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高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
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字体大小要适中，避免过小或过大。
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使用关键词或短语，突出重点信息。
字体颜色要与背景色形成对比，避 免看不清。
感谢您的耐心观看
汇报人：
针对不同文体进行写作技巧讲解
记叙文：注意叙事顺序，情节曲折，人物塑造 议论文：论点明确，论据充分，论证严密 说明文：抓住事物特征，条理清晰，语言准确 应用文：格式规范，语言得体，内容符合要求
分析经典英文写作范文，提炼写作技巧
逐句分析，提炼句式、词汇 和表达方式
总结范文写作技巧，引导学 生掌握写作要领
字体大小适中，颜色搭配合理
字体大小：根据幻灯片布局和观众距离调整，确保清晰易读 字体颜色：与背景色形成对比，突出重点内容，避免使用刺眼颜色 文字排版：遵循简洁明了原则，避免文字堆积和混乱布局 文字数量：精简文字内容，突出重点，避免过多文字干扰观众理解
图文并茂，增强视觉效果
文字与图片结合，增加视觉冲击力 图片选择要符合主题，清晰度高 图片与文字排版要简洁明了，易于理解 色彩搭配要合理，避免过于花哨或单调
课堂总结与作业布置
总结本节课所学内容及重点难点
回顾本节课所学的 单词和短语。
复习本节课所学的 语法和句型。
强调本节课的重点 和难点。
总结本节课所学的 写作技巧和方法。
布置课后作业及要求
作业内容：根据本节课所学内容，写一篇80-100词的英语作文。 作业要求：认真审题，结合本节课所学知识，注意语法和单词的拼写，书写工整。 上交时间：下节课上课前提交，逾期不候。 奖励机制：对完成出色的同学进行表扬和奖励。
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件(34张)
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year.
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world.
√
• difficult people？ X • the people who suffered from a disaster √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公 园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面 的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。 注意：词数 80-100 。开头语已为你写好。(’95) Dear Peter,
We’re so glad that you are coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you 一“抓”为抓主题。
• Type: 说明文 （书信） • Person: 第一人称 • Tense: 一般现在时，一般将来时 • What: 通过看示意图来野餐 • When: 星期天 • Where: 人民公园
二“列”为列要点。
the key points to be included
英语写作训练
• 英语看图类作文： • 1.记叙文 • 2.议论文 • 3.说明文（含图表）
• Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world.
√
• difficult people？ X • the people who suffered from a disaster √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公 园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面 的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。 注意：词数 80-100 。开头语已为你写好。(’95) Dear Peter,
We’re so glad that you are coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you 一“抓”为抓主题。
• Type: 说明文 （书信） • Person: 第一人称 • Tense: 一般现在时，一般将来时 • What: 通过看示意图来野餐 • When: 星期天 • Where: 人民公园
二“列”为列要点。
the key points to be included
英语写作训练
• 英语看图类作文： • 1.记叙文 • 2.议论文 • 3.说明文（含图表）
高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件
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句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
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基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
1
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.3
表达感谢和期待回复
如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。
I would appreciate it if …; take my application into consideration/ account/ take account of/ seriously
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.2
总结
具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的 说，我就是你要找的合适人选。
As is mentioned above；with；qualities
With all these qualities mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好
Dear sir or madam, __________________________________________ _______________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely , Li Hua
⑵递进关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺并列关系
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least; at first; first of all; in the first place; at last; last of all; for one thing; for another thing; on the one hand; on the other hand; finally what’s more; besides; furthermore; in addition; additionally; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; for example; for instance; like; such as; as follows; take… as an example
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.3
表达感谢和期待回复
如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。
I would appreciate it if …; take my application into consideration/ account/ take account of/ seriously
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.2
总结
具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的 说，我就是你要找的合适人选。
As is mentioned above；with；qualities
With all these qualities mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好
Dear sir or madam, __________________________________________ _______________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely , Li Hua
⑵递进关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺并列关系
