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from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun.
Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some
other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies
Compare (比较)
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
Ending
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5.含蓄的内容能加以解说。语句的含 蓄,一 是作者 为了表 达的需 要或某 种目的 ,故意 不直接 表达想 表达的 内容, 而把它 隐含在 字里行 间;一 是运用 了象征 、双关 等修辞 格,采 用婉曲 的手法 来表达 自己的 思想、 观点、 看法。 对此类 材料, 不仅要 理解它 字面的 含意, 而且要 深入挖 掘其 所隐含 的信息 ,即能 用简洁 明白的 语言解 说材料 深层的 内涵。
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初中英语作文写作技巧PPT优秀课件
检查错误应从以下几个方面入手:
(1) 格式是否有错。 (2) 拼写有无错误。 (3) 语言是否用错。 (4) 时态、语态错误。 (5) 标点错误。 (6) 人称是否用错。
初中英语作文写作技巧PPT优秀课件
初中英语作文写作技巧PPT优秀课件
3.表转折对比关系的:However,but Although+clause( 从句),In spite of+n/doing,On the one
hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others… 4.表因果关系的:Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,As
a result 5.表换一种方式表达:In other words 6.表进行举例说明:For example,句子;For instance,句子;
such as+n/doing 7.表陈述事实:In fact 8.表达自己观点:As far as I know,In my opinion 9.表总结:In short,In a word,In conclusion,In summary
一 、认真审题,确定时态,人称,题材格式
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Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
Outline (提纲)
Ending Linking words (连接词)
Outline Retell (提纲)
Beginning
Different people have different ideas about …. First of all learn… from listen to…, enjoy … …also…
Enfferent students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
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谢谢! 学妹给我打电话,说她又换工作了,这次是销售。电话里,她絮絮叨叨说着一年多来工作上的不如意,她说工作一点都不开心,找不到半点成就感。 末了,她问我:学姐,为什么想 找一份 自己热 爱的工 作这么 难呢? 我问她上一份工作干了多久,她 说不到 三个月 ,做的 还是行 政助理 的工作 ,工作 内容枯 燥乏味 不说, 还特别 容易得 罪人, 实在不 是自己 的理想 型。 我又问了她前几份工作辞职的原 因,结 果都是 大同小 异,不 是因为 工作乏 味,就 是同事 不好相 处,再 者就是 薪水太 低,发 展前景 堪忧。 粗略估计,这姑娘毕业不到一年 ,工作 却已经 换了四 五份, 还跨了 三个行 业。 但即使如此频繁的跳槽,她也仍 然没有 找不到 自己满 意的工 作。 2 我问她,心目中理想型的工作是 什么样 子的。 她说, 姐,你 知道苏 明玉吗 ?就是 《都挺 好》电 视剧里 的女老 大,我 就喜欢 她样子 的工作 ,有挑 战有成 就感, 有钱有 权,生 活自由 ,如果 给我那 样的工 作,我 会投入 我全部 的热情 。 听她说完,我尴尬的笑了笑。 其实每一个人都向往这样的成功 ,但这 姑娘却 本末倒 置了, 并不是 有了钱 有了权 有了成 就以后 才全力 以赴的 工作, 而是全 力以赴 工作, 投入了 自己的 全部以 后,才 有了地 位名望 钱财。 你要先投入,才会有收获,当你 真正投 入做一 件事后 ,会明 白两件 事:首 先你会 明白, 把一件 事认认 真真做 好,所 获得的 收益远 大于同 时做很 多事; 你会明白,有人风风火火做各种 事仍未 有回报 ,是因 为他们 从未投 入过。 从“做 了”到 “做” ,正如 “知道 ”到“ 懂得” 的距离 。 3 之前单位有一个姑娘,工作特别 拼命, 只要说 起她的 名字, 大家都 会赞不 绝口: 这姑娘 工作拼 命的程 度,连 男人们
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六、一致性错误
所谓不一致不仅指主谓不一致,它还包括数的 不一致、时态不一致以及代词不一致等。
例1:Once one have money, he can do what he want to do. 人一旦有了钱,他就能想干 什么就干什么。
析:one 是第三人称单数,因此本句的 have 应改为 has。同理,want 应改为 wants。
四、时态的误用
例:She like it very much and reads it to the class. 她很喜欢它 并且读给同学们听。
析:在书面表达中,应根据上 下文或时间状语来确定动词的时态。
▪ 正:She liked it very much and read it to the class.
