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精心整理一、教育（共25题，占%）1. In countries where there is a high rate of unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who have no hope of finding a job.不同意：中学教育是一个重要的德育阶段，如果在这个时候中断，带来的不仅仅是失业这样的问题，还有青少年犯罪等社会问题vital ?stage for moral education. If it was interrupted, numerous of social problem/headaches may create as juvenile delinquency. (正如马克吐温说：你每关闭一所学校，你就必须开设一座监狱。

Every time you stop a school, you will have to build a jail ）教育能够帮助培养个人素质；提高劳动力的素质，从而提高生产效率，推动社会发展，从根本上解决失业的问题。

do a favor to/be beneficial（advantageous, preferable) to personal quality, enhance/boost/promote the quality of the labor force, thereby increase production efficiency, social development, solve the problem of unemployment从长远来看，如果受过更高的教育，则有更多的机会找到好的工作。

In a long run／term, if pupils could receive better education, they may have far more opportunities to find better jobs.教育的作用不仅仅应当局限在找工作，而是为了将来更好的发展。

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雅思强化写作精讲班第4讲讲义有效避免7种语法错误有效避免7种语法错误1 Employee can benefit more from telecommuting than employer.2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.2.3The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve.2.4 Many students are very like studying home economics.2.5 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar.3 Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers.4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalisation may create.4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.5 Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.6 Some people think the Internet only has positive impact, other people think it also has negative influence on our lives.7 There are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment.高分范文讲解范文讲解In Britain, when some people get old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. The government has to pay for his care. Who should be responsible for our old people? Give reasons for your answer.Example 2 Band 8One of the most challenging problems of today’s society is the question about who should be responsible for our old people. It is not only a problem with money but also a question of the system we want our society to have. In my essay, I would like to present four possible models.Firstly, the company could be responsible for its retired employees. To do this, a special fund could be established. The advantage of this model is that if one believes in the capitalist system, it should be the cheapest solution. One possible problem is that the companies may have competition disadvantage due to higher staff costs.A second solution is that the government has to take the responsibility for the old people’s care. It can finance this with its tax in comes. Actually, this is the most democratic model since everybody gets as much money as he or she needs. Unfortunately, as the present situation in our country shows, this solution seems not to work very well.The government can no longer afford to support all the old peoples.Another way of solving the problem is to give back the responsibility to the individual, which means that everybody has to save money during their working life for the live after their retirement. This seems to be not a very fair model because there will certainly be people who can’t afford to save part of their salary; therefore, the government would have to care for them.A last solution is to go back to the old model of the “big family who cares for all their members. I do not think this is possible in our days society because the family structures have changed.To sum up, I have to admit that I cannot find a really good solution for this problem. All models have both advantages and disadvantages. Certainly we have to think about this topic much more in the future.雅思考官9分范文Writing Task 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced?It is true that in almost every country today each family produces a large amount of waste every week. Most of the rubbish comes from the packaging of the things we buy, such as processed food. However, even if we buy food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags that are used everywhere.The first reason why we have so much packaging is that we consume so much more every day than families did in the past. Also, convenience is very important in modern life; therefore, we buy packaged food that can be transported over long distances and store it until we need it, at first in the supermarket, then at home.Further, the amount of waste produced is also a result of our habit of using something once and throw it away. We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used valuable resources and energy. Above all, we also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to deal with.Therefore, I think that governments need to raise this awareness in the general public. Children should be educated about environmental issues at school while adults need to take action. Governments can encourage such action by collecting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags and fining families and shops that do not try to recycle their waste.。

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雅思精讲写作班精讲班第 1 讲讲义
第一章第一章写作概述
60 分钟
Task 1 150w G: letter A:graph 1/3
Task 2 250w Essay
2/3
评分标准（四要素作文法）
Task
Grganization
Idea
Language
第二章第二章议论文----概述
一、字数、时间 250-300 words 35-40m
As one of the most important inventions of the past century, TV is playing a more and more important role in modern life. However, some people are starting to worry about its negative effects on traditional families. I am convinced that the existence of TV has brought about alienation among family members.
Those who strongly approve of the ban lay too much emphasis on the rights of nonsmokers. They ignore smokers’ rights. Smoking is just a personal hobby and amusement. It is a kind of lifestyle. It is a stress reliever and can bring great pleasure to smokers. Furthermore, for smokers, nothing seems more difficult and painful than giving up the habit.

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高赛雅思写作高分讲义（强化+冲刺）Writing20‟+40‟2种写法：段首顶格,段与段间隔一行(better) / 段首空4个英文字符段与段不空行Task 120分钟内写完分清什么图----找研究对象----2大审题方法Picture常考：A. Line graph / Curve chart 曲线图Bar chart / Column diagram 柱形/条形图Pie chart 饼图B. Flow chart 流程图一般分3段，尽可能用被动语态，不用第一人称A时态：Part 1 Simple Present（现在所见的）Part 2 Simple past （the changes itself in the past）Part 3 Simple present (现在所看到的趋势)Basic Pattern:连接手段必须有“如图所示”；四大要素，首段末句点题Part 1 4 major factors: pictures, objects, time, and dataPart 2 4 changes (textual level) + 6 comparisons (sentence level)Part 3 小结+趋势(上升或下降)4 changes: 升降波平6 comparisons:分比；比率；倍；分（1/3）；数值；排位place, positionBFlow chart: 一般现在时，中间多用被动语态Part 1 2-3 major factors: pictures, objects, given conditions, (materials given)Part 2 Process described: Passive被动（with connectives: step / stage）Part 3 Result indicated两大审题方法：切割分析法就明显的曲线形状进行切割分段（2条线不在一条直线上，2条线不属于同类变化）；迅速标上段号和点号，点>段（如下图，4点3段）1 2 3 4简易图示法如：3块饼图，每块有ABCD4个对象，则分别对这4个对象进行分析，看其各在1-2，2-3图中的变化趋势（上升或下降）Writing 写作模板最好不要全部照搬，有能力自己做点修改，使其个性化很大程度上：to a large extent, in a great/large degree, for the most part很小程度上：to some extent, in some degree, for some part/partly/in partTask 1除流程图外：As can be seen from the picture(table/figure/diagram/ line graph/bar chart/pie chart), it illustrated (shown) explicitly (obviously) X (that X covers the years/months from … to …).According to / In accordance with the figures / data (dada无复数) given in the picture, X significantly (greatly/ dramatically/ noticeably) fell from … to … in 19.. to in 19.., whereas. Also / Moreover / Furthermore from the picture it can be seen that there was a sharp decline / increase from…, while…. Based upon / Relying on the figures / data given in the picture, it started / had its starting point at … in 19.., reached the highest point / peaked at … in 19.. and gave its finishing point / finished at …in 19..; on the contrary, …. In addition to / What is more what has previously been referred to , the remaining / rest of all the figures (the other figures) did not indicate/ display/ show a noticeable increase or decrease; on the other hand/ in contrast,…From not only what was demonstrated in the picture but also what has been mentioned/specified or described earlier in the passage, it can be seen very clearly that there is (seems/appears to be用seem/appear不能用clearly) a tendency which is on the (gradual/ remarkable) increase/ decline (of object)….流程图：As can be seen/ shown from the picture/ flow chart, it illustrates/ shows explicitly/obviously X. There are some conditions/materials given in the picture…. The general process which concerns/ involves several/some cycles will be described/ conveyed as follows.In the first stage,…Next is the second stage in which…After that we have the third stage where…Finally in Stage Four…From not only what was demonstrated/showed in the picture but also what has been mentioned earlier in the passage, it can be seen very clearly that only in this way or by this kind of process can (subject: Oil)… be made or produced.Task 2 40分钟完成高分词汇：AA，AB重现；连字符词语: win-win situation; 名词化短语；一词多义的单词：bridge n. / vt. Brave adj. / vt. 勇敢面对六大结构：后置定语；排比句not only… but also…等；同位语；名词性从句；虚拟语气；否定兼倒装：Only in this way can we…; Not only verb + subjectFirst and Last注意首句和末句；首段和末段；每段的首句和末句五种题型：(1side一分写法，正或反面选其一；2side两分写法，正反面都要写，易拿高分)Do you agree /disagree? What is your opinion? (1/2-side)观点性辩论文To what extent do you agree or disagree? (1/2-side)Discuss both sides… (2-side)现象/说明性论述文Problem-Solution (Why-Because, Causes-Effects) (2-side)General-Particular (2-side)1 辩论文（一分法/二分法）一分法完全赞成/反对Part 1 我同/反间接或直接点题Part 2 同/反1同/反2 理由，举例Part 3 我同/反二分法7-8分1 2 3Part 1 我同/反/中立间接点题Part 2 同同反反反同Part 3 我同/我反/中立我同我反3种写法：势均力敌同=反先扬后抑同>反先抑后扬同<反第一种“同=反”比较难写，不要轻易尝试Part 1 首段末句必须中立点题Part 2 中间部分必须互反：利弊，迟早，新旧，今昔对比互反Part 3 末段首句必须明确表态（赞成/反对）2．论述文Question-Answer PatternPart 1 WhatPart 2 Why1Why2Part 3 How常考话题：新技术，电脑代替传统的工具等；教育；环境资源；家庭；交通；政府资助最新雅思大作文不变应万变语篇通式Mighty Writing[Chinese Version]:[English Version]:Task 2:1 - Side:There, nowadays/ at the present/ currently, exists a heated/ hotly debated discussion on …(Title).Some people maintained the idea that,…Unfortunately, other people hold the opinion that… I back/support/side with/take the side of/ do (dis)agree with the idea that…(直接)/ I share the idea with the former/latter, which is that…(间接).One (dis)advantage which can be clear/obvious/explicit to everyone is that…In fact…Let us take one example/ for example/instance… Let us have another example…. Let us give/ render/ present/ illustrate/ demonstrate/ show still another example…Explicitly/ clearly/ apparently/ indeed/ undoubtedly….Another negative/positive side which must be considered/ given consideration to is that…As a matter of fact… For example….Take the as another example… Take it as a case in point…It is self-evident that…. One /The first/ The main reason which can be clear/obvious/explicit to everyone is that… Another/ The second factor which must be given consideration to is that…. Still another/ the third rationale which we must attach importance/attention to is that….2 - Side:At present there is a hot topic which never ever fails to provoke a heated discussion on….Some are firmly in favor of the opinion or notion that…does great harm to …. Yet others/ other people are firmly assured/fully convinced that…Before my opinion is given or presented it would be better for me to discuss/have a detailed discussion on both sides as follows.We should highlight the notion that…since there are several reasons for us to say that. Onereason.... Another reason… (Facts stated/ Example given可以参照前面一分法的模板斜体字部分) From what has been mentioned before/previously/initially, it can be seen explicitly that…Seemingly/ Unfortunately, we should rethink the idea that……… (Facts stated/ Examples given). So it can be seen explicitly or self-evident that…Personally I am strongly in support of the idea or the circumstance that… (Solution: It is about time that…did …. Only in this way can …)Problem – Solution Pattern:首段末段与1/2分法类似，中间两段陈述理由，举例，如：One/ the first/main reason that can be clear/obvious/explicit to everyone is …. To start/begin with …In addition …Furthermore/What is more….(Let us take one example…Let us have another example…….) It is clear/evident that ….Another/the second reason that must be considered/given consideration to is… In the first place …. In the second place/next place …. Then … Finally… From what has been mentioned previously, we can see very clearly/explicitly that….写作真题实战演练We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we can’t trust the journalist. What‟s your opinion? And what do you think is the important qualities that a journalist should have?The recent figure of crimes committed by the young people is increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss what the possible reasons for this problem are and how to solve it.Leisure is a growing industry. Nowadays, more modern technology used in entertainment. This may lead people to less creative. Do you agree or disagree? Nowadays people perform the everyday task such as banking, shopping as well as business transaction, without meeting person face to face. What are the possible social effects upon the individual and society as a whole?It is generally believed that education is of vital important to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions?The pressure upon the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to work too hard for their young age. Do you think it is positive or negative for their development?The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue tooutweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people think that the government should pay for health care and education, but other people think that it is nor government‟s responsibility. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.Many people say that we have developed into a “throw-away” culture, because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. To what extent do you agree with this opinion and what measures can you recommend reducing this problem?雅思经典写作话题分类A. Classification of Topic Area s—社会是一个更加概括的词，表示的也许是在一个国家的人民及他们相互间的关系。

