高考英语看图写作

练习4， 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在的城市的新建华 文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房，请根据图画提供的信息， 写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。 注意：1. 词数：100左右。 2. 参考词汇：房租rent (n.)
Dear Bob,
2 加was 3 thought 4 which read “Save water”. 5 saw
Attention:
1 单 词 拼 写 要 正 确 2 句 子 结 构 要 完 整 3 时 态 语 态 要 准 确 4 短 文 要 点 要 完 整
5 词 语 运 用 要 无 误
练习3，假设你是一位生活在某城市的中学生，暑假打算去乡村度假。请根据下面两幅 画提供的信息，写一篇短文。简要说明城市生活环境的不足，重点说明你去乡村度假的 原因。 注意：1. 短文应包括图中所提供的主要信息，并做适当发挥，使短文内容连贯、完整。 2。词数：100左右。
Maybe the following advice will do good to you.
策略： 1、平时多写。 2、及时更正错误，避免再犯。 3、注重积累单词、词组、固定短语、 常用句型。 4、多背诵模仿。
未完待续
补充： 1、次重点：“内容要点”中 涵盖的内容 2、大错：句子结构 谓语构成 词序 语态 时态
审题： 1、 人称： 第一人称
2、 主要时态： 一般现在时
3、抓要点：
3、抓要点：
1）.暑假去乡村，度假
1）拥挤（交通、人、住房）
2.） 城市生活环境的不足
2）空气污染
3）噪音
3 ）.乡村环境的优美（空气、树、水、阳光、动物、农舍） 4. ）乡村生活的乐趣 (钓鱼、爬山、游泳、划船、摘果子、放牛、 散步）
书面表达历年分值与要求 时 间
NMET1994 NMET1995 NMET1996 NMET1997 NMET1998 NMET1999 NMET2000 NMET2001
分值
25/150 25/150 30/150 30/150 30/150 30/150 30/150 25/150
词 数
约100词 80-100 100左右 100左右 100左右 100左右 100左右 100左右
I’m so glad to learn that you’re coming in September. I’ve found a place for you. It’s a small flat of 25 square meters with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa,a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month.
记住这些使文章层次清晰，行文连贯的关 联词，并在写作中学习使用。
1.表示平行、对等或选择关系 and, both…and, as well as . Neither…nor, also, not only…but also 2.表示转折关系
But, yet,however, nevertheless(然而), in spite of(尽 管…仍), although, otherwise, while
3.表示对比关系 On the contrary, instead of, on the one hand…on the other hand, just like, unlike(不象)
4. 表示因果关系
So, for, therefore, as a result, because,owing to, due to, thanks to , on account of(=because of ) 5. 表示时间关系 In the past , now , at present, in the future, in the end, shortly after(不久之后） 6.表示顺序关系 First…second…, then, next, finally, for one thing; for another thing
注意：
②逻辑关系，正确使用联接词 ③句型多样化，避免呆板直译，汉式英语 ④开头与结尾
5、检查修改，规范抄写
练 习 根 据 右 边 六 幅 图 的 提 示 ， 寻 找 要 点
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1、体裁：记叙文体，叙述一男孩浪费水，另一男孩 提醒别人爱惜水的过程。
2、主要时态：一般过去时 3、人称：第三人称Xiao Ming 和Xiao Long
5.In the evening Mr Brown likes reading newspapers.
In the evening his wife often watches TV. (while)
In the evening Mr Brown likes reading newspapers,while his wife often watches TV.
3、小错： 名词单复数 第三人称单数 拼写 标点符号 字母大小写 介词、冠次词等小词
少量错误：1个大错或3－4个小错 一些错误：2个大错或5－6个小错 较多错误：3个大错或7－8个小错 错误多：4个大错或9－10个小错 错误很多：5个大错或10个以上 小错
如在整篇文章一致使用 与过去时间相关的时态， 尽量不予扣分；如果混 合使用，可酌情扣分
5. ）结尾
One Possible Version
I will spend this summer holiday in the countryside. Although the city is modern and convenient, there are still some problems,such as air pollution, crowdedness and noise. In the countryside I can enjoy a comfortable and quiet life. There, the air is fresh and the water is clean. Trees are green and birds are singing. I can also go boating, fishing and swimming in the lake. What’s more, I can climb the hills. All this will be interesting and good for my health. Above all, I can learn more about nature. So I want to go to the countryside for a change. I’m looking forward to coming of my summer holiday.
高考书面表达专题训练（一）
看图作文
要 如何算是一篇好文章？ 点 －覆盖了所有的要点 全 －应用了较多的语法结构 和词汇 词汇,句型 （高级）和 语法多样化（较复杂） 连 －有效地使用了语句间的 接 连接成分，使全文结构紧 词 凑
Practice 1. Connect the following sentences with the conjunctions in brackets (用括号中的连词将 每组句子连到一起。) 1. I didn’t know the way to my hotel.I asked a porter.(so) I didn’t know the way to my hotel, so I asked a
The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school . In fact, it’s only one stop. Do you think you’d like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.
4、要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住五个要点：时间、地 点、人物、事件的前后经过、事情的结果。
练 习 根 据 右 边 六 幅 图 的 提 示 ， 寻 找 要 点
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Comment on the former composition:
One day after school, Xiao Ming turned on a tap and splashed water here and there. At this moment, Xiao Long hapened to pass by. Xiao Ming splashed him with water and made him all wet. Xiao Ming ran away without turning off the tap. When Xiao Long saw this, he went over and turned off the water. He angry because he thinks water shouldn’t be wasted. Then he went home and wrote a notice. He put it up on the wall near the tap. After some time, Xiao Ming went back and looked the notice. He felt sorry for what he had done. 1. 改为happened
题 材 内
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广播通知；通知参加欢迎美国朋友的晚会 看图；给Peter信，指明野餐（picnic）道路 看表格；介绍自己基本情况，书写申请 看图；六图；违反交通法规，被惩罚值勤 看图；六图；参观农场，写日记 看图；二图；写信分析学校三年变化 看图；目击交通事故，警察局里写报告 看表格；介绍学校减负前后的变化（书信）
7.表示递进、强调关系
Besides, furthermore（而且，此外）, in addition , moreover, what’s more ，worse still, above all, certainly important of all, to make matters worse 8. 表示解释、说明关系
porter 2. I spoke English very carefully.I spoke very clearly.(not only…but also) I spoke English not only very carefully but also very clearly.
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3. I repeated my question several times. At last he understood.(and) I repeated my question several times and at last he understood 4. He answered me. He did not speak slowly. He did not speak clearly. (but…neither…nor). He answered me,but he spoke neither slowly nor clearly.
NMET2002
NMET2003 NMET2004 （湖南省）
25/150
25/150
100Байду номын сангаас右
100左右
看表格；介绍学生对公园收门票的讨论
看图;二图；为朋友找住房，介绍房间特征
25/150
100左右
看图：两图；城市与乡村生活环境的对比
看图作文如何写？
1、审题 文字信息 图画信息
人称、时态、要点
五 个 步 骤 2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句 话的细节要点。 3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点 的词语扩展成句子。 4、联句成文： ①句子结构完整