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高中英语教案:建议信写作的导学案学生稿)

高中英语教案:建议信写作的导学案学生稿)

建议信写作的导学案Step 1 Listening tasks1.Listen to a speech. Try to get the main idea and predict in what aspects the speeker will give the tips.The main idea of the speech:______________________________________________ Aspect 1: ____________________________________________________________ Aspect 2:____________________________________________________________ Aspect 3:_____________________________________________________________You see, during the daytime, she was using her eyes to study from books, and during the evening, she was using her eyes to watch soap operas on her smartphone. No wonder her eyes were hurting-she chose the wrong way to relax! When she relaxed by watching soap operas, she was able to rest her brain, but at the expense of her eyes.Let me give you some tips:1.Take a short break every 45 minutes to one hour. Get up from your seat, look into the distance, and try to get some fresh air. You will feel greatly refreshed.2.Exercise for 30 minutes or more a day. Try a new sport, ride a bike to school, or walk a lot. It will take your mind off your daily worries and it's healthy, too.3.Take up a hobby. Give yourself 20 minutes a day to do something you really like. Sing and dance,play badminton or go bowling, paint. This will make you happier and help reduce stress.Remember: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. With these techniques, you should feel much more relaxed, allowing you to perform much better in your schoolwork.Step 2 Criteria for writing assessmentStep 3 Writing task假定你是李华,你的英国好友Tom发邮件说他最近学习压力很大。

如何写建议信导学案-高考英语作文复习专项

如何写建议信导学案-高考英语作文复习专项

如何写建议信一、审题1.确定文体:这是一篇建议信。

2.主体时态:现在的情况用现在时。

3.主体人称:以they, we为主。

二、谋篇第一段:介绍写信的目的、提出问题。

第二段:提出建议。

第三段:归纳总结。

三、例句第一段:介绍写信的目的、提出问题1. As we all know, the importance of ...(主题) can’t be stated.e.g. As we all know, the importance of health can’t be stated.众所周知,健康的重要性无法表述2. However, it’s very mon for ...(对象) to ...(做某事)e.g. However, it’s very mon for many teenagers to spend too much time on digital products and eat too much junk food.然而,许多青少年花太多时间在数码产品上,吃太多垃圾食品是很常见的。

3. It has lead to serious ...(具体方面) problems.e.g. It has lead to serious phycial and mental health problems.它已导致严重的身心健康问题。

第二段:提出建议1. So it’s high time that ...(做某事)So it’s high time that teenagers changed bad living habits and develop healthy and positive ones.所以现在是我们青少年改变不良生活习惯,养成健康积极的生活习惯的时候了。

2. Firstly, we should ...(建议做的事情)e.g. Firstly, we should cut out sugary, fatty and salty drinks and foods and eat a healthy and balanced food.首先,我们应该减少含糖、脂肪和含盐的饮料和食物,吃健康均衡的食物。

高考英语复习应用文建议信写作指导讲义

高考英语复习应用文建议信写作指导讲义

高考英语应用文建议信写作指导一、建议信写作1.写信原因及目的;2.提出具体建议并说明原因;3.希望采纳建议,表达美好祝愿。

二、建议信写作可用句式1.I'm sorry to hear that (you are having trouble in...) Such problems are quite normal.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾得知(你在……遇到了麻烦)这样的问题很正常。

也许下面的建议是有帮助的。

2.You have asked me for advice with regard to/concerning...., and I’ll make some suggestions here.你问我关于....的建议,我在这里提出一些建议。

3.I’m more than delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on...我非常高兴收到你的来信,询问我对……的建议。

4.I’m writing to share my views on this problem, which I think may be helpful to you.我写信是为了分享我对这个问题的看法,我认为这可能对你有帮助。

5.I would like to make some constructive suggestions/offer you the following suggestions, hoping to help you.我想给你一些建设性的建议,希望能对你有所帮助。

