雅思写作高分句型之平行结构

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五大雅思议论文写作句式及例句

五大雅思议论文写作句式及例句

五大雅思议论文写作句式及例句在雅思议论文写作中,写作句式非常重要,一旦考生掌握,便能灵活应用于无形,雅思写作高分便不在话下。

下面,环球雅思搜集整理了五大雅思议论文写作句式及例句,供参考,希望大家能认真研读。

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雅思议论文第一句式:平行结构1. 文化不仅是人类文明的结晶,也是社会发展的基石基本句式:Culture is not only the crystallization of human civilization, but also cornerstone of social development.高级句式:not only is culture crystallization of human civilization, but cornerstone of social development. (倒装句,押韵3c)2. 广告的确使得我们的日常生活更加多彩,方便、舒适例句:Advertisements do make our day-to-day lives more colorful, convenient and comfortable.(句式:三个平行结构+强调+押头韵3c)3. 各种博物馆长久以来记录了历史、传承了文化、教育了任务、娱乐了大众Various museums have been(用现在完成进行时态表示长久以来) recording the history, transmitting the culture, education people and entertaining the public.4. 做兼职工作孩子可以学到许多书本之外的东西,如团队合作精神、竞争意识、交流技能、时间管理、坚韧等Taking part-time jobs, children can acquire much out of textbooks such as team-work spirit, sense of competition, communication skills, time management and toughness, to name just a few.5. 媒体正在改变着我们的生活、工作、学习、娱乐与思考与看待世界的方式Media are changing /altering/transforming /revolutionizing the way we live, work, study, play, think and view the world.雅思议论文第二句式:从句1. 什么叫句子:表达清晰、结构完整2. 从句是不是句子:不是,从句是句子的某成分3. 每类从句因何得名:位置或在句子中的成分1)FORMULAR雅思议论文写作公式①That+完整句=N 可做主语、宾语、表语、同位语②完整句:Ignorance added to a stong character is a double curse and stupidity joining hands with stubbornness is twice stupid.无知与傲慢在一起则会祸不单行,愚蠢与固执联手则令傻气横流上一句+is well-known 易头重脚轻,——it is well-known that Some assert that+The focus is that+Many people fail to realize that +雅思议论文第三句式:不定式做插入语1. To begin/start with2. To sum up3. To summarize/conclude4. Sad to say 令人遗憾的说5. Needless to say 不用说6. To cut a story short 长话短说7. So to speak譬如....a is to b what c is to d8. To illustrate = for example 例如9. To be fair 说句公道话10. To be precise/exact11. To be more specific详细的说12. To put it like this 这么说吧13. To put it differently = in other words14. To put is from another angle15. To be frank16. To tell the truth17. That is to say 也就是说18. To be rough简略的说雅思议论文第四句式:双重否定It is not rate to see并不罕见总之:never fail to doMedia never fails to fascinate peopleBe never withoutBe addicted to = be indulged to第五句式:六大强调句式1. Do/does/did+v2. 双重否定表示情调3. What引导的主从表强调4. 倒装表示强调5. Nothing表示强调6. It is that/who 表示强调例句:Time matters!Time does matterTime never fails to matter.Never does time fail to matter双重强调+倒装以上即是本次环球雅思向各位烤鸭们介绍的五大雅思议论文写作句式及例句,值得大家反复研读并用于写作中,这些都是雅思议论文写作中的亮点和家分店,大家千万不可小视了。

关于作文结构-用好你的平行结构(高分内容)

关于作文结构-用好你的平行结构(高分内容)

关于雅思作文结构:用好你的平行结构(易错+高分内容)
平行结构是书面英语中的常见规则,在雅思写作中尤其重要,它可以很好地体现出一个考生的写作素养。

这个语法规则其实很多同学应该都听说过,但在实际协商做实践中,特别是写较长的复杂句时,大家很容易忘记而导致扣分。

平行结构用最直观的语言解释就是名词对名词,形容词对形容词,动词不定式对动词不定式,分词对分词……比如,请仔细体会下面这些剑桥例句中的平行结构:
Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team.(名词短语平行)
Even when children use a computer for other purposes, such as getting information or emailing friends, it is no substitute(替代物)for human interaction.(分词短语平行)
Some essays are hard to understand, not because they are long but because they are obscure(含义模糊的).(从句平行)
剑桥考官在范文中对于平行原则遵守得相当严格,希望大家也能“积极自律”,在这个写作的细节上也能想考官满分作文的高标准看齐。

