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教案高中英语作文公开课课件ppt
教学过程设计
导入新课 展开讨论 归纳总结 巩固练习
教学方法与手段
第三章
教学方法选择
针对不同层次学生，选择不同 教学方法
根据教学内容，选择合适的教 学手段
结合实际教学情况，灵活运用 各种教学方法
考虑学生的需求和兴趣，选择 有效的教学手段
教学手段运用
多媒体教学：使用PPT、视频等多媒体资源，提高教学效果。 互动教学：采用小组讨论、角色扮演等方式，增强学生参与度。 任务型教学：设置明确的任务和目标，让学生在完成任务中掌握知识。 自主学习：鼓励学生自主探究和解决问题，培养自主学习能力。
培养学生的合作精神和创新意 识
教学内容与过程
第二章
教学内容介绍
教学目标：提高学 生的英语写作能力
教学内容：写作技 巧、写作实践、作 文修改
教学难点：如何运 用写作技巧表达自 己的观点和情感
教学重点：掌握写 作技巧，提高写作 水平
教学重点与难点
教学重点：掌握英语作文的写作技巧和表达方式 教学难点：如何运用所学知识，写出高质量的英语作文 教学方法：通过讲解、示范、练习等方式，帮助学生掌握写作技巧 教学手段：利用多媒体课件、实物展示等辅助教学，提高教学效果
掌握本节课的重点单词和短 语
了解本节课相关的文化背景 知识
能够运用所学知识进行简单 的英语写作
能力目标
培养学生的英语写作能力 提高学生的英语口语表达能力 增强学生的英语阅读理解能力 拓展学生的英语文化素养和跨文化交流能力
情感目标
培养学生的自信心和写作能力
激发学生的学习兴趣和积极性
提高学生的英语表达能力和沟 通能力
音频：提供课文的录音，帮助学生练习听力和发音。
视频：提供与课文相关的视频材料，帮助学生更好地理解课文 内容，同时丰富学生的视觉体验。
公开课_高中英语写作PPT教学课件
a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
2020/12/12
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
2020/12/12
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
高中英语应用文写作A letter of recommendation推荐信公开课PPT课件
background +purpose
I’m Chinese, female. I was born on March 25,1983 in Zhuzhou, Hunan
province. I graduated from Hunan University last month. I enjoy working with
reasons
basis hobby advantage experience
be interested in be curious about
work as/for gain rich
like ... better/best spend time doing
enjoy doing win a prize
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
basis hobby naydvantage
places of interest in China.
reasons 3 + experience
I think I’m suited for the job. If you can let me have this chance I will try
建议信，道歉信，感谢信，
投诉信
邀请信，介绍信，推推荐荐信信，
表扬信，
A letter of recommendation
欢迎信，求职信，辞职信，
祝贺信，慰问信
A letter of recommendation
What
推荐信是指写给用人单位、向用人单位推荐
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高中英语概要写作Shyness公开课PPT课件
要点1: Shyness is becoming more and more common, and scientists have some interesting ideas about why people are shy
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This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy.
Para 5
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Are you shy① ? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Nowp, hsceiennotismtseanreotnrying to understand
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写作思路解读
Para. 1 Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy.
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This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy.
Para 5
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Are you shy① ? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Nowp, hsceiennotismtseanreotnrying to understand
over one.
your
suggestion
写作思路解读
Para. 1 Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy.
高中英语写作课教学ppt课件
2) It may bring about severe unpredicted consequence.
3）It does us much harm// It is harmful to us．// It is bad for us.
4) It brings more harm than good to us.
they benefit people’s health greatly by giving them due physical exercise．
From what has been mentioned above, we have good
reason to believe that the bike will soon become people’s
English Writing
细化写作 化繁为简
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1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this can be listed as
follows:
3 ） The reason for this is obvious ．
练吧
近年来，人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的 变化。电脑在今天已经进入寻常百姓家，请 简单阐述其原因。
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Three reasons may account for the
changes that have taken place in our
life．First of all，people’s living
While I admit that it is sometimes inconvenient for one to go on a long trip by bike, bicycles still have more advantages than disadvantages, compared with cars. There are several reasons accounting for my opinion.
高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件
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句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
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基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
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基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
高中英语Summary Writing公开课精品PPT课件
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➢What is the style of the passage? A. Narration 记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文 C. Aa rtygpuemofewnrtiatitnigotno 议inf论orm文or explain…
Mini-dictionary
specific age groups. They often use red to attract yRouednger people Ptootwheirr products, for example, as OigtroailsdnvgaiebnrdannaCtvoaymn,dwmmhuiocnrhiecoayltodiueortnhcfuuslttohmaenrcsosleoerms ltikoe
Summary Writing
In order to leave a good impression on you, I have been puzzled about what to wear and which color to wear this morning.