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2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲：刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分：7分或7分以上第一节的内容：1．雅思写作的整体介绍2．高分写作的要求3．解决问题的方案4．课程的总览一．雅思写作的整体介绍General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别：task 2 议论文task 1 A：图表作文G：书信评分：以T ask 2 为主二：高分写作的要求评分标准：Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Communicative Quality(交流质量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument.The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument.People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:far-reaching（深远的）, profound（深刻的）, adverse（不利的）, catastrophic（灾难的）, damaging（破坏性的）, devastating（破坏性的）, dire（可怕的）, disastrous（灾难的）, fatal（致命的）, tragic（悲惨的）, severe （严重的）,2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句：China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.倒装句：Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.伴随状语：It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.设问句：Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think?有人认为，为了提高教育质量，我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估；别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。

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雅思7分写作讲义雅思考试写作金牌教程（6-7.5分）教学方案第一次课一、教学目标：雅思写作概述、基本构成、雅思写作考试与其他考试的类比二、课时陈述：第一次课，2.5小时三、教学重点：议论文体和报告文体的题型四、教学难点：雅思评分标准与其他考试评分标准的异同五、教学亮点：雅思考官阅卷的潜规则六、课堂结构：1、雅思考试介绍2、雅思考试评分标准3、雅思写作话题介绍4、雅思写作题型介绍5、中英两国写作对比 1、雅思考试介绍雅思写作的量分 task1 占三分之一，而task2占三分之二。

Task 1 （以下简称小作文）题型：LINE PIE BAR TABLE DIAGRAM MAP MIXEDTask 2 (以下简称大作文)题型：argumentation report2、雅思考试评分标准孙武子说“知己知彼，百战百胜”.为了更好的对付雅思写作考试，我们起先要了解它的具体评分准则。

Task Response and FulfillmentCoherence and CohesionLexical resourcesGrammatical Range and AccuracyBand 7—good userHas operational command of the language, though with occasional inaccuracies, inappropriacies and misunderstandings in some situations. Generally handles complex language well and understands detailed reasoning.具体要求：Task response: whether all parts of the task are addressed; whether a viewpoint is clearly expressed, developed and supported.Coherence and cohesion: whether the response has a suitable layout and logical ordering of points; correct and appropriate use of connectives. Lexical resources: range and accuracy of vocabulary; the examiner will check the correct forms and the spelling of words used.Grammatical range and accuracy: the range and accuracy of tenses and sentence structures.Task response or fulfillment （完整性）一篇文章必须有一定的架构，议论文通常由“内三合，外三合”所构成。

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雅思写作完全攻略Total Solution of IELTS Writing俞伟国－2009－雅思考试作文部分题型课时安排：Marking SystemEssay WritingIntroductionBodyConclusionStructureReport Writing近年雅思考试中国大陆考区作文部分得分情况(From Mat Clark)Band4 or below: 15%-20% Band5: 60% Band6: 15%-20% Band7: <5% Band8 or above: RareKey Language Features in Marking SystemTask Response:1. No evidence of digression/irrelevant content2. Adequate Words3. Position + Supporting Ideas + DevelopmentCoherence and Cohesion1.Logical overall structure2.Topic Sentence3.Cohesive devicesLexical Resource1.Accurateness2.Authentic Vocabulary (Less-common Vocabulary)3.VarietyGrammatical Range and Accuracy1.Accuratenessplex Sentence3.Variety欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG:Chapter One－Essay Writing第一章. 议论文完全攻略______________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Part One－Introduction－闪亮开篇－－Version －Structure of Introduction1. Background Information(1). Lead-in Sentence (Introduce the subject of the topic)(2). Public Opinion2. Statement(State your position)1．主体背景（Background Information）(1) In the last century, the first man walking on the moon said: “It is a big step for mankind”. However, some people think it ma de______________________________, when ________________________________________________________________for the first time, he _____________________________________________________ that it was a great step for mankind. Nowadays, however, some people believe that it actually _____________________________________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase方法之一－具体化(笼统概念－缩小范围)(2) Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery. However, some people think the methods used to do this may have negative effects on local communities and be dangerous to human health.Nowadays people can _______________ food far more _______________ _________________________ more _______________ fertilizers and machinery. Nevertheless, some people hold the methods used may ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:Paraphrase 方法之二－单词转换（优先考虑三大词类：）Paraphrase方法之三－句型转换（方法1 ）(方法2)(3) Many people say teachers should only teach students academic subjects；Others say teachers should also take the responsibility of teaching students to judge what is right and wrong.Some people hold the opinion that ______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________While some argue that ______________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Language Skill: 句型转换(方法3)(4) Some people believe that air travel should be prohibited as it uses up fuel resources and causes pollution. Do you agree or disagree with the statement You should use your own experience to support your argument.According to some __________, air travel should be _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase思路顺序：单词转换>句型转换>具体化(5Some people propose that___________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法4)(6). In modern society, there are more and more old people, do you think its benefits outweigh its disadvantages______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:信息量偏少的Topic Introduction写作对策追根溯源法－Factor(s) [因]－Phenomenon (Subject) [果]2. 总论点(Statement)Topic－If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punishedAverage Example：In my opinion, the parents should not be punished. Decent Example：In my opinion, the parents should not be punished except that (unless) they are those who purposefully teach the child to behave badly.Topic－Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private secondary schools. But others feel that it has negative effects on them. Discuss the both viewpointsFrom my point of view, it is an ideal choice to send children to private middle schools ______________________________Exercise1: Topic－Should college students be allowed to get married______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法5)Exercise2: Topic－Should college students be encouraged to take up part-time jobs ______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法6)3. Report－Introduction写作对策Today, the phenomenon that_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________has aroused growing concern.In my opinion, a lot of factors contribute to the problem and in this article, I would like to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________*This phenomenon, as far as I am concerned, can be attributed to the following causes, which could be regarded as the apple of discord.Structure of Report Introduction1. Lead-in Sentence (Paraphrase the first sentence in the topic)2. Plan A: Essay StatementPlan B: Linking SentenceExercise1:Exercise2: Topic－Pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to studyExercise3: Topic－欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG:Part Two－Body－中流砥柱－－Version －分论点的要求：1.字数要求：One complex sentence preferred. Around 20 words.2. 分论点四项基本原则：(1). 内容原则：分论点应该体现为一种_____________________________并且与总论点为_________________关系。

[实用参考]雅思写作经典讲义

我的授课简要内容：第一节：介绍雅思写作,结合雅思四大评分标准，第六代和剑桥考官范文讲解线图和饼图第二节：结合第六代和剑桥考官范文讲解柱状图和表格第三节：结合剑桥考官范文、第六代及20GG年真题介绍流程图、地图等第四节：结合雅思四大评分标准、第六代、剑桥考官的范文及20GG-20GG年考试真题讲解大作文的四大主要模式及结构、审题、论证方法和结尾段方法第五节：结合雅思20GG-20GG年考试真题讲解教育和语言核心话题第六节：结合雅思20GG-20GG年考试真题讲解科技话题和环境话题第七节：结合雅思20GG-20GG年考试真题讲解国际合作与交流、媒体与广告核心话题第八节：结合雅思20GG-20GG年考试真题讲解政府职能及其它社会现象与问题第九节：介绍找分论点的15个原则,词汇及句型NEWCHANNELINTERNATIONALEDUCATIONGROUPLIMITED第一节介绍和讲解线图和饼图教学目标：了解雅思写作考试的相关细节,掌握雅思四大评分标准，第六代和学写线图和饼图总体安排：课时—2.5小时教学内容：讲解大小作文的细节，结合雅思四大评分标准和剑桥考官范文讲解线图和饼图教学方法：讲解课件，剑桥考官范文与复印材料教学重点：结合雅思四大评分标准掌握线图和饼图的写作方法教学难点：短期掌握线图和饼图的固定句型及写作技巧，并改掉作文中重复的语法与标点错误教学亮点：小作文考试的快速突破技巧及核心固定句型Overall，/Ingeneral,/Onthewhole,itisevident/obvious/clear(tonote)/notable(f romthefihures/informationprovidedbPthegraph）that…，while/whilst/whereas…；Providedisthelinechartrevealing….; ThefollowingtenPearswitnessedaconsiderable/three-foldrisein…；Therewasasignificantgrowthinthefollowing…,hittingthehighestpoint at…in…;(Likewise,)Asubstantialincreasewas(also)found/seenin…/came/occur edto…(overthesameper iod); Thenumberof…sufferedahugedeclinebetween…and…,thendippingto …in…;Thereafter,however,…lostthefavourof…,droppingfrom…in…to …in…;NeG tcame…,at…,doubling/tripling…;…—thesecondfavoured…ranked/listed/involved/inquestion/inthera nkings—constituted…;…enjoinedt hesamepopularitP as…,equaling…;…,b Pcontrast,isshowntofallsteadilP inthesameperiodto…from…; Whenitcomesto…,however,thereverseis true等课后作业：熟悉写作考试话题，小作文考试类型与结构，做第六代中的P70，82，83，86练习，阅读及背诵剑桥雅思考试考官的线图(C5T1)和饼图(G7T4)范文各一篇，及摘抄出描述趋势、比较和总结的句型、并各模写(G6T2,指定)一篇一.介绍（10mins）1.进考场应该弄清楚的四个问题1）雅思作文开头段就要表明自己的观点吗？2）被动语态更容易拿高分吗？3）雅思作文可以采用缩写吗？4）雅思作文到底多久会重复一次？2.评分标准任务的完成；结构的完整性和逻辑的连贯性；语言表达的准确性和流畅性；论证能力（主要是Task2）中国人作文得分很低的原因：不明白英汉两种语言的差别英语的句子是化零为整，中文是化整为零。