雅思作文英文框架

雅思作文英文框架

雅思作文英文框架英文:When it comes to the IELTS writing task, a well-structured essay is key to achieving a high score. In my experience, there are a few key elements to consider when organizing your essay.Firstly, you should have a clear introduction that lays out the topic and your position on it. This could include a brief background or context for the issue, as well as a thesis statement that outlines your main argument.Next, you should have several body paragraphs that provide evidence and support for your argument. Each paragraph should focus on a specific point or idea, and should include examples or details that help to illustrate your argument.Finally, you should have a conclusion that summarizesyour main points and restates your thesis in a new way. This is also a good place to provide some final thoughts or recommendations on the topic.Of course, there are many different ways to structure an essay, and what works best for you may depend on your own writing style and the specific prompt you are given. However, I have found that this basic structure can be a useful starting point for many different types of essays.中文:在进行雅思写作任务时,一个结构良好的文章是获得高分的关键。

雅思写作七种高平句式表达

雅思写作七种高平句式表达

雅思写作七种高平句式表达一、表示原因1. There are three reasons for this.2. The reasons for this are as follows.3. The reason for this is obvious.4. The reason for this is not far to seek.5. The reason for this is that...6. We have good reason to believe that...例如:There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life. Firstly, people’s living standard has been greatly improved. Secondly, most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like. Last but not least, more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.注:如考生写第一个句子没有把握,可将其改写成两个句子。

如:Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this. 这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。

二、表示好处1. It has the following advantages.2. It does us a lot of good.3. It benefits us quite a lot.4. It is beneficial to us.5. It is of great benefit to us.例如:Books are like friends. They can help us know the world better, and they can open our minds and widen our horizons. Therefore, reading extensively is of great benefit to us.三、表示坏处1. It has more disadvantages than advantages.2. It does us much harm.3. It is harmful to us.例如:However, everything divides into two. Television can also be harmful to us. It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.四、表示重要. 必要. 困难. 方便. 可能1. It is important(necessary, difficult, convenient, possible. for sb. to do sth.2. We think it necessary to do sth.3. It plays an important role in our life.例如:Computers are now being used everywhere, whether in the government, in schools or in business. Soon, computers will be found in every home, too. We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.五、表示措施1. We should take some effective measures.2. We should try our best to overcome (conquer. the difficulties.3. We should do our utmost in doing sth.4. We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced. with.例如:The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious. Therefore, we must take some effective measures to solve it.六、表示变化1. Some changes have taken place in the past five years.2. A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications.3. The computer has brought about many changes in education.例如:Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years. The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek. Nowadays, more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein, and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.七、表示事实. 现状1. We cannot ignore the fact that...2. No one can deny the fact that...3. There is no denying the fact that...4. This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.5. However, that’s not the case.例如:We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution. To solve these problems, we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution. The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.因此,在之后的考试中,那些之前没有出现的话题,考到的可能性较大。

雅思写作大作文15句框架模板

雅思写作大作文15句框架模板

15句逻辑框架Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace rather than pure knowledge. To what extent do you agree or disagree.第1句:背景介绍Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the purpose of university education.现在,越来越多的人关心大学教育的目的。

Explanation:●Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about thephenomenon that …●Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about thepurposes that university education serves.●Nowadays, more and more students are concerned about what theywill learn in the universities.●Universities are one of the most important institutions in modernsociety.如果很难再短时间内想出第一句内容,就直接表达观点,两句话写完首段。

●I agree with this opinion. Reasons are as follows.我赞同的观点是……原因如下。

第2句:交代辩论话题A. “是否应该……”However, whether universities should mainly provide job-related skills to graduates is a controversial issue.但是,大学是否应该主要提供给学生工作相关的技能是一个饱受争议的话题。

英文写作中的句子平衡和并列结构

英文写作中的句子平衡和并列结构

英文写作中的句子平衡和并列结构英文写作中,句子的平衡和并列结构是非常重要的。

通过合理运用这些结构,可以让文章更加流畅、有条理,同时也能提升读者的阅读体验。

本文将探讨句子平衡和并列结构在英文写作中的应用。

首先,让我们来看一些句子平衡的例子。

在英文写作中,句子平衡是指通过对句子的结构、长度等因素的巧妙设计,使得句子结构紧凑、形象,读起来有韵律感。

比如,下面这个例子:"The sun was shining, the birds were singing, and the flowers were blooming."这个句子中的三个并列分句在内容和结构上都非常平衡,给人一种愉悦的感觉。

