初一英语期中作文专题训练(含答案)

7B 期中作文专题训练让学生了解扣分细节，才能让学生重视作文的细节，同时一个主题多次修改，从而提高学生用词，造句，布局等能力。

评分细则：1、短语及句子结构不对，人称、时态、语态误用，均为大错。

一处大错扣1 分。

2、通篇人称、时态、标点错误，统扣 2 分。

3、拼写、标点符号、冠词、介词等方面的错误为小错。

3个小错相当于 1 处大错。

4、相同错误，只扣一次。

5、词数不足扣 2 分。

6、书写潦草，卷面不清，乃至影响阅卷，扣2 分。

作文（1）假如你是Andy ，你的朋友Daniel 下周要来玩，请你向他介绍一下你的家乡。

要点： 1. 我的家乡在无锡北部的一个小镇上，离无锡市中心大概二十公里；2.是个居住的好地方。

有公园，可以锻炼；有购物中心，可以买到各种各样的东西；有电影院，可以看电影；3.镇上有许多高楼，我住在公园北面的一套公寓里；4.找到我家很容易；5.盼望着你尽快来玩。

Dear Tommy,I want to tell you something about my hometown._________________________________________________________________________ （10 词）__________________________________________________________________________ （20 词）__________________________________________________________________________ （30 词）__________________________________________________________________________ （40 词）__________________________________________________________________________ （50 词）__________________________________________________________________________ （60 词）__________________________________________________________________________ （70 词）__________________________________________________________________________ （80词）Welcome to my home!Best wishes!请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文，词数70 字左右，必须包含以下所给要点。

1.我理想的家在山脚下，每天都能听到鸟叫，闻到花香。

2.邻居们很友善，乐于帮助别人解决问题。

3.这是个居住的好地方，我喜欢邀请朋友来我家。

4.如果你能来这儿，我会为你准备充足的食物和饮料。

5.我盼望⋯⋯（用一句话表达你的看法）_________________________________________________________________________ （10 词） ________________________________________________________________________ （20 词） ________________________________________________________________________ （30 词） ________________________________________________________________________ （40 词） ________________________________________________________________________ （50 词） ________________________________________________________________________ （60 词） ________________________________________________________________________ （70 词） ________________________________________________________________________ （80 词） ________________________________________________________________________ （90 词）假设你是Jewels, 请给你英国的笔友Neil 写一封信，介绍一下你小区情况，并邀请他到你小区来玩。

词数90 左右。

信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

（neighbourhood 街区、居民区；volunteers 志愿者）。

要点如下：1.我住在镇中心的一套公寓里。

这是一个居住的好地方。

2.小区里有许多志愿者。

他们可以帮你解决各种问题。

这儿优秀的医护人员会使你感觉好多了。

技师来这儿帮你检修冰箱或洗衣机。

所有的艺术家对风格和颜色非常了解，他们会高兴给你提一些建议。

3.我的感受⋯⋯（发挥1-2 句）Dear Neil,I am glad to hear from you, and I hope you will come to my hometown._________________________________________________________________________ （10 词）_________________________________________________________________________ （20 词）_________________________________________________________________________ （30 词）_________________________________________________________________________ （40 词）_________________________________________________________________________ （50 词）_________________________________________________________________________ （60 词）_________________________________________________________________________ （70词）_________________________________________________________________________ （80 词）假如你是Wendy ，春天来了，你准备邀请Millie 去西太湖（West Taihu Lake）野餐，请根据以下提示给Millie 写一封邀请信。

内容必须包括以下要点：1．春天来了，鸟语花香，都认为西太湖是野餐的好地方；2．和朋友们周日上午8 点在校门口集合，准备乘公交车前往，大约半个小时就到了；3．带一些食物、水、小吃等。

4．在西太湖还可以划船、放风筝、环湖骑行和玩游戏。

相信会过得愉快的。

要求： 1. 内容完整，可适当发挥；2. 表达清楚，意思连贯、符合逻辑；3. 文中不得出现真实姓名，不少于80 字。

Dear Millie ，We are going to have a picnic at West Taihu Lake this Sunday.词）词）词）词）词）词）词）词）Yours，Wendy假如你是刘芳，你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部” （ Helping Hands Club ）将吸收新的自愿者。

你 想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格中的内容，用英语写一封自荐信。

姓名 刘芳 性别 女 班级七年级 1 班本人情况14 岁；身体健康；学习努力；心地善良；乐于助人 “爱心 ”表现1. 帮助老年人打扫公寓2. 帮助邻里检查和修理有问题的电脑3. ⋯⋯加入目的1. 加入俱乐部后能交到更多的朋友2. ⋯⋯要求： 1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；2.要点须包括表格中的信息；3.表格中 “⋯”内容由学生自拟；4. 词数： 100 词左右。

信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear chairperson,词） 词） 词） 词） 词） 词） 词） 词） 词）Liu Fang作文 1【范文】Dear Tommy, I want to tellyou somethingabout my hometown.I ' m a girl student from Class 1, Grade 7. Ia vol 'untde elikr eo ft oth bee Helping Hands Club.Yours,My hometown is in a small town in the north of Wuxi. It ' s about 20 kilometresawayfrom the centre of Wuxi. It d 'plasc ea tgoo loive. You can exercise in the parks, buy all kindsof things in the shopping malls and watch films in the cinema. There are a lot of tall buildings in my town. I live in a flat north of the park.It ' s easy to find my home. I ' m lookin gs efoeriwnga rydo tuo soon.Welcome to my home!Best wishes!作文2【范文】My dream home is at the foot of a hill. I can hear the birds sing and smell the flowers every day. My neighbours are friendly and kind. They are ready to help others with their problems. It 'oos da pglace to live. I like to invite my friends to my home. If you can come here,I ' ll prepare plenty of food and drinks for you. I look forward to seeing you some day.作文3【范文】Dear NeilI am glad to hear from you, and I hope you will come to my hometown.I live in a flat in the town centre. It is a good place to live. There are a lot of volunteers in the neighbourhood. They can help you with all kinds of problems. The good doctors and nurses herewill make you feel much better. The engineers are here to help you check and fix your broken fridge or washing machine. All the artists know a lot about styles and colours. They will be happy to give you some ideas. I am happy to have a neighbourhood like this. (90 words)Yours,Jewels作文4【范文】Dear Millie,We are going to have a picnic at West Taihu Lake this Sunday.As spring comes, we can smell flowers and hear birds sing everhwhere at West TaihuLake, so it is a quite good place to have a picnic there.We will meet at the school gate at 8 o 'acyl omcokr onnin gS uanddn leave by bus. It will take us about half an hour to get there.We will do some activities at West Taihu Lake, such as rowing a boat, flying a kite,playing games and going cycling around the lake. Of course, we will also take some food,water and snack. I believe all of us will have a good time.Would you like to come with us?Yours,作文5【范文】Dear chairperson,I 'm a girl student from Class 1, Grade 7. I 'd like to be a volunteer of the Helping Hands Club.I 'm 14 years old. I 'm strong and healthy. I work hard at all my lessons and I 'm good at them.I like computer studies best. I 'm kind to my classmates. So they all like me very much.I 'm also always ready to help others. I often visit the old people with my classmates and help the old people clean their flats. When there is something wrong with my neighbours computers, they usually ask me to check them and help to fix them. Sometimes I go to clean thepark with my friends.I can make more friends after I join the club. I can also learn different skills from the other volunteers in the club. Then I can do more for others and help more people.I 'll be happy if I 'm accepted. I 'm looking forward to your reply.Yours,Liu Fang11。