专题04 咨询建议类-中考英语作文秘笈
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Yours,
Li Qiang
本题要求给China Daily写一封信，反映看到的问题，并提出自己的看法和建议。这是一封书信，要注意书信的基本格式，注意书信的语言选择。根据短文提示，本文就从两个方面来写作，一是自己在上学路上看到的情况，主要用第一人称，一般过去时态进行表达；二是自己的建议和看法，用一般现在时态。
典例二（2016•湖南长沙）假如你是李华，你的好朋友Lisa不久前参加达人秀节目被淘汰了,她为这次失败所困扰，无心学习。请你给她写一封电子邮件，建议她正确地看待达人秀节目，享受参与的过程而不必太在意结果；提醒她实现理想的途径有很多，只有努力才能获得成功；鼓励她好好学习，也不放弃个人爱好，开心地度过每一天。#网
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
结尾部分：
With best wishes.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
We should take measures to control pollution in order to save the world．
We’d better take effective measures to prevent students from cheating on exams．
Yours,
Li Qiang
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
I’m a high school student. One day, on my way to school I found that along the river bank in Zhaowang River Park, the road was badly destroyed and some color bricks had disappeared, which would affect people’s going out. Perhaps these bricks were carried away by some people nearby and kept by themselves. I’m very sorry about that.
参考词汇：destroy毁坏；color bricks彩砖；disappear消失；repair修复；take measures采取措施；protect保护；public facilities公共设施
其他要求：100字左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。学&
Dear Editor,
I’m a high school student____________________________________________________________________
Since the public facilities are often destroyed like that, I suggest that our government should repair the road as soon as possible and take some measures to protect these public facilities. And as for us students, whenever we find someone destroying our public facilities, we should make efforts to stop him or her in time. Only in this way can we have a more beautiful and comfortable city to live in.
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
英语中咨询建议类作文通常以书信的形式呈现，英语书信类作文的常用表达：
开头部分：
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter of April9th.
Why not/Whyห้องสมุดไป่ตู้don’t you
You can have a try/Try to do
Don’t be afraid of
Ibelieve you can do it. Good luck.
In one／a word/Generally speaking
典例一(2016•山东菏泽)假如你是李强，有一天在上学路上，你看到赵王河公园河岸的道路损坏严重，一些彩砖不见去向，影响人们的出行。请用英语给China Daily菏泽频道写一封信，反映这一问题，并提出你的看法和建议。
The government decided to take strong measures against drug abuse．
Urgent measures should be taken to prevent terrorists from carrying out further attacks．学&
本范文层次清楚，条理分明。短文分为两部分，第一部分是写作者在上学路上看到了一些现象。本段叙述清楚，表达准确。用了宾语从句，定语从句等等表达形式，使得本段生动具体。第二部分是作者的看法与建议。条理清楚，中心突出。本段使用了宾语从句，时间状语从句；还准确恰当地使用了as soon as, take measures, as for, make efforts, in this way等等结构，给本段增色不少。
Li Qiang
本题要求给China Daily写一封信，反映看到的问题，并提出自己的看法和建议。这是一封书信，要注意书信的基本格式，注意书信的语言选择。根据短文提示，本文就从两个方面来写作，一是自己在上学路上看到的情况，主要用第一人称，一般过去时态进行表达；二是自己的建议和看法，用一般现在时态。
典例二（2016•湖南长沙）假如你是李华，你的好朋友Lisa不久前参加达人秀节目被淘汰了,她为这次失败所困扰，无心学习。请你给她写一封电子邮件，建议她正确地看待达人秀节目，享受参与的过程而不必太在意结果；提醒她实现理想的途径有很多，只有努力才能获得成功；鼓励她好好学习，也不放弃个人爱好，开心地度过每一天。#网
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
结尾部分：
With best wishes.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
We should take measures to control pollution in order to save the world．
We’d better take effective measures to prevent students from cheating on exams．
Yours,
Li Qiang
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
I’m a high school student. One day, on my way to school I found that along the river bank in Zhaowang River Park, the road was badly destroyed and some color bricks had disappeared, which would affect people’s going out. Perhaps these bricks were carried away by some people nearby and kept by themselves. I’m very sorry about that.
参考词汇：destroy毁坏；color bricks彩砖；disappear消失；repair修复；take measures采取措施；protect保护；public facilities公共设施
其他要求：100字左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。学&
Dear Editor,
I’m a high school student____________________________________________________________________
Since the public facilities are often destroyed like that, I suggest that our government should repair the road as soon as possible and take some measures to protect these public facilities. And as for us students, whenever we find someone destroying our public facilities, we should make efforts to stop him or her in time. Only in this way can we have a more beautiful and comfortable city to live in.
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
英语中咨询建议类作文通常以书信的形式呈现，英语书信类作文的常用表达：
开头部分：
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter of April9th.
Why not/Whyห้องสมุดไป่ตู้don’t you
You can have a try/Try to do
Don’t be afraid of
Ibelieve you can do it. Good luck.
In one／a word/Generally speaking
典例一(2016•山东菏泽)假如你是李强，有一天在上学路上，你看到赵王河公园河岸的道路损坏严重，一些彩砖不见去向，影响人们的出行。请用英语给China Daily菏泽频道写一封信，反映这一问题，并提出你的看法和建议。
The government decided to take strong measures against drug abuse．
Urgent measures should be taken to prevent terrorists from carrying out further attacks．学&
本范文层次清楚，条理分明。短文分为两部分，第一部分是写作者在上学路上看到了一些现象。本段叙述清楚，表达准确。用了宾语从句，定语从句等等表达形式，使得本段生动具体。第二部分是作者的看法与建议。条理清楚，中心突出。本段使用了宾语从句，时间状语从句；还准确恰当地使用了as soon as, take measures, as for, make efforts, in this way等等结构，给本段增色不少。