雅思写作冲刺讲义

雅思写作冲刺时间：一个小时,无法超时上午九点考试,写作往往是11点开始考;一般学生考到这里的时候就蒙了;雅思写作考试是国内考试时间最长的一个,比托福等都长;图表作文只占了1/3的分数,那议论文就占了2/3;G类也要按A类要求去做;Academic writing 的特殊要求1.Some teachers don't know how to use computers to help the students effectively. 不能用缩写,凡是用了缩写的都是业余选手,专业选手必须要用,do not.. Shouldn't 也是错的,特别提醒大家,cannot 中间没有空格;如果你不相信我说的话,我建议你可以翻下剑5剑6,一个缩写你都找不到;2.Historic buildings attracts lots of visitors and can improve local economy. 大家觉得哪个是口语词汇;其中lots of 是特别口语化词汇,可以用numerous或者a host of 这两个单词修饰可数名词;A great deal of 不可数;3.The impact of tourism on these neighbourhoods should be analyzed. 下次你看到任何-ze 结尾的都是美式英语,-se 结尾的都是英式英语,而这里的neighbourhood 是英式英语,而neighborhood是美式英语,有些同学会问是不是雅思考试当中只能用英式英语呢不是这样的,在剑桥6中明确说了可以用英语或美式,但两者不能混合使用;我建议大家-our -se 是英式的,-or -ze 是美式的,这两者的区别是最常见的,其他的我们就没有必要掌握了;4.Children in wealthy families are more and more depend on their parents.这里哪里不像学术写作呢;More and more ,给大家推荐一个词,increasingly.5.Serious crimes harm people's lives. 雅思针对的母语是非英语的人,大家看考官的作文也不是很难;但这里serious 高中词汇,crime harm 初中词汇,people 和life 就是小学词汇了,给大家推荐一个severe, criminal act, damage destroy, impair people's health, human being 这个词太大,不建议使用,individual6.The advantages of stopping animal experiments are more than continuing them.其中more than 换成outweigh7.Today, advertisements are everywhere. There are many ways to advertisements. 简单句不适用,中间加个连词即可;8.The environment is becoming worse. We must work together to deal with it. 因果关系,加because 就很一般了哈,加个therefore.9.So, we must take steps to deal with the environment problem So 换成therefore,大家在写作中,千万不要用这么有激情的句子哈,好的雅思作文必定是冷静推理的来的,所以,感叹号去掉,还有,must 换成should.10.We must be friendly to others because the Bible said, "treat your neighbours as you would like to be treated." 不能出现宗教语言;大作文,40分钟,最低要求240字,要求考高分的同学,建议270-280, 7分以上的同学,我建议300字以上;大家刚看了雅思真题库,不知道大家判断出了自己认为难的部分;但是如果没有素材的话,你再好的基础都无法体现出来;TourismEducationGovernmentWomen and familiesLanguage and cultureTechnology and the mediaDevelopment and globalizationCrimeAnimalsEnvironmental problems雅思不会出时事类的话题,只出争议比较大的话题;常见的词汇,常见的句式都可以通用;推荐大家掌握思考方法A.分类法Some people think old buildings should be destroyed and replaced with modern buildings. To what extent do you agree老房子可以分成要拆的,和不要拆的;这样子就有四段;这样子词汇可以成倍增加;开头用模板主题两段不要写一样长,一段可以多写一个理由,这样子你的倾向比较明显;Some high school graduates go to travel or work for a period of time before they go to university. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantage分成文科类,理科类的B. 替代法Some people think motorized flight was the greatest invention in the twentieth century. Do you agree or disagree形容词最高级/ only / stopban存在漏洞替代法飞机很伟大,但存在争议,主体第一段先让步,写两个理由,好处飞机的;主体第二段可以举电脑,手机,举三个反例Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve safety on the roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree主体第一段可以先让步,效率很高,政府的投入很少第二段可以举三个反例,行人,警察,设施,只管司机是不够的,还要管其他的;Some people think animal experimentation should be banned. To what extent do you agree主体第一段,残忍,传播疾病第二段,医学,制药工业,航天技术,心理学的研究;不用动物用人的话更残忍;现阶段无法禁止,只能尽量少用;C.裸奔法TM STREEC 真正的裸奔是streaker 音译啊$Technology & efficiencyMind soulSociety crimeTime spaceRights responsibilitiesEnvironment healthEmployment competitionCulture populationMoney fun任何一个词汇都可以套用以上的词汇问题1 “A child miseducated is a child lost." - -John F. Kennedy2 "Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire." -- W. B. Yeats3 “Technology is just a tool. In terms of getting the kids working together and motivating them, The teacher is the most important." --- Bill Gates. Technology“ The greatest danger in modern technology is not that machines begin to think likepeople, but that people will begin to think like machines.”―― Albert Einstein 5“As we go forward, I hope we're going to continue to use technology to make reallybig differences in how people live and work." ---Sergey BrinMedia6“He who controls the media, controls the mind. “---Rupert Murdock Government7“Millions of individuals making their own decisions in the marketplace will alwaysallocate resources better than any centralized government." – Ronald Reagan Tourism8“The world is a book, and those who do not travel, read only a page.”Saint AugustineWomen and Families9“The bond that links your true family is not one of blood, but of respect and joy ineach other’s life.” Richard BachLanguage10“To possess a second language is to possess a second soul.”–Charlemagne Culture11“Culture means the widening of the mind and of the spirit.”– Ruth Benedict Globalization12“ Globalization is not something that we can hold off or turn off. It is the economic equivalent of a force of nature—like wind or water.”---Bill ClintonCrime13“He who does not prevent a crime when he can encourages it. “---Roman philosopher SenecaAnimals14The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animalsare treated. ----GandhiEnvironment15“Many anthropogenic activities foul the air, contaminate the water and devastate the forests.” --- quoted in Newsweek16“Don’t blow it -- good planets are hard to find.” quoted in Time magazine 第三讲雅思强化写作精讲班第4讲讲义有效避免7种语法错误1 Employee can benefit more from tele commuting远距离 than employer.可数名词是不可以单独使用的前后各加一个-s2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.动词原形不能做主语2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.一定不要忘记被动要加-ed2.3The problems that are created by environmental contamination污染,可以代替pollution is very hard to resolve.主谓不一致,主语很长的时候一定不要忘了看下谓语动词是单数还是复数2.4 Many students are very like studying home economics.like 在这里是动词,什么时候是介词2.5 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar.谓语动词的时态,3 Intelligent students should not be treated different ly by their teachers.4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalisation may create.that 在这里省略to reasons for / important to sb. / it's important for sb. To do / solution to a problem4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.replace5 Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.themselves6 Some people think the Internet only has positive impact, other people think it also has negative influence on our lives.插入and7 There are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and Enjoyment.afford sb. Sth. Thinking高分范文讲解范文讲解In Britain, when some people get old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. The government has to pay for his care. Who should be responsible for our old people Give reasons for your answer.Example 2 Band 8One of the most challenging problems of today’s society is主语是one the question about who should be responsible for our old people. It is not onlynot,only 没有放句首不用倒装 a problem with money but also a question of the system we want our society to have. In my essay, I would like to present four possible models.Firstly, the company could be responsible for its retired employees. To do this, 状语提前a special fund could be established. The advantage of this model is that if one believes in the capitalist system, it should be the cheapest solution. One possible problem is that the companies may have competition disadvantage s due to higher staff costs.A second solution is that the government has to take the responsibility for the old people’s care. It can finance this with its tax incomes. Actually,状语提前 this is the most democratic model since everybody gets as much money as he or she needs. Unfortunately, as the present situation in our country shows, this solution seemsnot to work very well. The government can no longer afford to support all the old peopl es错了.Another way of solving the problem is to give back the responsibility to the individual, which means that everybody has to save money during their working life for the livelife after their retirement. This seems to be not a very fairmodel because there will certainly be people who can't学术类不能用缩写形式 afford to save part of their salary; therefore, the government would have to care for them.A last solution is to go back to the old model of the “big family who cares for all their members. I do not think this is possible in our days society because the family structures have changed.To sum up, I have to admit that I cannot find a really good solution for this problem. All models have both advantages and disadvantages. Certainly we have to think about this topic much more in the future.雅思考官9分范文Writing Task 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to reduce the amount of rubbish producedIt is true that in almost every country today each family produces a large amount of waste every week. Most of the rubbish comes from the packaging of the things we buy, such as processed food. However, even if we buy food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags that are used everywhere.The first reason why we have so much packaging is that we consume so much more every day than families did in the past. Also, convenience is very important in modern life; therefore, we buy packaged food that can be transported over long distances and store it until we need it, at first in the supermarket, then at home.Further, the amount of waste produced is also a result of our habit of using something once and throw it away. We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used valuable resources and energy. Above all, we also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to deal with.Therefore, I think that governments need to raise this awareness in the general public. Children should be educated about environmental issues at school while adults need to take action. Governments can encourage such action by collecting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags and fining families and shops that do not try to recycle their Waste.Cultivate the awarenessHow should i address you 称呼Strictly ban雅思强化写作精讲班第7讲讲义Since / As …, … 因为……instead of … 而是…中量级连接词As a matter of fact, … 事实上Indeed, … 确实Obviously, … 显而易见,…Even though…, … 尽管It seems that… 看起来…重量级连接词Otherwise, … 否则……rather than… 而是…In general=By and large… 一般来说…Apparently, …很明显,…More precisely,…更准确地说…骨灰级连接词… , thereby + verb + ing 句中连词,“以此达到…的目的”I would be hard-pressed to imagine that 我很难想象…More specifically, … 更具体的说…In terms of … , … 在…方面,…Overall ,总体上看雅思强化写作精讲班第13讲讲义图表作文一The bar chart below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 andThe table below summarises some data collected by a college bookshop for the month of February 1998.Write a report describing the sales figures of various types of publications, based on the information shown in the table.The diagram shows in four stages how the Australian Bureau of Meterlogy gets its weather information.In the first stage there is the “incoming information”. Raw data is collected from outer space, on land, or at sea, using satellite, radar, and drifting buoy respectively. Next, this data is analyzed and forecasted by experts. At this stage experts study satellite photos, radar screens, and synoptic charts to determine weather conditions. Stage three of the process is when the information is prepared for broadcast. This is done through computer which sends all necessary data to the fourth stage. At this point the weather data is broadcasted to the general public via TV, radio and telephone recorded announcement.Thus, the process diagram shows how weather data is collected, studied,。