6.I do hope/Hopefully, these suggestions will be of great used to you.我希望这些建议对你会有很大的帮助。

7.I sincerely hope that you’ll find my suggestions beneficial.我真诚地希望我的建议对你有帮助。

高中英语示范写作之 建议信导学案

高中英语示范写作之 建议信导学案

高中英语示范写作之建议信导学案建议信是向别人提出合理性的建议,以便使对方接受自己的想法、主张,解决有关问题,因此要求建议信要写得简明扼要,目的明确,理由充足,具有合理性和说服力。

Step2 How to write a letter of advice一、开头段: 背会模板二、正文: 1)explaining what he could do建议:怎么做?2)why he could do this 理由:为什么这么做?三、结尾段: 希望:建议有效背会模板〖开头〗①I’m sorry to learn that you are having trouble doing something. ②However, the situation is easy to change if youtake my advice. ③Here are some tips to help you.〖正文〗①In the first place, to solve the problem,I think that you’d better do…If you do this, you will find it …to do…②what’s more ,you should do…Only in this way can you do ….③In addition , it would also be a good idea if you…By doing this,….〖结尾〗1.I believe if you follow my advice ,you can manage to overcomethe difficulty. ②I hope you will find these tips useful.Step3 Exercise 仿写句型实战演练假如你叫李华,你的朋友Bob最近在学英语方面有麻烦,给你写信咨询你如何学英语的问题。

人教版必修三 如何写建议信--How to write a letter of advice

人教版必修三 如何写建议信--How to write a letter of advice

附件一:学生导学案如何写建议信--How to write a letter of advice【学习目标】1、掌握建议信相关的词汇、词块和句型。

2、了解建议信的写作框架,学会多角度提供建议,合理拓展文章内容进行话题写作。

3、学会用定语从句、非谓语等丰富形式来表达自己的思想,使句子更富有表现力。

【学习重点和难点】1、从不同角度提供建议,合理拓展文章内容完成建议信写作。

2、学会运用连接词和高级表达法提升写作水平。

【课前导学设计】回顾写作评分标准一、评分原则1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。

2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。

3.词数少于80和多于120的,从总分中减去2分。

4.评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。

5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。

评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。

英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

6.如书写较差以至影响交际,将其分数降低一个档次。

二、内容要点1.表达你的同情和鼓励2.建议的内容(提出建议的理由)3.表达你的希望三、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档(21~25分)完全完成了试题规定的任务。

-覆盖所有内容要点。

-应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。

-语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。

-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。

完全达到了预期的写作目的。

第四档(16~20分)完成了试题规定的任务。

-虽漏掉一两个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。

-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。

-语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。

-应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。

达到了预期的写作目的。

第三档(11~15分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。

-虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。

-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。

高中英语写作之建议信 (Letter of suggestion)-学案

高中英语写作之建议信 (Letter of suggestion)-学案

建议信(Letter of suggestion)关于堵车中国目前已经成为世界第一汽车产销国,这是我国居民生活水平提高的表现。

同时,城市道路拥堵问题也已经十分突出,如何解决城市道路拥堵的问题呢?请你就这个问题按如下提纲和要求以“On Traffic Jam”为题为某英文杂志写一篇英文稿件。

提纲:①目前城市道路拥堵问题突出并简要说明原因。

②你对解决城市道路拥堵问题的具体建议[范文]On traffic JamNowadays traffic in cities is becoming increasingly heavier. In my opinion, there are at least two reasons accounting for this phenomenon. First of all, with the improvement of living standards, more and more families have their own cars, which results in a sea of cars in all corners of the city. What’s more, aging roads and road construction should be an important factor. In addition, quite a few people’s not following traffic rules can also lead to a traffic jam.As for my suggestions, firstly, our government should speed up road construction and make a more reasonable transport network setting. Secondly, it is advisable for everyone to obey traffic rules. Thirdly, some drivers should not only establish safety awareness but also better their driving skills.(1) 建议信写作注意事项写作目的是提出建议或忠告。