句子的平衡可以通过控制句子长度、选取合适的词汇和语句结构来实现。

在英文写作中,句子平衡可以增加文章的美感,让读者更容易理解和记住文章的内容。

接下来,让我们来看一些并列结构的例子。

并列结构是指在句子中使用并列连词(如and、or、but等)来连接两个或多个相同重要性的句子成分。

通过使用并列结构,可以使句子更加严谨和有逻辑,增强读者对文章观点的理解和认同。

比如,下面这个例子:"She is intelligent, diligent, and kind-hearted."在这个例子中,我们使用了and连接了三个同时表达人物特征的形容词,让句子更加有说服力。

并列结构的运用需要注意两个方面:一是要确保并列元素之间的平衡性,避免一个元素过于突出;二是要注意用逗号或分号等标点符号来分隔并列元素,以保持句子的清晰和流畅。

除了句子平衡和并列结构的应用,我们还可以借助其他手段来提升写作的表达效果。

比如,使用修辞手法和变化的句子结构。

修辞手法,如比喻、排比等,可以使文章更加生动有趣,增强读者的阅读体验。

变化的句子结构可以使文章更加丰富多样,让读者更容易理解和记住文章的内容。

比如,我们可以使用问句、倒装、插入语等句子结构来增加句子的表现力和变化性。

大学英语写作中的平行结构

大学英语写作中的平行结构

大学英语写作中的平行结构大学英语写作中的平行结构所谓平行结构(parallelism),就是把一个句子逻辑上应属于同一句法成分的并列事物用相同的结构来表达。

平行结构的使用是一种修辞手法,它不仅能使文章节奏匀称,而且能起篇章纽带作用,这种修辞手段运用得好,能使你的语句表意明确,层次清楚,读之产生一种和谐的感觉。

本文拟将这一修辞手法向读者作以简析,旨在提高学生英文写作的造句能力。

首先让我们来分析一道在TOEFL考题中的改错题:鶷he high school graduate,if he(A)is eighteen or nineteen,has(B)these alternatives (C):attending college,finding a job,or the army(D).本文中的错误是(D),因为它不符合英语修辞学中的平等性原则。

我们可以看出句中alternatives后面分别跟着(1)attending college (2)finding a job(3)the army,都是对alternatives的具体说明,逻辑上应属于同一成分的并列事物,可是(1)(2)用的是动宾结构,而(3)却用了the army这个名词,即用了一(2)不同的结构,改正的办法是将the army改为动宾结构joining the army,个与(1)以与(1)(2)结构平行。

所以,平行结构的使用既是一种语法手段,也是一种词汇手段,既有词汇平行(word with word),也有短语平行(phrase with phrase)和从句平行(clause with clause),同时平行结构可以表达句子的各种成分。

现分别阐释如下:一、主语1.Knowing how to study and learning how to budget time are important for college students.懂得怎样学习,学会合理支配时间是大学生应予重视的问题。

英语写作中如何运用平行结构?

英语写作中如何运用平行结构?

英语写作中如何运用平行结构?关键信息项:1、平行结构的定义与类型语法平行词汇平行逻辑平行2、平行结构在不同文体中的应用议论文记叙文说明文3、运用平行结构的原则保持结构一致避免逻辑混乱注重语言简洁4、错误使用平行结构的案例分析结构不一致的错误逻辑不清晰的错误语言冗余的错误5、提高平行结构运用能力的方法阅读优秀范文写作练习寻求反馈与修改11 平行结构的定义平行结构是指在一个句子或段落中,相似的语法结构、词汇或逻辑关系被重复使用,以增强语言的节奏感、逻辑性和表现力。

111 语法平行语法平行是指在句子中使用相同的语法形式,如动词时态、名词单复数、形容词比较级等。

例如:“I like reading, writing and speaking English” 这个句子中,“reading”“writing”“speaking”都是动名词形式,保持了语法的平行。

112 词汇平行词汇平行是指使用相同词性或语义相关的词汇。

比如:“She is kind, gentle and friendly” 其中“kind”“gentle”“friendly”都是形容词,且都表达了人的性格特点。

