高中英语作文与范文改错训练
高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)
高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)短文改错(每篇文章共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(1)Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burst into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.(2)Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine(3)Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now wheneverI am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.(4)Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.(5)Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua(6)Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll meet you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours,John(7)Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class Six, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are notsatisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with some effectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance.Thank you.Yours,Wang Min(8)Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.(9)Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may also get others confusing.(10)Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.(11)I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.(12)We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set about doing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!(13)My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.(14)Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua(15)You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on,"Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first.I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time,I woke up and found me still in bed!(16)It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. It isso a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly,I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.(17)I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner(执业者). One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course”I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they offered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.(18)Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.(19)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.(20)I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.(21)When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had studied atall at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test.I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.(22)I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class.Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.(23)Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told the artist he didn’t want to any shadows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.(24)I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..(25)I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.(26)This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy,the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.”(27)Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death.As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures.Nor do they care about which happens to consumers.They shall be charged by law.Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua(28)Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua(29)Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best.Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping(30)Dear Lucy,I am very excited to learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet(31)Abby,How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you.I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes,Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold towards me. Many time, I wanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone!I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family.But when my cousin was born,everyone pays more attention to her.So I disliked her and couldn’t get along well with her. With time went on,I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time.I tried to find a proper time to apologize.When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago,I took my cousin to play outside.In the way to the playground.I bought much snacks for her.Then we began chat.When we talked about their childhood,suddenly,I said“sorry”gently.She was silently,so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly.But after while she said:“Don’t say that.In my memory,you are always friendly.”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popular, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)V olunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday,the Students’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas.Some choose to write a letter saying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should be responsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好,常见类型要记牢。
高中英语短文改错常见改错类型总结(优秀范文5篇)
高中英语短文改错常见改错类型总结(优秀范文5篇)第一篇:高中英语短文改错常见改错类型总结英语改错纵观近几年高考题中的短文改错,不难看出,其错误形式基本上为:错词占6行左右;正确占一行;多词和缺词一般占3行左右。
错误类型主要涉及动词、名词、形容词、副词、冠词、代词、介词、连词、主谓一致、固定结构等语法知识。
其中,动词时态、语态、非谓语动词等是考查重点。
1.谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点,常见动词错误类型有①一般现在时与一般过去时错用;② and 前后动词时态不一致;③主谓不一致;④缺少动词,特别是be动词;⑤I particularly enjoyed driving through the countrysidewith you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees.(and 连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致,故saw改为seeing)8.介词错误:词组中的介词误用;介词意思理解偏差;介词的多用或少用There are too many people among my family.(among 改为in,in my family 为固定搭配)I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment myhead touched the pillow.(去掉 at, the moment 引导从句)短文改错解题思路和检查原则1.句中各部分的结构是否完整,特别是每个句子要有动词;2.谓语动词的时态、语态;3.非谓语动词的用法;4.名词的单、复数,格的使用是否正确;5.定冠词和不定冠词是否正确;6.代词的格和性的使用是否有误;7.定语从句中关系代词、副词是否准确无误;8.并列句中的并列连词、主从复合句中的从属连词用的是否得当。
短文改错解题四原则1.改动以最少为原则;2.虚词以添加或删除为原则;3.实词以改变词形为原则4.以保持句子原意为原则。
高中英语短文改错练习题30篇
(1)Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years. It camesudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, Iwent into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, andall is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk fly high into the airand some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catchthem, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came backinto house, it was raining harder and harder. I triedvery hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudlycrashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ranout to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke thetop of the back room.(2)I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year, so now I am spending as more time as I canwith other people who likes to play. They are teachingme the most important rules and technologies of the game,and I am getting the better all the time. We have a neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area.One of my neighbors is helping rest of usimproved our skills. Tonight we are playing againstone of the best teams in the city, but I think we canbeat them if we won't make any mistakes.(3)Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher of Beijing Opera Theatre. Most of his students are from other part of China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteenor seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his studentsthat it is much more relaxing than the one he used tostudy in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when performing. Yet his students deep respect him and henever needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing.For his opinion, actors should go on even when theyfeel they had made a mistake in their performancesbecause the moment is already gone but people can neverbe back to it. . . So art is always changing and developing.(4)Today is Sunday, I have been studying all day long. On the morning, I had a dry breakfast. We have no water to drink because the water supply had cut off. The water had come back inthe evening. I did math then. I didn't stop after 12 o'clock. After a short lunch I had the break. Then I went to my Sunday English Class.After a long and tired class for more than two hours, I gotto home. Some work had been done but some hadn't. I must review all my subject such as the Sciences, the Humanities,that include Chinese, English, Politics and History aswell. That's terribly! Especially when there was no water.(5)I was recent told that listening to loud music is gradually making people hard of hearing. I'm sure it has already beenhappened to my neighbor. For years he has turned a deafear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gave a party she isn't have to invite the rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on rats. He declares they break down, almost paralyze(瘫) with legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them out by their tail. I wonder if the same thing will happen tomy neighbor someday.(6)Dear Ralph,I'm a senior student. I have be in love with a boy for three years. But he is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstlyto express my feeling. And he wrote back. In his letterhe said, "We are students. Our task is study. Let us waitto see until we have any chance after graduation." Soafter graduation I telephoned to him, asking him aboutgo out . But he said he didn't want to. He justwanted to sleep and watched TV.How do you think I should do? Do you thinkI should continue to love him and give up Sheila?(7)Before leaving the class, the teacher, Miss White,said to her class, "Don't leave yourseats. Read your books on yourselves. Youwould study hard and be good students. " As soonas the teacher went away, the classroom becomingnoise. One boy drew a picture of the teacheron the blackboard. Another boy began to make facejust to make the other students to laugh. The boyput his finger close to his mouth and tell theclass that Miss White is coming back. All thestudents sat down their seats and the classroombecame quiet again. The door open and in came Miss White.(8)Once there lived a boy was very fond ofreading. But he was so poor to buy anybooks. So he had to borrow them of a rich manlived far away. The boy always triedhard to finish read the books and returnedthem to the owner within the giving time. Sothe rich man was ready lending him any of thebooks he wanted them. In this way he read a lotand late became a well-known writer of his time. However, the rich man's son who didn't like to study remained a man with a little knowledge.(9)Our four-years-old son came into the houseproudly to showed me a caterpillar(毛毛虫)that was crawling up his arm. Trying hard to hiding mynauseating feeling(掩饰我的恶心), I say, "Mark,why don't you take them back outside Its motherwill be looking for it, but it will miss its mother. "I was feeling rather pleasing at the way I hadhandled the situation. And a few minuteslater Mark returned back to the house with two caterpillars and said excitedly , "Look, I founded the mother!"