高中英语(人教版)写作训练--建议信导学案

高中英语(人教版)写作训练--建议信导学案

写作训练----- 建议信班级:姓名:编号:【学习目标】At the end of the class, the students will be able to:1. Accumulate some words and expressions by reading a passage.2. Finish a composition with the useful expressions.【学习重难点】1.Remember the useful words and expressions in suggesting letter.2.How to write correct sentences.【评价任务】1.通过自学,归纳如何写建议信。

2.通过背诵,积累尽可能多的单词和短语。

3.通过完成一篇书面表达,检测学生是否学会建议信的写法。

【导学过程】一、自主学习:建议信要用什么人称和时态?二、朗读下面文章,并积累在建议信中有用的表达。

Dear Peter,I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes,Li Hua三、建议信的常用表达A.建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图)1.After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that…2.I am very glad to hear that you want to…3.I know you have trouble in… after reading your letter.4.I am writing to you for the purpose of…5.I am writing to share some advice with you.6.In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action.B. 建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议,井然有序。

Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting应用文之建议信导学案-高中英语人教

Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting应用文之建议信导学案-高中英语人教

应用文写作——建议信课前诵读advise v.建议suggest vt.建议remend v.建议offer vt.提供practical adj.实用性的useful adj.有用的helpful adj;.有帮助的get improved 得到改善be beneficial to对···有好处solution n.解决办法schedule n.日程安排Additionally其次Furthermore 其次Eventually最终put forward提出be supposed to 应该follow one’s advice听从某人的建议turn to sb.for help向某人求助take my advice into account考虑我的建议昨天收到我的学生Tom的一条语音信息,信息中他提到进入高中后,在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难,这让他感到很苦恼。

请帮我给他回一封建议信,帮其解决困难,促进学习。

内容:1.表示理解关心;2.提出具体建议及理由;3.表达希望。

注意:词数80左右。

◆建立提纲Build the outlinePart1 Beginning Show your_________A Letter of Advice__________Part2 Body__________Part3 Ending Finish the letter with your ________◆头脑风暴Brainstorm:Ways to help improve English ?◆小组讨论Discussion1.How to show your understanding of the problem?2.How to give your advice and reasons on the problem?/How to help improve his English?3.How to finish the letter with your hope?◆常用表达Proper&Useful Expressions:Reference:理解:I understand quite well that...I'm sorry to hear/know/learn that...I know how it feels to...It happens to everyone.I know you didn't mean to...Everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong.建议:I remend that...I think you should ...Why not...You'd better...Why don't you...How about...I'd like to suggest...What do you think...?My advice is/ would be...It might be a good idea to..希望:I hope these suggestions will be of help to you.Whatever you decide to do, good luck!I will be glad if you find my suggestions practical and useful.If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.How to make your writing coherent(连贯) and logical(有逻辑的)?Linking words(衔接词): first, second, third ...for one thing... for another一方面,另一方面★学生互评Evaluation:anize all the parts in a good order内容齐全,逻辑通畅2.give advice with good reasons建议实用,有理有据e expressions we have learnt活学活用,表达生动4.correct grammar, beautiful handwriting语法准确,书写优美评价模板Make ments(评价):I think his/her position 1/2/3/4/(以上4点说23点即可)However he/she should pay attention to spelling and avoid grammar mistakes.(应该注意拼写和避免语法错误)His handwriting is just so so(书写一般), His letter can’t reach 80 words.(未达到80词) HomeworkNeed to do:Polish your writing according to your peers’and teacher’s advice.Choose to do:【2018年全国I卷】假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗,请你回复邮件。