writing
书面表达六步法
审
抄
抓
书面
表达
改
扩
连
Writing points
一.审题 (体裁 结构 格式 内容 人称 时态) 二.抓要点 三.扩展句子 四.连句成文 (时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应) 五.查错改错 六.眷写
“中小学生健康 ”为话题写一篇短文 【要求】
(1)内容包括①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。 ② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。
例:There are many ways to know the society. For example, by TV radio, newspaper and so on. 有许多 方式来了解这个社会,例如通过电视、广播、报纸等等。
析:本句后半部分 For example, by TV, radio, newspaper and so on 不是一个完整的句子,仅仅是一些 不连贯的词语,不能独立成句。 正:There are many ways to know the society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper and so on.
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11、获得的成功越大,就越令人高兴 。野心 是使人 勤奋的 原因, 节制使 人枯萎 。 12、不问收获,只问耕耘。如同种树 ,先有 根茎, 再有枝 叶,尔 后花实 ,好好 劳动, 不要想 太多, 那样只 会使人 胆孝懒 惰,因 为不实 践,甚 至不接 触社会 ,难道 你是野 人。(名 言网) 13、不怕,不悔(虽然只有四个字,但 常看常 新。 14、我在心里默默地为每一个人祝福 。我爱 自己, 我用清 洁与节 制来珍 惜我的 身体, 我用智 慧和知 识充实 我的头 脑。 15、这世上的一切都借希望而完成。 农夫不 会播下 一粒玉 米,如 果他不 曾希望 它长成 种籽; 单身汉 不会娶 妻,如 果他不 曾希望 有小孩 ;商人 或手艺 人不会 工作, 如果他 不曾希 望因此 而有收 益。-- 马钉路 德。
1、最灵繁的人也看不见自己的背脊。——非洲 2、最困难的事情就是认识自己。——希腊 3、有勇气承担命运这才是英雄好汉。——黑塞 4、与肝胆人共事,无字句处读书。——周恩来 5、阅读使人充实,会谈使人敏捷,写作使人精确。——培根
11、获得的成功越大,就越令人高兴 。野心 是使人 勤奋的 原因, 节制使 人枯萎 。 12、不问收获,只问耕耘。如同种树 ,先有 根茎, 再有枝 叶,尔 后花实 ,好好 劳动, 不要想 太多, 那样只 会使人 胆孝懒 惰,因 为不实 践,甚 至不接 触社会 ,难道 你是野 人。(名 言网) 13、不怕,不悔(虽然只有四个字,但 常看常 新。 14、我在心里默默地为每一个人祝福 。我爱 自己, 我用清 洁与节 制来珍 惜我的 身体, 我用智 慧和知 识充实 我的头 脑。 15、这世上的一切都借希望而完成。 农夫不 会播下 一粒玉 米,如 果他不 曾希望 它长成 种籽; 单身汉 不会娶 妻,如 果他不 曾希望 有小孩 ;商人 或手艺 人不会 工作, 如果他 不曾希 望因此 而有收 益。-- 马钉路 德。
1、最灵繁的人也看不见自己的背脊。——非洲 2、最困难的事情就是认识自己。——希腊 3、有勇气承担命运这才是英雄好汉。——黑塞 4、与肝胆人共事,无字句处读书。——周恩来 5、阅读使人充实,会谈使人敏捷,写作使人精确。——培根
初中英语作文教学完整ppt课件
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保持健康
It’s very important to keep healthy. Eat less junk food. Fruit and vegetables are good for our health. We need to do some sports every day. We should eat healthy food. You should go to bed early and get up early. We must keep healthy.
完整最新ppt19语态时态要准确主谓语要一致注意冠词用法hehoneststudent不能写成a注意拼写标点符号和大小写汉语英语句号完整最新ppt20保持健康veryimportantkeephealthy
初中英语作文教学
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步骤
审题,定人称和时态 列出要点 加开头结尾 加连接词 加例子
My hobby is playing …and enjoying…, I like making friends with others. Would you like to make friends with me?
