何凯文写作强化班整理笔记

何凯文写作强化班整理笔记

1、Just as an old Chinese proverb says.

正如一句古老的中国谚语所说。

2、Sample as the picture is, the symbolic meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.

尽管图画很简单，寓意却非常深刻。

3、Aspire to inspire until I expire.

生命不息，奋斗不止。

aspire/əˈspaɪə/ v(aspiring,aspired,aspires)有志(于)

inspire /ɪnˈspaɪə/ v(inspiring,inspired,inspires)鼓舞; 激励

expire /ɪkˈspaɪə/ v(expiring,expired,expires)到期; 失效

4、With current state of affairs being so sorry, it is high time that we took effective measures to tackle this problem.

问题如此严重，是马上采取有效措施解决这个问题的时候了。

tackle /ˈtækəl/ (tackling,tackled,tackles)处理

5、It is imperative that corresponding laws and regulations be introduced and enforced to curb and harness this urgent problem.

我们必须制定并执行一些法律和政策来解决这个问题。

correspond /ˌkɒrɪˈspɒnd/v (corresponding,corresponded,corresponds)相一致; 相对应

imperative /ɪmˈpɛrətɪv/ adj至关重要的

curb and harness 解决

6、In no country other than China , it has been said , is the problem of environment more serious.

在中国，环境问题是最重要的。

7、There has been a heated discussion about this picture in newspaper.

报纸上有一张图画引起了人们广泛的关注。

8、The future has arrived, it commences now.

未来已经到来，它始于现在。

commence /kəˈmɛns/ V-T/V-I (commencing,commenced,commences)使…开始; 开始

、、作文写作方式

主题词：

1、坚持：perseverance /ˌpɜːsɪˈvɪərəns/ N-UNCOUNT坚持不懈

persistence /pəˈsɪstəns/ N-UNCOUNT坚持不懈; 执著

2、榜样：model, example, role model

3、创新：innovation, creation, the spirit of innovation, the spirit of think different……

形式

第一段：2-3个句子（30-60字）

第二段：4-9个句子（100-120字）

第三段：3-4个句子（30-60字）

语言正确，用词准确

、、第一段写作

1、第一句：图画描述句

As is shown above

Which is symbolic of

Which symbolize

Symbolizing

小结：简要描述，与主题相关

2、第二句：图画影响句，引起关注

The topic illustrated in the picture will make a heated discussion.

引起关注：

Verb：trigger/spark/arouse/stimulate/cause/prompt/promote

N：attention, imagination

Adj：much attention, abundant imagination.

In China, a nation with great population

On Weibo, a popular social media

3、第三句：图画意义句（深刻）

As deep as ocean/as profound as ocean

profound /prəˈfaʊnd/ (profounder,profoundest)ADJ深刻的; 极大的强调

The drawing truly displays a states that is worthy of our attention.

We can’t afford to turn a blind eye to the problem highlighted by this picture.

我们承受不起这幅图画所展现的问题。

、、第二段写作

1、第一句：提出论点，主题很重要

The picture tell us that nothing can be compared with（主题），when it comes to the personal growth , especially in this ever rapidly changing world.

这幅图画告诉我们没有什么比（主题）重要，尤其是在这样一个人口增长，告诉发展的世界。

The picture demonstrates that the sense of environmental preservation（环保意识）is part and parcel to the sound growth of society and its absence will inevitably inflict/cause great losses on us.

这幅图画告诉我们，环保意识是社会健康发展的重要部分，它的缺失必然会造成巨大损失。

demonstrate /'demənstreɪt/vt. 证明；展示；论证vi. 示威

part and parcel重要(或主要、基本)部分；不可缺少的部分

sound growth 良好发展、（身心）健康成长、稳定增长

inevitably /ɪ'nevɪtəblɪ; ɪn'evɪtəblɪ/ adv. 不可避免地；必然地