中考人教英语重点单词回扣+阅读及答案：八上5--6 (2)

中考人教英语重点单词回扣+阅读及答案：八上5--6
人教英语重点单词回扣+阅读及答案：八上5--6
一、阅读理解。

Hello, my name is Zhao Benshan. Others call me Uncle Benshan. I was born in Lianhua Valley in 1957. I’m a Chinese skit （滑稽短剧） and sitcom （情景短剧） actor, and these years I began to be a TV director. I have lots of works such as Liu Lao Gen. I also have lots of disciple, Xiao Shenyang is one of my disciple. Most of my disciples are very good at singing and acting. They bring happiness to people, too. I believe Buddhism (佛教), it’s a really good faith (信仰). I have two children, they are Zhao Yinan and Zhao Yihan. They’re both lovely. I like them very much. I have appeared on the CCTV New Year’s Gala for fifteen years, and because of this I got an award. I hope, in the future, I can still bring lots of fun to everybody.
( ) 1. Uncle Benshan is ______ years old now.
A. 50
B. 60
C. 57
D. 48
( ) 2. Uncle Benshan started to be a _______ these years.
A. teacher
B. singer
C. actor
D. director
( ) 3. Uncle Benshan appeared on the _________ for 15 times.
A. Super Boy
B. CCTV New Year’s Gala
C.I Am a Singer
D. Happy Camp
( ) 4. What does the underline word “disciple” mean?
A. 徒弟
B. 师傅
C. 朋友
D. 同事
( ) 5. Which one is WRONG?
A. Uncle Benshan has lots of works.
B. Buddhism is Uncle Benshan’s faith.
C. Uncle Benshan has three children.
D. Uncle Benshan was born in LianhuaValley.
【参考答案】1-5 CDBAC
二、完形填空。

阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从各题所给的A、B、C或者D四个选项中选出最佳选项。

Have you ever seen the advertisement: Learn a foreign language in six weeks, __1__ give your money back? Of course, it __2__ happens quite like that. The only language __3__ to learn is the mother language. And think __4__ practice is needed for that. Before the Second World War people usually learned a foreign language __5__ the literature(文学) of the country. Now most people want to __6__ a foreign language. Every year millions of people start learning __7__. How do they do it? Some people try at home __8__ books and tapes, others go to evening classes or watch TV programs. __9__ they use the language only 2 or 3 times a week, learning it will
__10__ a long time, like language learning at school. A few people try to learn a language fast by studying for 6 or __11__ hours a day. It’s much easier to learn the language in the country where it __12__. But most people are __13__ to do this, and many people don’t have to do so. Machines and good books will be very __14__，but they can not do the students’ work. __15__ the language is learned quickly or slowly, it is hard work.
( )1. A. so B. or C. and D. but
( )2. A. can’t B. impossible C. never D. often
( )3. A. easily B. difficult C. able D. easy
( )4. A. how much B. how long C. how fast D. how many
( )5. A. studied B. to study C. studying D. study
( )6. A. talk B. tell C. speak D. say
( )7. A. them B. this C. that D. it
( )8. A. without B. with C. in D. by
( )9. A. If B. When C. Since D. Until
( )10. A. spend B. use C. take D. cost
( )11. A. some B. more C. other D. less
( )12. A. speaks B. is speaking C. spoke D. is spoken
( )13. A. able B. possible C. unable D. not possible
( )14. A. careful B. forgetful C. wonderful D. helpful
( )15. A. either B. whether C. what D. how
语篇解读：本文主要想告诉读者，学英语是一个长期而艰苦的劳动，没有任何捷径可走。