高级中学高中英语选修六 Unit1unit1 writing导学提纲

高级中学高中英语选修六 Unit1unit1 writing导学提纲

学生课堂导学提纲(英语学科)编号:2018 年12 月日编制人:课题:B6U1 Writing--建议信的写作班级: 姓名: 小组: 评价:【学习目标】Enable the students to compose a composition about persuasive letter.【重点难点】Important point Trai n the students’ writing skills.Difficult point How to improve the students’ writing ability?【导学流程】建议信写作要点:【写作指导】高考中一般都会给出书信的格式,因此我们主要从书信的正文进行指导。

建议信的正文一般分三部分:1. 首先表明写作意图;2. 然后写出具体建议,要注意语气诚恳、委婉;3. 最后礼貌地表达希望建议被采纳的愿望。

【常用表达】首段:表明写作意图,陈述事由。

It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on ...I am writing to express my views concerning ...I want to make a suggestion about ...主体:提出建议并阐述理由。

I would like to suggest that ...If I were you, I would ...If you were to ..., I believe ...It seems to me that you could ...In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following measures ...I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...结尾:希望收信人接受建议。

注意措辞要有礼貌,使对方容易接受。

应用文写作之建议信导学案高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

应用文写作之建议信导学案高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

应用文写作之建议信[学习目标]1.To understand the structure and features of a good letter of Advice;2.To master some useful expressions and sentence patterns for Advice;3.To practice the basic steps of letter of Advice.[自主梳理]Writing sample(2023 北京) 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。

你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动, 他发来邮件询问你的建议。

请你用英文给他回复, 内容包括:1.活动形式;2. 活动内容。

注意: 1. 写作词数应为100个左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,Delightedly hearing that you are planning a club activity themed“Green Beijing", I am writing to make my suggestions for the event.To begin with, I suggest organizing a walking tour around the city to explore the green spaces in Beijing, which will allow participants to experience the beauty of the city's parks and gardens while promoting ecofriendly transportation. Another effective activity is planting trees to contribute to the city's green efforts. This could be a collaborative effort with local volunteers or environmental organizations that are mitted to the preservation of Beijing’s natural environment.I do hope these suggestions are helpful. I'm looking forward to your successfully organizing the event.Yours,Li HuaStep1 Learn about the structure and features of a good letter of Advice①Beginning: stating the truth (background)writing _______________1.The structure of a letter of Advice:①Main body: specific _______________Supporting reasons①Ending:________________of main pointExpress wishes2.The features of a good letter of Advice:_______________________________________________________________________________ Step2 Master how to write the beginning and endingPart 1 Write the beginning and endingUseful expressions for the beginning:1.give sb some advice (on) 给某人提建议2.as follows 如下3.have difficulty/trouble in doing sth 在做某事时遇到困难4.make full use of/make the most of 充分利用5.ask sb for advice/suggestions向某人征求意见6.find..helpful/useful/beneficial认为……有用7.take part in/participation 参加8.follow/take one's advice听从某人的建议9.get improved得到改善10.change for the better有所好转11. in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view依我看来12. I have received your letter saying that you.我已收到你的来信,得知你….…13.I would like to suggest that../I would like to make a remendation that./I am writing to advise you../If I were you, I would.../May I suggest that.I would like to put forward the suggestion that. 我建议......Sentence patterns for the introduction:①I’m more than glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...我很高兴收到你的来信,问我关于……的问题。