113 逻辑平行逻辑平行是指在表达观点或列举事项时,遵循相同的逻辑顺序或逻辑关系。

例如:“To succeed in life, one needs to be hardworking, persistent and intelligent” 这里“hardworking”“persistent”“intelligent”都是成功所需的品质,在逻辑上是平行的。

12 平行结构在不同文体中的应用121 议论文在议论文中,平行结构可以使论点更清晰、更有说服力。

比如在阐述观点时,可以说:“We should not only study hard but also learn to think critically and act independently” 通过使用“not onlybut also”的平行结构,强调了学习的多个方面。

英文作文平行结构

英文作文平行结构

英文作文平行结构英文:Parallel structure is a writing technique that involves using the same grammatical structure for two or more ideas in a sentence or paragraph. This technique helps to create balance and rhythm in writing, making it easier to read and understand. For example, consider the sentence "I like to swim, hike, and bike." The parallel structure in this sentence is the use of the infinitive form of the verb "to" before each activity. Another example could be "She enjoys reading books, watching movies, and listening to music." Again, the parallel structure is the use of the present participle form of the verb "ing" before each activity.中文:平行结构是一种写作技巧,它涉及在句子或段落中使用相同的语法结构来表达两个或更多的想法。

这种技巧有助于创造平衡和节奏,使写作更易于阅读和理解。

例如,考虑句子“我喜欢游泳、徒步旅行和骑自行车。

”这个句子中的平行结构是在每个活动前使用不定式形式的动词“to”。

Simon考官范文-IELTSWritingTask2:equality(平等)topic

Simon考官范文-IELTSWritingTask2:equality(平等)topic

Simon考官范文-IELTSWritingTask2:equality(平等)topic题目:In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits.What is your view of the relationship between equality and personal success?范文:In my opinion, an egalitarian society is one in which everyone has the same rights and the same opportunities. I completely agree that people can achieve more in this kind of society.Education is an important factor with regard to personal success in life. I believe that all children should have access to free schooling, and higher education should be either free or affordable for all those who chose to pursue a university degree. In a society without free schooling or affordable higher education, only children and young adults from wealthier families would have access to the best learning opportunities, and they would therefore be better prepared for the job market. This kind of inequality would ensure the success of some but harm the prospects of others.I would argue that equal rights and opportunities are not in conflict with people’s freedom to succeed or fail. In other words, equality does not mean that people lose their motivation to succeed, or that they are not allowed to fail. On the contrary, Ibelieve that most people would feel more motivated to work hard and reach their potential if they thought that they lived in a fair society. Those who did not make the same effort would know that they had wasted their opportunity. Inequality, on the other hand, would be more likely to demotivate people because they would know that the odds of success were stacked in favour of those from privileged backgrounds.In conclusion, it seems to me that there is a positive relationship between equality and personal success.(260 words)。

英语写作,运用平行结构,增添句式精彩,例文解析

英语写作,运用平行结构,增添句式精彩,例文解析

在英语书⾯表达中,为了使句⼦的表达更加精彩,给阅卷⽼师留下深刻的印象,同学们要尽量使⽤不同的句式,避免重复,以提⾼作⽂的得分档次。

什么是平⾏结构呢?
平⾏结构指的就是,将结构相同或相似、意义并重、语⽓⼀致的语⾔句⼦成分并⾏排列的⼀种
同学们在写作的时候也不妨尝试⽤⽤这种平⾏结构,必定会增添我们⽂章的⾊彩。

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运用平行结构的英语作文

运用平行结构的英语作文

运用平行结构的英语作文Title: The Impact of Technological Advancement on Education and Communication.In today's rapidly evolving world, technological advancement has become a pivotal force shaping the landscape of education and communication. Parallel trends have emerged, redefining the way we learn, interact, and disseminate information. This essay explores the profound influence of technological advancements on both education and communication, highlighting their intersections and distinct contributions to societal progress.Firstly, let us delve into the realm of education. With the advent of digital tools and platforms, traditional methods of teaching and learning have undergone a revolutionary transformation. The integration of smart boards, virtual classrooms, and online learning platforms has打破了地理界限, enabling students from diverse backgrounds to access quality education. This paralleldevelopment has not only broadened the horizon of knowledge but has also fostered a culture of lifelong learning.Moreover, the emergence of artificial intelligence (AI) and data analytics has further enhanced the educational experience. AI-powered learning systems can personalize the learning journey for each student, identifying strengths and weaknesses and providing tailored feedback. Data analytics, on the other hand, allows educators to track student progress, identify trends, and make informed decisions about curriculum design and teaching strategies.。