(10)Like most my schoolmates, I have neither brothers nor sisters---in any other words, I am an only child. My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. They did not want me to do any work at family; they want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I'll get good marks in all my subject. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they really understand their own daughter What things are in other homes, I wonder.(11)March22nd , Tuesday , cloudyI watch TV until nearly 12 o clock, so I could notgo over my lessons. This morning I got up very latethat I had to hurry school without breakfast yet Iwas late of the first class. When I entered the classroom, the maths teacher has to stop explainingan important problem, and all the eyes fixed uponme. My face turned to red. Something even worse happened to me in the English class. The teacher askedme to recite the text, but I could speak nothing but sorry, as I did not spend any time preparing my lessons. The teacher looked at me with his coldly eyes, I stoodat my bench without daring to raise my head. Whata terrible day I had! I will never do anything like this.(12)A king liked to write stories. One day,the king showed some his storieswith a famous writer. The writer said thatthese stories were bad. The king get angrywith him and sent him to the prison. Aftersome time the king felt pity for a writerand set him freely. When the writer wasout prison, again the king showed himsome stories and asked how he thought them.The writer turned into the soldiers and said,"Take me back prison. "(13)At beginning of term I introducedmy teacher for my parents. Our teacherMr. Wang asked my parents of mysummer holiday. To my parents' opinionI have a good time with my classmates.I told my teacher that I have finishedhomeworks at home. Then I helpedmy father in the farm. We went onwork by the lights of the tractors.Father had only two and three young menworking for him at harvest time.(14)Time flies as an arrow. I'm already in the second halfof senior grade 3 before I realized it. It is only a little more than three months before I graduate middle school. Atthe present, I'm busy reviewing my lessons in order totake the college entrance examination. I hope to go to Beijing University, that is one of the best universities not only in China but also in the world. I'll try my betterto turn my dream to reality. Most of my classmates are also studying very hard to realize our wishes. I do believe everyone will be able to enter a very good university and college.(15)Once, lately at night, an Englishman came outof his room into a passage of the hotel and askthe servant to bring her a glass of water. The servantdid as he asked. The Englishman returned his room,and a few minutes later he came into the passage againand once more asked the servant a glass of water.Every a few minutes the Englishman would come outof his room and repeated his request. After half an hourthe astonishing servant decided to ask the man whathe is doing with the water. "Nothing," answered he calmly. "It's simply that the room is on fire.(16)I gave my housekeeper an old pair trousers to washand went in the study to read. My housekeeper usually looked through my pocket before wash my clothes,but for some reasons she failed to do so thistime. As I was reading, I suddenly remember thatthere was a five-pounds note in the back pocket ofthe trousers I had told her to wash it. I droppedmy book and rushed into the bathroom, but it is toolate. My housekeeper says that my trousers had beenin washing machine for fifteen minutes already.(17)One afternoon on April, 1912 , a new ship set off from England to America on it first trip.It was one of thelargest and first ship at that time. It was cold,but the ship was pleasant and people areenjoying themselves. The next day was even cold. People could see icebergs here or there. It was night, suddenly,the man on watch shouting "Look out! Iceberg!"It was too late, a ship hit the iceberg and came to astop, there that was a very big hole in the ship and water began to come. Slowly the ship started to go down.(18)I've a friend who has a big police dog is named Jack. Every Sunday afternoon my friend takes Jack a long walk inthe park. Jack likes these walks in the park very well.One Sunday a young man dropped in my friend. He stayed a long time. He talked and talked. Soon it was the time for my friend to take Jack for his walk, but the visitor still sat talking. Jack became worried his walk in the park. He walkedaround the room several times but then he sat right infront of the visitor and looked him. But the visitor paidnone attention. He continued talking. Finally Jack couldstand it no longer. He hold the visitor's hat in his mouth.(19)June 12,Sunday FineToday is Sunday, I didn't get up early as usually. In the morning after I finished my homework, I do some washing. Then I telephoned one of my classmate and invited himto see a film. And unfortunately, when we got to the cinemaat3:00 p.m. we found all the tickets had sold out.Then we went back to school and played the football.After this, when we were about to go home ,we saw our English teacher, Mr. Wang, coming into the school gate.He told us we have made great progress in English. this termHe also suggested that we should read more and wrote more. We promised him that we would listen his advice.(20)In autumn of 1935,when I was a young man, I was traveling in the north of Indian. One evening,after hunting in the forest all day, I was returningto the place which I had put up my tent. It was gettingdark, but I was walking along a road. Suddenly I sawtwo eye glaring at me from among the trees.What can I do? Should I jump into the riverto save my life? Then I looked at the right.In the river there had a big crocodile waiting towelcome me with its mouth was wide open.(21)Cats are animals of habit. They like to go to sleepabout same time every day and for a certain length of time. They seem to have natural clock inside them that tells themwhen sleeping. Besides their regular sleep, cats take naps(打盹). Some scientists think that people should also take cat nap. The habit would do good for people's health.Cat naps helped build up energy in the body.Since cats have moods(情绪) like these of people,scientists believe that people can improve their moods withcat-napping. People might become more happier and more active.(22)A man shot two students died and woundedfive other at an Australian university on Monday,after he was overpowered by classmates of the victims(受害者). The two dead were both male ofAsianappearance in his early 20s. The othershave being treated for minor(未成年的)injuries.The man, in his mid-30s and is of Asian appearance,was seized several students inclassroom at Monash University, Melbourneand was late arrested.(23)When I first learned to write in English , I run intomuch difficulties.The main problem was that I always thoughtin Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed heradvice and should put down 100 words or so each day.Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself as I waslearning to express me in simple English. One day I wrotea story and showed to my teacher. He liked it very muchand reads it to the class. All said that the story wasa good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me .(24)Dear Xiaohua,It is four days since Mother accepted the operation.She is feeling much more better. The doctors told methe operation was successful, but because her old ageshe had to stay in hospital for other two weeks. Thedoctors also say it was quite necessary for her todo so. We expect to get a full report in two and threedays. Please tell the good news to the rest of familyas soon as possible. You needn't to come here. I'mable to look after Mother myself. You'd bettersend flowers to Mother. She will feel happily.Yours,Xiaohui(25)Tom had retired and lived lonely a longway from town. He hardly never left his home. Butone day he went to town buy some things in themarket, and after he had bought it , he wentinto a restaurant and sit down at a table by himself.When he looked around, he saw several old peoplesput on glasses after reading their newspapers. Soafter the lunch he decided to go to a store to buyhimself a pair of glasses, either, He walkedalong a wide street and fast found a store.(26)My parents were all standing there, shouting at each other. The word "divorce(离婚)" was repeated and broke my heart each time.I had trapped between them and didn't know what to do.A million thoughts rushed into my mind, but nothing of them could ease my feelings. I rushed back to my room, seated down in silence and stared out of the window. The leaves were floating in air. They struggled trying to catch the wind and finally they had to fall on the ground.I knew I was not the only one had gone throughthis. ButImust learn to fight against this. Later in the day I took up with a pen and wrote down "It is until I take a step back and look at my family that I can real appreciate this thing has helped me grow strong and mature(成熟)."(27)Dear editor,In the past my hometown was used to be a beautiful place. Thick trees and green grass could be seen in everywhere. Inorder to build house and grow more crops, people cut downmore and more trees. With time went on, the whole forest was almost destroyed. Gradual,the green hills have changed into wasteland. As a result, sandstorms struck us now and then, from which we suffer a lot. However, I do hope all the people should realize the terribly result of not caring about our environment. What's more, they should take good care of the forests and plant trees instead cutting them down to improve our living conditions.(28)When I found out that my train would three hourslate, I changed my idea and would get a bus instead.I was about to rush out of the train station while awell-dressed old man took me by my arm, "Younglady," said the gentleman, "Shouldn't I find outthe bus schedule (时刻表) before you rush out catch thebus ". I stared at him with my mouth opened. How didhe read my mind? Before I can say a word, he added,"You see, my train is also running late. A same ideacame to me. But I think a good conversation that canhelp pass the time. Before you know it, your train will be there."(29)Dear Kang Li,I haven't heard you for a long time. Howare you? I had just finished the exams. Now I'mglad I have time to write for you. Our teachertells us that China is a big country has themost population in the world. It's on the otherside of the world. Now the sun is shining brighthere and perhaps you're sleeping in the darknight. I wish to know anything more about theChinese way of living. I wonder at if you cantell me about it in your the next letter. Please write soon.