高中英语建议信教案

高中英语建议信教案

高中英语建议信教案高中英语建议信教案【篇一:如何写英语建议信及英语课例】如何写英语建议信及课例step1:教学设计思路:how to write a letter of proposalstep1: list the key words:step2:list the useful sentences.step3:list the linking wordsstep4: make the outline5.assignment 完成邀请信教学案内容how to write a letter of proposal你是李华,每年一度的牡丹花会将要举行,你想给市长秘书写一封建议信,建议他能邀请来自美国(baymax)作为吉祥物mascot,1.写信的目的,建议他参加开幕式(opening ceremony),时间:4月10日20时地点:洛阳歌剧院(luoyang opera house)2.建议邀请原因(可爱,友好,喜欢运动,大家都会喜欢)3.真心希望市长秘书能接受建议,一起参加开幕式.dear mayor’s secretary:i’m li hualist the key words:2.限时训练1 填空dear sir or madam,i am glad to hear that the library is to take some _________ to _______ its service and facilities. so i am writing to ____ my proposals.we all know that libraries play a vital _____ in the education and ______________ of the general reader. so an _________ way, i think, is ___ purchase the latest publications as ______ as make sure _____ it has a full set of classical works. another important facility i _______ is the internet via computers__________the library will expand its services to a larger number of readers.all in ___,i think a library should take all _________ measures to keep up with the times. i will highly _________ your consideration of my proposals.2.1即使训练1 汉译英para.11. 我很高兴听到2.我写信给你提供我的建议para.21.我们都知道图书馆在...起重要作用2.所以我认为一个高效的方法是3.我建议的另外一个设备是para.31.总而言之,我认为一个图书馆应该2.我会非常感激你考虑我的建议step2:useful sentences1.i am glad to hear that ..2.i am writing to offer my proposals3.all in all,i think a library should do...4. i will highly appreciate your consideration of my proposals.3.限时训练2 单句改错1.i’m very glad to have received the letter you send me two weeks before .2.for one reason, what you are majoring is bad needed nowadays in china.3. i’ve been thinking about the question you asked me. in my opinion, you should come back after you finish your study in abroad.4.in fact, i know a few big companies in our city is hoping to hire people like you.5.personally i think it quite easily for you to find a good job here.6.therefore, i insist it’s the good idea for you to return back and serve your motherland.7.for another reason, i believe it will be much more convenient for you to look for your parents as they are getting old.3.1即时训练2 连句成篇keysstep3:list the linking words②for one reason ,⑦for another reason ⑥therefore2. 根据所展示的所学的语言知识为词汇和句型载体,进行建议信的写作。

高二英语导学案-高中英语作文 建议信

高二英语导学案-高中英语作文 建议信

高二英语导学案高中英语作文一、建议信【学习目标】熟悉并练习应用文中建议信的写法。

预习案高中英语作文一般分为记叙文、议论文、看图作文和应用文等。

其中应用文最为基础和常见,它包括:建议信、邀请信、道歉信、抱怨信、投诉信、感谢信、拒绝信、祝贺信、倡议书、申请信、求职信、推荐信、慰问信、发言稿、报道、启事、便条、通知和旅游解说词等。

探究案1.写作攻略建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。

建议信有可能是写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;也可能是写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。

建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要礼貌当先。

因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。

具体写作步骤:首段:表明写作意图。

陈述事由,简单介绍自己,注意语气。

主体段落:应该首先肯定对方的优点,然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。

结尾段:对提出的建议进行总结,要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。

2.必背模版句型I would like to suggest that……我想建议……I am writing to express my views concerning……我写信来是要表达有关……我的看法。

You have asked for my advice to…… and I will try to make some suggestions.你问我有关……的事情,我会尝试着提出一些建议。

If I were you,I woul d……如果我是你,我会……第1页共 2 页班级:小组:姓名:评价:It seems to me that you could…我认为你可以……I think it would be more beneficial if you could……我想如果你能……,可能会更好。

I believe you will take my advice into account. 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。

高三英语一轮复习建议信导学案

高三英语一轮复习建议信导学案

建议信Read and think假定你是高中生李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信就下周三要参加孔子学院(the Confucius Institute)的面试征询你的意见。

