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Attributive clause
2. These tests, in which students could get better scores by attending extra classes, cheating, or taking medicine, can not guarantee future success.
right-handed of having a
to help support and make clear the key supporting details
Tree map of the paragraph
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Lack of water may result in several problems. It may increase health problems. Lack of water often means drinking waters are not safe. Lack of water may also result in more international conflict. Countries may have to compete for water in the future. Some countries now get sixty percent of their fresh water from other countries. And lack of water would affect the ability of developing to improve their economies. This is because new industries often need a large amount of water when they are beginning.
Main idea
Key supporting details
Minor detail
(Conclusion)
Find the main idea, key supporting details, and minor details.
Lack of water may result in several problems. It may increase health problems. Lack of water often means drinking waters are not safe. Lack of water may also result in more international conflict. Countries may have to compete for water in the future. Some countries now get sixty percent of their fresh water from other countries. And lack of water would affect the ability of developing to improve their economies. This is because new industries often need a large amount of water when they are beginning.
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InhWehratimtiankges
from parents and
a person become left-handed
rather
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Adverbial clause 1. These tests do not promise future success because/as some
students have extra preparation/tutoring, cheat and even take medicine for tests.
Nonfinite verb
3. Students making extra preparations, cheating and even taking medicine before tests, these tests fail to promise one’s success in the future. Prepositional phrases
4. These tests do not guarantee students’ future success due to/because of their extra preparations, cheating, and medicine taking.
Main idea
Adverbial clauses Nonfinite verb
Draw a tree map of the paragraph
❖
The test grades may be a stepping stone to prestigous universities. However, these tests don’t necessarily ensure one’s future success in life. To become better test-takers than others, some students would like to have more preparations. Several AST and ACT pre-classes are offered by various companies and individual tutors, giving rich students a better chance to improve their scores. Cheating also happens among test-takers. Some students even take medicine before their tests. Although it’s not proved that taking these drugs will increase a student’s score, the nature of the drug is to increase alertness, concentration, and mental processing speed.
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found that two percent chance
Main idea
Key supporting details
Minor details
Main idea
Key supporting details
Minor detail
(Conclusion)
most important and general point
to explain and develop the main idea
health problems,
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Definitions of a summay
A summary is a brief review of a piece of written material. It should include only main ideas and key supporting details. It should NOT include minor details or any personal opinions. (Herzfeld-Pinpkin 2007)
intecrnoantitorinbaultceosntfolict, and hindseervinegrMaelacpionrnooidbmeleiacms,
growth. (A)
and economic development will be hindered. (B)
Write a summary of the paragraph
How to summarize a paragraph with key supporting details
Sunday June 26th
LIFE ▪ ANECDOTE
Marriage Badly Needed
Nice male. Would like to meet a likeminded, good-natured girl to share quality times. (A)
The test grades may be a stepping stone wenku.baidu.como prestigous universities. However, these tests don’t necessarily ensure one’s future success in life. To become better test-takers than others, some students would like to have more preparations. Several AST and ACT pre-classes are offered by various companies and individual tutors, giving rich students a better chance to improve their scores. Cheating also happens among test-takers. Some students even take medicine before their tests. Although it’s not proved that taking these drugs will increase a student’s score, the nature of the drug is to increase alertness, concentration, and mental processing speed.
Nice male, good sense of humor, into volunteering, socializing, comedy shows. Would like to meet a likeminded, good-natured girl to share quality times. (B)
2. These tests, in which students could get better scores by attending extra classes, cheating, or taking medicine, can not guarantee future success.
right-handed of having a
to help support and make clear the key supporting details
Tree map of the paragraph
❖
Lack of water may result in several problems. It may increase health problems. Lack of water often means drinking waters are not safe. Lack of water may also result in more international conflict. Countries may have to compete for water in the future. Some countries now get sixty percent of their fresh water from other countries. And lack of water would affect the ability of developing to improve their economies. This is because new industries often need a large amount of water when they are beginning.