雅思写作7.0课程讲义.汇编

2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲：刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分：7分或7分以上第一节的内容：1．雅思写作的整体介绍2．高分写作的要求3．解决问题的方案4．课程的总览一．雅思写作的整体介绍General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别：task 2 议论文task 1 A：图表作文G：书信评分：以Task 2 为主二：高分写作的要求评分标准：Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Communicative Quality(交流质量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument. The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument. People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:far-reaching（深远的）, profound（深刻的）, adverse（不利的）, catastrophic（灾难的）, damaging（破的）, severe（严重的）,2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句：China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.倒装句：Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.伴随状语：It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.设问句：Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think?有人认为，为了提高教育质量，我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估；别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。

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包含：学以致用雅思写作考试为什么设计成两个部分？学会了雅思写作除了拿个高分还能帮你做什么？评分标准全球雅思考官是怎样给你评分的？哪些重点是不同分数段的标志特征？中西合璧什么是好作文？字数多，词汇大，语法复杂，还是条理清楚？循序渐进写作能力提升的正确途径。

是不是一上来就学习官方满分范文？读写互通学习范文的正确方法，是不是要读，要背很多范文？自成风格什么是模板？要不要学习模板？如何形成自己的写作风格？正确审题，不再跑偏，高分从这里开始5分钟认真审题，构思，写提纲。

高手审题4大技能12-12-08More men and women decide to have children later in life. Why is it happening? What influences does it have on society and family life?原因1.现代人均寿命增长，生育期相应延后；2.社会竞争压力大，选择事业收入稳定后生孩子。

影响1.父母与孩子的年龄差会变大，交流中代沟会明显；2.会出现劳动力缺口，老龄化社会。

In order to learn a language well, we should learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some industrialised countries have serious environmental problems. The damage to the environment is an inevitable result when a country tends to improve the standard of living. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people said the government should not spend money on building theaters and sports stadiums. Instead, it should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?In the last century when a human astronaut first arrived on the Moon he said “it is a big step for m ankind” but some people think it makes little difference to our daily life. To what extent to you agree or disagree?II.十五句语法句型对应推荐读写互通，剑桥经典句型语法集锦剑81.1 The revolutionary aspect of this new timekeeper was neither the descending weight that provided its motive force nor the gear wheels (which had been around for at least 1,300 years) that transferred the power; it was the part called the escapement.1.3 Some researchers say the results constitute compelling evidence that telepathy is genuine. Other parapsychologists believe that the field is on the brink of collapse, having tried to produce definitive scientific proof and failed. Sceptics and advocates alike do concur on one issue, however, that the most impressive evidence so far has come from the so-called ‘ganzfeld’ experiments, a German term that means ‘whole field’.2.2 The Little Ice Age was far from a deep freeze, however; rather an irregular seesaw of rapid climatic shifts, few lasting more than a quarter-century, driven by complex and still little understood interactions between the atmosphere and the ocean.2.3 While it is true that the olfactory powers of humans are nothing like as fine as those possessed by certain animals, they are still remarkably acute.3.3 It follows from the above that sparing use of energy reserves should tend to extend life.3.1 Discussion now centres on whether the route through the maze is communicated as a'left-right' sequence of turns or as a 'compass bearing and distance' message.3.3 Forests are one of the main elements of our natural heritage. The decline of Europe's forests over the last decade and a half has led to an increasing awareness and understanding of the serious imbalances which threaten them.4.2 The MSC has established a set of criteria by which commercial fisheries can be judged.4.3 It was found that children from the noisy schools had higher blood pressure and were more easily distracted than those who attended the quiet schools. Moreover, there was no evidence of adaptability to the noise. In fact, the longer the children had attended the noisy schools, the more distractible they became.剑61.2 Theoretically, in the world of trade, shipping costs do not matter. Goods, once they have been made, are assumed to move instantly and at no cost from place to place. The real world, however, is full of frictions.1.3 Some scientists doubt the value of traditional knowledge because the occupation of the Arctic doesn't go back far enough. Others, however, point out that the first weather stations in the far north date back just 50 years.2.1 It is common for supporters of road networks to reject the models of cities with good public transport by arguing that such systems would not work in their particular city.2.3 Perhaps the most fundamental step in developing a sense of number is not the ability to count, but rather to see that a number is really an abstract idea instead of a simple attachment to a group of particular objects.3.1 But it is worth trying, for to understand the initial shock of those images is to understand the extraordinary power and magic of cinema, the unique, hypnotic quality3.3 The monkey projects demonstrate that, compared with control animals that eat normally, caloric-restricted monkeys have lower body temperatures and levels of the pancreatic hormone insulin, and they retain more youthful levels of certain hormones that tend to fall with age.4.3 The more effort put in and the wider the whole school involvement, the more substantial the results are likely to be.剑51.3 （媒体负面）People are clearly more curious about bad news than good. Newspapers and broadcasters are there to provide what the public wants. That, however, can lead to significant distortions of perception.2.1 The impetus behind the development of these early plastics was generated by a number of factors - immense technological progress in the domain of chemistry, coupled with wider cultural changes, and the pragmatic need to find acceptable substitutes for dwindling supplies of 'luxury' materials such as tortoiseshell and ivory.2.3 There were several reasons why original science continued to be written in Latin. The first wassimply a matter of audience.A third reason why the writing of original science in English was delayed may have been to do with the linguistic inadequacy of English in the early modern period.3.2 According to Siegel, international environmental organisations are beginning to pay closer attention to the region, partly because of the problems of erosion and pollution of the Nile delta, but principally because they fear the impact this situation could have on the whole Mediterranean coastal ecosystem. But there are no easy solutions.4.1 （开发旅游业）The market for tourism in remote areas is booming as never before. Countries all across the world are actively promoting their 'wilderness' regions - such as mountains, Arctic lands, deserts, small islands and wetlands — to high-spending tourists.剑42.1 （语言习得）What makes a language endangered is not just the number of speakers, but how old they are.Language is also intimately bound up with culture, so it may be difficult to preserve one without the other.2.2 Part of the incentive was financial, Dr Laver said. The bottom line is that most general practitioners are business people. If they see potential clientele going elsewhere, they might want to be able to offer a similar service.'3.1 Many children may choose entrepreneurship because it allows them a degree of independence, is less exploitative than many forms of paid-employment, and is flexible enough to allow them to participate in other activities such as education and domestic task.4.1 No one theory can explain improvements in performance, but the most important factor has been genetics.Identifying genetically talented individuals is only the first step.4.3 The problem of how health-care resources should be allocated or apportioned, so that they are distributed in both the most just and most efficient way, is not a new one.写作提纲中立观点，两者皆可，个人选择。

新东方雅思写作讲义汇总

新东方雅思写作讲义汇总别人的指导是我们成功路上的指路灯，为了帮助大家备考雅思写作，下面小编给大家带来新东方雅思写作讲义汇总，希望喜欢。

新东方雅思写作讲义1雅思写作的12个万能理由及写作思路分享十二大万能理由1 方便 convenience2 情感 feeling(or sensibility)3 经验 experience4 成就 achievement5 效率 efficiency6 健康 health7 节俭 thrift(or save money)8 安全 safety9 性格培养 character cultivation10 乐趣 fun11 耐久endurance12 环保 environment protection部分雅思命题写作思路1. SmokingFor：(means agree or advantages)1. it is pleasurable and relaxing2. it is one's right3. it is difficult to stop smoking6. it makes socializing easier7. it is an important source of tax revenueAgainst: (means disagree or disadvantages)1. it is harmful to one's health (e.g., heart disease, bronchialtrouble, lung cancer )2. it is harmful to those nearby4. it is addictive (i.e., nicotine)2. School UniformsFor：1. they eliminate class differences2. they allow students to better concentrate on their studies3. they are popular with parents and administrators4. they are inexpensive5. they are attractive and neat6. they eliminate the need to choose what to wear every day7. many countries have themAgainst：1. they are disliked by students (students like to primp)2. they create a military mentality3. they are an infringement on our freedom (different strokes for different folks)4. they are ugly and childish3. Legalized GamblingFor：1. it is a source of government revenue2. it is an old practice dating back thousands of years3. it is pleasurable (e.g., horse racing, casinos)4. many people play poker and mahjongAgainst：1. it can become addictive2. it can destroy happy families3. it can lead to suicide4. it is easily controlled by the Mafia (e.g., bookmakers )4. City LifeFor：1. it is exciting2. it offers the best schools, hospitals, and stores3. it offers many entertainments (e.g., swimming pools, bowlingalleys, and sports stadiums )4. it offers many chances of employment5. cities have an efficient public transportation systemAgainst ：1. it is unhealthy (e.g., water and air pollution in industry )2. it is not a good environment for children3. it is noisy and dangerous4. it makes people nervous5. cities are overcrowded and expensive5. Informing Patients Of CancerFor：1. patient’s right to know2. it is wrong to hide the truth3. it gives the patient a chance to plan his last days4. doctors must do it (in some country like the U. S.)Against：1. it is heartless and cruel2. it may make the patient give up3. it causes depression4. it can lead to suicide新东方雅思写作讲义240个雅思写作常用插入语整理1. indeed 的确2. surely 无疑，3. however 然而，4. obviously 显然，5. frankly 坦率地说，6. naturally 自然，7. luckily (或happily)for sb. 算某人幸运，8. fortunately / luckily 幸好，9. honestly 真的，10. briefly 简单地说，11. strange to say 说也奇怪，12. needless to say 不用说，13. most important of all 最为重要是，14. in a few words(或 in sum, in short)简而言之，15. in other words 换句话说，16. in a sense 在某种意义上，17. in general 一般说来，18. in my view 在我看来，19. in conclusion 总之，20. in summary 概括地说，21. in fact 事实上，22. in the first place 首先，23. in addition 此外，24. of course 当然，25. to my knowledge 据我所知，26. for instance (或example)例如，27. as a matter of fact 事实上，28. strictly speaking 严格地说，29. generally speaking 一般地说，30. judging from... 根据...判断31. to be sure 无疑，32. to sum up 概括地说，33. to tell the truth 老实说，34. I am sure 我可以肯定地说，35. I believe 我相信，36. I wonder 我不知道，37. that is 也就是说38. it seems 看来是，39. as I see it 照我看来，40. what is important (serious) 重要(严重)的是，新东方雅思写作讲义31-The discrepancy between...and...remains.差异依然存在。