(30)I visited the zoo yesterday, and I was veryunhappy and angry about the things what I saw.The large animals was in small cages. The lionwas walking back and forth. It was completelybored. The tiger fell asleep all the afternoon. I seepeople feeding the fish. They were throwingrices and meat into the pond,which couldkill the fish, but no one tried stop them.When I had the drink at the zoo restaurant,the waiter served me rude. Outside the restaurant,the rubbish bins were full and rubbish wasblowing everywhere. It seems that the zoodoesn't look the animals or the visitors very well.(31)Once a man got on a bus for New York. Hehid in toilet, because he did not want to pay.But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person infront of her on the shoulder and say, "There's abum(流浪汉) in the toilet. Tell the bus driver."The message was past from person to person.But anywhere along the way, it changed. The busdriver was told that there was a bomb in the toilet.He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned thepolice. When the police came in, they told thepassengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Thenthey closed the highway. This soon caused a 15-miles-longtraffic jam. Under the help of a dog, the policesearched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb!参考答案11. sudden--suddenly2. hotter---hot3. is--was4. flew5. out--out of6. drop—drops7. house前加the8. loudly---loud9. 去掉when 10. broke—broken21. 去掉in2. more → much3. likes → like4. technologies → techniques5. 去掉the6. play → plays7. rest前加the8. improved → improve9. but--and 10. won't → don't31. part- parts2. a-the3. hope∧to4. 去掉 it5. thought-thinks6. deep-deeply7. hearing-heard8. For-In9. had--have 10. but-and41. On→In2. have→had3. 在cut前加上been4. after→until5. the→a6. tired→tiring7. 去掉to8. subject→subjects9. That--which 10. terribly→ terrible51.recently2. 去掉been3. He-she4. gave---gives5. isn't---doesn't6. in---to7. 去掉a8. with后加their9. trembled---trembling 10. tail---tails61. be--been2. firstly--first3. feeling—feelings4. study前加to5. until-- if / whether6. 去掉to7. go--going8. watched--watch9. How--what 10. and—or71. on-by2. would-should3. becoming-became4. Noise-noisy5. face-faces6. 去掉第二个to7. tell-told8. is-was9.down-down on 10. open-opened81. boy后加 who2. so-too3. Of--from4. lived-who lived5. read-reading6. giving-given7. lending-to lend8.去掉them9. late-later 10. 去掉第二个 a6. but-and7. pleasing-pleased8.And-But9.去掉 "back" 10. founded-found101. Of去掉2. any3. can后加to4. did-do5. family-home6. subject-subjects7. a –the8. 去掉about 9. and-or 10. homes-families111. watch--watched2.very---so3.hurry后加to4.of--for5. Has-had6.eyes后加were7.to 去掉8.speak—say9.as--for 10.coldly--cold.121.some→some of2. with →to3. get →got4. the5. A-the6. freely →free7. out→ out of8. thought→ thought of9. into→ to 10. back→ back to131. At→ At the2. for→ to3. of→ about4. To→ In5. have→ had6. Have-had7. homeworks→ homework8. in→on 9. work→ working 10 and→ or141.As—like2.realized-realize3.graduate∧ from4.去掉the5. examination---examinations6.that—which7. Batter-best8. to—into9. our—their 10. and—or151. lately-late2. ask-asked3.her-him4.he asked---he was asked5. and-but6. servant-servant for7. 去掉a8. repeated-repeat9. astonishing-astonished 10. Is--was161. pair-pair of2.in-into3. wash-washing4. reasons-reason5. remember-remembered6.pounds-pound7.去掉it8.is-was9. says-said 10. In 后加调和17or→and7.shouting→shouted8.a→the181.去is2.Jack→Jack for3.well→much4. in→in on5. He→They6. right7. worried→worried about8.but→and9. looked→looked at 10.none→no191. usually---usual2. do→did3. classmate ---classmates4. And---But 5.had∧ been 6. the 去掉 7. correct 8. have---had 9. wrote---write 10. listen---take/follow201. In-In the2. Indian-India3. right4. in ∧which或which改为where 5.but-and 6.eye –eyes 7.can –could8. at –to 9. had-was 10.去掉was211. right2. same-the same3.have-have a4. sleeping-to sleep5. nap-naps6. for –to7. helped-help8. these-those9. with-by 10.去掉more6.have—are7. Is去掉8. seized后加by9. ∧a 10. later231.run=ran2.many—much3.anything--everything4.my—a5.去掉should6.talk--talking7.me--myself8.to前加it9.reads--read 10.word—words241.accepted---received2.去掉more3. of4.other---another5. said6. or7. family前加 the8. 去掉to9. myself前加by10. happy251. Lonely→alone2. never→ever3.buy前加to4. it→them5. sit→sat6.peoples→people7. After-before8.去掉the9. either→too 10. fast→quickly261.all→both2.had→was3.nothing→none4.seated→sat或后加myself5.air前加the6.and→but7.had前加who8.去掉with9.until前加not10.real=really271.去掉was2.去掉in3.house→houses4.With→As或went→going 5.Gradual=Gradully6.struck→strike7.However→So8. terribly→terrible9.they→we10.instead后加of281.would后加 be2. get→ take3. while → when4. my→ the5. I=you6. catch前加to7. opened →open8. can→could9. A→The 10. 去掉 that291. heard后加from2. had---have3. for---to4. has前加that 或which;has---with5. most---largest6. bright---brightly7. and---but8. anything---something9. 去掉at 10. The去掉301.and→but2.去掉what或把what改为that/which3.was=were4.see→saw5.rices→rice6.tried后面加to7. the→a或去掉the8.rude→rudely9.blowing→blown 10. look后加after311.in → in the2. her → him3. say → said4. past → passed5.anywhere → somewhere6. immediate → immediately7.去掉 in 8. or → and 9. miles → mile 10. Under → with。
高一英语作文范文改错
高一英语作文范文改错给几篇高一水平的英语作文,你们能够挑出它们的错误并进行改正吗?下面小编给大家整理的高一英语作文范文改错,供大家参阅!高一英语作文范文改错1Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them,there were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.答案:1.have去掉2.about后的you改为me3.works→work4.learn→learning5.recent→recently6.interesting→interest7.English后的and 改为but8.be后加an1/ 59.at→in 10.where后加there高一英语作文范文改错2Dear Bob,Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country.First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.Yours, Li Hua答案:1. learn 改为learnt或learned。
高考英语短文改错专项训练30篇及答案解析
《高考短文改错--专项训练30篇—-及答案解析》1。
短文改错1. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2。
只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.Dear Peter,As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples。
One of the most popular words are Dianzan,which is often use when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing. When we say somebody is Renxing,you mean that they will do whatever they liked。
The phrase Miaosha first came on online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders before other. But now it’s wide used when you achieve your purpose in very short time。
If you will describe somebody as a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich。
高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)
高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)短文改错(每篇文章共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(1)Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burs t into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.(2)Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine(3)Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.(4)Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.(5)Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua(6)Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll me et you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours,John(7)Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class S ix, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are not satisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with someeffectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance. Thank you.Yours,Wang Min(8)Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighter s will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.(9)Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may al so get others confusing.(10)Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.(11)I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.(12)We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set about doing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!(13)My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.(14)Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua(15)You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on, "Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time,I woke up and found me still in bed!(16)It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. Itis so a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly,I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.(17)I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner(执业者). One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course” I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they of fered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.(18)Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.(19)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many home work. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.(20)I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.(21)When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I hadstudied at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.(22)I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.(23)Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told t he artist he didn’t want to any sha dows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.(24)I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..(25)I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.(26)This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for s everal month.”(27)Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death.As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures.Nor do they care about which happens to consumers.They shall be charged by law.Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua(28)Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua(29)Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping(30)Dear Lucy,I am very excited t o learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet(31)Abby,How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you.I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to stu dy in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes,Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold t owards me. Many time, Iwanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone!I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family.But when my cousin was born,everyone pays more attention to her.So I disliked her and could n’t get along well with her. With time went on,I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time.I tried to find a proper time to apologize.When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago,I took my cousin to play outside.In the way to the playground.I bought much snacks for her.Then we began chat.When we talked about their childhood,suddenly,I said“sorry”gently.She was silently,so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly.But after while she said:“Don’t say that.In my memory,you are always friendly.”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popu lar, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)Volunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday,the Students’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas.Some choose to write a letter saying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should beresponsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好,常见类型要记牢。