请你写封回信,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.提出建议(至少两条);3.表示祝愿一、审题1.确定文本类型:__________________________2.确定时态:__________________________3.确定人称:__________________________Dear Peter,Glad to receive your letter asking me for some advice on the interview for the Confucius Institute scheduled for this ing Wednesday. I’m writing to remind you of what to prepare for.To begin with, it would be wise of you to read some books about Confucius, which helps to better understand traditional Chinese cultures. What’s more, it would be beneficial to learn a few Chinese greetings. Additionally, wearing Hanstyle clothing will make you stand out among the candidates and impress the interviewers greatly.I do hope my proposal could be practical. Wish you good luck!Yours,Li Hua1. Who is the writer of the letter?2. Who is the receiver of the letter?3. What is the writer’s writing purpose?Read and analyze1.给某人提建议2.如下3.在某时遇到困难4.充分利用5.向某人征求建议6.得到改善7.依我看来8.把...考虑在内9.坚持10.保持良好的心态11.应付巨大的压力常用句式一、开头1.On hearing the news that you are ing to China for a visit, I _________________________________.得知你要来中国参观,我感到由衷的开心。

高中英语写作 建议信 教案

高中英语写作 建议信 教案

书面表达—建议信教案班级:高三(2)一、教学内容分析:英文写作是学习英语的一种途径和手段,它不仅是一种能力,而且能有力地促进学生的英语学习。

近年来书面表达在高考试题中占有重要地位。

因此搞好书面表达教学就显得十分重要。

二、学情分析:高三学生接触过书面表达题材的作文,但写作水平普遍低下,对写作惧怕,不感兴趣,在考试中失分较多。

三、教学目标:1. 了解建议信的格式,掌握建议信的常用表达词汇和句型,能正确写出建议信息。

2. 能有效审题,从题目中提取有效信息、并能按照题目要写出完整的建议信。

3. 能通过互相评改、赏析习作,进一步培养学生牢固掌握书面通知的写法。

四、教学重点:掌握建议信常用词汇、有用句型和建议信的格式。

五、教学难点:较好的完成建议信的写作。

六、教学用具导学案、黑板、多媒体七、教学过程Step 1. Warming up展示高考英语作文评分标准。

Step 2. Lead-in1. 了解建议信的特点和格式。

(1) 建议信写作注意事项:写作目的是提出建议或忠告。

观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。

(2)写作流程图: ①说明写信的目的②提出建议③希望对方采纳建议,并表示谢意、盼望回复。

2. 学习建议信的常用词汇和句型。

(作业检查)词汇:建议: 名词advice(不可数) = suggestion(可数) / recommendation动词advise sb to do ... suggest that sb (should) do... (虚拟语气) 提高:improve解决问题:solve the problem 取得进步:make great progress 句型:第一部分:说明写信的目的1)I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ..........(引出主题).2)I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to 过渡句:Here are a few suggestions for your reference./Here are a few suggestions for you.第二部分:介绍详情、提出建议提出建议的常用句式:1)I’d like to suggest that ……2)In my opinion ……3)I would like to make a recommendation that …4)If I were you, I would ……第三部分:希望采纳建议,美好祝愿。

高中英语建议信作文模板教案

高中英语建议信作文模板教案

高中英语建议信作文模板教案篇1:高中英语作文--建议信建议信(1)-----阐释原因;提出建议类请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信,反映一下你校食堂的几点问题,以引起学校重视,并针对问题提出两条合理建议。