Summary Writing
and for various types of treatments when we are ill.
Some people even believe that the blind can benefit
from the ‘vibrations’ that color gives off.
Specific example
➢ Find out the topic sentence of Para.3.
Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. Examples Meaning
➢What is the style of the passage? A. Narration 记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文 C. Aa rtygpuemofewnrtiatitnigotno 议inf论orm文or explain…
Mini-dictionary
specific age groups. They often use red to attract yRouednger people Ptootwheirr products, for example, as OigtroailsdnvgaiebnrdannaCtvoaymn,dwmmhuiocnrhiecoayltodiueortnhcfuuslttohmaenrcsosleoerms ltikoe
Summary Writing
In order to leave a good impression on you, I have been puzzled about what to wear and which color to wear this morning.
Summary Writing
and for various types of treatments when we are ill.
Some people even believe that the blind can benefit
from the ‘vibrations’ that color gives off.
Specific example
➢ Find out the topic sentence of Para.3.
Companies use color to great effect to encourage us to buy their products. Examples Meaning
高中英语基础写作公开课课件
Outlines: 1、告知受到小说 2、感谢对方的礼物及礼物的意义 3、回赠礼物 4、礼物的意义（简单概述说明） 5、邀请来中国
Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive the novel. Thank you for such a lovely gift ，for I have been expecting for a long time. This novel can help me learn about American society and daily life. I know you ’re interested in Chinese festivals, and therefore I choose an album of paper cutting for you. Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics, which is often used as a decoration for
Dear Jack, Thank you for your kind help during my stay in Britain. With your help, I have made great progress in my English study. (感谢） How is everything going with Mr. Blaire? Thanksgiving Day is approaching and I want to express my gratefulness to him. I tried to get in touch with him, but failed. Maybe I got the wrong number. Will you please send his email address/telephone number to me? （询问及所 求）
高中英语写作(经典中的经典)PPT课件
“拽”的感觉.
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高考作文评分原则
１．形式上胜人一筹，也就是文章结构，谴词造句
２．内容要点，发挥想象，适当拓展
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书面表达在评阅 时遵循三原则
语言第一位（语言高级） 内容第二位（要点齐全） 结构第三位（文章分段）
漂亮、地道
语言第一位（语言高级）
一、高级词汇和句式
二、修辞手法 三、有效的连词
四、名人名言或谚语
化腐朽为神奇十 式
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一、将两个简单句合并为并列句。
操作难度★★ 写作效果★★
• 1. You can do it. I can do it. One of us must do it.
• Either you or I must do it.
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If you go through the gate, you’ll find the entrance to Bear Country. (一般)
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思考：什么样的作文会成为一篇 好作文
• 无遗漏信息点（审题） • 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词
• 句式多样
• 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
思考：你能想到的好句式有哪
些？
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advanced sentences
定语从句 名词性从句 非谓语动词
with复合结构
常用谚语 倒装句
强调句
被动句
-…
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Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games.
2) The word is true. The president ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱill give our school a speech.
高中英语信件作文课优秀公开课课件
No chinglish or grammatical or spellingmistakes In accordance with the requirements of the composition With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns
obvious
Correct the possible mistakes in the following sentences.
1 I will never forget the wonderful moments we have worked together.
when
2 I’ll appreciate it if you could agree my request.
开篇要直入主题
Content
• 内容要完整
• 注意内容的适当性
Content
Focus on “your” feeling, when you want to resign.
内容要适当
• It's a chance for you to choose a fresh man
Language:
3 But I supposed to concentrate on my study now.
on
am
好的信件： Comfortable Persuasive 读起来舒服 有说服力
Polish the following sentences. 1. I I don’t think I can succeed in this job any more. don’t think I can be qualified as your
高中英语作文技巧讲解(共51张PPT)(共51张PPT)
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第五档. 25~30分 第二档. 7~12分 第四档. 19~24分 第一档. 1~6分 第三档. 13~18分
覆盖所有内 容要点
应用了较多 的语法结构
2、主要内容：
和词汇
内容要点；
词汇和语法的数量和准确性；
有效地使 用了语句 间的连接
上下文的连贯； 语言的得体性 语言地道，
规范
成分
3、拼写和标点是语言准确 性的一个方面，评分时， 应视其对交际的影响程度 予以考虑。
第四档（１９-２４）考试说明P377 完成了试题规定的任务
－虽漏掉了一两个次重点，但覆盖所 有内容要点。
－应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务 的要求。
－语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准 确，些许错误主要是因为尝试较复 杂结构或词汇所致。
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
What is the ideal length for a college entrance English composition?