高中英语高考改错模板作文
高中英语高考改错模板作文在高中英语教学中,高考改错是提高学生语言运用能力的重要环节。
以下是一份高中英语高考改错模板作文的示例,供教师和学生参考:Essay:Morning begins with the crowing of the rooster, signaling the start of a new day. I wake up promptly at six, fresh and ready for the day ahead. After a quick shower, I have my breakfast consisting of eggs, toast, and a glass of milk.It's important to have a healthy breakfast to give me the energy I need for the day.At seven thirty, I leave for school. The journey to school is a short one, only taking about ten minutes by bike. Once I arrive, I have a brief chat with my classmates before thefirst bell rings. Our classes start at eight sharp, and we have a variety of subjects to cover, including math, science, and English.Lunchtime is at twelve thirty, and it's a time for us to relax and socialize. The school canteen offers a wide range of dishes, and I usually have rice with vegetables and some chicken. After lunch, we have a short break where I often play basketball with my friends.In the afternoon, classes resume at one thirty and continue until three thirty. After school, I participate in theschool's debate club, which is one of my favorite activities. It helps me to improve my public speaking and critical thinking skills.I get home at around four thirty and start on my homework. I find it helpful to break down my homework into manageable chunks and tackle one subject at a time. Once I'm done, Ilike to read for pleasure or watch some educational TV programs to unwind.Dinner is at six thirty, and it's a family affair where we catch up on each other's day. After dinner, I might do some extra studying or work on a project. Before bed, I make sure to review what I've learned that day to reinforce my memory.I usually go to bed at around ten, ensuring I get a full eight hours of sleep. A good night's sleep is crucial for me to be alert and focused for the next day's challenges.Corrections:1. "The crowing of the rooster" is more commonly expressed as "the crow of the rooster."2. "Fresh and ready for the day ahead" could be morenaturally phrased as "refreshed and eager for the day ahead."3. "It's important to have a healthy breakfast" might be better as "Eating a healthy breakfast is important."4. "Our classes start at eight sharp" is correct, but "sharp"can be omitted for a more natural flow: "Our classes start at eight."5. "The journey to school is a short one" could be simplified to "The journey to school is short."6. "Once I arrive, I have a brief chat with my classmates" could be improved for clarity: "Upon arriving, I briefly chat with my classmates."7. "The school canteen offers a wide range of dishes" couldbe more specific: "The school canteen offers a variety of dishes."8. "I usually have rice with vegetables and some chicken"could be more varied: "I usually opt for rice with aselection of vegetables and a portion of chicken."9. "In the afternoon, classes resume at one thirty" could be more precise: "In the afternoon, classes continue at one thirty."10. "I get home at around four thirty" could be more specific: "I arrive home around four thirty."11. "I like to read for pleasure or watch some educational TV programs" could be more engaging: "I enjoy reading forleisure and also watch educational TV programs."12. "A good night's sleep is crucial for me" could be more assertive: "A good night's sleep is essential for maintaining my alertness and focus."This template can be used to guide students in identifyingand correcting common errors in grammar, word choice, and sentence structure. It's important to remember that the goalof error correction is not just to find mistakes, but to improve overall writing quality and communication skills.。
高考英语改错专练14篇-含答案
短文改错专练(一)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
AMy mom and I were out driving when we saw a car ahead of us slow down sudden and then came to stop as it reached the side of the road. We pulled over and asking the woman inside the car if she needed any helps. She said “Yes, please!” Since we were right next by a parking lot, we tried to push h er car into it. We weren’t very successful, as it is a heavy car. Then a man and his kids came over and offered his help as well as! Together we got the woman’s car into the parking lot, which she was safe and could get the help she needed. We both smiled at each other and then went on our way.BOne morning when I took the bus to meet a friend in town. When I boarded, a young foreigner rushed catch the bus and just made it right behind me. I pay my fare, and started looking for the seat, when I heard the young man ask the bus driver whether he could change a 50-yuan bill for his ticket. I already knew it was possible, as it was writing on the fare box. Being told the driver didn’t have enough changes, the young man seemed very disappointing. I told him I was going to pay his fare. He was relieved and thanked me. Dig in his pocket, he found one euro and insisted on giving it to myself. We both made it into town.CI was in the supermarket queue yesterday when the member of staff came to me and directed me to a checkout where had just opened. When I arrived, the cashier was allowing a little girl to scan through the shopping. My first thoughts were that I’d have got served much quick if I’d just stayed where I was. Eventual it was of my turn. The cashier was sweet and apologized for the delay. We chatted as she packed up my items. Then she explained me that the little girl, a customer from a few days ago, had lost her purse. She, like a cashier, paid for his shopping. And the girl just came to return the money but volunteered to help.DThere was one class that I think I will never forget. It was the piano class. In the last class of that term, each student was required play two tunes on the piano, according to that the teacher, a pretty lady, was going to give us marks. Soon it was my turn. In spite of all the prepareI had done, I was still very nervous. I say at the beginning, “Although as a new learner I don’t play well, but I want to express my love to my parents through the two tunes.” Lucky, everythin g went all right. But the teacher commented, “Actually, Julie, you did great! Therefore, I will just give you 9.5, hopes that you will always remember to believe in yourself.” His words are still reminding me to be self-confident.ETime and tide wait no man. This is everything I learned last year. I have spent so much time fool around that my grades began to suffer. I finally realized that something had to be done. It was time to changing. Now I have a new plan for using my time wise. I have set my alarm clock half a hour ahead. This will give me a head start every day. I have also been decided to keep a record of what I do and when I do it. Look back on which I’ve done will give me some ideas on how to manage my time.FI love English and I do hope that someday I can watch English movies without any difficult. However, it’s never easier to learn about a foreign language. And English is exception. Recently I find it very difficult to remember new words. Therefore, I turned to my teacher for help yesterday. She said the best way to learn new words are to read and use it as often as possible. I think she was right, because we can surely remember a person if seeing every day. Therefore, I had decided to read at least one English article and write a diary with English every day from now on. Hopefully, I will make great progress by the end of a year.GLast Sunday, I went shopping with Mom in the town. I was kind of excited because it have been years the last time I went shopping with her. I followed Mom into a small store sells farm chemicals and seeds. As soon as I stepped into the store, I was surprising by so much singing birds flying freely. Then I noticed there had at least 30 nests in total on the walls and under the ceiling! I turned to the owner, an old man, and told him what amazing it was. He said delighted that the birds were like his babies and he always left the doors open for it. And at night, when he was away, the birds could come in or out through the broken windows at anytime they wanted.HI have a little cousin which name is Angela. In two months she is going to be two year old. Her name is given by her mother who loves her very much and thinks she is his angel. Angela has beautiful eyes and has learned to count to 20 recently! Read children’s b ooks regularly, she knows many animals and plants. She is also a typical little girl, who loves dolls and every night puts them to sleeping before going to the bed! She is also very impatient and can play a fishing game for over half an hour at a time! Now she can walk well and even run, and she is fond playing with me. I feel lucky to have so a lovely cousin.答案:A1. ... slow down sudden ... sudden → suddenly2. ... came to stop ... stop前加a3. ... asking the woman ... asking → asked4. ... needed any helps. helps → help5. ... right next by ... by → to6. ... it is a heavy ... is → was7. ... offered his help ... his → their8. ... as well as! 去掉第二个as9. ... which she was ... which → where或which前加in10. We both smiled ... both → allB1. One morning when ... 去掉when2. ... rushed catch the ... catch前加to3. I pay my fare ... pay → paid4. ... looking for the ... the → a5. ... it was possible ... possible → impossible6. ... as it was writing ... writing → written7. ... enough changes ... changes → change8. ... very disappointing. disappointing → disappointed9. Dig in his ... Dig → Digging10. ... giving it to myself. myself → meC1. ... the member of staff ... the → a2. ... where had just ... where → which / that3. ... served much quick ... quick → quicker4. Eventual it was ... Eventual → Eventually5. ... of my turn. 去掉of6. ... she explained me ... me前加to或去掉me7. ... a few days ago ... ago → before8. ... like a cashier ... like → as9. ... paid for his ... his → her10. ... but volunteered to ... but → andD1. ... the piano class. the → a2. ... required play ... play前加to3. ... according to that ... that → which4. ... all the prepare ... prepare → preparation5. I say at ... say → said6. ... but I want to ... 去掉but7. Lucky, everything ... Lucky → Luckily8. Therefore, I will ... Therefore → However9. ... hopes that you ... hopes → hoping10. His words are ... His → HerE1. ... wait no man. wait后加for2. This is everything ... everything → so mething3. I have spent ... have → had4. ... fool around that ... fool → fooling5. ... time to changing. changing → change6. ... my time wise. wise → wisely7. ... a hour ahead. a → an8. ... been decided to ... 去掉been9. Look back on ... Look → Looking10. ... which I've done ... which → whatF1. ... any difficult. difficult → difficulty2. ... it's never easier ... easier → easy3. ... learn about a ... 去掉about4. ... English is exception. is后加no5. ... new words are ... are → is6. ... use it as ... it → them7. ... seeing every day. seeing → seen8. ... I had decided ... had → have9. ... with English ... with → in10. ... end of a year. a → theG1. ... it have been ... have → had2. ... the last time I ... the前加since3. ... store sells ... sells → selling4. ... I was surprising ... surprising → surprised5. ... so much singing ... much → many6. ... noticed there had ... had → were7. ... what amazing ... what → how8. ... said delighted ... delighted → delightedly9. ... open for it. it → them10. ... at anytime they ... 去掉atH1. ... which name ... which → whose2. ... two year old. year → years3. Her name is ... is → was4. ... is his angel. his → her5. Read children's books ... Read → Reading6. ... them to sleeping ... sleeping → sleep7. ... to the bed! 去掉the8. ... very impatient ... impatient → patient9. ... fond playing ... fond后加of10. ... so a lovely ... so → such短文改错专练(二)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