九分学长雅思写作讲义

九分学长雅思写作讲义
1. 内容涵盖：
九分学长雅思写作讲义可能会包括对于雅思写作任务1和任务2的详细讲解。

对于任务1，讲义可能会介绍如何描述图表、流程图、地图等不同类型的数据，并给出范例和写作技巧。

对于任务2，讲义可能会涵盖不同类型的题目，如讨论型、观点对比型、问题解决型等，以及如何构思和组织文章结构。

2. 写作技巧：
讲义可能会介绍一些写作技巧，比如如何避免常见的语法错误、如何使用丰富多样的词汇和句式结构、如何进行段落间的衔接等。

此外，还可能包括如何在有限的时间内高效地完成写作任务，以及如何提高写作的逻辑性和连贯性等方面的建议。

3. 范文解析：
九分学长雅思写作讲义可能会提供一些高分范文的解析，分析范文的优点之处，比如论点的合理性、论证的充分性、语言的表
达准确性等，帮助考生了解什么样的表达方式和思路可以得到高分。

4. 常见题型分析：
讲义可能会对雅思写作常见的题型进行分析，比如环境类、
教育类、社会类等，指导考生如何应对不同类型的题目，以及如何
找到合适的论据和例子支撑自己的观点。

总的来说，九分学长雅思写作讲义是一份全面系统的教学材料，旨在帮助考生全面提高雅思写作的能力，从而取得更好的成绩。

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望这些信息能对你有所帮助。

雅思写作试讲讲义

讲师关键词-查理熊写作无非篇章+逻辑+遣词造句篇章People who read books for pleasure can be better developed in imagination and language skills than those who watch TV can. Do you agree or disagree.第一段背景+立场At the moment/ at present/ currently/ nowadays/ right now / for now recently/ latelyIt is apparent/ it is beyond obvious/ it is generally perceived/ it is well admitted/ it is profoundly recognized/ it is boarded accepted/ it has been pointed outA considerable proportion of the public holds/ a large amount of the public argues/ a wide range of the people believes/ an increasing number of people acknowledges / a great deal of global citizens claims/ the majority of the people supports the idea/However, I truly do not think so. But, I do not think it is the case.Yet, I am afraid I cannot give my approval. Frankly speaking, I totally disagree with such an argument. To tell the truth, my personal view contradicts the matter.Honestly, my personal opinion differs vastly from that of others.As far as I am concerned, the claim is flawed.As a matter of fact, I am inclined to oppose such an idea.It has been pointed out that a large amount of the public argues book readers tend to imagine and learn languages better than couch potatoes. As far as I am concerned, the claim is flawed.第二段让步段(相反观点+理由)…..because (as) they are not without good reasons/ since several reasons can be concluded/due to the following reasons….the most immediate reason is that/ for one thing/ a direct reason is that/ initially/ in the first place.…the second one is that/ the next one is that/ for another thing/ secondly/ then/ afterwards/ after this/ subsequently …the last one is that/ the final one is that/ as a final point/ lastly/ eventually/Undoubtedly, an increasing number of people acknowledge that reading is more beneficial since several reasons can be concluded. The most immediate reason is that reading itself is a way of learning language. Afterwards, one can imagine when reading artistically written words.第三段主体段（自己观点+理由）However...论点1 In the first place 举例For example…论点2After that…引用According to …论点3 What is more… By way of contrast…对比第五段结尾段In conclusion/ in summary/ to sum up/ to summarize/ on the whole/ altogether/ all in all/ overall/ to put it briefly/ in short/ to make a long story short… although/ even though/ despite the fact that/… I firmly stick to my own belief/ my argument stands/ I have fully approved my reasoning to be correct/ I have made it clear that…Overall, despite the fact that a wide range of the people believes in the benefits of reading, I have made it clear that watching TV has a more positive impact on one’s development of imagination and language skills.逻辑学生习作1Furthermore, the living condition may base on the financial support. As I have said, the prices of houses are getting higher while most of us can not afford them. By storing most of their wealth in real estate, many Chinese households have become house slaves. As a result, here comes the vicious circle. Deprived person’s regular income, they may get nothing left after paying the loan, which contributes to a lower quality of daily life. By way of contrast, apartments are more economical.查理熊修改The next factor to be considered is money. Nowadays, a sad truth is that houses in China are too expensive to afford. As a result, many Chinese house owners become house slaves, paying a large proportion of monthly income for nearly a decade for housing loan. A person like that usually leads a humble life as the rest of his income could barely support a decent life. A simple calculation here, a typical three-room apartment of the city I live costs approximately 800,000 rmb, while a two-storey house costs 2,000, 000 rmb. What is the difference? 1, 200,000 rmb – enough for a ten cars or 200 iPhone 5! Clearly, one can save so much and really start living if he/her chooses to live in an apartment instead of house.学生习作2However, the drawbacks of living in houses are beyond obvious. In the first place, houses are much more expensive than apartments. If someone without very decent pay tries to afford a house, he or she will have to stand the financial pressure. In the second place, the bigger the house is, the harder for the owner to clean it. Consequently, the owner is supposed to spend a lot more time and energy on the housework, where their good mood will soon wane to extinction. In the third place, living in houses blocks the way of exchange visits and daily communications between neighbors. In contract, living in an apartment can keep you always informed of what is going on around. Additionally, it can also cultivate your communication skills and the character of tolerance. As a result, you are likely to make more new friends. Last but not least, living in houses is neither convenient nor safe enough, especially when you lack something or are in trouble. In other words, only when people get together and help with each other can we build a harmonious neighborhood where the living standard is improved too.查理熊修改However, the drawbacks of living in houses are beyond obvious when finance, maintenance and security issues are considered. In the first place, if someone without decent pay takes out an overdraft to fund a house, he/she will have to stand the financial pressure for years or decades in as much as houses are much more expensive than apartments. In the second place, the bigger the house is, the harder the maintenance is. Consequently, big-house owners sometimes spend time and energy on housework to such an extent that the commodiousness/ownership becomes exhaustive burden rather than a luxury. In the third place, house owners communicate all the less because they rarely have a chance to acquaintthe next-doors, let alone home visits. Whereas, on the other side of the picture, neighbors in apartment buildings, greeting each other so often, are always kept informed of what is going on around. As such exposure generally enhances communicative skills and tolerance, one is more likely to develop new friendship. Last but not least, house owners will find it inconvenient or insecure when needing a helping hand. In other words, than sticking with each other and lending a helping hand nothing can be more significant in building a harmonious neighborhood favoring the quality of living of each individual within.遣词造句2B: 三个简单句The man was driving a car. He looked outside the window. He thought it was a nice day. 普通：定语成分+ 状语成分The man driving a car thought it was a nice day when he looked outside the window.文艺：状语从句变形-介词+分词The man driving a car thought it was a nice day at looking outside the window.浪漫：垂悬分词结构Looking outside the window, the man driving a car thought it was a nice day.土豆搜索【沪江网校】【英语公开课】查理熊之英语修炼---赢在执行/programs/view/LsfOBln1_SI/?resourceId=78633350_06_02_99。