问题包括:1.菜价昂贵,菜市单一;2.排队时间长,浪费午休时间;3.味道不佳,浪费现象严重。

注意:1.词数不少于120;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇: 食堂canteen dear principal, recently, many students are discuing the problems of the canteen.____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _ i sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions.thank you! yours, li hua 作文范文:dear principal, some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited.another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have le time to have a rest.meanwhile,some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste.the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various.需注意的词汇、表达:1.delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具) price 价格2.lower /bring down the price 降低价格3.at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格4.varieties of dishes 种类多样的菜品5.for one thing,…….for another,……6.make sb (not)do sth7.wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time8.the kinds of food are .表达食堂出现的问题:9.the prices of dishes are so high that many of us can’t afford them.10.there are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory./ which can’t satisfy our needs. 11.it takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon.12.the food in the canteen doesn’t taste . the taste of food in the canteen isn’t 13.the food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted 14.it’s a waste of time to stand in line for a long time. 15.the food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food.16.in the long run, it’s bad for our health and study. 17.it goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon.表达提出的建议:18.improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems.19.i think it’s neceary to provide more kinds of food.20.it’shigh time that we took measures to solve the problems. so it’s high time for us to take measures 21.to solve the problems, i think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the present condition to satisfy the students’needs. 22.we hope the canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price.23.the canteen should open more windows so that we needn’t wait so long. 24.as far as i’m concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality.what’s more, different kinds of food should be provided. 25.measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen. 建议模板:dear …., i’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to…….(引出话题).here are a few suggestions.first of all, it is important to do sth.then, it also helps to do sth.besides, it should be a good idea to do sth. 建议句型积累:1.many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but i think the following may be the most effective ones.2.i’d like to make some suggestions on …….3.it’s of great importance for sb to do sth. it’s neceary for sb to do sth4.it would be a good idea for sb to do sth./ it would be a better idea if…….5.it contributes /helps a lot if ………6.i suggest that …../ my suggestion is that … it’s better to do sth 8.measures are supposed to be taken to do sth we are supposed to take effective measures to do sth 9.it’s high time that sb sth./ it’s high time for sb to do sth 建议信(2)-----阐释原因;提出建议类假定你是中学生李华。

导学案高中英语建议信写作

导学案高中英语建议信写作

黄骅新世纪中学高一年级英语导教案How to write a letter for advice学习目标学习重点学习难点学法掌握建议信类作文的基本写作构造。

学会用英语正确表达写作内容。

学会依据题目要求中的中文重点,由词成句,由句成文,最后使用适合连结词组句成篇,实现用词正确,行文流利。

学习获守信息、办理信息进行建议信写作的能力。

认真审题 ---理清重点 ---译写重点 ---连点成句 ---检查润饰 ---定稿成文【自学】一 . 写作攻略:1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出自己的建讲和忠告。

2.建议信有可能是写给个人,就其碰到的某个问题提出自己的见解和看法;也可能是写给某个组织和机构,就其改良服务提出建讲和忠告。

3.建议信要写出写信的原由,建议的内容,提出建议的原由,提出的原由要入情入理,语气必定要礼貌当先。

所以,建议信要写得简洁简要、目的明确、拥有合理性和说服力。

二 . 写作模式:1.首段:表示写作企图。

陈说事由,注意语气。

2.主体段落:提出建议并论述原由。

3.结尾段:礼貌地表达希望收信人接受建议的梦想。

三. 写作步骤:1.审题(①体裁:书信格式;②时态:一般此刻时或一般未来时;③构造:开头,正文和结尾;④要求:字数和内容)2.列纲要3.连词成句4.连句成篇5.润饰修正(使用较高级词汇和试试进行多样化表达方式及巧用倒装句)6 定稿【佳句背诵】1.很快乐你来信问我怎样保持健康。

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to keep fit.2.这里是对于未来城市运输的几条建议。

Here are a few suggestions for the future of transport in cities.3.重要的是你应当知道你不用精晓此道。

It is important to know that you don’thave to be good at it.4.不论什么时候,假如你能够疯狂地大叫英语,这将会对你有利处。

Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting导学案-高中英语人教版

Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting导学案-高中英语人教版

Unit 1 Teenage life Reading for WritingHow to write a letter of advice建议信写作注意事项1、表明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由,其中提出的理由要合情合理,具有说服力。