高中英语短文改错80篇-2
短文改错练习(1)Rowena and Billy Wrangler are model high schoolstudents . They study hard . They do extreme well on 76._______________ achievement tests . And next year , Rowena will attending 77._______________ Harvard University . Billy , her younger brother , hoe to go 78._______________ to Cornell . That makes Rowena and Billy different from 79._______________ most students is that they don’t go to school . In fact , 80._______________ they've never been to school . Since a kindergarten , they 81._______________ have studied at home . Neither Rowena or Billy feels as if 82._______________ they have missed out on nothing by being taught at home . 83._______________ As many of the more than one million people who receive 84._______________ home schooling in the United States , they feel if they 85._______________ have gotten a good education .短文改错练习(2)Did you enjoy yourself yesterday? I suppose you do. But I’d76._______________ like to tell you what a bad day I had yesterday. Nothing 77._______________ just went wrong. On the morning, my alarm clock didn’t ring,78._______________ since I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt my 79._______________ hand when I was cooking the breakfast. Then I ran out of the house 80._______________ to catch the 8:30 buses. This is the bus I usually take. But, you 81._______________ may laugh, I missed it of course. I am very unhappy, and scared 82._______________ as well because teacher hates the students coming late to school. 83._______________ So I ran three miles to school only to discover that nobody 84._______________ was there. The school was quiet but peaceful. Our classroom was 85._______________ locked. I realized that moment: It was Sunday.短文改错练习(3)Get a good education is more important today than 76._______________ ever before .In Canada mostly children attend public 77._______________ schools. Public schools are mainly found by governments 78._______________ through tax income. Students in Canada taught in 79._______________ English and in French. The rests of Canadian children 80._______________ attend private schools, that are supported mainly by fees 81._______________ paying by parents .By law ,the children must attend 82._______________ the school from age 5 to 16. There are several different 83._______________ levels in the Canadian education system .The first was 84._______________ called Elementary Schools ,which include kindergartens 85._______________ through grade 7 or 8.短文改错练习(4)Yesterday we went to plant trees on the hill near to 76.our school. The boys were made dig pits(坑).The 77.girls were told to plant the young trees into the pits. 78.All of us worked very hardly. Soon we were all wet 79.with sweat.After the young trees planted, we 80.began to water it.The water was at the foot of 81.the hill. But we stood in line to pass pails(桶) 82.of water from one to other up to the hill. 83.We did not finish water the trees until it 84.was dark.Though we were tired,we feel very happy. 85短文改错练习(5)A few months after returning the US from Germany , I took 76. _______________ part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to 77. _______________ speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be 78. _______________ interested to begin studying another language. At the first 79. _______________ class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise, 80. _______________ in which he would say one word or two in French, and each 81. _______________ student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he 82. _______________ kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him 83. _______________ why. “I find it great funs. It’s the first time I’ve heard an84. _______________ American speak French with a German accent.”he explained it. 85. _______________短文改错练习(6)It was fine yesterday. The sun was shining in thesky. I went boating by myself. I didn’t take many76._______________ friends with me because I wanted to row alone. 77._______________ I hired a boat and rowed slowly to the center of lake. 78._______________ A fresh breeze was blowing, fish was swimming and birds 79._______________ were singing. When I reached the center, I took up the 80._______________ paddles(桨)and lie down in the boat. With the blue sky 81._______________ over me or green water around me I was extremely 82._______________ relaxed. Over about two hours passed in this way before I 83._______________ knew them. I came back home very late. I didn’t feel84._______________ tiring at all, for I had really had a good time. 85._______________短文改错练习(7)I was anxiously expected your letter, and at last 76. _______________ it has reached to me. I am very glad to know that 77_______________ everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually. 78_______________ Things here are same now as they were before. The 79 _______________ final examination will take place in next week. So 80 _______________ I am now busy preparing for my lessons. It’s nice 81_______________to think that the summer vacation is coming 82_______________ near. I can’t say much I want to see you all again. 83 _______________ I am looking forward to spend summer days with you. 84_______________ Give my love to Father, Mother and anyone at home. 85_______________短文改错练习(8)One afternoon , when I was on my way home , the sky 76._______________ changed suddenly . Dark clouds were gathered . I began 77._______________ to feel worried because I didn’t have both a raincoat 78._______________ or umbrella about me . It soon started to rain . 79._______________ Just as I was hurrying home , I heard of someone calling 80._______________ me from behind . I turned to have a look and find that 81._______________ he was Liu Wei , a good neighbour of mine . He 82._______________ offered to share his umbrella with me . We walked all 83._______________ the ways home . Without Liu Wei’s help , I would have 84._______________ got wet to the skin . How much thankful I was for his help ! 85._______________短文改错练习(9)I worried about the missed bag all the evening. 76._______________ I tried to remember exact what I had done from the 77._______________ time I left the store until at the time I got home. I 78._______________ remembered whether I had looked at the bag while I 79._______________ was having lunch. So I must have it when I left the 80._______________ store. I remembered showing it to a friend on the bus. 81._______________ But I had the bag then. I came directly from the bus 82._______________ to my house, and I must have forgotten it on the bus. I 83._______________ was in hurry to get off and forgot to check the packages 84._______________ lying on the floor. I should be much careful next time. 85._______________短文改错练习(10)A kind of little car may someday take place of today’s big 76._______________ ones . If people drive such cars in the future ,there would be 77._______________ less pollution in there air . There will be more spaces for 78._______________ parking cars in cities . The streets will be less crowd . And 79._______________ driving will be safer as these little cars can go only 65 km 80._______________ per hour . The future cars will be fine for getting round acity , so they will not be useful for long trips . Little cars 81._______________ will go 200km , before needing to stop more gas . If big cars 82._______________ are still used along with the small ones , two sets of roadsthat will be needed in the future . Some roads will be used 83._______________ for the big fast cars and another roads will be needed for 84._______________ the slow small ones . It is said that third such little cars 85._______________fit in the space now needed for one car the usual size .短文改错练习(11)Dear Bob,I must say that I do agree with you. Though you find 76._______________ something, but it doesn’t mean it belongs to you. If you 77._______________can find who it belongs to, you should try to return back 78._______________it. I’m sure you would want someone to do same for79._______________ you. Once I found a beautiful picture. I wanted to keep 80._______________it. Then I remembered see one just like it in an office. 81._______________I went to the office and found the person to who it 82._______________ belonged. The lady was very happy to get back and 83._______________ gave me delicious apples. So you see, Bob, I get two 84._______________ rewards: one I could eat and another I could keep in 85._______________my heart.Yours,Li Ming短文改错练习(12)Mr Zhang is over sixty years old. He has retired(退休).He is one of my respected teachers. He teaches us 76. _______________ chemistry when we were in senior Grade One. He was old, and he 77. _______________ taught us good. He tried his best to make his classes lively. 78. _______________ Mr Zhang usually made good preparations for the lesson and was strict 79. _______________ to us, too. Whenever we made mistakes in our homework. 80. _______________ he would ask us to correct them. At that time, I was used to be 81. _______________ poorly in chemistry. Mr Zhang often helped me with my studies 82. _______________ very patiently. With his help, I had made rapid progress and 83. _______________ caught with the class. He is always very kind to every student. 84. _______________ As an experienced teacher, he is respected and loved by all 85. _______________ the students.短文改错练习(13)I can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water.Look back at my childhood experience, I think 76. _______________that three reason might explain the fear. The first 77. _______________reason is that I was not allowed to go near the water 78. _______________when I was a child, for my mother had unreasonable 79. _______________fear of it. So, even as a child I was taught see the 80. _______________water as something danger. Second, my eyes 81. _______________ became bad ones when I was five. If I took off my 82. _______________ glasses in the water, I couldn’t see anything, but this83. _______________ increased my fear. The worst part of your experience 84. _______________is that as a child I often see a neighbor drowned. Since 85. _______________ then I have been more frightened.