雅思写作大作文专用讲义

第一讲雅思写作考试对中国考生的四个难点(Chapter 1: The Four Hurdles in IELTS Writing Test)难点一: Academic Writing 学术类写作问题的特殊要求(改错练习) 1. Since private companies don't care much about the public interests, so the government has a significant role to play in scientific research. (不能缩写)2. Why these travellers damage the environment should be analyzed. (英式美式拼法不能混用)3. We must do our best(utmost) to protect (preserve) animals. (词汇用法太嫩)4. It is clear (manifest) that pornographic shows do harm to (undermine, endanger, jeopardy) the lives of lots of youngster (adolescent).词汇,专有特定的修饰5. Nowadays (In present-day society), human beings face big challenges in many areas.6. In these day and age, many companies have replaced telephone with internet.7. We are confronted with many environmental problems. They are becoming more and more serious. (句式,语法)8. The traffic problem is becoming worse. We must work together to solve it.(句子结构)9. So individuals, communities and the government all must work hard tofight crime! (不应该带感情色彩)10. We must be friendly to other because the Bible said, "Treat your neighbors as you would like to be treated." (文化背景,圣经不可用)难点二: No specific topic pool. 题库大,没有公开,而且题目变化多.对策:掌握思考素材的四种方法对策: 雅思写作"语法的七宗罪"改错练习1. Employee can benefit more from telecommuting than employee. (n.可数不可数)2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency. (v.原型不可做主语)2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. (被动语态)Poor children can face problems when they grow up.2.3 The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve. (主谓一致)2.4 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar. (时态)3. Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers. 副词4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalization may create. 介词4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.5. Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.6. These old buildings should be destroyed, new buildings must be constructed. 逗号7. These are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment.补充材料IELTS 作文复杂句的七种内部关系(Seven possible relationships Underlying a complex sentence)Cause and effect因果关系标志词1)表示原因的because, as, since, due to, owing to (画横线的连接词请重点掌握)2)表示结果的hence(因此),thus(因此),therefore(因此),As a consequence,…(作为结果)Accordingly…(相应的),As a result…(作为结果)Consequently…(作为结果) so…that…(如此…以致…)E.g. The ecological problems are being aggravated. Hence, it is imperative that we take measures to curb the pollution of the environment. 生态系统正在急剧的恶化,因此,我们必须采取严厉的措施遏制对环境的污染.Exemplification 举例关系标志词…is a case in point.(某人或某事是一个恰当的例子.)Take…for example.(以…为例) for instance. (比如…) To Illustrate…(例如…) As an illustration…(作为例证…)e.g. The Asian countries are getting westernized at a staggering rate. TakeChina for example, when youngsters go to the movies, it is standard practice for them to choose Hollywood blockbuster over domestic films. 亚洲国家正以一种惊人的速度变得西方化,以中国为例,当年轻人去电影院的时候,通常都会选择好莱坞大片而不是中国电影. Comparison and contrast 对比关系标志词While …,whereas…,whilst…,in contraste.g. Whereas/ while modern man is so rushed and so stressed, our ancestors could oftenperform their business in a relaxed manner.(对比)现代人的生活是如此的奔忙与紧X,而我们的祖先却可以不慌不忙的从事他们的事务.e.g. The educational and medical facilities in big cities are mostly very advanced. In contrast, their counterparts in the country tend to be of inferior quality.Concession 让步关系标志词Despite /in spite of …(后面只能跟名词名词词组或者动名词)(尽管有…),albeit…(尽管,后面只能跟形容词或者介词短语), 形容词+as it may be…(尽管,前面只能加形容词),Nonetheless/Nevertheless,(尽管如此)e.g. 1 Tough as it may be to get accustomed to a new culture, it will prove very rewarding.尽管适应新的文化可能很难,但这会被证明是很值得的.2 Rote Learning is at times necessary, albeit monotonous.死记硬背有时候是必要的,尽管很枯燥和机械.3The government plays a crucial role in scientific research, Nonetheless, private companies hold certain advantages in conducting scientific research.Definition 下定义关系标志词A is best characterized by…( A 最明显的特征是…),A constitutes…(A 构成…) A means…, A consists of …(A 由…组成).e.g. A fine journalist is best characterized by discipline, determination and keen observations.一个好的记者最重要的特点是自律,毅力和敏锐的观察.Animal experimentation, in some cases, constitutes callous abuse of test animals.Supposition假设论证, 标志词provided that…(如果) given the choice…(如果可以选择的话…)only if…(只有…)as long as…(只要) if…, suppose that…e.g. Provided that we can minimize the pain of test animals, animal experimentation should be continued.e.g. Given the choice, many people would live in big cities rather than the countryside.Modification 修饰关系标志词that, which, whoIn this day age, we have a proliferation of buildings that look exactly likethe buildings our ancestors built.Today, teenage students are under increasingly severe stress in their studies, which has disturbed and alarmed many adults.补充资料IELTS 写作考试的常用模板和句型进步类1) In contemporary society, the human race is advancing at an unprecedented rate in a multitude of arenas.=in many fields. 在当今社会,人类正以前所未有的速度在很多领域向前发展.2) Today we have embarked upon the …era. 今天,我们已经进入了…的时代.We have embarked on the information era. –he has embarked on the road of committing crimes.3) Since the advent/arrival of the…era… 随着…时代的到来…例句:Since the advent of the information era, our efficiency at work has been greatly enhanced.随着信息时代的到来,我们的工作效率得到了很大的提高.例句 2 With the advent of the information era, school education has undergone profound changes at an accelerated rate.倒退类4) But A is accompanied by B 但是伴随着…(某种好现象)的到来,某种坏现象也出现了.例句:But the proliferation of English is accompanied by the extinction of many lesser-known languages.但是随着英语的广泛传播的是大量小语种的消亡.5) Accompanying all the advantages brought about by the profound social changes have come some sufferings; and …is very prominent among them. 随着深刻的社会变革带来的种种好处,出现了很多问题,…是其中很显著的一个.Please analyze causes of traffic congestion, and give some solutions. Accompanying all the conveniences brought about by violent social changes have come some negative effects, and traffic congestion is the most pressing one / the most serious one.6) With the incidence(发生率) of …hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed. …的发生率居高不下,这引起了很多人的困扰和警觉.Traffic offenses have become a problem confronting modern people, please give some suggestions of how to deal with it effectively.With the incidence of traffic accidents hovering at high level, many people, especially sociologist and anthropologist, have shown great concern.7) In this day a nd age, it is standard practice for … to do something. 今天,某些人做某事是很普遍的.例句:In this day and age, it is standard practice for parents to rush around all day busying themselves with their work. Many of them cannot spare some time to take care of their children,which has led to some serious social consequences. This essay will make some analysis concerning this phenomenon.8) Such a grave situation merits our careful attention.这样一个严重的情况值得我们关注.Juvenile delinquency is an issue/topic worth our concern / discussion / analysis.Efforts will be made to analyze this topic in this essay.9) The issue of … has been thrown into sharp focus. …引起了人们的强烈关注.例句:Soaring car ownership has thrown the issue of car accidents into public attention / widespread concern.10) Howev er, there is no consensus on …yet. 或者people hold divergent /contrasting/conflicting view on… 或者people are divided over… 不同的人关于某个问题持不同的看法.例句:People hold contrasting views on animal experiments.人们对动物试验持不同的看法.Some people hold that the experimentation on animals is justified. However, others believe that this practice is a reflection of cruelty. From my perspective, it is advantageous to some degree whilst its drawbacks can never be overlooked. / As for some experiments, animals are irreplaceable subjects but I think we should be kind as possible as we can when carrying out these experiments. /I think this practice is to some extent cruel and unjust to animals but at least in the near future we cannotget rid of it completely.11) Something has been growing at an alarming/ staggering rate. 某事物正在以令人震惊的速度增长.例句:With the car ownership soaring in China, traffic accidents have been growing at an alarming/staggering rate. Accompanied by the dramatic development of society, women crimes have been growing at an alarming rate. Such a grave situation has aroused widespread concern, especially sociologist and educationists. In essay attempts will be made to explore the causes of this issue and provide some feasible solutions.12) Whether…has triggered /aroused heated debate / discussion.是否应该…引起了激烈的辩论Whether… is an issue open to debate 或者Whether…is a controversial issue. 例句:Whether student should appraise their teachers' performance is an issue open to debate.是否学生应该评价老师的教学是一个没有定论的问题.13) Some (people) assert/ argue/hold/maintain/claim/assume that… 有一些人认为…例句:Some people assert that relocating large companies to the countryside is the best way to resolve the traffic and housing problems in cities. 一些人认为把大公司搬到乡村是解决城市交通和住房的最好方法.14) …is largely fuelled by...某现象主要是被…所推动.例句:The proliferation of plastic bag is largely fuelled by the pursuit for lowercosts.IELTS 议论文主体段写作加分37句型前进类1 profit fromPeople throughout the world can profit from the advancement in motorized flight.Flight to transport fruits to places where there is no such fruits or not in season.Mobile phones can bring about some drawbacks such diseases. Whether we should avoid using mobile phones.People throughout the world / in every corner of the world can profit from the advancement of information technology. Nowadays we can keep in touch with each other and communicate with our friends or clients quickly by means of mobiles phones. However, some research reveals that mobile phone may cause some medical complaints and thus it is suggested that we should cease using them. In my viewpoint, the advantages of mobile phones outweigh the disadvantages.2 A is an integral /indispensable part of BAdvertising has become an indispensable part of our lives and it has been exerting profound influence on the way we live, work, play and learn.3,S omething plays a pivotal /key role in …It is universally acknowledged that education plays a pivotal role in individual success.4, Enable /allow somebody to do somethingCultural assimilation enables newly-arrived immigrants to get ahead in the new societysuccessfully.5get accustomed to do something/adjust to /adapt toNew immigrants must get accustomed to the local culture to succeed.6Someone can have access to something 或者can access something 或者can utilize somethingIn this day and age, many individuals can have access to the Internet via /by means of computer or mobile phone.倒退类1…is attended by /…is accompanied byThe staggering advancement of technology is attended by severe pollution of the ecosystem.2The more…the more…The more vehicles on the road, the more traffic congestions to occur.3A can be attributed to B 或者B stems from AThe proliferation of traffic accidents can be in large measure attributed to the traffic law not being stringent enough.4be afflicted with/be plagued withIn present-day society, a host of countries are afflicted with chronic poverty.5deprive someone of somethingModern cities deprive city-dweller of fresh air and the comfortable pace of life.6something prompt/impe ls somebody to do…Peer pressure often impels youngster to spend excessively on fancy clothes and accessories.7A has rendered B + adj./noun 形容词或名词We must ensure that technological innovations will not render us slaves to high technology. 其中We must ensure that..意思是我们必须确保…我们必须确保科技创新不会让我们变成高科技的奴隶.The fast-paced way of life has rendered many people alienated from one another.With the acceleration of living tempo, modern people are confronted with many physical and psychological problems. Among them, stress is the most prominent one. This has brought about numerous negative social consequences and aroused widespread concern especially among psychiatrists and sociologist. This essay focuses on exploring the causes and providing some ways to relieve stress.快节奏的生活让很多人彼此疏远.8A recent study conducted by the organization / association / institution /union / scientist reveal that…如果是教育问题用UNESCO如果是犯罪问题可以用the Ministry of Justice 交通问题可以用the Ministry of Transportation 建筑问题可以用the Ministry of Construction 环境问题可以HSUS and GreenpeaceA recent study conducted by HSUS and Greenpeace suggested that there were over one million mammals in lab cages today.9 be addicted to /preoccupied with somethingIn present-day society, many individuals are addicted to /preoccupied with various forms of gambling.10 something is the chief culprit in 或者something is the root cause of …The population explosion is the chief culprit in water scarcity.11be confronted with somethingIn contemporary society, we are confronted with a large number of violent and pornographic TV shows.12 present/pose a threat to…In contemporary society, the proliferation of non-biodegradable rubbish poses a grave threat to humanity.13 be awash with/be inundated with somethingThe media are be awash with/be inundated with detailed crime coverage.14 if…something will ensueIf parents neglect their offspring, lack of discipline and respect will ensue. 15With the incidence of … hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.With the incidence of driving offenses hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.16something is unwarranted /unjustifiableExperimenting upon lab animals without trying to alleviate their pain is unwarranted/unjustifiable.中间类1…on the grounds that…Some others oppose to animal experimentation on the grounds that it is inhumane.2 exert beneficial/ baneful/ profound influence on somethingIn this day and age, globalization is exerting profound impact on the way we work, live,play and learn.3 A prevail over / outweigh/ outbalance BThe advantages of imposing stiffer punishment on driving offender prevail over the disadvantages.4 A bring about/ generate/ breed/ engender/ spawn /induce B. Technological innovations have brought about profound changes to the political, economical and cultural arenas.5 A is a key determinant of BIn an individual's career, tenacity is a key determinant of success.6 It is manifest that …或者It is universally acknowledge that…It is manifest that globalization can also engender a host of banes to the lives of people in the third-world countries.