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语态、时态要准确
主谓语要一致
注意冠词用法
he is an honest student 中的an 不能写成a 注意拼写、标点符号和大小写
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My school life is meaningful,corlorful and interesting.
My school is big and beautiful. I get up early in the morning every day and
初中英语作文写作技巧ppt课件
3.表转折对比关系的:However,but Although+clause( 从句),In spite of+n/doing,On the one
hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others… 4.表因果关系的:Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,As
初中英语作文写作技巧ppt课件
a result 5.表换一种方式表达:In other words 6.表进行举例说明:For example,句子;For instance,句子;
such as+n/doing 7.表陈述事实:In fact 8.表达自己观点:As far as I know,In my opinion 9.表总结:In short,In a word,In conclusion,In summary
初中英语作文写作技巧
英语写作的字,词,句,段,篇
字:工整,清楚 词:不拼写错误,能适当掌握高级词汇 句:不出现语法错误,句子要逐渐使用复
杂的从句句型,为文章添彩 段:段落内容有逻辑性 篇:合理安排文章布局,要有逻辑与联系
答题技巧
一 :认真审题,确定时态,人称,题材格 式
二: 找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点 三 :成文时,表述正确,文字流畅 四:文章结构清晰,重点句型出彩 五:认真检查 六:书写工整,卷面整洁
字迹要清晰,让阅卷人看得清楚,不可字 迹潦草,难以辨认,要保持卷面的整洁。
注意拼写、标点符号和大小写,例如: receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
标点符号特别注意汉英的不同。
初中英语作文写作技巧ppt课件
hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others… 4.表因果关系的:Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,As
初中英语作文写作技巧ppt课件
a result 5.表换一种方式表达:In other words 6.表进行举例说明:For example,句子;For instance,句子;
such as+n/doing 7.表陈述事实:In fact 8.表达自己观点:As far as I know,In my opinion 9.表总结:In short,In a word,In conclusion,In summary
初中英语作文写作技巧
英语写作的字,词,句,段,篇
字:工整,清楚 词:不拼写错误,能适当掌握高级词汇 句:不出现语法错误,句子要逐渐使用复
杂的从句句型,为文章添彩 段:段落内容有逻辑性 篇:合理安排文章布局,要有逻辑与联系
答题技巧
一 :认真审题,确定时态,人称,题材格 式
二: 找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点 三 :成文时,表述正确,文字流畅 四:文章结构清晰,重点句型出彩 五:认真检查 六:书写工整,卷面整洁
字迹要清晰,让阅卷人看得清楚,不可字 迹潦草,难以辨认,要保持卷面的整洁。
注意拼写、标点符号和大小写,例如: receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
标点符号特别注意汉英的不同。
初中英语作文写作技巧ppt课件
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四、定语 汉:常常是前置定语 英:前置和后置定语 e.g. 我们学校的所有学生
all the students in our school 左边数第五个男孩
the fifth boy from the left 英国人的日常生活
everyday lives of the British 在中国骑车的人数
the number of cyclists in China 几种气体的混合物
a mixture of several gases
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三到六岁的孩子
Children from 3 to 6 years of age 隔壁的音像店
the music store next door 用英语写的信
e.g. 她一周有三个下午在一家百货公司做兼 职。
She works part time in a department store three afternoons a week.
在我十岁那年我和家人经历了一次奇妙的 旅行。
I took a fantastic trip with my family when I was ten years old.
We have read many books.
They do shopping at the weekend.
We are learning English.
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3. 主语+系动词+表语
We are students. He became a scientist.
4. 主Th语at+so及un物ds动go词od+. 间接宾语+直接宾语
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Warming-up(热身)
1. Praise your desk mate. (夸一夸你的同桌.) friendly ….
Warming-up (热身)
2.Answer questions:
What’s her/his name ? -Her/His name is…
What does she/he look like ? –She/He is…
–She/He has…
What’s her/his hobby ? -She/He likes …
…
…
One Possible Version
• My desk mate is Li Mei with two big eyes. She is very quiet and shy. She enjoys listening to music, singing and dancing. She is an excellent student and we are the best friends.
