五年高考真题--专题短文改错

专题十七短文改错

±五年高考真题

2015〜2011年各省市高考题

Passage 1 （2015新课标全国I ）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2•只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the en vir onment has bee n polluted.Lots of studies have bee n show n that global warm ing has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare ani mals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，we'll live to regret it.

答案

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1•解析 考查动词的时态。根据前面一句可知，这是发生在小时候的事情，故用 一般过去时态。

答案 第 2 句：th ink —thought

2. 解析 考查冠词的用法。in the cou ntryside 在乡村）为固定短语。

答案 第3句：countryside 前加the

3. 解析 考查并列词的用法。那儿的空气洁净，群山葱绿。由句意可知两个分句 之间显然为并列关系，而非选择关系。

答案第4句：or — and

4. 解析 考查介词的用法。with the developme nt of...为一固定短语，意思是 “随 着……的发展”。

答案第5句：on —with

5. 解析 考查被动语态的用法。众多研究表明，全球变暖已经成为一个十分严重 的问题。由句意可知，studies 和谓语show 之间为主动关系，故要用主动语态 答案第6句：去掉been

6. 解析考查形容词的用法。修饰名词 problem 应当用形容词。

答案 第 6 句: seriously — serious

7. 解析 考查不可数名词的用法。air 作“空气”讲时为不可数名词。

答案 第 7 句: airs — air

8. 解析考查代词的用法。Animals 为可数名词复数，故用many 。

答案第8句：Much —Many

9. 解析考查情态动词的用法。情态动词后面要接动词原形。

show n that global warm ing has already become a very seriously serious

problem.The airs air we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much Many

rare an imals are dying out.We must found find ways to protect your our/the

environment.If we fail to do so , we'll live to regret it.

答案第9句：found—find

10•解析考查语境中代词的用法。依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可知your与上下文相悖，结合句意应当改为our/the才能使句意通顺。

答案第9 句: your—our

Passage 2 （2015新课标全国n ）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作

文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2•只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.lt was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time he turned around and found where his pare nts were missi ng.T ony was scared and beg un to cry.A woma n saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“ How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

答案

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crowded.Tony saw a toy ~ a shop window.He liked it so much that he