足够了。
注意:1.短文应包括表中所有内容,可适当发挥,但不要逐字翻译; 2.不少于80词。
生词提示:respect尊重
【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.
Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.
But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students'jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.
【解析】
【详解】
阅读题干要求,这是一篇看法类的作文,那么首先得点明讨论的话题,然后分别写出不同人群对此事的看法,时态以一般现在时为主。
重点词汇及短语:argument争论;take place发生;among(三者或三者以上)之间;a good chance for sb对某人来说是个好机会;help sb do sth帮助某人做某事;get sick生病。
亮点句型:
(1)A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自从我们学校让学生做自愿劳动以来,在学生中发生了一场激烈的争论。
现在完成时(have/has+done)。
(2)To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做义务劳动是他们学习如何做困难工作的好机会。
动词不定式作主语,谓语动词用单数,疑问词+to do。
2.写作
某英文网站的“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文,标题为“ A time when I made someone happy”,请你写一篇英文稿件,内容需包括以下要点:
1. Who was the person you made happy?
2. When was it?
3. What did you say or do?
4. Why did it make him/her happy?
5. How did you feel at that moment?
注意:1.词数:100左右(题目不计入总词数)。
2.文中不得出现可能透考生真实身份的任何信息。
【答案】Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural
area.When I arrived there,I couldn't adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.
In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.
【解析】写作分析:这是一篇给定标题的材料作文,需要逐条完成要点问题的回答,描述一次自己让别人开心快乐的经历,是一篇记叙文,首先要读懂5个问题,其次要用恰当的语言和衔接手段把这五个问题的回答联系在一起,变成一篇短文,同时也要注意在描述过去的故事的时候要正确运用过去时态。
写作亮点:既然这是一篇记叙文,就应该完整地呈现故事,需要加上必要的背景,指明时间(Last summer),地点(in rural area),简要概括事件(teach children English),这是文章首句的点睛之笔,信息量丰富。
短语和固定搭配的正确使用也为这篇文章增色不少,例如“adjust to…”(调整以适应…),“as time went by”(随着时间的流逝),“made great progress”(取得巨大进步),“keep on learning”(继续学习),“In a word”(总而言之)等等短语使用正确。
在收尾部分表达了作者积极的人生态度,表示如果还有机会自己还乐于参与,这样使得这篇文章结构完整,表意更加清晰。
3.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jack 给你写邮件表达了想参加你校暑期为外国学生举办的汉语夏令营的愿望,希望你告知活动举办的具体时间地点,活动安排以及你的建议。
提示词语: Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare
提示问题:● W hen and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?
● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?
● What is your advice for Jack?
Dear Jack,
I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our
school this summer holiday .
.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.
The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:
First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.
Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.
What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.
If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:这是一篇提纲类书面表达,只给了一些要点提示,但都不很明确。
学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外,还要进行适当拓展,使文章内容充实。
2.例文点评:该题要求写作体裁为书信格式,所以例文用第一人称I进行写作,在文章结尾也按照标准书信格式进行了收尾。
文章时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。
文章条理分明,三个要点提示都已表达清楚,并进行了适当拓展,所给单词也都全部用上。
3.高分亮点:
短语:as follows,take part in,What’s more,look forward to。
句型:被动句型,现在分词作状语,主语从句。
4.2019年2月20日,中央宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。
时代楷模充分体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”的价值准则。
某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。
假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈生活中你该怎么做,以及这样做的意义。
提示词语:pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important
提示问题:● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so?
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.
【答案】例文
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our
friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作,但写作时要按照应用文格式写,写作时承接短文开头,具体写出怎样做以及这样做的意义。
例文点评:例文采用的是一段式,人称用的是第一人称复数形式,时态主要用的是一般现在时,描述具体怎么做时,描写细致,条理清晰。
高分亮点:
短语:protect the environment;pick up the rubbish;behave well;be kind to sb;more and more beautiful。
句型:By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful;we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。
5.同学们,初中生活即将结束,本次考试后,盼望已久的假期就要到来!请你根据以下提示,制定出度假计
划,可以结合自己的实际发挥。
写作内容:
1.和家长/同学一起旅游,享受大自然的美景,放松心情。
2.参加志愿活动,帮家长做家务。
3.读自己喜欢的书。
4.远离危险的地方。
写作要求:
1.80 词左右,开头部分已给出,但不计入规定字数。
2.内容合理;要点齐全;句子及篇章结构正确、连贯;书写规范。
3.不得出现自己的校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。
My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.
