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◆命题作文<社会热点类>题1 [四川师范大学2015研]In September 2014, the Chinese e-commerce giant Alibaba’s flotation in the US has caused a stir in the work. Undoubtedly, Ma Yun becomes the center of attention in public again. What do you know about Ma Yun and what inspiration you’ve gained from his life ex perience and success? Write an essay of about 400 words on the topic. You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.【参考范文】The Unstoppable Power of PersistenceIn last September, Alibaba, a counterpart to eBay or Amazon in China, floated on the stock market with a value of £140 billion approximately. With such a record-breaking IPO, Ma Yun, the founder of this prosperous company, has become the centre of public discussion again. From my perspective, it is his persistence in chasing his dreams that impresses me most.Throughout his life, Ma Yun himself admitted that he had experienced rejections for many times, including less good performance in entry exams for colleges in China, setbacks in finding a job and so on. However, being clearly aware of his strengths and weaknesses, he chose to sharpen his proficiency in English. Inspite of the limited resources and less ideal environment for learning English, he managed to practice his oral English as well as broaden his horizons by giving foreign tourists free guide every morning in his hometown Hangzhou. And this experience lasting for nine years proved to be conducive to both the improvement in his languages abilities and the formation of a brand new world view.While working as a translator for a US trading company, Ma Yun decided to start his own online business in China, aiming to build a large Internet market to connect consumers and companies from different regions or countries. And that is how Alibaba began. At the beginning, there were only fifteen employees in 1999. But by now, this Chinese e-commerce giant has, according to Ma Yun, directly or indirectly created 40 million jobs in China. And its founder plans to expand market abroad. Nevertheless, the transformation from a startup to a listed company with the largest initial public offering in history, did not proceed smoothly. If he had not manages to attracted investment in 2000, Alibaba could have failed like many other Internet companies did at that time. What’s more, rumors or doubts have never completely disappeared, whether it was at the early stage or at the prosperous period of Alibaba. As for Ma Yun, scarcely does he allow these noises to overwhelm his inner voices. It’s his persistence and commitment that make his dreams come true in the end.To sum up, just as the old saying goes, constant dropping wears the stone. As long as we pursuit our dreams like what Ma Yun does, nothing could stop us from realizing them, since persistence not only gives us the hope to hold on to ourdreams, but also enables us to fight against obstacles all along.【范文点评】题目要求围绕阿里巴巴在美国成功上市这一事件，谈谈作为中国互联网巨头传奇人物马云，他的经历给了你怎样的启发，撰写一篇约400词左右的文章。

文章开篇点题，通过简要概述阿里巴巴美国上市一事，表示马云身上的坚持是最打动作者的品质。

第二段和第三段，分别围绕马云创立阿里巴巴前后两个时期，讨论了现在看似光鲜的马云其实在生活中也遭受到了许多的困难和挫折。

但是他却始终没有放弃，并列举了他在青少年时期连续九年通过给外国游客在杭州作免费导游来学习外语，同时了解国外的文化和趋势这一具体事例，对他的坚持不懈予以佐证。

文章最后一段，总结全文，再次强调了坚持在追寻个人梦想这一过程中的重要性。

文章论据翔实，逻辑清晰，值得学习。

题2 [扬州大学2017研]Directions:Food safety has become an issue of great concern in China over the last few years since closely related to people’s liv es and health and economic development and social harmony. Media reporting has tended to focus on extreme cases of poisoning from food additives or contamination by heavy metals, but food safety encompasses a wide range of problems that occur at different points in the chain from the production to the consumption of food. The risks involved vary widely from product to product and present very different kinds and levels of threat to human health from sources including bacteria, viruses and parasites, chemicals, growth hormones and veterinary drugs.There is a host of sources of food safety problems such as abnormal levels of pesticides, antibiotics, heavy metals, bacteria or viruses that could put consumers at risk. What do you think are the nature and causes of the food safety problems and what are the possible changes that could be made to deal with rampant food safety issues in China? Write a composition of about 300 words expressing your own opinions. You should use your own ideas, knowledge or experience to generate support for your argument. Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET.Note: In the first part of your writing you should state clearly the thesis statement (i.e., your main argument), and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.【参考范文】On Food SafetyWe don’t have to worry about the shortage of food nowadays in our nation as the economy and technology have been more advanced than the past. However, we are faced with more and more social problems in many fields, such as health insurance, children’s education and so on. Over the past couple of years, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various media. The problem of food safety has become a hot button across society. The prevalence of food safety problem has greatly impacted public health, which the government could notafford to ignore, according to the online edition of the People Daily.There are a couple of driving forces, I would argue, behind this undesirable tide. First and foremost, in the course of the rapid economic evolution, we ignore moral education. As a result, some producers make fake commodities or products of poor quality in order to make more profits. More importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend. Last but not least, the public especially customers from poor families, are not alert enough to the safety of food.In view of the graveness of the problem, prompt and strict measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend. To begin with, it is imperative that relevant laws and regulation should be enforced in a stringent way to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry again. Meanwhile, the government should launch a massive moral campaign to educate all citizens to be alert to food quality. What’s more, moral ideas of producing and keeping food safe ought to be accepted by everyone. I am firmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy more risk-free foods in the days ahead.【范文点评】题目要求讨论食品安全问题的成因及解决方法。