解决类1 give priority to somethingThe government should give priority to the optimization of its financial resources.2 dedicated A to BThe government should dedicate more money to the alleviation of chronic poverty.3 be likely to fall prey to / be vulnerable toWithout proper parental guidance, children are very vulnerable to the violent or pornographic content on TV shows.4 something should be condemned rather than condoned(押尾韵) Indiscriminate copying of traditional architectural style today should be condemned ratherthan condoned.5 it is imperative/ crucial/ key/ essential that… 或者something is of paramount/ overriding importance.To the newly-arrived immigrants, it is imperative that they adapt to the local culture immediately.6 abide by/ comply withIt is essential that government pass more stringent laws to compel drivers to abide by/ comply with the law.7 something requires/ necessit ates /call for…The grave ecological problem requires/ necessitates/ call for joint effort of all the nations on the globe.8 distinguish between A and BMany youngsters lack the capacity to distinguish between right and wrong.9 must ensure thatParents must ensure that they dedicate enough time and energy to their offspring.结尾段常用模板1) based on the above discussion, I am convinced that…(用于一边倒文章的结尾段)基于以上的讨论,我确信…2) In the final analysis, I concede that… However, ….On balance…(用于折衷式文章结尾段) 作为最后总结,我承认…但是…综合起来看… 3) The upside of something, outweighs its downside 或者the strengths of something,prevail over its weaknesses或者the pros of something outbalance its cons.某事利大于弊(如果弊大于利把顺序颠倒一下就可以了)IELTS 作文常用同义词人类the human race, humanity, man, humankind, Homo sapiens在当代in contemporary society, in present-day society, in this day and age解决(及物动词)tackle, address, resolve, combat破坏(及物动词)undermine, jeopardize, devastate(最后一个与其最强)影响(名词)impact, repercussions, ramifications, implications危险(名词)perils, hazards, dangers明显的(形容词)manifest, apparent, evident, obvious从事(及物动词)carry out, conduct, perform, go about积极的,好的beneficial, advantageous消极的,坏的baneful, detrimental好处-坏处benefits, blessings, boons—banes, pros—cons, advantages—disadvantages, merit—demerit无处不在的prevalent, pervasive大量的a host of, a multitude of, a vast number of (后面跟可数名词复数) a great deal of, a vast amount of(后面跟不可数名词单数)增进enhance代替improve 贫穷的impoverished代替poor保护preserve代替protect 富裕的affluent/wealthy代替rich污染contamination代替pollution 需要(及物动词)require, necessitate, call for第二讲十大全真版本X文,词汇与模板Education 类Some peoplethink students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers' job performance. Others believe that will lead to loss of respect and discipline. Discuss and give your own opinion.开头段(不少于4句)In this day and age, it is standard practice for business executive to fill out performance-evaluation forms to give their assessment of their subordinates' work. But when it comes to the evaluation of school teachers' job performance by their students, people hold divergent views. Some argue that students should be allowed to do so. Others contend that disrespect and indiscipline will ensue if students evaluate their teachers work. Personally, I believe both these two views have some merit.主体段1(不少于5句)Granted, there could be some possible drawbacks to students evaluating their teachers' work. First, if not well-managed, evaluation by the students may be completely worthless or even misleading. It is manifest that not all students would give their evaluation responsibly and some students may make mean comments. Secondly, some students criticize their teacher not because their teachers have a slack attitude about their job. Rather they do so because they dislike or even despise schooling.主体段2(不少于7句)However, encouraging students to evaluate their teacher can bring about more boons. In the first place, it is an effective means of motivating theteachers to improve their lectures.Teachers have to keep adjusting their teaching to measure up to the expectations of the student. In the second place, regular input affords the teacher objective and balanced ideas about their own performance. Without such feedback, it is hard for the teacher to have accurate assessment of their own teaching. In the third place, a measure of students' autonomy can make the student better prepared for their adult life. The student becomes better at decision-making and critical thinking.结尾段(不少于3句)In the final analysis, I concede that enabling the student to evaluate their teachers' performance might have some potential drawback. However, by averaging out student's appraisal and encourage them to evaluate responsibly can eliminate the downside of this practice. On balance, I am convinced that allowing students to evaluate their teachers is in the best interests of students, teachers, school administrators, and the society as a whole.教育类8分X文Children who grow up in families without large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with problems in their adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. Do you agree or disagree题目点评:这道题目是IELTS writing task2当中比较少见的"看着容易写好太难"的题目(很多IELTS作文题目看起来很难,写好却不一定特别难).首先要注意到区别"families without large amounts of money" 和"poor families" 这两个概念的差异,前者不仅仅指"low-income families" 还包括"middle-income families", 所以题目的意思和一些同学概括的"穷人的孩子早当家不同";另外一个误区在于因为这道题目和中国的文化比较贴近,很多同学会举过多的简单生活事例但是忽略了推理,论证缺乏深度.从论点上看,考虑到多数考生更熟悉中国的国情,肯定是totally agree 更好写,布什的内阁里面现在也有拉洋板儿出生的(不过美国的富豪的孩子当中牛人还是出了不少,四十三位总统里面也有大量的富家子弟,从整体上看西方有钱的家长更舍得让自己的孩子经历风雨).既然观点写一边倒,那么结果当然就是五段式――开头段转述题目+主旨句,主体段1讲一般家庭的孩子比富家孩子有更强的心理承受能力,主体段2讲一般家庭的孩子有更强的独立性,主体段3讲普通家庭的家长对小孩的要求往往更严格,几位段总结上三层意思.Thesis statement 和topic sentences (X文里用横线标明) 关键词:income gaps 指收入差距income inequality 指收入不均intergenerational 两代人之间的turn the table 是个idiom, 有点像中文说的"打翻身仗" offspring 孩子counterpart 相对应的人(或事务) meritocratic society 说白了就是"凭本事吃饭的社会"self-restraint 自制能力infancy 婴儿期frugality 勤俭financial strains 说白了就是缺钱,名词well-off/affluent (adj)/ well-to-do/ well heeled/ wealthy 自己管理自己,名词initiative 主动性well-acquainted 对某事很熟悉,mitigate缓解,要说解决问题,雅思里面词汇也特多tackle/ address/ solve resolve grapple with /combat 再加题目里面的deal with,大家挑着用啦It is widely accepted that we have been living in a "the rich get richer whereas the poor get poorer" age in terms of income gaps within a generation. However, to this day, there has been no consensus yet over the extent to which income inequality is intergenerational. Some contend that the offspring of low-income and middle-income parents can largely grow up manifest better problem-solving abilities during adulthood than their high-income family counterparts thereby turning the table socially and financially. Personally, I believe this is generally the case in any meritocratic society. (Thesis statement) First and foremost, children raised in household not in possession of a good fortune are conditioned early on in their lives to exercise self-control and self-restraint. These individuals learn from their infancy onward that not everything they crave will become theirs instantaneously. Every so often their wishes go beyond their parents' means and they have to come to terms with the resulting sense of frustration or rejection. Throughout the childhood and early adulthood years they are tempered by the repeated experiences of parents' denial of their requests and frugality is inculcated into their minds as a virtue. Consequently these children, for the most part, are apt to interpret scrimping and saving, emotional uneasiness, not infrequent financialstrains and menial first jobs as an integral part of life rather than a devastating ordeal. Hence they end up being better able to manage stress in their adult years and less likely to panic or get daunted when problems occur.11Further, children brought up by parents of low or middle economic status often grow up to be physically, mentally and professionally more independent than children brought up by affluent parents. It goes without saying that children whose parents are not particularly well-off are more likely than children of affluent households to know how to get the most out of a modest allowance, if they ever get such a thing at all. To the former group of children most desirable things in life have to be "earned"—that is, more often than not they must put forth great effort before their desire is fulfilled. On the other hand, busy, low or medium salaried parents translate into more autonomy and initiative on the children's part. This originally disadvantaged group becomes spontaneous and handy through crafting toy on their own, resourceful by cooking their own meals, tactful with coaxing their parents into buying them gifts, intelligent thanks to the absence of private tutors, savvy in doing summer jobs, and above all, unrelenting in pursuing their dreams. Lastly, non-wealthy parents typically have higher and more definite aspiration for their children than well-to-do parents. Well-acquainted with all thedisadvantages a meager or fair-to-middling bank account generates, many non-wealthy parents pin their hopes on their children to get their families upwardly mobile. These adults mostly have high behavioral, educational and (subsequently) occupational expectations for their children. As a result, they cannot afford to be permissive parents. Spoiling their offspring rotten is the last thing they care to do and they are always ready to discipline their children when they misbehave. They keep tabs on their children's grades at school and do not spare the rod when their offspring do not measure up academically. The odds of children raised in such rigorous environments having good problem-solving skills are apparently better than children raised otherwise. To conclude, the chief determinant of individuals' problem-solving skills is not the amount of money their parents can amass when they are little. Rather, hands-on experience in comprehending, analyzing, resolving, mitigating or circumventing problems is more essential to the cultivation of problem-solving abilities. Hence, I am convinced that families without great wealth are more advantageous to the development of individual capacity to tackle problems.Education 类词汇Education:1) 培养(某种素质)cultivate/ foster/ nurture(vts)促进学生身心发展promote the student's physical, mental (或者用intellectual) andemotional development 心理健康psychological soundness/ well-being/ welfare(nouns) 学习能力(先天就有的)aptitude/ talent 学习能力(后天学习到的)ability/ skill 学生接受的学校教育(名词)schooling(noun) 儿童接受的家庭教育(名词)upbringing(noun) 给学生以动力give the students motivation to do something 或者motivate (vt) the student to do something 青少年adolescents/ youngsters/ youths2) 传授知识impart(vt)/inculcate(vt) knowledge 灌输高尚的道德观念instill(vt) high moral values (注以values 复数比试价值观) 给学生以灵感stimulate the students; thought 或者give the students inspiration 家长教育子女的方式(名词)parenting/ upbringing 教学法teaching methodology/ pedagogical methodology 适应(动词)adapt to do something/adjust oneself to do something/ become accustomed to do something 适应能力adaptability 学生对老师所教授的知识的掌握students' grasp/ command(nouns) of what has been taught 就业技能employable/ marketable skill 3) 限制创造力的发展extinguish(vt)/ stifle(vt)/ constrain(vt) creativity(noun) 打击学生的积极性dampen/sap(vts) the students' enthusiasm 或者frustrate the students 产生不不要的压力beget/ create undue pressure 塑造某人的性格mould(BrE,vt) one's character 责任感a sense of obligation 学生不应该只是被动的接收简单知识的容器student should not be treated as passive receptacles of predigested ideas. 死记硬背learn thing by rote.4) 记忆方程式,公式,定理,定律memorize equations, formulas,theorems and laws(nouns) 应用apply (vt) 盲从follow something blindly/ indiscriminately(adv) 用填鸭式教学教育学生force-feed(vt) the students 为了记忆而记忆memorize for memorization' s own sake 5) 把学生分开教育(比如根据智力或者课堂上的表现) segregate(vt) students 来自于其他同学的压力peer pressure 逆境adverse circumstances /adversity 团队精神team spirit(noun) 独立思考: think independently(adv) 6) 在理解的基础上学习learn things through understanding 鼓励学生用辨证的眼光看问题encourage students to think critically(adv) 学生的反馈students' feedback 或者students' input 学生评价老师的教学students appraise / evaluate their teachers' performance7) 学生学习的各门功课加在一起curriculum(noun) 具体的一门课的内容syllabus 课外活动extra-curricular activity 学校是社会的缩影A school is society in miniature 不遵守纪律(名词)indiscipline/ misbehavior/ mischief (nouns) 不遵守纪律的(形容词)学生disruptive/ unruly students 8) 理论只是theoretical knowledge 通才generalist 专才specialist 全面发展的well-rounded /versatile 为社会健康发展做贡献contribute to societal well-being/ welfare (注意这里welfare不是"福利"的意思)9) 大学学科的分类可以分为:人文学科(包括文学,历史,语言学等)humanities 社会科学(包括政治,经济,社会学等)social sciences 艺术(包括音乐,雕塑等)arts 文科的总称也可以称为liberal arts 或者liberal studies 理科(包括物理,化学,生物等)sciences 工科(包括工程,自动化等)engineering 大学里的任何一个学科都可以叫做一个discipline 基础科学basic sciences 应用科学applied sciences 小学教育primary-level education 中学教育secondary-level education 大学教育tertiary-level education 职业教育vocational education/ training 青少年adolescents/ youngsters/ youthsEducation 类模板1 In this day and age, it is universally acknowledged that education is one of the key determinant of individual success. 众所周知,在当代教育是一个人成功的决定因素之一.2In contemporary society, education plays a pivotal role in individual development. 在当代社会,教育在个人发展中扮演着至关重要的角色.Technology & media 类科技类2/26 people today can perform the everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions, without meeting others face-to-face. What effects will this phenomenon have on individuals and society as a whole开头段(不少于3+1句)The interactivity of the Internet and the mobile phone has enabled a multitude of people to purchase their desired items or pay their phone bills without stepping out of their offices or homes. And many others can even register for tests or sign contracts online. This。