短文改错练习(14)Most people who are ambitious and want to achievesomething live on stress. They need them. I like to use 76._______________ example from the animal world because there is a biological 77._______________ basis for what I say. If you take a turtle and force it to run with as 78._______________ fast as a race-horse, you should kill it. So it’s useless to say79._______________ to a turtle type human what he must achieve this because his 80._______________ father was famous and his grandfather was successful. You can’t 81._______________ make race-horse out of a turtle. But the reverse is also true. If you 82._______________ are the race-horse type, as more efficient businessmen and politicians 83._______________ are, you have the urge to do many things and to express you. If 84._______________ you told not to do anything, you are under terrible distress. 85._______________短文改错练习(15)Have you ever heard from the saying : All work and no play 76._______________ make Jack a dull boy ? What this means is that if you study 77._______________ all the times you will become a boring person . You must 78._______________ go out and having fun with your friends , otherwise you will 79._______________ lose him . No one wants to be friends with someone who only 80._______________ talks about work and study . 81._______________ Perhaps you have a confidence problem . Please try remember 82._______________ what the work you do is for yourself but no one else . You 83._______________ do not have to compete with your classmates . No one could 84._______________ be happier in studying seven days and seven nights in a week . 85._______________短文改错练习(16)Deare Abby ,How are you ? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you . 76._______________ I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my 77._______________ further education . One hundred and twenty students took exam 78._______________ for it , but only a few was chosen and I was one of them . However , 79._______________ my parents are not happy about it . They are strong against me 80._______________ going there . They say it is too far away that they will not see me 81._______________ for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely . They 82._______________ can't imagine a girl so young live alone . They advise me to study 83._______________ in the capital instead . Then I’ll be able to continue living with 84._______________ them . How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up ? 85._______________Best WishesJane短文改错练习(17)I used to love science class—all of them—76._______________ biology, chemistry, geography or physics. I think I 77._______________ liked those classes because I felt that it helped me 78._______________ understand what the world works. For example, 79._______________ when I was a child, the rain was a mystery. In one 80._______________ class, I learned why it rained. I think science classes 81._______________ clear up mysteries. But then there is always more 82._______________ mysteries look into. What was my least favorite class? 83._______________ That was math. After learn the basics of the subject, 84._______________ Nothing else seemed very practically to me. I never 85._______________ saw how I could use it in my daily life.短文改错练习(18)Some Americans judge success on the length 76._______________ of his vacations . The man who gets a month’s 77._______________ vacation each year consider himself more successful 78._______________ than the man gets two weeks . Many people want 79._______________ to be teachers because it is teachers who can 80._______________ get three-month vacation every year . Some college 81._______________ teachers who teach the three classes consider 82._______________ themselves less successful than that who teach 83._______________ only one or two , or none in all . In short , the less 84._______________ work Americans do , the less successful they 85._______________ consider themselves .短文改错练习(19)As is known, that is interesting to teach children to 76._______________ swim while they are still babies. Most the large towns in 77._______________ Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for 78._______________ babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe from where, 79._______________ in several countries, special courses are now offered to 80._______________ the children who are from 7 to 24 month old. 81._______________ The first step is to have child get rid of fear of 82._______________ water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he 83._______________ can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can 84._______________ master the technique and push him forward through the water. 85._______________短文改错练习(20)Dear Mr. GreenI work in the Friendship Shop on Zhongshan Road 76. _______________where you have often come to buy things. The other day 77. _______________if you bought a vase at our shop with your wife, I made 78. _______________the mistake about the price. You looked at two different 79. _______________price of the same vase, one costing 30 yuan and the other 80. _______________21 yuan. You took the 21 yuan one so I accepted 30 81. _______________yuan from you. I found my mistake only after you and 82. _______________your wife have left. Will you please come to our shop to 83. _______________get in your change or to return your vase and get a 30 84. _______________yuan one instead? I apologize you for it. 85. _______________ I’m looking forward to your coming earlier.Yours truly,Wang Hua短文改错练习(21)In many western countries heavy industry is high developed 76._______________The difference between heavy and light industry are based on 77._______________the nature of the goods produced. Heavy industry produce 78._______________ machines while light industry uses machines produce the 79._______________ smaller objects required for various purpose in our home 80._______________and offices.The growth of industry in country depends on the 81._______________ general level of economic or industrial development. 82._______________In its beginning, industrialization is likely to be cheap. To 83._______________ decrease (减少)costs, industrialists in an area usually depend on 84._______________ Local supplies of the coal or electric power for their operation 85._______________短文改错练习(22)It happened in a morning that I was walking in the street . 76._______________ I ate up a banana and threw its peel on the corner of the road . 77._______________ Short after that I heard a scream behind .I looked back to 78._______________ see what was happened .A little girl about 8 years old fell 79._______________ down and the banana peel was exactly under her left shoes . 80._______________ She stood up without cry .Then she picked up the banana peel 81._______________ and ran toward the dustbin .On that moment ,I realized my fault , and went to 82._______________ apologize her for that ,but my vanity (虚荣心)prevented me . 83._______________ The little girl had taught me a good lesson by her action . 84._______________ And now ,after I do everything , I’ll think carefully whether85._______________ it’s right or wrong . I’ll do my best to be in good habits and qualities .短文改错练习(23)Mr Wang is my physics teacher. He has 1.75 meters 76._______________ in the height. He was born on November 4,1952. So 77._______________he is a middle-aged man. He graduated Qinghua 78._______________ University in 1978. After graduation, he becomes a middle 79._______________ school teacher. He has been taught physics for more than 20 years. 80._______________ He is very successful as a teacher. He has been given a 81._______________ lot of honor. He not only is a good teacher in 82._______________ physics but also speak English and Russian very well. 83._______________ In his spare time, he likes reading books, collect stamps 84._______________ and listening music. Also, Mr Smith is kind-hearted. 85._______________短文改错练习(24)Dear Lily,I got your letter and pleased to hear about your job 76._______________interview at a grocery store. I know you wanted to 77._______________get a job at the TV station, and you’ve been looking 78. _______________for several week now and haven’t found anything. 79. _______________The job at the grocery store doesn’t sound badly. If I 80. _______________am you, I’d take it. If you worked there a while, you 81. _______________could earn some money. Its your decision, of course, 82. _______________but I advise you to take it. Let me to know what you 83. _______________decided to do. By the way, after you get the job you 84. _______________can think about get a bike later. 85. _______________Love短文改错练习(25)Dear Abby:How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you76._______________ I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my 77._______________ further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam 78._______________ for it, but only a few were chosen and I was one of them. Therefore, 79._______________ my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my 80._______________ going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me 81._______________ for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. They 82._______________ can’t imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study83._______________ in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue living with them. 84._______________ How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up? 85._______________Best Wishes,Jane短文改错练习(26)I went to see film after supper. On my way to the 76. _______________ cinema, I met an old English woman, she had lost her 77. _______________way. I gave up the chance to see the film, walking towards 78. _______________her and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her 79. _______________great change had taken place in the past few years and she 80. _______________told me something about Britain and her family. 81. _______________ Though I missed the film, however I felt very happy, 82. _______________for I not only helped the old lady out from trouble but also 83. _______________ practise my spoken English. If I hadn’t worked hard at84. _______________ English, I would have been able to help her. 85. _______________短文改错练习(27)I was anxiously expected your letter, and at last 76. _______________it has been reached me. I am very glad to know that 77. _______________everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually. 78. _______________Things here are the same now as we were before. 79. _______________The final examination will take place of next week. 80. _______________But I am now busy preparing my lessons. It’s nice to81. _______________think that the summer vacation is coming near. I can’t 82. _______________say much I want to see you all again. 