(完整word版)高考英语的书面表达如何遣词造句

高考英语的书面表达如何遣词造句

一．造句的基本方法

首先，我祝愿大家更快乐、更健康。

Above of all , I congradulate all the students to happirer ,body is more healthier.(这样的句子里有语法错误和短语错误，如果作文是这样的句子，就是胡说=想到哪里写到哪里=逐字翻译，最多得7--8分）

心花怒放：heart flower angry open（错误）

1.造句五步法

中文---完整的中文----简单的中文-----英文-----升级英文

今天来了很多人。（逻辑是错的）----今天，很多人来了。--- Today so many people have come.

你妈妈对你好。（心法口诀：当你发现一句话不好翻译的时候，想一想这句话到底是什么意思呢？）----你妈妈关心你。----Your mom cares about you.-----(如果不会说care about)你妈妈爱你。-----Your mom loves you.----(升级英文）There is no doubt that your mom loves you.

写作文真正的难点：

1.想到简单的内容

2.造出完整的句子

3.合情合理的逻辑

你得知某报社“Global Mirror”创刊周年，征集读者意见，请根据以下提示给编辑写封信。提示一：说明你是该报的忠实读者。提示二：赞扬该报的优点：1.兼顾国内外新闻；2.介绍名人成功故事。提示三：

提出建议，刊登英语学习的文章

（1）我是贵报的忠实读者。----我非常喜欢你们的报纸。----I like your newspaper very much.----I am crazy about your newspaper.------Ｉam undoubtedly crazy about your newspaper.-----Ｉam undoubtedly crazy about your newspaper which is not only meaningful but also entertaining.(题外话：高考作文中的关于校园活动的作文肯定是既有意义，又有娱乐性）

（2）兼顾国内外新闻。----你们报纸兼顾国内外新闻。----你们报纸上有国内外新闻。---There is news about both China and other countries in your newspaper.----There is various news about both China and other countries in your newspaper.---Various news can be read in your newspaper about both China and other countries.

(3)介绍名人成功故事----名人成功故事被介绍在你们报纸上----关于名人成功经历的故事被介绍在你们报纸上。----Stories about famous people’s success experience are introduced in your newspaper.

老头晒太阳。---老头在享受阳光。---The old man is enjoying the sunshine.

二．造句的升级方法（关键是show off,就是把最好的句子写给阅卷老师看）

A)遣词的角度

1.换词法

（1）晚学词优先

Good---useful---beneficial--meaningful---educational----excellent----outst anding----splendid----helpful(good是黯然低分词,要换成闪光高分词）You Should ----you are supposed to do----you had better do----if I were you, I would do ---it is beneficial for you to do sth----why not do sth Like---be crazy about ---be fond of

Want to do --be longing for doing ---desire to do

More and more students ----an increasing number of students

More and more beautiful---increasingly beautiful

（2）短语优先

We ----we high school students---we teenagers---we Chinese young students---we English learners

Important---of great importance

English is important

English is of great importance

English is an important language

English is a language of great importance.

Different---of great difference

Useful--of great use

Beautiful--of great beauty

Harmful---of great harm

Join--take part in---be part of

（3）具体词优先

I go to school---I ride to school----With the sun rising from the east, I together with Jay Chou,ride to school ,singing and laughing all the way.

2.添词法

(1).在名词前添上一个或多个形容词

You should understand your mom.---You should understand your kind, patient and considerate mom.

(2).在名词后面加上同位语或者定语从句

You should understand your mom.----You, a 17-year-old teenager who can not live all by yourself, should understand your mom.

他们外国人对我们评价高。

They foreigners speak highly of us Chinese.

(3).在助系情之后、实义动词之前加副词

I love you.---I really love you.---I undoubtedly love you.

I can do it.---I can certainly do it.

This is a good idea.--This is an excellent idea.---This is obviously an excellent idea.

(4).名形动副可并列

You should understand your mom.---You should understand , love, respect and appreciate your mom