必修5 Unit5 Writing

Dear ___________, Our class has been studying a unit on first aid, ___________________________ it has been very useful because we have learnt about what to do _________________________ to help someone who has had _________________________ an accident __________.
【实战演练】 假设你是李华，你们学校的英语网站 正面向全校学生征集有关急救常识的英文 稿件。请你给该网站投稿，介绍交通事故 方面的急救常识。 内容包括： 1. 首先保持镇静； 2. 检查伤者呼吸情况，呼吸困难要实 施人工呼吸；
3. 如伤者有出血情况要用布按压
止血，然后等候救护车及警察的帮助。
注意：
Say what you want the principal to do. Summarize why a first aid course would be a good thing to do. Sign your names.
Sample writing:
Dear (your principal’s name),
3. 结构：先对需要说明的对象作总的概 括介绍，然后导入具体的说明，也就是 在文章开头提出需要说明的事物或观点， 然后加以列举说明，使文章表达清晰、 条理清楚、层次分明。
【理：
First, second, third, at last ...
First, next, then, finally ...
Say why you would like a first aid course.
We would like to request that____________________ the school organizes a _____________. first aid course We think that a first aid course at the school is a necessary part of our _________________________ education and will make us _________________________ more useful members of our _________________________ society. Perhaps we will even _________________________ save someone’s life one day . ________________________ Yours sincerely, _____________
人教课标 高二 必修 5 Unit 5
如何写指导性说明文
说明文是以说明为主要表达方式对
事物的状态、性质、功能等进行介绍，
或是阐明事理，给人提供知识的一种文
体。知识性、科学性是说明文的主要特
点。指导性说明文属于说明事理类文体，
它旨在为读者提供未知的知识和原
理，使读者阅读后对文章所写事物有所 了解，或掌握解决问题的方法，是一种 实用性很强的文体。 【写作指导】 1. 时态：说明文的时态常用一般现在时。 2. 语言：语言要准确、简洁、周密。语 言风格可以生动活泼，也可以平实简明， 但必须以准确为前提。
通过学习这篇写作指导，你掌握指导性 说明文的写作方法了吗？试着根据要求 自己写一篇，然后与范文对照，找出其 中的不足并加以改进。相信你的写作水 平会越来越高！
Write a letter to your principal politely asking whether he or she could organize the first aid courses.
about many more situations. It would also give us the chance to practise first aid treatments.
We would like to request that the school organizes a first aid course. We think that a first aid course at the school is a necessary part of our education and will make us more useful members of our society. Perhaps we will even save someone’s life one day. Yours sincerely, (Sign your names)
can make a big difference. Here are some rules that we can follow.
First, we should stay calm. Next, we can ask simple questions such as “Are you OK?” to make the person’s condition clear. Then, we need to check the person’s breathing. If it is difficult for
Our class has been studying a unit on first aid. It has been very useful because we have learnt about what to do to help someone who has had an accident.
Write your principal’s name Say why the first aid unit has been useful.
Even though the unit has been very interesting and useful,____________________ we would like to be able _________________________ to do a first aid course. A first _________________________ aid course would give us _________________________ information about many more _________________________ situations. It would also give us _________________________ information about many more _________________________ situations. It would also give us _________________________ the chance to practise first aid __________. treatments.
Even though the unit has been very
interesting and useful, we would like to
be able to do a first aid course. A first
aid course would give us information
1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文
连贯；
2. 词数不少于100。
【参考范文】
First aid for accidents
If we happen to witness an accident,
what should we do to save other people’s
lives? Knowing how to respond properly
Firstly / First of all / To begin with, ...
Secondly, .... Besides / In addition, ... Last
but not least ...
结尾常用表达：
We can draw the conclusion that ...
In short / In brief / In a word, ... It seems clear that ... We can know / learn that ...
him to breathe, we should try to start his
breathing right away with the mouth-to-
mouth method. Also, if a person is
bleeding, we need stop the bleeding by pressing on the wound with a clean cloth. All the above done, we can stay with the person until the police and ambulance arrive.