83. _______________Looking forward to spend summer days with you. 84. _______________Give my love to Father, mother and anyone at home. 85. _______________短文改错练习(28)Helen is one of my best friends. She had taught 76._______________ us English when I attended training course two 77._______________ years before. Helen always made good preparations 78._______________ for the lessons, she tried her best to make her 79._______________ classes lively. I used to being poor in English, 80._______________ especially in written English. But now I’m able81._______________ to write English letters and reports correct. 82._______________ I still remember how she helped me for my 83._______________ English patiently. T eachers’ Day’s come. I’m going to 84._______________ send to her a card and give her best wishes. 85._______________ 短文改错练习(29)ow I'd like to tell you why I learn English.76._______________I often read English aloud and try learn something 77._______________ important by hearts, which helps me remember it easily and 78._______________ form the good habit of thinking in English.79._______________I listen to a lot and talk with others in English.80._______________In this way, I was improved both my hearing 81._______________ and my spoken English.I keep a diary in English every day but my 82._______________ spoken English is becoming better and better.83._______________ I also try my best to master the necessary grammarknowledge.By this means, I can express itself 84._______________ in English correct.That's the way I have been learning 85._______________English.I hope it will be useful to you.That's all.Thank you.短文改错练习(30)I passed all the other course that I took at my university, but I could 76. _______________ never pass botany. This was why all botany students had to spend 77. _______________ several hours a week in a lab look through a microscope at plant 78. _______________ cells, and I could never see through a microscope. This was used to 79. _______________ make my professor angry. “I can’t see everything, ” I said. Then80. _______________ he began patient enough to explain how to see through it, but I still 81. _______________ couldn’t make it. At last we tried it with every adjustment of the82. _______________ microscope known to man. With my pleasure, I saw something 83. _______________ and drew it quickly on the paper. “What’s that?” my professor asked.“That’s what I saw.” I answered. “No, you don’t!” he shouted,84. _______________ and he bent over and looking into the microscope. “That’s your85. _______________ eyes! You’ve fixed the lens so that it reflects! You’ve drawn your eyes!”短文改错练习(31)One cold day, an aged lady was sent for her doctor. When he came, 76._______________she tells him that her right leg was very sore(酸痛)in the knee. 77._______________The pain sometimes was bad enough to make it walking difficult. 78._______________She asked him what the trouble could be because she had never before 79._______________ suffered some similar discomfort. After making a careful examination, 80._______________the doctor said, “You are in a very bad state of health for a woman81._______________of your age. I think the trouble in your right knee is just matter of 82._______________old age. We get diseases as we get old. The trouble will mostly 83._______________ clean up in spring!” “Nonsese, doctor!” she said, “My left knee is84._______________perf ect, and it is exactly same age as my right.”85._______________短文改错练习(32)May I have you attention please? I have a few 76. _________things to tell you. When you have a class here in the 77. _________ language lab, please be here a little early. Change 78. _________your shoes before enter the lab. Don't bring anything 79. _________here except your text books. When you are into, 80. _________please don't touch these machine without permission. 81. _________Always do as the teacher tell you to. In class you 82. _________should only speak the English, not Chinese. Recorders 83. _________can be used make a copy of the listening materials. 84. _________When class over, turn off your machines and leave 85. _________the lab one by one.Dinner on Children's DayOn Children's Day last year, our city held an interested 76. _________ activity, in which children and their parents play the rich 77. _________ and the poor. In the dinner, the rich could have more delicious 78. _________ food, but the poor could only have bread with porridge(粥). 79. _________ Parents both hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the 80. _________ children. They hoped that their children could be taught the 81. _________ lesson from the dinner.Now many people on earth don't have enough food and clothes. 82. _________ Every day only one half the world could enjoy enough food. 83. _________ The activity was held to make the families understand the 84. _________ differences from the poor and the rich and also make the parents 85. _________ know that too much material life won't always do good to the children.短文改错练习(34)We'll never forget the day which my classmates and 76. _________ I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. 77. _________ It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It 78. _________ looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers, 79. _________ grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some 80. _________ workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We 81. _________ talked to them and learned a lot. We understood 82. _________ them further. On the way home we felt tiring. 83. _________ We all thought that we had a very good day. We 84. _________ really hoped that we could get more chances of 85. _________ leave the school and learn social experience.短文改错练习(35)One morning Mrs Jenkins went to department store 76. ___________ to buy a coat. There was not shop assistant in the store 77. ___________ before she got there. She had to wait. Then a fat lady. 78. ___________ came in. She went to Mrs Jenkins and asked her to serve 79. ___________ for her. She told Mrs Jenkins that she wanted to buy 80. ___________ a coat. Mrs Jenkins said that she couldn't do. 81. ___________ The fat lady got angrily. She didn't let Mrs Jenkins 82. ___________ explain anything but insisted that Mrs Jenkins 83. ___________ would do that right away because it was her job. 84. ___________ At last Mrs Jankins has to tell her that she was 85. ___________ a customer herself and wanted to buy a coat, too.。
高考英语作文改错模板范文
高考英语作文改错模板范文1. I woke up late this morning and rushed to school without having breakfast. I was so hungry during the first class that I couldn't concentrate at all. My stomach was growling loudly, and I felt embarrassed.2. After school, I went to the library to study for the upcoming exams. I was so focused on my books that I didn't notice the time passing by. When I finally looked up, it was already dark outside. I realized I had been studyingfor hours without taking a break.3. On my way home, I saw a stray dog wandering around the street. It looked hungry and scared, so I decided to buy some food for it. I fed the dog and it wagged its tail gratefully. It made me feel happy to help a poor animal in need.4. When I got home, I found out that my little sister had accidentally broken my favorite mug. I was upset atfirst, but then I remembered that it was just a material thing. I told her it was okay and we cleaned up the mess together.5. Before going to bed, I reflected on my day and realized that even though there were some challenges and setbacks, there were also moments of kindness and understanding. I felt grateful for the people and experiences that shaped my day, and I went to sleep with a content heart.。
高中英语改错练习+范文背诵
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高考英语改错经典十篇(附答案)一、(大纲卷)第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分l0分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。
对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误.在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√):如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
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All of us need friendship. The understanding 76.______________between two friends mean both of them have similar 77.______________ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is 78.______________impossible for him to help each other and to make 79.______________their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes, 80.______________“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”So really friendship 81.______________should able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is 82.______________wise to have as many good friends that we can. 83.______________The more friends we have, the more we can learn for 84.______________one another, but the more pleasure we can share together. 85.______________76. √77. 【答案】means【试题解析】本句的主语是the understanding…,这是单个的动名词定语,做主语的时候,谓语动词要使用单数形式。
高一年级英语短文改错与书面表达练习题30题
高一年级英语短文改错与书面表达练习题30题1<背景文章>In today's world, technology has had a profound impact on our lives. It has changed the way we communicate, work, learn, and even entertain ourselves. The development of smartphones, for example, has made it possible for us to stay connected with others at all times. We can send messages, make calls, and access the internet from almost anywhere.Another area where technology has made a significant difference is in education. Online learning platforms have emerged, allowing students to access courses and educational resources from around the world. This has opened up new opportunities for learning and has made education more accessible.Technology has also transformed the way we shop. Online shopping has become increasingly popular, offering convenience and a wider range of choices. We can browse products, compare prices, and make purchases with just a few clicks.However, technology is not without its drawbacks. One concern is the potential for addiction. Many people find it difficult to put down their smartphones or step away from their computers. This can lead to problems such as decreased productivity, social isolation, and even health issues.In conclusion, technology has brought both benefits and challenges to our lives. It is important for us to use technology wisely and be aware of its potential impacts.1. What is one example of how technology has changed the way we communicate?A. By using traditional mail.B. By using smartphones.C. By using landline phones.D. By using fax machines.答案:B。
经典英语作文改错题高中
经典英语作文改错题高中Classic English Composition Correction。