雅思英语作文格式

雅思英语作文格式

雅思英语作文格式Sure, I can help you with that. Here's a structured IELTS essay format that you can follow:1. Introduction:Begin with a general statement or a hook to grab the reader's attention.Provide some background information on the topic.State your thesis statement, which outlines your stance on the issue.2. Body Paragraphs:Start each body paragraph with a topic sentence that introduces the main idea of the paragraph.Provide supporting evidence or examples to justifyyour point of view.Use transition words to ensure coherence and flow between paragraphs.Aim for at least two or three body paragraphs to develop your argument thoroughly.3. Counterargument and Rebuttal (optional):Acknowledge opposing viewpoints or potential counterarguments.Refute those counterarguments with evidence or reasoning.This step is not always necessary but can strengthen your essay by demonstrating critical thinking.4. Conclusion:Summarize the main points discussed in the essay.Restate your thesis in different words.End with a concluding statement that leaves alasting impression on the reader.Here's a sample outline using this format for an IELTS essay on the topic of technology and education:Introduction:Technology has become increasingly integrated into education systems worldwide, revolutionizing the way students learn. While some argue that technology has a detrimental effect on traditional education methods, I firmly believe that it offers numerous benefits that enhance the learning experience.Body Paragraph 1:One advantage of technology in education is its ability to provide access to a wealth of information. With theinternet, students can easily research topics and access educational resources that were previously unavailable. For example, online libraries and academic databases offer a vast array of scholarly articles and research papers that supplement traditional textbooks.Body Paragraph 2:Furthermore, technology facilitates personalized learning experiences tailored to individual student needs. Educational software and online platforms can adapt to students' learning styles and pace, providing targeted instruction and practice activities. This personalized approach ensures that students receive the support and guidance they need to succeed academically.Body Paragraph 3:Moreover, technology enhances collaboration and communication among students and educators. Online forums, video conferencing tools, and collaborative software enable students to engage in discussions, share ideas, andcollaborate on projects regardless of geographical barriers. This fosters a sense of community and teamwork, essential skills for success in the modern workforce.Counterargument and Rebuttal (optional):Some may argue that excessive screen time and reliance on technology can have negative effects on students' attention spans and social skills. While it's true that moderation is key, technology can be used responsibly to supplement, rather than replace, traditional teaching methods. Moreover, the benefits of technology in education far outweigh any potential drawbacks when implemented effectively.Conclusion:In conclusion, technology has transformed education in numerous ways, offering benefits such as increased accessto information, personalized learning experiences, and enhanced collaboration. While challenges exist, thepotential for technology to improve educational outcomes isundeniable. By embracing technology responsibly, educators can empower students to thrive in the digital age.。

雅思写作高分句型解析

雅思写作高分句型解析

雅思写作⾼分句型解析在雅思写作考试的考官评分标准中最后⼀项GRA (grammatical range and accuracy),明确说明考查的是学⽣写英语句⼦多样性和准确性的能⼒,即测试考⽣简单句和复杂句的综合运⽤能⼒。

⽽中国考⽣也知道句式表达要多样性,但很难参透具体如何操作才能让⾃⼰的句⼦丰富多样,结果是普遍句式⽐较单⼀,想到复杂结构时往往就是堆砌各种从句,似乎除了从句再⽆其它复杂结构可写。

事实上,剑桥考官的范⽂中,复杂句的数量寥寥可数,很多时候都是把简单句进⾏了华丽的包装。

下⾯⼩编就为⼤家详细解析雅思写作⾼分句型,希望对⼤家的雅思写作⽔平提⾼有帮助。

⼀、⾼分句型介绍1、状语前置所谓状语前置就是把状语(副词,介词短语,分词,不定式)放到句⾸。

考官会频繁使⽤这种语法结构,⽽很多考⽣却没有意识,这种句式通过⼀堆长句⼦中出现⼀个⼩短语,可以让句⼦产⽣长短结合的紧凑感,实例如下:1. Unfortunately, professionals from other fields who make a much greater contributions to human society, are paid so muchless that it is hard to disagree with the statement.2. Obviously, education systems are based onthe belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills.3. Like self-awareness,this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be most important for achieving happiness.4. As a result of media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities.5. With the political will, such measures could really reduce the amount of rubbish we produce.6. Struggling inpoverty, people in these countries believe international aid is essential and should be continued.7. To do this, we needto improve the choice of public transport services available to individuals.8. To become successful, more skills and dedication are required.2、句中插⼊短语和状语前置类似,长句⼦中间插⼊⼀个⼩短语,可以让句⼦读起来更轻松灵活。