Main idea
Key supporting details
Minor detail
(Conclusion)
Find the main idea, key supporting details, and minor details.
Lack of water may result in several problems. It may increase health problems. Lack of water often means drinking waters are not safe. Lack of water may also result in more international conflict. Countries may have to compete for water in the future. Some countries now get sixty percent of their fresh water from other countries. And lack of water would affect the ability of developing to improve their economies. This is because new industries often need a large amount of water when they are beginning.
Attr单i击bu此t处iv添e加c标la题uses Prepositional phrases …
InhWehratimtiankges
from parents and
a person become left-handed
rather
tshaunfrfieghrt-ihnagndefdr?omOmne islimdpbleriadiena sdugagmestasgtheat
Adverbial clause 1. These tests do not promise future success because/as some
students have extra preparation/tutoring, cheat and even take medicine for tests.
Nonfinite verb
3. Students making extra preparations, cheating and even taking medicine before tests, these tests fail to promise one’s success in the future. Prepositional phrases
4. These tests do not guarantee students’ future success due to/because of their extra preparations, cheating, and medicine taking.
Main idea
Adverbial clauses Nonfinite verb
Draw a tree map of the paragraph
❖
The test grades may be a stepping stone to prestigous universities. However, these tests don’t necessarily ensure one’s future success in life. To become better test-takers than others, some students would like to have more preparations. Several AST and ACT pre-classes are offered by various companies and individual tutors, giving rich students a better chance to improve their scores. Cheating also happens among test-takers. Some students even take medicine before their tests. Although it’s not proved that taking these drugs will increase a student’s score, the nature of the drug is to increase alertness, concentration, and mental processing speed.
pdeouprlienngormbailrltyhg,etpriegohtp-hlaendaerdenelsiskfreolmythteoir
ppbaarreeecnnttoss.mhaveSetuloednifleytsiaeha9sv..5e
found that two percent chance
Main idea
Key supporting details
Minor details
Main idea
Key supporting details
Minor detail
(Conclusion)
most important and general point
to explain and develop the main idea
health problems,
intienrfnluaKetineoycnesadul,pmcpooonrreftliincgt, and
triggerLinagcmkionrge water
hinindteerrinnagtioednceaotlanciolosmnfilcicgt rwoiwlltrhis.e,
Compare theLtawcokvienrgsiownsater contributes to several
cporonLbtraliecbmkupthirtsnriei,noggsgdbgwtieleoverraimiisntnneeggsgrv,reemgircsiaoovelrnitneoogminriticesregn.ptra.oor.tgiwothhooibeetnvhalaLsaie.lelnlattmvhhgcc(eAkoswprri,na)irnisftollgrlelbpiicbwglrtetoeog,ambeatnhlesnreeer,idgmnacaglostt,inhvmaternoildbyruetes
Definitions of a summay
A summary is a brief review of a piece of written material. It should include only main ideas and key supporting details. It should NOT include minor details or any personal opinions. (Herzfeld-Pinpkin 2007)
intecrnoantitorinbaultceosntfolict, and hindseervinegrMaelacpionrnooidbmeleiacms,
growth. (A)
and economic development will be hindered. (B)
Write a summary of the paragraph
How to summarize a paragraph with key supporting details
Sunday June 26th
LIFE ▪ ANECDOTE
Marriage Badly Needed
Nice male. Would like to meet a likeminded, good-natured girl to share quality times. (A)
The test grades may be a stepping stone wenku.baidu.como prestigous universities. However, these tests don’t necessarily ensure one’s future success in life. To become better test-takers than others, some students would like to have more preparations. Several AST and ACT pre-classes are offered by various companies and individual tutors, giving rich students a better chance to improve their scores. Cheating also happens among test-takers. Some students even take medicine before their tests. Although it’s not proved that taking these drugs will increase a student’s score, the nature of the drug is to increase alertness, concentration, and mental processing speed.
Nice male, good sense of humor, into volunteering, socializing, comedy shows. Would like to meet a likeminded, good-natured girl to share quality times. (B)