【答案】My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.
Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous places.Besides, I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with
my classmates.
I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
【解析】
试题分析:短文要制定出度假计划,文章需要用第一人称“I”进行书写,不可使用“we/ you”等其他人称。
文章主要内容为计划的书写,主要使用一般将来时态。
所写的句子要符合英语语法,不能遗漏要点。
写作亮点:短文用了一些短语和句式,如:come to an end结束;on the way在途中;get close to nature亲近大自然;volunteer to do something自愿做某事;help sb to do sth帮助某人做某事;take part in sth参加活动。
用了一些衔接词besides等,句子过度自然。
用了because引导的原因状语从句,增加了文章的亮点。
考点:考查提纲作文。
6.朋友是我们生活的组成部分,他们总是在我们最需要帮助的时候陪伴我们。
你最好的朋友是谁?你是怎么看待你们的友谊的?请以“My Best Friend ”为题,根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
1. 简要介绍你最好的朋友的外貌和性格;
2. 介绍和你朋友之间发生的一件令人难忘的事;
3. 你是怎样看待你们之间的友谊的
要求:
1. 语句连贯通顺,文章衔接紧密
2. 词数80-100
3. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名
Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】My best friend
Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.
My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.
I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.
I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析:这是一个提纲作文。
题目给出了标题及写作要点。
根据题目要求可知,人称以
第三人称为主。
时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。
我们要做的就是用正确的英语句子来组织这些材料,在描写外貌和性格时,会用到系表结构,注意主谓一致关系。
介绍发生的一件难忘的事情,要用到一般过去时态。
另外在写作时可以适当使用一些连词,使之上下连贯,合乎逻辑。
【点睛】
人物介绍是记叙文中常见的一种写作类型。
内容可以是介绍自己也可以介绍他人,包括姓名、年龄、外貌特征、兴趣爱好,有时也可以包括日常活动。
时态为一般现在时态。
在介绍长相时用“be+形容词”来描述人物的身高、体重、身材等;用“have/has +
(straight/curly) hair / (big/small)eyes/nose/mouth”来描述头发或五官。
用“wear + 某种衣服”来介绍某人的穿戴。
用be good at doing sth.来介绍特长,用like sth./doing sth.best或“My/His/her favorite + 名词+ is …”来介绍某人的最爱。
当主语是第三人称单数时,注意主谓一致关系。
7.书面表达
初中就要毕业了,校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。
假定你是李华,请根据要点写一封信,说说你的计划。
要求:1.要点完整,可适当发挥,使句子通顺,连贯; 2.正确使用语态,语法正确,书写整洁。
3.80词左右,开头结尾己给出,不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。
Dear editor,
I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________
Best wishes,
Yours Lihua
【答案】Dear editor,
I'm very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.
This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li hua
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文,介绍毕业典礼活动计划。
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。
写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
8.书面表达
假如你是英语俱乐部的Cathy,上周五你们收到了外教Angel为同学们网购的英文书籍。
俱乐部的同学们很喜欢网购图书这种便捷的方式,并打算在本周五交流读书后的感受。
请你根据以下信息, 给Angel写一封电子邮件,告诉她俱乐部的活动情况,并说说网购图书的好处。
写作要点:
1表达收到图书后的喜悦与感激之情。
2介绍活动的情况:
(l)上周五,俱乐部成员们一起读英文书。
(2)本周五的下午3点,大家将共同交流读书的体会。
(3)同学们将在下个月网购其他的英文书。
3说一说网上购书有什么好处。
写作要求:
1不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4至少80词。
Dear Angel,
How are you doing?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Cathy
【答案】Dear Angel,
How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that w e received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。
Last Friday,we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the othe r hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another .
Best wishes!
Yours,
Cathy 【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文,向外教介绍俱乐部中读书交流会的活动,并且告诉外教同学们现在喜欢网购图书并阐述网购图书的好处。
根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room 中which引导非限制性定语从句。
增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:
认真审题。
审好题是写好书面表达的关键。
审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。
构思提纲。
有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。
通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。
一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。
使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。
同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。
修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。
这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。
9.自信赋予人力量,带给人快乐。
拥有自信,人生处处是舞台,生活越来越精彩。
假如你是李华,请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文,谈谈自信的重要性,分享一次使你更加自信的经历,并说说我们如何更加自信。
提示词语:powerful,happy,believe in,keep doing
提示问题:
Why is it important to be confident?