无论你用什么方法学习——用书、机器或在学校，不多实践就无法达到预期的目的。

1. B。

这里的or是“否则”的意思。

2. C。

根据作者的观点，这种事绝对不可能发生。

impossible是一个形容词，不符语法，can’t后不可能跟happens，often意思与作者的意图相反。

3. D。

唯一容易学的语言是母语。

这里需要一个形容词充当后置定语。

4. A。

用来修饰不可数名词，只有用how much，全句意为“母语好学，还需要那么多的练习。

何况外语呢？”
5. B。

动词不定式充当目的状语。

意为“学习外语来研究文学”。

6. C。

说某种语言用speak，speak English，speak Chinese。

7. D。

用it代指上文所说的a foreign language。

8. B。

这里的with是“用”的意思。

9. A。

作者在这里提出一种假设。

如果他们一星期只有一两次使用外语。

10. C。

固定短语，意为“做某事花费某人多长时间”。

11. B。

后面省略了than 6 hours。

意为6个小时或更多的时间。

12. D。

it 代指上文所指的foreign language，故用被动语态。

13. C。

许多人不可能做到这一点。

这里不可以用not possible，因为它的主语不可以用人。

14. D。

机器和书对于学习英语来说是很有帮助的。

15. B。

whether...or...固定短语。

三、首字母填空。

根据短文内容和首字母提示，在下文空格处填入适当的词使短文完整。

(每空一词)
In the middle of Jiangsu province, Yangzhou is an important city in the economic circle of the Yangtze River delta(三角洲). It is m 1 up of three cities of Baoying, Gaoyou, and Yizheng, three districts of Hanjiang, Guangling and Jiangdu. It has an area of 6,638 square kilometers and a population of 4.6 million, i 2 the central area of 1,100 square kilometers with a population of 1.31 million.
Yangzhou is a cultural city with a long history and rich c 3 . It has a long history of about 2,500 years since King Fu Chai of Wu dug Hangou and built Hancheng. There were three g 4 times in the history of Yangzhou. It took shape in the Han Dynasty, developed in the Tang Dynasty and reached its top in the Qing Dynasty. A number of politicians, writers and a 5 such as Li Bai, Du Fu of the Tang Dynasty and Ouyang Xiu and Su Dongpo of the Song Dynasty all served as officials or went sightseeing there and l 6 many poems describing the beauty of Yangzhou. "Eight eccentrics of Yangzhou", Yangzhou school and Yangzhou opera all enjoy special qualities. In h 7 , Yangzhou was a famous and open city. In the Tang dynasty, it is the biggest city in Southeast China and one of the four ports(港口) that conducted economic and cultural exchanges with other c 8 . Over 10 thousand foreign businessmen lived in Yangzhou then. Master Jianzhen went eastward to Japan to s 9 China’s culture.
Yangzhou is a friendly and beautiful city suitable for people to live in. Such famous well-known sayings as “In this flowery March journeyed south to Yangzhou”, “The green city is Yangzhou”, “Only Yangzhou is suitable for people to l 10 in” give true expression to Yangzhou. In 2006, it was awarded the United Nations Habitat Award, the highest prize in the area of global habitat. 【参考答案】
1. made
2. including
3. culture
4. golden
5. artists
6. left
7. history
8. countries
9. spread 10. live
四、重点单词回扣
重点单词
1．____________ n．新闻节目；新闻 2. ____________ n．& v．希望
3. ____________ v．发生；出现★
4. ____________ n．笑话；玩笑
5. ____________ adj.著名的；出名的
6. ____________ adj.富有的
7．____________ modal v．可能；可以8. ____________ adj.主要的；最重要的9. ____________ n．原因；理由★10. ____________ adj.普通的；常见的11. ____________ n．电影12. ____________ adj.愿意的；准备好的13. ____________ adj.简单的；易做的14. ____________ n．陆军；陆军部队15. ____________ v．介意，对(某事)烦恼16. ____________ n．医生★
17. ____________ n．工程师18. ____________ n．驾驶员；司机
19. ____________ n．飞行员
20. ____________ n．学院；大学；高等专科学校
21. ____________ n．(综合性)大学；高等学府 22. ____________ n．文章；论文
23. ____________ n．队；组 24. ____________ adj.外国的
25. ____________ pron.他(她、它)们自己
26. ____________ n. 厨师； v．烹饪，煮★
27. ____________ n．承诺，诺言； v．许诺，承诺★
参考答案：
1．news 2. hope 3. happen 4. joke 5. famous 6. rich
7. might8. main9. reason10. common11. film/movie
12. ready13. simple14. army15. mind16. doctor
17. engineer18. driver19. pilot 20. college21. university
22. article 23. team 24. foreign 25. themselves26. cook
27. promise
二、英语书面表达专项训练
2．书面表达
暑假即将来临,对于如何安排孩子初中毕业后的第一个假期,家长们和孩子自己有着各自的想法。

根据下表提示,写一篇英语短文,描述他们的不同看法,同时发表你自己对暑假安排的观点。

注意]
(1)表格中的观点仅供参考,允许适当发挥;
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息;
(4)词数:不少于80。

How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________
【答案】How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.
Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it's important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.
In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It's good for us to do some sports.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．
【点睛】
这篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.这些给文章增色不少。

3．书面表达
初中毕业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演......
请你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。

提示：(1)What was the event?
(2)How did you make it?
(3)What’s your feeling?
要求：(1)发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。

(2)发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数)。

Believe Myself, and I Will Win
Hello,
everyone!_______________________________________________________________________ ____
Thank you for your listening.
【答案】Believe Myself, and I will win
Hello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.
When I was in the seventh grade, I a lways had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will,
there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.
To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.
Thank you for your listening.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题，写一篇演讲稿。

题目中用问题的形式给出了提示，审题可知，文章应包括以下内容：首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的事；然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难，最后取得成功的；最后说一下你自己的感受。

写作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要，发挥自己的想象力，将这些内容补充完整，用正确的英语表达出来。