As we all know, writing English compositions is an important part of English learning. However, many students make mistakes in their compositions. In this article, we will discuss some common mistakes and provide some tips to help you improve your writing skills.Firstly, many students have a poor understanding of grammar, which leads to mistakes in sentence structure and word usage. For example, they may use the wrong tense or forget to use articles. To avoid these mistakes, it is important to study grammar rules and practice using them in your writing.Secondly, some students have a limited vocabulary, which makes their compositions sound repetitive and boring. To expand your vocabulary, you can read more English books and articles, and make a list of new words to learn and usein your writing.Thirdly, some students do not pay enough attention to punctuation, which can make their writing difficult to read and understand. To improve your punctuation, you can study the rules and practice using them in your writing.Lastly, some students do not organize their ideas effectively, which can make their compositions confusing and disorganized. To improve your organization, you can make an outline before you start writing, and make sure your ideas are logically connected.In conclusion, writing English compositions is a challenging but rewarding task. By avoiding common mistakes and practicing your skills, you can improve your writing and communicate effectively in English.仿写:As we all know, writing English compositions is a crucial aspect of English learning. However, many studentsmake mistakes in their compositions. In this article, wewill discuss some common mistakes and provide some tips to help you enhance your writing skills.Firstly, many students have a poor understanding of grammar, which leads to mistakes in sentence structure and word usage. For instance, they may use the wrong tense or forget to use articles. To avoid these mistakes, it is essential to study grammar rules and practice using them in your writing.Secondly, some students have a limited vocabulary,which makes their compositions sound monotonous and tedious. To enrich your vocabulary, you can read more English books and articles, and compile a list of new words to learn and incorporate in your writing.Thirdly, some students do not pay enough attention to punctuation, which can make their writing difficult to comprehend and interpret. To improve your punctuation, you can study the rules and practice using them in your writing.Lastly, some students do not organize their ideas effectively, which can make their compositions perplexing and unstructured. To improve your organization, you can create an outline before you begin writing, and ensure that your ideas are logically connected.In conclusion, writing English compositions is a challenging but rewarding task. By avoiding common errors and honing your skills, you can improve your writing and communicate effectively in English.。
英文作文自我改错高中
英文作文自我改错高中英文:When it comes to self-improvement, there are a lot of things that I can do to become a better version of myself. However, there are also some mistakes that I tend to make when trying to improve myself. One of the biggest mistakes is setting unrealistic goals for myself. For example, I might set a goal to read 100 books in a year, but realistically, I might only have time to read 50. When I don't meet my unrealistic goals, I feel disappointed and discouraged.Another mistake I make is comparing myself to others. It's easy to look at someone else's success and feel like I'm not doing enough. But everyone has their own journey and their own pace. I need to focus on my own progress and not worry about what others are doing.Finally, I sometimes get too caught up in the idea ofself-improvement and forget to enjoy the present moment. It's important to have goals and work towards them, butit's also important to take time to appreciate where I am right now and the progress I've already made.中文:谈到自我提升,我可以做很多事情来变得更好。
勇于改错英文作文高中
勇于改错英文作文高中英文:As a high school student, I have made many mistakes in my English writing. However, I have learned that the key to improving is to be willing to admit and correct those mistakes. Here are some tips that have helped me become more confident in my writing:1. Read and write often: The more you read and write, the more you will become familiar with the language and its nuances. This will help you to recognize your own mistakes and improve your writing skills.2. Use grammar and spell check tools: These tools are readily available online and can help you catch simple errors that you may have missed.3. Get feedback from others: Ask your teacher or a friend to read over your writing and give you constructivecriticism. This will help you to identify areas where you need to improve.4. Learn from your mistakes: Don't be afraid to make mistakes, but make sure you learn from them. Analyze what went wrong and how you can avoid making the same mistake in the future.5. Practice, practice, practice: The more you practice writing, the better you will become. Set aside some time each day to write something, even if it's just a few sentences.中文:作为一名高中学生,我在英语写作中犯了很多错误。
高中改错答题技巧英语作文
高中改错答题技巧英语作文英文回答:As a high school student, I have frequently encountered the daunting task of correcting errors in exams. Initially, these exercises seemed like an insurmountable obstacle, a labyrinth of grammatical pitfalls and elusive mistakes. However, through perseverance and the development of effective techniques, I have transformed this challenge into an opportunity for growth and improved language proficiency.One crucial element in error correction is meticulous attention to detail. Each word, punctuation mark, and grammatical structure must be carefully scrutinized for potential errors. I employ a technique called "active reading," where I read the text multiple times, highlighting any areas that seem questionable. This allows me to focus on specific sections and identify errors more efficiently.Furthermore, I have found the utilization of reference materials invaluable. Grammar books, dictionaries, and online resources provide immediate access to the rules and conventions of English grammar. When I encounter a grammatical conundrum, I consult these references to clarify my understanding and select the correct form. This not only corrects the immediate error but also reinforces my grasp of grammar as a whole.A systematic approach is also essential. I divide the error correction process into manageable chunks, focusing on one type of error at a time. For instance, I might start by identifying all errors related to subject-verb agreement. By breaking down the task, I can maintain focus and avoid becoming overwhelmed by the sheer number of mistakes.Recognizing common error patterns has also been highly beneficial. Over time, I have noticed that certain types of errors tend to occur more frequently than others. By familiarizing myself with these patterns, I am betterequipped to anticipate potential mistakes and correct them proactively.Beyond the technical aspects of error correction, I have also discovered the importance of a positive mindset. Mistakes are not something to be feared but rather an opportunity to learn and improve. I approach error correction with a willingness to identify my weaknesses and a determination to overcome them. This mindset has allowed me to embrace the challenge and view it as a valuable part of my academic journey.中文回答:作为一名高中生,我经常面临在考试中订正错误的艰巨任务。
英文作文自我改错高中
英文作文自我改错高中英文:As a high school student, I often make mistakes in my English writing. Here are some common errors that I have noticed and corrected:1. Using "it's" instead of "its". "It's" is a contraction of "it is" or "it has", while "its" is a possessive pronoun. For example, "It's a nice day today" should be "Its color is red".2. Confusing "affect" and "effect". "Affect" is a verb meaning to influence, while "effect" is a noun meaning result. For example, "The rain affected my mood" should be "The effect of the rain was depressing".3. Misusing apostrophes. Apostrophes are used to indicate possession or contraction. For example, "The dog's tail" shows possession, while "It's raining" showscontraction.4. Using "their" instead of "there" or "they're". "Their" is a possessive pronoun, while "there" refers to a place and "they're" is a contraction of "they are". For example, "Their house is over there" should be "They're going to the store".中文:作为一名高中生,我经常在英语写作中犯错。
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Dear Sarah,
I’m very glad to accept your last e-mail. For your request, I’d like to tell you something about my school life. This year I am in senior 3, and I have six subjects to learn from every day. School hours usually begin at 7a.m, and end at 8:30p.m. We are making most of every minute, prepare for the coming college entrance examination. Though time is precious, I try to do some sports or do some reading after classes. Sometime, too, I surf the Internet to update and amuse myself.
It’s been my dream to go to Peking University ever since I go to senior high school because of its strong cultural atmosphere as good as its high academic status.
I’d appreciate it if you could tell me something more about your school life as well. I’m looking forward to it.
Best regards.
Li Hua
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High school is regarded as the best time of my life. Besides classes and homework, there’s something more which I especially treasure. In order to leave school with no regrets, I’ll make the best of my limitless time to go over the lessons I’ve learned. At the same time, I’d like to show my gratitude to al the teachers who have given me so many help in the past three years. In addition, it’s necessary for me to have a talk with who might have misunderstood me, for I did care about the friendship between us. For the purpose of improving myself, I’ll ask my classmates for some advices which may be great value to me. Last but not least, doing a good deed for my classes is also my plan. With these things having done, I will have no regrets in my high school life.
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Dear Mr.Smith,
I have come to your apartment, but it’s a pity that you happened to out.
What do you think of the performances of Beijing Opera last night? Judging from the content expressions on your face, it must have been an forgetful experience for you. I’m very glad that you like them. As you know it, Beijing Opera is a kind of traditional Chinese opera and many foreigners like it very much.
And I regret to tell you there has something wrong with the book you purchased for me online. Its front cover is missed on its delivery. So I’m afraid the complaint has to be made to the shop owner to get it changed after the deadline. Besides, I’d like to remind you to attend the English corner at 8:00 a.m, this Sunday. Your presence will be great appreciated.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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Good afternoon, everyone;
It’s a great honour to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, Mum.”。