The ideal length is typically 200-300 words, depending on the specific requirements of the exam
Conclusion Writing
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Sample text analysis
An in-depth analysis of narrative writing samples
Through in-depth analysis of narrative writing samples, students will understand how to construct story plots, shape character images, and use language skills to express emotions and themes.
What are the common mistakes students make in English composition?
Common misses include poor grammar, weak vocabulary, unclear organization, and lake of origin or depth in analysis
Grammar Control
Correctly use tensions, sense structures, and punctation
Fluent Expression
Write in a smooth and coherent man with proper transitions
高中英语写作公开课(共61张PPT)
表示选择关系的并列句
常用的连词有or , either…or…..，otherwise, or else(否则）, 等连接.如：
Either you are mad or I am. You must go early, otherwise you will miss the bus.
Will he still be there or will he have gone away? Take this bus or else you won’t get there in time.
第五种句型：S+V+P
She is a student. He has become an engineer.
It tastes sweet.
His face goes red.
注意：系动词除了be 动词外，还包括become, turn, look, seem, appear, sound, taste, smell, remain, prove, keep, fall.
并列句：由并列连词把两个或两个以上的简单句 连在一起的句子叫做并列句。
He helps me and I help him. He not only gave us a lot of advice , but also helped us to study English.
注意：不同的并列连词表示并列分句之间的不同关系， 根据并列分句之间的关系不同，并列分句可以分为四种。
Once, she teached in India for many years . In 1950, she set up the Missionaries of charity to help the poor in Calcutta. She devoted to help the poor 、 the patiences、the homeless persons and the dead persons. Because of those, in 1979, she got the Nobel peace prize in 1997. she died in India.
高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
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Ⅱ.Pre-writing (team work)
Task 1: Decide the person and tense
Task 2: Decide the structure Task 3: Write down the key words
and sentence patterns
优秀 □ 良好 □ 合格 □ 需努力 □
评价者建议： 被评价者反馈及打算：
评价者签名：
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sample
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
感知典型范例 ——段落层面
I think, for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents though we are busy. Our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live happily. We can build a harmonious society only when all of us care for the aged.
Body
_________________________________________
_________________________________________
_________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply. Ending
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感知典型范例
——词汇层面2
adj. 令人惊奇的
• surprising •→amazing •→astonishing
exactly used and advanced words 准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇
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感知典型范例
——句型层面1
他昨天下午来的。
He came here yesterday afternoon. (not…until) → 1. He_d_i_d_n_’t_come here _u_n_ti_l__yesterday afternoon.
□大、小写以及标点符合完全正确； □所要涉及的词汇以及单词的拼写完全正确； □固定搭配、代词、名词的数、格以及冠词的
选择基本正确 □句子结构符合需要，能准确应用简单句的5种
基本句型; □句子结构安排合理，符合英语习惯，无汉语
思维来安排句子结构； □根据需要会使用正确的时态、语态。时态、
语态、概念、结构清楚； □有一定遣词组句，将基本句型串联成文的能
proper link words 使用恰当的连接词
various sentence patterns 用较丰富的句式
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感知典型范例 ——篇章层面1
分言卷 错面 误不 多整 层洁 次涂 不改 清较 得多 语
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感知典型范例
——篇章层面2
不达字 得读数 分者不 。任够
何或 信未 息能 ，传
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13
注意：1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语和介绍语已为你写好。
Dear Peter, How are you doing? _________________________________________ _________________________________________ _________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply.
准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇 5. proper linking words 使用恰当的连接词 6. various sentence patterns 用较丰富的
句式
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Ⅱ.Pre-writing (2013全国卷)
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信 告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会， 带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他 是否可以接机。信中还需说明： 李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30
力； □会使用恰当的连词、情态动词、修饰语，使
句子前后连贯、文章顺通流畅； □能使用复杂句型及多种从句; □内容的真实性、趣味性、实用性以及写作的
创新得到了展现。
.
写作过程评估表
被评价者姓名_______ 班级_____ 日期_________ 授课教师________ 评价内容________ 评价:
___________, and__________________________.
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please____________________________________
_________________________________________? Thank you in advance!______________ is CA985, and________________ 11:30 am. August 6. My uncle is_______________________________.
As far as I am concerned, for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents however busy we are. What’s more, our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live a happy life. Only when all of us care for the aged can we build a harmonious society
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Task 3: Sentence patterns
• I’m writing to tell you that … • I’d like you to … • Would you please …? • I wonder if you can …? •…
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必要的连接词
表示递进：besides, as well, in addition
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
.
Li Hua 24
Ⅳ. post-writing
Revise your compositions in pairs. Then, make evaluations for him or her.