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least; at first; first of all; in the first place; at last; last of all; for one thing; for another thing; on the one hand; on the other hand; finally what’s more; besides; furthermore; in addition; additionally; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; for example; for instance; like; such as; as follows; take… as an example
高考英语书面表达高分写作技巧公开课教学课件(共25张PPT)
二、忌次序混乱，连接词单一或缺乏
审完题后，不少考生虽已知道了要写的内容，却不能合 理地组织所给的材料，东一句、西一句，写得支离破碎， 文理不通，让人不知所云。考生最好能迅速地列出要点， 在这个过程中，要考虑一下先写什么，后写什么，句与句 之间，不得逐字或逐条翻译。 段与段之间最好能使用一些能清晰表达逻辑结构的连 接词或句子，如first of all , above all , secondly , next , in fact,besides, in a word , at last , the most important point is that…等等，使文章过渡自然、流畅，做到前后连贯、 层次分明、有条不紊。
注意：不能不 用，且不能少 用，但也不能 滥用。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
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六、忌充分自信、不回查
写出来的东西，很可能有不正确、不恰当的 地方，因此，在答完卷时，至少应从以下几个方 面认真检查：（1）对照题目要求，看全部要点是 否都已包括进去，有无遗漏或误解；（2）文体格 式是否正确规范；（3）词语使用是否合适、正确， 有无语法与用词上的错误， 表达是否符合英语表 达习惯；（4）单词拼写、字母大小写有无错误， 标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。 一句话，对书面表达应尽量做到：不跑题，不 漏点，语言精简合习惯，灵活表达要规范，书法 整齐词有限。
高考英语作文课件ppt
要点二
Writing
Keeping a diary in English, writing English compositions, etc. to improve writing ability
要点三
Speaking
Practicing English conversation with teachers or classes, joining English corners, etc. to improve English listening and speaking ability
On site response and time management strategies
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Time management
Mastering the time management skills of the exam, dividing the time for each question, and not spending too much time on one question
The content criteria include the relevance and depth of the content, as well as the logicality and coherence of the ideas expressed
The structure criteria include the organization and development of the ideas, as well as the clarity and coherence of the overall structure
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Overview of English Composition
高考英语作文 公开课PPT课件
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• The English newspaper in our school is going to publish a passage which introduces American festivals and customs as well as American students' life style in the column called Foreign Culture. I wonder if you can write a 400-word article for me. If you are interested in it, you can post your work to me before June 28th, which is the deadline. If your work is accepted, you can get paid for your hard work. (75words)
• 要点如下： • 1、栏目介绍 • 2、稿件内容 • 3、稿件长度：约400字 • 4、交稿日期：6月28日前
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who (relationship)&why(purpose)
• 1 I'm very glad to represent our school's newspaper, “Foreign Culture” to invite you to write us an article. (邱李涛)
• 2 If possible, I hope the passage could cover about 400 words and you can send it to me before June 28th. (方钦豪)
• 3 By the way, I wish you can finish it before June 28th. Thanks a million and best wishes! (庄之涵)
• The English newspaper in our school is going to publish a passage which introduces American festivals and customs as well as American students' life style in the column called Foreign Culture. I wonder if you can write a 400-word article for me. If you are interested in it, you can post your work to me before June 28th, which is the deadline. If your work is accepted, you can get paid for your hard work. (75words)
• 要点如下： • 1、栏目介绍 • 2、稿件内容 • 3、稿件长度：约400字 • 4、交稿日期：6月28日前
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who (relationship)&why(purpose)
• 1 I'm very glad to represent our school's newspaper, “Foreign Culture” to invite you to write us an article. (邱李涛)
• 2 If possible, I hope the passage could cover about 400 words and you can send it to me before June 28th. (方钦豪)
• 3 By the way, I wish you can finish it before June 28th. Thanks a million and best wishes! (庄之涵)
高三英语作文公开课 PPT课件(共23张)
一个好的段落要有丰富的句式
1.感叹句 2.倒装句 3.强调句 4.省略句 5.With 结构 6.定语从句 7.各种名词性从句 8.各种状语从句
利用不同的句式来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采
1.感叹句 e.g. How disappointed he was! 2.强调句 e.g. It was the young boy that helped the old man. 3.倒装句 e.g. Only in this way can we solve the problem. 4.省略句 e.g. Come to me if necessary 5.定语从句 e.g. The book which was borrowed from the library has been returned. 6.名词性从句 e.g. That’s what I should do.
