2020年高考英语专题训练系列 1-2 短文改错说明文(含解析)

1.2短文改错说明文——2020年高考英语专题训练系列

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

(一)

Dear Lucy,

I would like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for Double Ninth Festival.

It was the day for the elder people in our culture. We will go and make dumplings and cake with the elderly people here. We will also spend some fun time together play games, which we hope will make they happy. We should be back around 4:00 on the afternoon.

If you are able to come to with us, please let us know so we will wait for you at the school gate at 9:00 in the morning.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

(二)

I’ll spend this summer holiday in the countryside. Although the city is modern and convenience, there’re still some problems, such as airs pollution, crowdedness and noise. In the countryside I can enjoy comfortable and quiet life. There, the air is fresh but the water is clean. Trees are green and birds is singing. I can go to boating, fishing and swimming in the lake. What’s worse, I can climb the hills. All this will be interesting and good for your health. Above all, I can learn more about nature. So I wanted to go to the countryside for a change. I’m looking forward to the come of my summer holiday.

(三)

What should you do when your parents become angrily? If your parents got mad, try to have a conversation with them about it. Remembering not to shout at them. They usually will try to change. But they will take some times to change because they always get angry, and that is all they know. You might have to change for your method a couple of times. Do any nice t hings for your parents that they don’t expect— like cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean the floors. If this doesn’t work, bring in friend that you feel comfortable with, or have him or her help you.

(四)

One of my favorite hobbies are backcountry hiking. However, after I go hiking, I make sure to have all of the proper necessities. First, I wore proper clothing and hiking shoes. This may include taking water shoes if I have plans for hiking through streams and rivers or a reliable jacket to keep warmly. Next, I get my family and friends to know I will be going and when I would return. In addition to these item, I take plenty of the food and water. Finally, I always pack emergency supplies include a lighter. You never know when you will be in need for these things.

(五)

My hometown is Brighton where isn’t a very big town. It’s in the coast about 50 miles from London and has a population of 300,000. Certainly it isn’t as interested as London. So the air is a lot of cleaner because there’s li ttle pollution here. There’re few factories in Brighton, but not many. So, it isn’t easy to find a job there. My father used to working in a factory which shuts down a year ago and my father lost his job. There’re many hotels and languages schools in the town. In summer the town is full of travelers. My father has decided to open a small gift shop.

(六)

Dear dad and mum,

I have been very happy in the school. I work hardly in the school every day. After class, I play with my classmates. I spend a lot time doing my homework. After lunch, I play the ping-pong with my friends. Then, I spend some time read my English note.At six o’clock, I have my evening class. After that, I had some spare time. At eight o’clock, I go to bed. This is a day in the school. Mum, y ou always tell us “Happiness is vital of our life.” And I