2、语气要诚恳/委婉,注意礼貌当先。

3、内容简明扼要、目的明确。

4、建议的角度要多样化,避免重复,而且要注意建议之间的衔接。

5、基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。

Sentence patterns:建议信开头句式:I know you are having trouble (doing ...)I am glad to receive your letter asking my advice on ... (很高兴收到你就...征求我建议的来信)Here are some tips / a few suggestions to help you. (这里有一些帮助你的建议)I think you can make it if ... (如果你听从以下建议,我认为你会做到的)表达建议常用句式:First(ly), Secondly, Thirdly,Last but not least(最后但并不是最不重要的)If I were you, I would ...In my opinion, it would be wise to ...In my opinion, the best way to solve the problem is ...In my opinion, you’d better ...I strongly believe that ...表达建议常用句式:I suggest that you should ...My tips are as follows ...Only in this way can we ...To solve the problem, we should ...Why not do sth?/Why don’t you do sth?建议信结尾常用句式:I hope you will find these ideas useful. (我希望你会发现这些办法有用)I believe that if you follow my advice, you will ... (我相信,如果你听从我的建议,你会...)I believe, with your trying, you can manage to .. (我相信,有了你的努力,你会成功做到...)典例示范假定你是李华,你的笔友Amy最近写了一封email给你,表达了因体重过重带来的烦恼。

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黄骅新世纪中学高一年级英语导学案How to write a letter for advice
【自学】
一. 写作攻略:1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出自己的建议和忠告。

2.建议信有可能是写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;也可能是写给某个组织和机构,就其改进服务提出建议和忠告。

3.建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要礼貌当先。

因此,建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。

二. 写作模式:1.首段:表明写作意图。

陈述事由,注意语气。

2.主体段落:提出建议并阐述理由。

3.结尾段:礼貌地表达希望收信人接受建议的愿望。

三. 写作步骤:1.审题(①体裁:书信格式;②时态:一般现在时或一般将来时;③结构:开头,正文和结尾;④要求:字数和内容)2.列提纲3.连词成句4.连句成篇5.润色修正(使用较高级词汇和尝试进行多样化表达方式及巧用倒装句)6定稿
【佳句背诵】
1.很高兴你来信问我如何保持健康。

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to keep fit.
2.这里是关于未来城市运输的几条建议。

Here are a few suggestions for the future of transport in cities.
3.重要的是你应该知道你不必精通此道。

It is important to know that you don’t have to be good at it.
4.无论什么时候,如果你可以疯狂地大喊英语,这将会对你有好处。

It will help if you can yell out English crazily whenever possible.
5.你还是有空就休息一下的好。

It is a good idea for you to have a rest while you can.
过程及内容
一.核心单词。

1.建议n.____/____
2.重要的adj. ____
3.练习v. ____
4.可能的 adj. ____
5.主意,想法n. ____
6.文化n. ____
二.核心短语。

1.收到某人的来信_______/____________
2.帮助某人去做某事____________
3.向某人学习____________
4.和某人交朋友____________
5.中文学习班____________
6.期待,盼望____________
三.合作探究,翻译句子。

1.很高兴收到你来信询问我如何学好中文。

这有一些建议。

________________________
2.首先,参加中文学习班是非常重要的。

(1)________________________(2)________________________3.你可以向老师学习和与同学们一起练习。

________________________
4.其次,无论什么时候,如果你能看中文电视、报纸和书刊,这将会对你学习汉语有帮助。

________________________
5.而且,学唱中文歌曲也是不错的办法。

这样做,你会发现学习汉字更容易。

________________________
_____________________
6.最后,多交中国朋友应该是一个好主意。

他们能帮助你去了解中国文化和学习汉语。

________________________________________________
7.下次请尝试用汉语给我写信。

我期待着你的来信。

________________________
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。

请你根据下列要点给他回信。

1. 表示你很乐意他能向你求助。

2. 参加中文学习班。

3. 看中文电视、报纸和书刊。

4. 学唱中文歌曲。

5. 交中国朋友。

注意:可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。

词数:100左右。

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六.作业之实战演练二。

假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Jack正在为即将到来的考试焦虑不已,严重影响了生活和学习,为此写信向你求助。

请根据以下要点用英语给他回一封信。

1. 表示你很乐意帮助他。

2. 制定复习计划,树立信心。

3. 坚持锻炼身体,保持健康。

4. 保持良好睡眠。

注意:可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。

词数:100左右。

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