短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。

写作时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据表达需要适当发挥，但要与上下文意衔接起来。

其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。

应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行表达。

句式结构可以简单句为主，穿插并列句或复合句。

为提升文章档次，应注意衔接词以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，写了一篇演讲稿。

文章有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。

各部分内容安排合理，层次清晰。

短文主要分成三段，每一段主题都很明确，叙述详细、清楚。

其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式，语法规范，用词准确。

文章中句式变化丰富，有简单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章的表现力。

短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。

4．亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。

请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。

提示：
1.个人基本情况介绍
2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。

3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。

要求：
1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。

2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。

【答案】My junior high school life
My name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.
Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.
I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。

【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is……，I’m glad to……，Our campus is……，Our teachers teach us……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同学，最后对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。

此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

5．假如你是天津的一名中学生李明，刚刚结東五一小长假的旅游回到学校。

请你根据以下内容提示，以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。

(1)5月1日天气晴朗，我和家人开始了两天的旅程。

(2)早上7：30我们乘京津城际铁路出发，车程大约半小时。

(3)上午我们参观了故宫博物院，学到了许多历史知识，并为朋友们购买了礼物。

(4)第二天清晨，我们登上了长城，雄伟的长城是世界著名奇观之一；下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品尝北京烤鸭。

(5)我的旅游感受……
参考词汇:京津城际铁路 Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway
王府井大街 Wangfujing Street
故宫 the Palace Museum
北京烤鸭 Peking Roast Duck
要求：
(1)词数:80～100个。

(2)短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

A Trip to Beijing
During the May Day Holiday，
I______________________________________________________________
【答案】During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and comfortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our two-day-trip in Beijing.
First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and took a lot of photos there. We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What's more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.
On early morning of the second day, we went to walk up the Great Wall. It was one of the most famous wonders in the world. Millions of tourists from all over the world visit it every year. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street .At that moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck. In my opinion, Beijing food was very delicious.
During this trip, I not only tried the delicious Beijing food, but also learned more about the Chinese traditional culture as well as the long history of China. Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it.
【解析】
【详解】
以“A Trip to Beijing”为题，写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。

记叙自己的一次旅行，审题时注意本文使用一般过去时，叙述事实的时候以时间为顺序。

用合适的连词把各句连接成一个有机的整体，同时要用相对高级的词汇提升文章的层次和文采。

在发表你的看法的时候，写作的时候要注意要点的全覆盖，不能有遗漏或省略，同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。

注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。

变化使用多种句式让文章更有亮点。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。

注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。

变化使用多种句式让文章更有亮点。

We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What's more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.
.等这些句子运用也让文章增色不少。

6．假如你是光明中学的李阳，你看到了动物保护组织Animal Group的招聘信息，请你依
据主要提示，给Animal Group的主席Mr. Mario写一封邮件，并表达自己想当志愿者的意愿。

写作要点：
1.表达自己想当志愿者的心愿。

2.向Animal Group介绍自己。

( 1) 我是李阳，15岁。

(2) 喜欢喂养小动物，运动，读书。

(3) 乐于助人，有爱心。

3．至少说出两点你想要参加动物保护组织的原因。

Dear Mr. Mario ,
How are you doing?
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Yang 【答案】I really hope I can be a volunteer of Animal Group. I'm Li Yang. I'm 15 years old. I like feeding small animals, sports, reading. I am a very loving boy. I often help others. I like small animals and want to help them.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。

本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。

我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。

动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。

根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主
谓一致等问题。

写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系
【点睛】
这篇短文用正确的语句表达了每一个要点。

学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

7．书面表达
常州市政府发文，从2019年2月1日起，市区禁止燃放烟花爆竹。

你们班级的同学们就春节是否能燃放烟花进行了讨论。

请根据表格所提供的信息,给市长写一封信介绍大家的观点，同时谈谈自己的想法。

注意： 1. 所写内容必须包括表格中的信息，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 表达，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
4. 词数不少于90。

文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Major,
We have had a discussion about whether to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. All the students in our class give the ideas.
【答案】Most of the students don’t agree to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. They think fireworks produce so much smoke that it can cause serious air pollution. What’s more, people like l etting them off at midnight, it is always so noisy outside that many people can’t sleep well. Also, it may cause big fire if people aren’t careful enough. Some children like playing with fireworks, so it’s dangerous for their eyes. If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere.
On the other hand, some students don’t agree. They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. Moreover, Chinese traditional culture is missing. We should protect it. People will feel less interested than before without fireworks.
I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else. Protecting environment is protecting ourselves.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文。

常州市政府发文，从2019年2月1日起，市区禁止燃放烟花爆竹。

你们班级的同学们就春节是否能燃放烟花进行了讨论。

请根据表格所提供的信息,给市长写一封信介绍大家的观点，同时谈谈自己的想法。

时态主要为一般现在时。

人称主要为第三人称和第一人称。

仔细阅读所给材料，认真审题，确定主题，根据主题和所给要点列出提纲，所写内容必须包括表格中的信息，可适当发挥，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。