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25
写作过程评价标准表
注意：达到8至10项标准为优秀，6至8项为良好；4 至6项为合格；4以下为需努力。
Yours,
.
Li Hua
28
Homework
Rewrite your composition, and pay attention to its words, phrases, sentence patterns and grammar.
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Ⅲ.while-writing(15mins)
Please write down the letter in 15 minutes. You can use the following structure.
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Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that________________
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!
.
19
Task 3: the key words
a. to have a meeting/ conference b. bring sb. sth. c. Chinese painting d. do me a favor e. pick him up f. flight number g. arrive at h. wear glasses …
2. 2. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.
3. It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here.
no grammatical mistakes 没有语法错误 advanced sentence pat. terns 使用高级句型 7
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Task 1: person(人称) tense （时态）
Person: The first person Tense: The present and the future tense
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14
Ⅱ.Pre-writing (team work)
Task 1: Decide the person and tense
Task 2: Decide the structure Task 3: Write down the key words
and sentence patterns
优秀 □ 良好 □ 合格 □ 需努力 □
评价者建议： 被评价者反馈及打算：
评价者签名：
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sample
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
感知典型范例 ——段落层面
I think, for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents though we are busy. Our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live happily. We can build a harmonious society only when all of us care for the aged.
Body
_________________________________________
_________________________________________
_________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply. Ending
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感知典型范例
——词汇层面2
adj. 令人惊奇的
• surprising •→amazing •→astonishing
exactly used and advanced words 准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇
.
6
感知典型范例
——句型层面1
他昨天下午来的。
He came here yesterday afternoon. (not…until) → 1. He_d_i_d_n_’t_come here _u_n_ti_l__yesterday afternoon.
□大、小写以及标点符合完全正确； □所要涉及的词汇以及单词的拼写完全正确； □固定搭配、代词、名词的数、格以及冠词的
选择基本正确 □句子结构符合需要，能准确应用简单句的5种
基本句型; □句子结构安排合理，符合英语习惯，无汉语
思维来安排句子结构； □根据需要会使用正确的时态、语态。时态、
语态、概念、结构清楚； □有一定遣词组句，将基本句型串联成文的能
proper link words 使用恰当的连接词
various sentence patterns 用较丰富的句式
.
8
;
感知典型范例 ——篇章层面1
分言卷 错面 误不 多整 层洁 次涂 不改 清较 得多 语
;
;8
;
.
9
感知典型范例
——篇章层面2
不达字 得读数 分者不 。任够
何或 信未 息能 ，传
.
13
注意：1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语和介绍语已为你写好。
Dear Peter, How are you doing? _________________________________________ _________________________________________ _________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply.
准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇 5. proper linking words 使用恰当的连接词 6. various sentence patterns 用较丰富的
句式
.
12
Ⅱ.Pre-writing (2013全国卷)
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信 告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会， 带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他 是否可以接机。信中还需说明： 李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30
力； □会使用恰当的连词、情态动词、修饰语，使
句子前后连贯、文章顺通流畅； □能使用复杂句型及多种从句; □内容的真实性、趣味性、实用性以及写作的
创新得到了展现。
.
写作过程评估表
被评价者姓名_______ 班级_____ 日期_________ 授课教师________ 评价内容________ 评价:
___________, and__________________________.
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please____________________________________
_________________________________________? Thank you in advance!______________ is CA985, and________________ 11:30 am. August 6. My uncle is_______________________________.
As far as I am concerned, for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents however busy we are. What’s more, our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live a happy life. Only when all of us care for the aged can we build a harmonious society
.
20
Task 3: Sentence patterns
• I’m writing to tell you that … • I’d like you to … • Would you please …? • I wonder if you can …? •…
.
21
必要的连接词
表示递进：besides, as well, in addition
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
.
Li Hua 24
Ⅳ. post-writing
Revise your compositions in pairs. Then, make evaluations for him or her.
.
25
写作过程评价标准表
注意：达到8至10项标准为优秀，6至8项为良好；4 至6项为合格；4以下为需努力。
Yours,
.
Li Hua
28
Homework
Rewrite your composition, and pay attention to its words, phrases, sentence patterns and grammar.
.
22
Ⅲ.while-writing(15mins)
Please write down the letter in 15 minutes. You can use the following structure.
.
23
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that________________
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!
.
19
Task 3: the key words
a. to have a meeting/ conference b. bring sb. sth. c. Chinese painting d. do me a favor e. pick him up f. flight number g. arrive at h. wear glasses …
2. 2. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.
3. It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here.
no grammatical mistakes 没有语法错误 advanced sentence pat. terns 使用高级句型 7
.
15
Task 1: person(人称) tense （时态）
Person: The first person Tense: The present and the future tense