人教版小学五年级英语作文话题39788

小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

My English Teacher

Miss Wang is my English teacher. She' s very pretty. She is short and thin.

She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hairs are long. She like s cats very much. And she like s singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. Weoften play games in English class es. She is very kind. We all love her.

【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。

小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词［组］，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。

My Days of the week

I 'm a student and I amin Grade 5.I get up at six o' clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o' clock. I have classes from Monday to Friday. I have an English class on Friday. I have a PE class on Tuesday.

I usually go shopping and watch TV on the weekend.

【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为, 写得自然、流畅。

小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，

写自己身边熟悉的事情。

My Favourite Food

Do you know what this is? Its colour is yellow. It ' s long and thin.

It looks like a small boat. Guess! What is it?Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It ' s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like them very much. I like ice-creams, too. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.

How about you? What ' s your favourite food?

【要领点评】

My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。

I can help do housework

I ama girl. My name is Li Ling. I 'm in Class Three, Grade Five. I 'm helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务” ，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。

小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自

己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

In The Kitchen

This is the kitchen of my family. It ' s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they ' re apples. And what are those? They are grapes.

【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。

小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。

My Village

My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water is very clean. Wecan see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. There are some flowers and trees on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!

【要领点评】本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。

小学英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评

My weekend

There are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother do some housework. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and read books in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. We often have a good time.

【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动，记叙了周六和周日的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。即：周六上午：舞蹈课T下午：做作业和帮妈妈做清洁T周日上

午：看望祖父母T下午：阅读T晚上：看电视，与父母交流T感受：高兴和愉快。我们还可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写，先说明什么时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事，有什么感受。再按照活动顺序把活动内容写清楚，最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感想。

时态：这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写：a. 一般过去时（主要描述你上个周末是怎样度过

的）；b. —般现在时（主要描述你经常怎样度过周末）；c. 一般将来时（主要描述你要怎样过

周末）。这里我们来表述平时是如何过周末的，所以采用一般现在时来写。

注意：活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识，eg. （例）起床get up ，和新知识，eg. Climb mountains去爬山中的un很容易错写成nu。还要注意不要出现病句，eg. “I often watch

TV with my parents. ”不要写成“ I often with my parents watch TV . ” 词量上控制

在50 ~ 80 之间。