你的英语作文书写规范吗?
漂亮的书法令人爱不释手,小错 误都会被改卷老师“视而不见”
丑得掉渣的书写!文章内容写得再 好,阅卷老师都没有耐心读下去!
范文
My new friend
I have a new friend . His name is Mike White . He comes from England . However , he can speak English ,French and some Chinese .
性格 开朗,爱帮助人 爱好 音乐
其它 ……
பைடு நூலகம்
根据题目给出的写作要求,你可以 得出多少关键信息?
1. Praise your desk mate. (夸一夸你的同桌.) friendly ….
Warming-up (热身)
2.Answer questions:
What’s her/his name ? -Her/His name is…
What does she/he look like ? –She/He is…
–She/He has…
What’s her/his hobby ? -She/He likes …
…
…
One Possible Version
• My desk mate is Li Mei with two big eyes. She is very quiet and shy. She enjoys listening to music, singing and dancing. She is an excellent student and we are the best friends.
你的英语作文书写规范吗?
漂亮的书法令人爱不释手,小错 误都会被改卷老师“视而不见”
丑得掉渣的书写!文章内容写得再 好,阅卷老师都没有耐心读下去!
范文
My new friend
I have a new friend . His name is Mike White . He comes from England . However , he can speak English ,French and some Chinese .
性格 开朗,爱帮助人 爱好 音乐
其它 ……
பைடு நூலகம்
根据题目给出的写作要求,你可以 得出多少关键信息?
初中英语作文写作课(共15张PPT)【优秀课件】
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students
think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot
Topic
On the Internet
Beginning
Beginning Different people have different ideas about ….
Body
正文
Key sentence1
Most students…
First of all learn… from …also… listen to…, enjoy … Besides make…more convenient
Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
中考英语复习课件:写作课(共17张PPT)
Task 1: Warm up
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Talk in groups. Make a one-day plan for me.Find somewhere nice in your hometown for Miss Wan to travel.
Where can I go?How can I get there? What can I do there?What should I bring?How will I feel?
Do you have any better ways?
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Advanced ways to give advice:
It couldn’t be better if …
Nothing is more interesting than …
You are supposed to do sth… 应该
A one-day trip guide for Miss Wan
Task 3 :Improve the writing
I think you can go to Deshengyan Hill. You can go there by bus. You can climb the hill there and enjoy the amazing view. You should bring your camera. You will feel happy.
改变主语,丰富句型结构
灵活选用词汇或靓句,提升句子层次
使用从句,使句子形式多样化
Tip 1A clear topic sting details 细节支撑 right linking words连接词 make a great paragraph.
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Talk in groups. Make a one-day plan for me.Find somewhere nice in your hometown for Miss Wan to travel.
Where can I go?How can I get there? What can I do there?What should I bring?How will I feel?
Do you have any better ways?
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Advanced ways to give advice:
It couldn’t be better if …
Nothing is more interesting than …
You are supposed to do sth… 应该
A one-day trip guide for Miss Wan
Task 3 :Improve the writing
I think you can go to Deshengyan Hill. You can go there by bus. You can climb the hill there and enjoy the amazing view. You should bring your camera. You will feel happy.
改变主语,丰富句型结构
灵活选用词汇或靓句,提升句子层次
使用从句,使句子形式多样化
Tip 1A clear topic sting details 细节支撑 right linking words连接词 make a great paragraph.
初中英语作文写作教与学课件(96张PPT)
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《英语课标(2017)版》把思维品质列为 英语学科核心素养,并将其界定为“思维 在逻辑性、批判性、创新性等方面所表现 的能力和水平”。在英语学习中,学生的 思维活动随处可见。培养和发展学生的思 维品质,就是通过进行观察、比较、分析 、推断、归纳、建构、评价、创新等思维 方式的训练,增强思维的逻辑性、批判性 和创新性,提高思维品质。
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优秀ppt公开课ppt免费课件下载免费 课件初 中英语 作文写 作教与 学课件 (96张 PPT)
英文写作任务趋势
通过文本呈现写作要点; 强调文章逻辑及语言流畅; 主张美词美句及句型多样化; 重视对学生思维品质的评价。 改变写作要求 “对” ——“美”
优秀ppt公开课ppt免费课件下载免费 课件初 中英语 作文写 作教与 学课件 (96张 PPT)
英语写作之训练方法
优秀ppt公开课ppt免费课件下载免费 课件初 中英语 作文写 作教与 学课件 (96张 PPT)
优秀ppt公开课ppt免费课件下载免费 课件初 中英语 作文写 作教与 学课件 (96张 PPT)
科学的训练方法
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初中英语作文写作课(完整编版)ppt课件
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students
think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot
Internet. Only in this way, it can help us.students a lot.