3分钟就能学的雅思语法(第6期):平行结构的省略

3分钟就能学的雅思语法(第6期):平行结构的省略

3分钟就能学的雅思语法(第6期):平行结构的省略·3分钟就能学会的雅思语法·栏目说明:每期讲解一个雅思考试中常见的语法点,帮助各位烤鸭全面掌握语法知识,更好地备战雅思考试!每周周三更新,大家敬请期待!上一期,我们了解了基本的平行结构,大家是否还有印象呢?平行结构在口语写作中尤为适用,我们经常会用平行结构来提高句子的复杂度,从而提高语法分数。

然而在口写中,大家就平行结构如何省略总会出现一些问题。

错误一:平行结构主谓不一致Part-time job experience gives students an insight into what work is about and make them prepare psychologically for theirfuture jobs.解析:该平行结构省略了主语,主语为part-time job experience,and平行了两个谓语动词gives和make,但是make出现了主谓不一致的问题。

修改:Part-time job experience gives students an insight into what work is about and makes them prepare psychologically for their future jobs.错误二:平行结构的主语不一致Information that encourages racialism and terrorism threatens and should ban to purify the social environment.解析:该句主语为information,第二个and平行了两个谓语动词threatens和should ban,略主语。

但是information无法主动发出should ban的动作,所以句子歧义。

修改:Information that encourages racialism and terrorism threatens and should be banned to purify the social environment.或:Information that encourages racialism and terrorism threatens and the government should ban to purify the socialenvironment.错误三:省略后的平行部分结构不一致Television takes up too much of our time. We no longer have enough time to afford hobbies, take part in entertaining activities, and to enjoy outdoor sports.解析:该句平行三个不定式to afford,to take part in,to enjoy,但是在省略过程中,不定式的结构并未平行一致,同样改正的方式有两个,一个是变为to take;一个是删除to enjoy中的to.修改:Television takes up too much of our time. We no longer have enough time to afford hobbies, to take part in entertaining activities, and to enjoy outdoor sports.或:Television takes up too much of our time. We no longer have enough time to afford hobbies, take part in entertaining activities, and enjoy outdoor sports.总结平行结构的省略用法在雅思口语写作中要确保平行结构主谓一致,省略的主语一致,以及平行结构一致。

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3. Even when children use a computer for other purposes, such as getting information or emailing friends, it is no substitute for human interaction. (Or 前后两侧的动名词短语平行)
1. Satisfactioa sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team. (and 前后两侧的抽象名词短语平行 )
2. It is widely believed that mobile phones are indispensible in the case of accidents, or when other difficult situations arise, and that everyone should have the right to the protection they offer. (and 前后两侧的that从句平行)
平行结构
Parallel Structure
平行结构在考官范文里出现极多,最常见的形式 是在表示并列关系的连接词,例如and和or等的 前后两侧用名词对名词,形容词对形容词,动词 不定式对动词不定式,分词短语对分词短语,从 句对从句…… 平行结构常借助于并列连词and, but, or或连词 词组not only…but also…, either…or…, neither…nor…, as well as 等.
4. some offenders need to be imprisoned, both for their own safety and for that of others. 5. Animals may be dangerous not only because of the diseases they can carry, but also because of the direct physical injuries they can inflict.
6. She has neither the professional technique to find a good job nor money (that is) offered by her father or brother to do the business.
7. Some essays are hard to understand, not because they are long but because they are obscure. (表示原因的状语从句平行) 8.They will certainly be the first to help children learn what is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world. 剑8例句,宾语从句平行
还有一些特殊结构中要用平行结构。如: would / had rather / sooner do something than do something, would / had as soon do something as do something (宁可……也不……) 1) Liu Hulan said she had rather die than give up. 2) I would as soon stay at home as go.
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