2011雅思强化写作课程 S1 TASK1概论和基本策略

unique ones.
Diversity is a basic requirement
If there is anyone out there who still doubts that America is a place where all things are possible, who still wonders if the dream of our founders is alive in our time, who still questions the power of our democracy, tonight is your answer. ----奥巴马2008
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Point 1-4. Criteria for Task 1 评分标准
金牌教程 P4 Interpreting the band score；
金牌教程 P9
评分标准
在TASK1答题卷(见附录答题纸)下方考官阅卷栏里我们可以 看到4个缩写符号：TA，CC ，LR和GRA，它们分别代表了 考官阅卷时侧重的4个方面：
TA and LR 高分秘诀
Diversity and make comparison as much as possible 句子结构要力求有变化、不要总是一个句 型； 应该熟练掌握一些固定句型和表达方式。
Sample ：应用评分法则从4分到7分 +
Sample
wenku.baidu.comAAA
BBB
Period -1
Period -2
7分表达
During period-1, AAA increased ……, while there was a decline for that of BBB …… During period-2, AAA went down …… ; whereas, there was a sharp increase for that of BBB …… Variety in sentences structure， grammatical competence ； 知识技巧点： There + be 句型 描述变化
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3. contrast and comparison Make comparison where it is relevant Similarity Contrast : 点=（数据数量）差异; 线=趋势(方向，斜率)差异； Back to key points menu
Comparing 的要素
Revision
[The] A number of people oppose to /object to [against] the space-researches because, as they claim, it is an extravagant and wasteful practice [means] for the developing –countries.
6分表达
During period-1, AAA increased …… , while BBB dropped …… however During period-2, AAA went down …… ; whereas, BBB rose up…… 三个转折连词 做比较 Comparison and contrast where it is relevant
目前雅思考试图表类作文有以下几种常见形式： Curve graph; （教材P108， Cam7-P53 ） Bar chart; / Column chart ; (教材P111，P112); Pie chart; (教材P103，P110); Table (教材P67); Map (新题型) (教材P137，P139) Mix graphs 混合型 (教材P107，P114，P116); Flow chart 流程图（教材P129 ）
TASK1 更具有技巧性 8*0.4+6*0.6=6.8 7.0 事半功倍，最佳方案 5*0.4+7*0.6=6.2 6.0
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Point 1-3 topics types in present-days‘ tests
1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7.
教师对深度理解评分法则
TA CC
Length of the response
Important Data
Testing focus
Comparisons
2
Paragraphs 分4-5段
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Data Grouping/ ordering
2
Linkers or transition signs
2
4
● 培训类Task 2 和 学术类Task 2 ESSAY Writing 时间：40 minutes（recommended） 体裁：Argumentative writings or Report 字数：不少于250 - 350 words 要求: (A) 进行正反两面的论证、表明自己的态度和立场 （positions ） (B) 分析问题原因（causes）或影响（effects）提 出解决问题（feasible recommendations）的方 案或建议 Back to key points menu
Comparison And Contrast 2
具体到一个阶段 A1 VS B2 多使用转折连词： (2) in contrast, yet, but, while, nevertheless, whereas, however……
Point 1-4 图表描述高分的概念
图表提供大量数据，描述必须选择重点， 不能事无巨细，一一列出。 注意图表中提供的文字或说明（text description）。但 图表中没有的信息不能 凭主观任意捏造。 注意动词时态（tense），属于过去发生 的应该用一般过去时 ，有时一般现在时， 也有将来时。
Task Achievement （TA) 回答的完整性和全面性。 coherence and cohesion (CC） 连贯性和一致性。 Lexical resources （LR） 词汇和句式的准确和多样性
基本功不好—建议个辅
Grammatical range and Accuracy (GRA 语法能力 课堂讲解 frequent grammatical errors ； -Basic grammatical errors ；eg: Verb. -Minor mistakes eg: spelling,
Point 1-1. 雅思写作考题简介
● General training Task 1 时间：20 minutes（recommended） 体裁：letters writing （types☺） 目的：survival skills in social
context；
● 学术类写作 Academic Task 1 时间：20 minutes（recommended） 体裁：diagrams or chart single or mix （types☺） 目的：学术考点的分析和写作
Basic requirements underlying the topics
1. （点，块）分布 To depict distribution （pie）和序列： To depict data in an order ；
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2. （线，面）变化 changes ， To describe （A）increase ， decrease， level off， fluctuations；80% 图形 （B）expand ，shrink ，emerging， disappearing （Map）
许多人强烈反对太空探索，因为他们认为对于发展中国家而 言，这是个奢侈和浪费的做法
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（space-research，extravagant， wasteful）
[某学员入学测试]: The number of people against the spaceresearching because of they claims it is a extravagant and wasteful means for the developing –country.
Vocabulary diversity
3
Sentence structures diversity
LR
不追求 complex
Vocabulary accuracy
3
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Vocabulary build up
Diversified
Different people may have different opinions.？
Cliché of score
5
又是一个悲剧？
diverse various distinctive unique specific
various kinds of people who come from distinctive background may diverse in
their opinions ，when concerning a specific question ，some of which are
5分表达
During period-1, AAA increased …… then During period-2, AAA went down …… ; and During period-1, BBB dropped …… then During period2 , BBB rose up …… 其它高频词 Soar up ,climb up , grow……. Descend ,decline, reduce, plummet,………. Variety in vocabulary
雅思强化写作课程 S1 Introduction and strategies For Academic TASK 1 response
厦门新航道 ： 辜 驰
2011 01 12
key points in this hour 学习要点
Point 1-1. 雅思写作考题简介 Point 1-2. simple better Score strategy Point 1-3. topics types in presentdays‘ tests Point 1-4. 图表描述高分的概念 Point 1-5. how to write the Introduction
流程图 Flow chart：偶尔出现的图形 Sequence of events; （剑6－Test －3）
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the process of glass recycling. You should write at least 150 words.
4分表达
During period-1, AAA increased …… then During period-2, AAA decreased …… ; and During period-1, BBB decreased …… then During period-2 , BBB increased…… 尽管毫无语法错误！， Simple & listed
Point 1-2. Score For Writing
Writing Total
= Score （Task1）*40% + Score （Task2）*60% ； 5*0.4+5*0.6=5.0；如何提高？
Strategy For Scoring Higher
45 40 35 30 25 20 15 10 5 0 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 TASK1 TASK2
1. Comparing 的 结构和顺序； Period 1, A1 B1 Period 2, A2 B2 Period 3, A3 B3 2. Comparing的 连词 While ，whereas， yet，in contrast…. 通常不用 however，nevertheless……. 3. Comparing 的句型 （more than， is 几倍 of … ）