尽量使用高分句型。

要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。

根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。

写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。

本文提纲：
大多数学生不同意在春节放烟花。

他们认为烟花产生的烟太多，会造成严重的空气污染。

更重要的是，人们喜欢在午夜放假，外面总是那么吵，很多人睡不好觉。

另外，如果人们不够小心，可能会引起大火。

有些孩子喜欢玩烟花，这对他们的眼睛很危险。

如果我们不放烟花，清洁工就不需要到处清理那么多垃圾。

另一方面，有些学生不同意。

他们认为中国人几百年前就习惯放烟花了。

此外，中国传统文化也缺失了。

我们应该保护它。

如果没有烟花，人们会比以前更不感兴趣。

我认为我们应该遵守这条规则，因为良好的环境比其他任何东西都重要。

保护环境就是保护我们自己。

【点睛】
本文思路清晰，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，层次分明，所用句式句型比较高级，像If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere./ They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. / I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else.。

书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和高分句式，语言要规范，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。

要学以致用。

注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。

注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

8．假如你是李明，将参加今年暑期的澳大利亚悉尼新南威尔士语言学校的游学活动（study tour）, 该项目的负责人Mike给你发来了封电子邮件征询你对此次游学活动的想法和建议。

请阅读以下信息，并回复一封电子邮件。

注意事项：
1. 文章所写内容必须包括邮件中的问题所涉及的所有信息。

2. 文章要求语意通顺，条理清楚，书写规范，不能出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。

3. 文章词数在100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m glad to receive your ema il and I have read it carefully. I have decided to live in
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I’m really l ooking forward to this study tour!
Many thanks,
Li Ming
【答案】例文：Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m glad to receive your email and I have read it carefully. I have decided to live in the Green family. The old couple have no children but two dogs, so they will have more time to communicate with me in English and I can play with their pets as well. Their flat is in the centre of Sydney, so it’s easy for me to go around. I can also use the Wi-fi to keep in touch with my parents. My family can afford the cost of 350 pounds.
I’m lucky to have a buddy during my stay at your school. I expect him/her to help me with my problems in my study. I can chat with him/her in English to improve my speaking skills.
I love history so I want to visit some places of interest at the weekend. I’m also curious about the local food and I want to have a taste.
I’m really looking forward to this study tour!
Many thanks,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇应用作文，邮件内容要回答邮件中的三个问题，可分为三个段落进行回答。

好单词：
afford 负担得起
好短语：
communicate with 和……交流
as well 也
keep in touch with 与……保持联系
expect sb. to do sth. 期望某人做某事
help sb. with sth. 在某方面帮助某人
chat with 和……聊天
place of interest 名胜古迹
be curious about 对……感到好奇
have a taste 尝一尝
好句式：
Their flat is in the centre of Sydney, so it's easy for me to go around. 他们的公寓在悉尼市中心，所以对我来说，到处走走很容易。

（It is adj. for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事是……，it是形式主语，不定式短语是真正的主语）
9．“苔花如米小,也学牡丹开。

”我们大多数人虽然微不足道,但也能有所作为。

请以One thing I felt very proud of 为题用英语写以写一篇短文,描述你曾经做过得引以自豪一件事情。

要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.词数80左右。

【答案】One thing I felt very proud of
I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother. To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t contr ol the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.
I felt proud of cooking on my own.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以One thing I felt very proud of为题，介绍自己曾经做过的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。

作文是开放式的，题目中只给了主题，具体的写作内容，需要学生们自己
发挥想象力去补充。

审题可知，体裁是记叙文，记叙一件自己做过的事情，且是能让自己感到自豪的，故文章应使用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。

短文应由开头、主体和结尾三部分组成，开头引出话题；第二部分为中心，具体描述事情的过程；最后一部分简要描写一下自己的感受。

写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，应从句子的整体结构出发，使用较常见、易于把握的简单句结构，如主谓宾或主系表结构。

为提升作文档次，穿插使用并列句或复合句，如宾语从句、状语从句等。

或使用祈使句、非谓语动词、感叹句等特殊句式结构。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，以使文意连贯。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求描述了自己做过的一件引以为豪的事情。

短文有如下几个特点：首先短文内容完整、充实，叙述具体，详细，作者描写了自己做饭给妈妈庆祝生日这件事，符合题目要求。

文章分三段，第一段用一句话引出话题；第二段详细描写了事情的过程；最后一段写了自己的感受。

结构清晰，安排合理。

其次短文里使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时、第一人称叙述，注意了谓语动词过去式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式。

语言得体，语法规范，句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了时间状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式结构。

短文中较好的句型和短语有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。