雅思大作文ABC完整版讲义

• 题目确定A不确定C：拓展结果 • 阐述一个问题或者一个好处：特定化 • 题目出现两个不同的事物或者凑字数的时候：对比 • 名词复数：举例 • 任何时候，都可以多解释原因和背景
• 情况1：确定A • Do you think it is a positive or negative development? • Do advantages outweigh disadvantages? • What effects does it cause? • 和部分do you agree or disagree的题目， Discuss Both views的题目 • 结构：A+思前+B+想细节+C+想后
混合题
• 报告类和观点类混合一起考
• • • • • 譬如说 Why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development? NB 有时候，雅思会问 What problems does it cause? What are the solutions to this problem?
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• • • • • • • • • • • • 阶段I 套作文 1 不准滥用连接词（moreover, in this way, for example 等）, 不准用套句和模板 2不准在开头段和结尾段浪费时间（主体部分决定一切！） 3不准乱换词（特别是小作文！除非你确定替换的词是对的）变化必死！ 4 不准写虚的东西（什么陶冶情操、精神文明、男女搭配干活不累，不准写！） 5不准凑字（要具体解释，不准重复！）阶段II 背作文 6不准背材料乱套（要注意审题） 7 不准用大词！大词必死！ 8 不准犯语法错误（100句翻译反复做，lecture 1-4的资料都要做） 9 不准乱写从句（特别是定语从句、分词、倒装等） 10 不准翻译大脑里所有的中文（要用自己熟悉的表达和词伙！）不要翻译 ABC！

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雅思写作冲刺时间：一个小时，无法超时上午九点考试，写作往往是 11 点开始考。

一般学生考到这里的时候就蒙了。

雅思写作考试是国内考试时间最长的一个，比托福等都长。

图表作文只占了 1/3 的分数，那议论文就占了 2/3。

G 类也要按 A 类要求去做。

Academic writing 的特殊要求1. Some teachers don't know how to use computers to help the students effectively. 不能用缩写，凡是用了缩写的都是业余选手，专业选手必须要用， do not.. Shouldn't 也是错的，特别提醒大家， cannot 中间没有空格。

如果你不相信我说的话，我建议你可以翻下剑 5 剑 6，一个缩写你都找不到。

2. Historic buildings attracts lots of visitors and can improve local economy. 大家觉得哪个是口语词汇。

其中lots of 是特别口语化词汇，可以用 numerous 或者 a host of 这两个单词修饰可数名词。

A great deal of 不可数。

3. The impact of tourism on these neighbourhoods should be analyzed. 下次你看到任何-ze 结尾的都是美式英语， -se 结尾的都是英式英语，而这里的 neighbourhood 是英式英语，而 neighborhood 是美式英语，有些同学会问是不是雅思考试当中只能用英式英语呢？不是这样的，在剑桥 6 中明确说了可以用英语或美式，但两者不能混合使用。

我建议大家-our -se 是英式的， -or -ze 是美式的，这两者的区别是最常见的，其他的我们就没有必要掌握了。

4. Children in wealthy families are more and more depend on their parents. 这里哪里不像学术写作呢。

More and more , 给大家推荐一个词， increasingly.5. Serious crimes harm people's lives. 雅思针对的母语是非英语的人，大家看考官的作文也不是很难。

但这里 serious 高中词汇， crime harm 初中词汇， people 和 life 就是小学词汇了，给大家推荐一个 severe, criminal act, damage destroy, impair people's health, human being 这个词太大，不建议使用， individual6. The advantages of stopping animal experiments are more than continuing them.其中more than 换成 outweigh7. Today, advertisements are everywhere. There are many ways to advertisements. 简单句不适用，中间加个连词即可。

8. The environment is becoming worse. We must work together to deal with it. 因果关系，加because 就很一般了哈，加个 therefore.9. So, we must take steps to deal with the environment problem! So 换成 therefore,大家在写作中，千万不要用这么有激情的句子哈，好的雅思作文必定是冷静推理的来的，所以，感叹号去掉，还有， must 换成 should.10. We must be friendly to others because the Bible said, "treat your neighbours as you would like to be treated." 不能出现宗教语言。

大作文， 40 分钟，最低要求 240 字，要求考高分的同学，建议 270-280， 7 分以上的同学，我建议 300 字以上。

大家刚看了雅思真题库，不知道大家判断出了自己认为难的部分。

但是如果没有素材的话，你再好的基础都无法体现出来。

TourismEducationGovernmentWomen and familiesLanguage and cultureTechnology and the mediaDevelopment and globalizationCrimeAnimalsEnvironmental problems雅思不会出时事类的话题，只出争议比较大的话题。

常见的词汇，常见的句式都可以通用。

推荐大家掌握思考方法A. 分类法Some people think old buildings should be destroyed and replaced with modern buildings. To what extent do you agree?老房子可以分成要拆的，和不要拆的。

这样子就有四段。

这样子词汇可以成倍增加。

开头用模板主题两段不要写一样长，一段可以多写一个理由，这样子你的倾向比较明显。

Some high school graduates go to travel or work for a period of time before they go to university. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?分成文科类，理科类的B. 替代法Some people think motorized flight was the greatest invention in the twentieth century. Do you agree or disagree?形容词最高级/ only / stop (ban)存在漏洞替代法飞机很伟大，但存在争议，主体第一段先让步，写两个理由，好处飞机的。

主体第二段可以举电脑，手机，举三个反例Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve safety on the roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?主体第一段可以先让步，效率很高，政府的投入很少第二段可以举三个反例，行人，警察，设施，只管司机是不够的，还要管其他的。

Some people think animal experimentation should be banned. To what extent do you agree?主体第一段，残忍，传播疾病第二段，医学，制药工业，航天技术，心理学的研究。

不用动物用人的话更残忍。

现阶段无法禁止，只能尽量少用。

C.裸奔法TM STREEC (真正的裸奔是 streaker 音译啊) $Technology & efficiencyMind soulSociety crimeTime spaceRights responsibilitiesEnvironment healthEmployment competitionCulture populationMoney fun任何一个词汇都可以套用以上的词汇问题写作中可以引用的16句名人名言Education1 “A child miseducated is a child lost." - -John F. Kennedy2"Education is not the filling of a pail,but the lighting of a fire."--W. B. Yeats3 “Technology is just a tool. In terms of getting the kids working together and motivating them,The teacher is the most important."---Bill Gates. Technology“ The greatest danger in modern technology is not that machines begin to think likepeople,but that people will begin to think like machines.”――Albert Einstein 5“As we go forward, I hope we're going to continue to use technology to make reallybig differences in how people live and work." ---Sergey BrinMedia6“He who controls the media, controls the mind. “---Rupert Murdock Government7“Millions of individuals making their own decisions in the marketplace will alwaysallocate resources better than any centralized government." – Ronald Reagan Tourism8“The world is a book,and those who do not travel,read only a page. ”Saint AugustineWomen and Families9“The bond that links your true family is not one of blood, but of respect and joyineach other ’s life . ” Richard BachLanguage10“To possess a second language is to possess a second soul. ” –CharlemagneCulture11“Culture means the widening of the mind and of the ” – Ruth BenedictGlob i t .ion12“ Globalization is not something that we can hold off or turn off. It is theeconomic equivalent of a force of nature — like wind or water . ”---Bill ClintonCrime13“He who does not prevent a crime when he can encourages it. “---Roman philosopherSenecaAnimals14The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way itsanimalsare treated. ----GandhiEnvironment15“Many anthropogenic activities foul the air, contaminate the water and devastatethe forests. ” --- quoted in Newsweek16“Don ’t blow it -- good planets are hard to find . ” quoted in Time magazine第三讲正确使用四种特殊句式正确理解7种句子成分 1 Smoking is just a personal choice rather than a moral issue. (主语可以是动名词，不定式和 Shopping, an necessary activity in everyday is far more convenient in the city than in the country l ．if ,同位语，并不是修饰这个名词，而是把这个名词的成分展开来说，是补充说明) 7 I found the employment situation disappointing . (补语，动词加名词，加形容词或分词，是常见的一种结构)从句)2 Nowadays, more and more people agree that gambling is an unhealthy hobby. (谓语只能是动词)3 Junk food impairs ’s people health (impair 是破坏的意思，固定搭配health ，宾语的组成成分和主语完全一样。