3.If you work hard, you will make rapid progress.(祈使句+and） Work hard and you will make a rapid progress. 4.I won’t believe what he says. (no matter what状语从句） No matter what he says, I won’t believe. 5.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(使用V-ing 形式） Singing and laughing, they went back to school
Ladies and gentlemen,
Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our village! ①This village Is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people .It used to be poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 1978③ and has been developing very fast. People here ④live a much better life than before. Now It is taking on a new look.
高中英语高考英语作文之环保省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖PPT课件
6/41
preserve our natural resources 保护自然资源
•It is highly important to preserve the environment. •维护自然环境至关主要。
7/41
Greenhouse effect温室效应
•This adds to the power of the greenhouse effect, making the planet even warmer.
develop a habit of form a habit of keep a habit build a habit
15/41
with the development of
•Certainly, with the development of science and technology, more and more plastics will come into use.
。
•We must take steps to control air pollution.
•我们必须采取些办法来控制空气污染。
18/41
climate change •Global warming refers to an average increase in the Earth's temperature that, in turn, leads to climate change.
35/41
water
• 1. It’s our duty to save water
• 责任节约用水是我们责任。
• 2. As we know , water is very important to man, • 我们知道，水是非常主要人， • 3. We can’t live without water. • 我们生活离不开水。
preserve our natural resources 保护自然资源
•It is highly important to preserve the environment. •维护自然环境至关主要。
7/41
Greenhouse effect温室效应
•This adds to the power of the greenhouse effect, making the planet even warmer.
develop a habit of form a habit of keep a habit build a habit
15/41
with the development of
•Certainly, with the development of science and technology, more and more plastics will come into use.
。
•We must take steps to control air pollution.
•我们必须采取些办法来控制空气污染。
18/41
climate change •Global warming refers to an average increase in the Earth's temperature that, in turn, leads to climate change.
35/41
water
• 1. It’s our duty to save water
• 责任节约用水是我们责任。
• 2. As we know , water is very important to man, • 我们知道，水是非常主要人， • 3. We can’t live without water. • 我们生活离不开水。
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
What is the ideal length for a college entrance English composition?
The ideal length is typically 200-300 words, depending on the specific requirements of the exam
Conclusion Writing
04
Sample text analysis
An in-depth analysis of narrative writing samples
Through in-depth analysis of narrative writing samples, students will understand how to construct story plots, shape character images, and use language skills to express emotions and themes.
What are the common mistakes students make in English composition?
Common misses include poor grammar, weak vocabulary, unclear organization, and lake of origin or depth in analysis
Grammar Control
Correctly use tensions, sense structures, and punctation
Fluent Expression
Write in a smooth and coherent man with proper transitions
高中英语写作公开课(共61张PPT)
表示选择关系的并列句
常用的连词有or , either…or…..，otherwise, or else(否则）, 等连接.如：
Either you are mad or I am. You must go early, otherwise you will miss the bus.
Will he still be there or will he have gone away? Take this bus or else you won’t get there in time.
第五种句型：S+V+P
She is a student. He has become an engineer.
It tastes sweet.
His face goes red.
注意：系动词除了be 动词外，还包括become, turn, look, seem, appear, sound, taste, smell, remain, prove, keep, fall.
并列句：由并列连词把两个或两个以上的简单句 连在一起的句子叫做并列句。
He helps me and I help him. He not only gave us a lot of advice , but also helped us to study English.
注意：不同的并列连词表示并列分句之间的不同关系， 根据并列分句之间的关系不同，并列分句可以分为四种。
Once, she teached in India for many years . In 1950, she set up the Missionaries of charity to help the poor in Calcutta. She devoted to help the poor 、 the patiences、the homeless persons and the dead persons. Because of those, in 1979, she got the Nobel peace prize in 1997. she died in India.
高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
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你再看这开头……
I strongly recommend that the time students devoted to studying in school should be reduced to eight hours a day. The main reasons accounting for it are as follows.
Now our School has8 pupils.
伴随状语
2）Weather permitting, I’ll visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation.（天气允许的话）
5. 使用名词性从句
1.I am sorry. I didn’t reply without delay.