What experience made you more confident?
How can we become more confident?
It's very important to be confident
【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and re laxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.
To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.
【解析】
本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。
灵活运用各种句式,采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。
语言力求准确,简洁。
最后必须认真查验是否有漏写,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
点睛:这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如at the beginning of;know about;make a speech等;When ;Although ;Then ;From then on,等的运用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理;同时语言流畅,内容完整,是一篇不错的范文。
10.现在智能手机(smartphone)越来越普及,很多中学生都有智能手机。
请你根据下面的提示,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文,谈一谈你对智能手机的看法,可适当发挥。
提示:1、在生活中你用智能手机做什么?
2、智能手机对你的生活产生了怎样的影响?
3、你对中学生使用智能手机有什么看法?
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【答案】例文:The smartphone is becoming more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful.
However ,every coin has two sides.Sometimes I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams.
So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文,要求根据内容提示,写一篇英语短文,谈一谈你对智能手机的看法。
文章时态主要用一般现在时,人称主要用第一、第三人称。
首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。
在写作时,注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。
同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。
最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。
11.假如你叫李华,最近你班里的美国交换生Lucy想要感受中国的传统文化。
周末你和父母商议后,打算邀请她去老舍茶馆。
你通过微信告知她:要去哪,在那要做什么以及何时何地见面。
提示词语:Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate
提示问题:Where are you going?
What will you do there?
When and where will you meet?
【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,我通过微信告诉Lucy要去哪,在那里要做什么以及何时何地见面。
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时,人称为第一人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I want to……,We a re going to……,We can……,Let’s meet at……等句式的应用。
写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。
写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。
开头介绍了我想要邀请你去老舍茶馆,接下来介绍我们去那里做什么,最后指出我们要在何时何地见面。
此处want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
12.书面表达。
76.某英语教育网站正在开展主题为“How c an a teenager have a successful life?”的讨论,为此你采访了一些同学(结果见下表)。
请据上经用英语写一篇短文参与讨论,并阐述你的观点。
注意:(1)短文必须包括表中所有内容,可适当增加细节;
(2)你的观点至少两条;
(3)词数:80—100;
(4)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:尊重respect
短文首句:I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.
【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.
Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.
From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.
【解析】
试题分析:英语教育网站开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的讨论,采访了一些同学参与讨论,写出他们的观点及自己的观点。
因为是叙述同学的现在的观点,所以句子应该用一般现在时,叙述同学的观点用第三人称,叙述自己的观点用第一人称。
注意不要遗漏要点,所写的句子应该符合英语语法,不能是汉语式的句子,要使用一些高级词汇及句式。
写作亮点:短文用了一些短语和句式,如:do a survey about sth关于某事做调查;respect their parents,尊敬他们的父母;look after照顾;make a good plan for sth为某事做一个好的计划;make some good friends交一些好朋友;keep healthy保持健康。
用了宾语从句,如:Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.用了because引导的原因状语从句,如:Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.增加了文章的亮点,也是提分的经典句子。
考点:材料作文。
13.书面表达(本题15分)根据要求完成短文写作,请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
为了使生活更美好,社会需要正能量(positive energy)。
生活中,我们需要他人的帮助,也要学会帮助他人。
请你在网上给What would you do?本期节目留言,内容包括:
1. 你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法;
2. 说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例;
3. 呼吁大家互帮互助,彼此感恩,让社会充满正能量。
作文要求:
1.不得照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。
作文的开头已经给出,不必抄写在试卷上,也不计入总词数。
In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop.
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【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.
The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.
In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be t hankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”(113w)
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文,描述对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法、发生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓励大家相互帮助,并让世界充满正能量。
根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如be for, adj enough to do, the other day, try one’s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one’s opinion, be supposed to, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。
增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:
认真审题。
审好题是写好书面表达的关键。
审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。
构思提纲。
有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。
通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。
一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。
使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。
同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。
修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。
这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。
14.书面表达
中考后暑假即将开始,你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。
旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。
请根据旅行社提供的信息,将你的选择用英文向同学们介绍。
要求:
1. 所写内容必须包括某一国家的所有信息及选择的理由;
2. 结合游玩国家的情况,自拟希望可以安排的活动,并提出1-2点出游的注意事项;
3. 文章不少于90词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 语义通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范;
5. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad.。