Ending
Linking words (连接词)
OR(u提etlt纲ine)ell (复述)
Topic
On the Internet
Beginning Different people have different ideas about ….
Compare (比较)
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
初中英语写作课件PPT
英语书面表达 “六步法”
英语书面表达
书面表达是写的一种途径,是英语交际的重要组成部分。初 中阶段对于英语写作的要求,实际上是“有指导的写
作”(Guided Writing)。它通过提供情景(文字、图画、表格),
让学生用学过的英语语言来描述事物或事件并表达一定的思
想,以此达成和检验对所学英语语言知识的实践应用能力。 客观地说,书面表达一直是我们英语教学的一个难点,也是
年轻妇女
颜色:黄
the yellow car fast, hit the old man.
AC864
note down, the number AC864 , check out
第三步 扩展成句
把要点变成完整 的句子。 注意使用介/副词
第四步 连句成文
词与词搭配 句与句相连 增加细节 呼应首尾
take a walk, see an old man, on the other side of the road,
outside the gate of the City Park
cross the street , on the 3rd Street, turn right, at the crossing.
At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2016, I was takinging a walk on the south side of the Park Road as usual. I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park. He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden turning right at the crossing.
英语书面表达
书面表达是写的一种途径,是英语交际的重要组成部分。初 中阶段对于英语写作的要求,实际上是“有指导的写
作”(Guided Writing)。它通过提供情景(文字、图画、表格),
让学生用学过的英语语言来描述事物或事件并表达一定的思
想,以此达成和检验对所学英语语言知识的实践应用能力。 客观地说,书面表达一直是我们英语教学的一个难点,也是
年轻妇女
颜色:黄
the yellow car fast, hit the old man.
AC864
note down, the number AC864 , check out
第三步 扩展成句
把要点变成完整 的句子。 注意使用介/副词
第四步 连句成文
词与词搭配 句与句相连 增加细节 呼应首尾
take a walk, see an old man, on the other side of the road,
outside the gate of the City Park
cross the street , on the 3rd Street, turn right, at the crossing.
At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2016, I was takinging a walk on the south side of the Park Road as usual. I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park. He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden turning right at the crossing.
初中英语写作-PPT课件
一、句子的写作(简单句类型)
❖ 2、优秀作文
用优美的语言描写你的学校。要
求:请你用英语写一篇短文,词数80左右。短文要
求达意、正确、连贯。
My School
At the foot of the mountain there is a river. By the river there is a small school.
(1) ❖ 十四、体验中考高分写作
(2)
前言
❖ 发展学生的英语语言技能,培养学生良好的 英语交际能力。
❖ 听、说、读、写密切联系,相互渗透,互为 基础。
中考英语书面表达综述
❖ 1、题型目的
测试考生的笔头运用,即语法知识、词汇知识掌 握的程度及遣词造句和用英语进行思维的能力。
❖ 2、新课标要求:
能根据写作要求,收集准备素材;能独立起草短 文短信等;能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑 关系;能简单描述人物或事件;能根据所给图示 或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。
make (full) use of … (充分)利用…
翻译:我们应该充分利用水。
We should make full use of water.
There’s no point in doing sth. 做某事无意义、没必要
翻译:等待毫无意义。
There is no point in waiting.
(3)主语+谓语+宾语
❖ He likes learning Chinese. We all donated our pocket money.
(4)主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语
❖ Mr. Wang teaches us English. I lent her my book.