I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.
2. What is the most importantI icsanthat help children improve their English.(最为重 要的是)
6. 表示特定的顺序关系
首先:firstly 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end
7. 换一种方法表述
换句话说: in other words; that is to say;
8. 进行举例说明
例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as that is to say, namely, actually, and so on, believe it or not,
8. 使用倒装句、感叹句
1. How I wish
I would
read and reply your email as soon
as I received it. (我多么希望)
2. not only… but also…引起的倒装
Not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. (我不仅能独立赚钱)
5. 表示时间关系
当… 的时候 : when ; while
在…之后: after 在…之前: before
直到: until 直到…才…: not……until…… 一…就… : as soon as 后来， 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近来: lately; recently 自从… :since 从那时起: from then on
which is able to enrich my life.
which will make my life colorful.
enriching my life．
7. 使用虚拟语气
我相信如果你是我，你也会做出同样的 选择。
I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.
句式美：运用得当的高级句式结构可以 给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此 而生辉 。
衔接美：使用恰当的连接词，对写一篇 有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章 上下衔接自然、条理清晰。
你校英语社团部要组织一次英语赛，
就“是否应该缩短中学生在校时间为8小时” 这一论题进行辩论，请你作为正方代表，写 一份发言稿，内容要点如下：1.保证充足睡 眠 2. 提高学习效率 3. 增加自主学习时间 注意： 1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯 3. 辩论稿的开头已为你写好 （不计入总词数）。 As a senior high
怎样运用复杂结构：
1.主动转被动
People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般)
It is suggesttehadt the conference be put off. (高
级)
We expect the advisor to work 4 hours a week .
Three Rules:
1.You learn to write by writing. 2. There is no good writing;
only good rewriting. 3. When in dout, refer to Rule
No. 1 and 2.
Five Steps:
Analyze the writing task. Organize it. Draft. Revise. Edit.
高考英语写作中怎样使用复杂结构
怎样运用复杂结构：
1.适当的语态 2.使用不定式 3.使用过去分词 4.使用V.+ing形式 5.使用名词性从句 6.使用定语从句 7.使用虚拟语气 8.使用倒装句,感叹句
高考英语写作中要学会使用恰当的关联词
III.常用的连接词
1. 表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容 另外，还有：what’s more; besides;
also; moreover; in addition
2. 表示转折关系 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet;
instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.
student, I strongly recommend that
语法篇
这第一句写的…
I strongly recommend that This is right we as a senior high student….
I strongly recommend that should shorten school time into eight hours.
The advisor is expected to work 4 hours a week .
2. 使用不定式
In order to earn money by myself and broaden，mIyinhtoernidzotnos look for a parttime job as a salesman. （为了独立赚钱和拓宽视野）
13. 表示强调： above all, indeed, surely,
certainly, of course, after all, without any delay, at least, at most , most important, undoubtedly
背诵一些题材的常识性语句
复习开学初所发的８８个短句讲 义！
3. 使用过去分词
She walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般)
Followed by many students , she walked out of the room . (高级)
4. 使用v-ing形式
1）Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般)
这动词错的…
Short student’s time in school can have a good effect on study, it can important for student’s study xiaolu, and increase student’s own time.
原来改书面表达就是 改错……
6. 使用定语从句
1）The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般)
The girl whose composition was well wwarsitten highly spoken of. (高级)
2)maybe I will work as a volunteer for a school as a teaching assistant__________.(这将丰富我 的生活)
therefore ; otherwise ; finally ; furthermore ;Thus ; namely ; although ; afterwards ; personally;
12. 表示结果： thus, therefore, so, as a
result, seeing that, luckily, unfortunately
to tell you the truth, for this reason
9. 用于陈述事实
实际上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact
跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth
10. 对一个话题进行总结
总而言之，总的来说:
on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word, finally, in conclusion, generally speaking, as you know, in the end , 11. 其它常用到的副词
In my opinion, we must have enough time to study, but we also should keep enough time to relax and sleep, either of them are important. Because of we have time to relax, we can study energetic. Reduce study time also can improve the quality of our school life.