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Dear Sir or Madam, _____________________________________________ _____________________________
Yours faithfully, Zhang Hua
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针对3要点
• good for the development of my hometown more jobs 好处 同意该项目
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The summer holiday is coming. I'm going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo. I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
Would you please offer us more information about it?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
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Zhang Hua 9
紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了,你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据 下面方框内的提示写一篇短文,谈谈你的假期计划。
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初中英语作文要求要求学生在20 分钟内写出60-80词左右的短文, 并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。
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主要问题
要点不全 线索不清
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【我的经验】
• 审题 • 确定文体 记叙文 书信 。。。 • 把人称和时态定下来 • 列出要点 • 句句之间,段段之间最好能用连接词、句
子,如first of all,above all,at last ,高 级一点的可以用meanwhile
暑假计划 1、好好休息,学会放松 2、读书,因为读书既有趣又能学到很多知识 3、陪父母聊天,帮他们做家务 4、参加社会活动,了解社会 5、……
注意: 1、词数80~100; 2、文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名; 3、方框内容不必逐字翻译,可适当发挥。 参考词汇:知识 knowledge, 社会活动 social activities
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2、交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头
在文章的开头,先把人物、事件和环境交 待清楚。例如"A Trip to Jinshan" (去金山旅游) 的开头:
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
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开头
1、开门山,揭示主题 文章一开头就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如 "How I Spent My Vacation"(我怎样度假)的开头是: I spent my last vacation happily.
下面是题为"Honesty"(谈诚实)一文中的开头:
Honesty is one of the best virtues. An honest man is always trusted and respected. On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar", and is looked upon by honest people.
• However noise and pollution • more information
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• 再加点写信的客套话,就ok了
• 全文如下
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.
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书面表达六步法
审
抄
抓
书面
表达
改
扩
连
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假定你叫张华,最近从报纸上得知美国某公司将在你的家乡
建一座工厂,请给该公司写封电子邮件。要点如下:
●表示欢迎:有利于家乡发展等;
●感到担忧:造成环境污染等;
●希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。
注意:1.词数80-100; 2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥以使行文连贯; 3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Yours faithfully, Zhang Hua
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针对3要点
• good for the development of my hometown more jobs 好处 同意该项目
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10
The summer holiday is coming. I'm going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo. I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
Would you please offer us more information about it?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
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Zhang Hua 9
紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了,你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据 下面方框内的提示写一篇短文,谈谈你的假期计划。
精选
1
初中英语作文要求要求学生在20 分钟内写出60-80词左右的短文, 并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。
精选
2
主要问题
要点不全 线索不清
精选
3
【我的经验】
• 审题 • 确定文体 记叙文 书信 。。。 • 把人称和时态定下来 • 列出要点 • 句句之间,段段之间最好能用连接词、句
子,如first of all,above all,at last ,高 级一点的可以用meanwhile
暑假计划 1、好好休息,学会放松 2、读书,因为读书既有趣又能学到很多知识 3、陪父母聊天,帮他们做家务 4、参加社会活动,了解社会 5、……
注意: 1、词数80~100; 2、文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名; 3、方框内容不必逐字翻译,可适当发挥。 参考词汇:知识 knowledge, 社会活动 social activities
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2、交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头
在文章的开头,先把人物、事件和环境交 待清楚。例如"A Trip to Jinshan" (去金山旅游) 的开头:
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
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11
开头
1、开门山,揭示主题 文章一开头就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如 "How I Spent My Vacation"(我怎样度假)的开头是: I spent my last vacation happily.
下面是题为"Honesty"(谈诚实)一文中的开头:
Honesty is one of the best virtues. An honest man is always trusted and respected. On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar", and is looked upon by honest people.
• However noise and pollution • more information
精选
7
• 再加点写信的客套话,就ok了
• 全文如下
精选
8
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.
精选
4
书面表达六步法
审
抄
抓
书面
表达
改
扩
连
精选
5
假定你叫张华,最近从报纸上得知美国某公司将在你的家乡
建一座工厂,请给该公司写封电子邮件。要点如下:
●表示欢迎:有利于家乡发展等;
●感到担忧:造成环境污染等;
●希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。
注意:1.词数80-100; 2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥以使行文连贯; 3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。