雅思写作-论证方式-观点类

大作文观点类常见论证方式
三、让步段 2. 例题及分析
例：smoking should be banned from the public. 论证如下：
大作文观点类常见论证方式
三、让步段 3. 总结 优点： 1）结构清晰，一目了然 2）内容全面，两方都涉及
缺点： 1）在段落的字数安排上要求比较严格 2）结尾处比较难写，要注意全面性 总评：适合思路不充分，从一个方面找不到充分论据的学生
大作文观点类常见论证方式
However, many people totally disagree, as they feel that computers can have harmful effects on children. Firstly, the frequent use of computer can cause major health problems such as back pain and short sightedness. In the common case, children glue too much on computer game, which is a waste of time. Instead of doing this, children should spend their times constructively such as revising their homework or doing some recreation activity. Also, there are many inappropriate websites that have an influence on children’s behavior. Furthermore, computer is quite expensive. Some group of people may find it difficult to afford.
大作文观点类常见论证方式
三、让步段
4. 让步段范文
Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive
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观点类常见论证方式 相应范文赏析
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大作文观点类常见论证方式
一、一边倒 1. 段落框架 第一段:背景句+引出话题+考题改写+本人立场 第二段:支持该观点的原因1 总括（功能性的句子）+首先（解释+举例），其次（A+B） 第三段:支持该观点的原因2 第四段:支持该观点的原因3 第五段：总结+自己观点+（建议/预测）
has sprung up and it reached my content. Therefore, I believe that the advantages of computer are far more than the disadvantages.
大作文观点类常见论证方式
三、让步段 1. 段落框架 第一段：背景句+引出话题+考题改写+本人立场 第二段：正面观点+原因1 第三段：正面观点+原因2 第四段：让步段+反面观点1 第五段：总结+自己观点+（建议/预测）
大作文观点类常见论证方式
二、两边论证 1. 段落框架 第一段：背景句+引出话题+考题改写+本人立场 第二段：正面观点+原因 第三段：反方观点+原因 一定记得2>3 第四段：总结+自己观点+（建议/预测）
大作文观点类常Fra Baidu bibliotek论证方式
二、两边论证 2. 例题及分析
例：smoking should be banned from the public. 论证如下：
大作文观点类常见论证方式
Those people who are in favor of computer do so, because computer reduces the workload of children. In fact, nowadays there is a plenty of homework for children to do. Some work may require a presentation. Hence, with the help of computers, children can present their work in a legible way. Moreover, there are many useful websites associated with education. For example, website such as Wikipedia contains a plethora knowledge that suits young blood. Children can access to these websites for their selfpaced study. Not only can computer help to complete works faster, it also helps children to be in contact with their friends from around the world. For instance, many children use an instant messaging program to stay in contact with their friends, who live in the other country. This can also lead to sharing of ideas and experiences. Consequently, the learning process will be enhanced and students will be able to achieve outstanding grades.
大作文观点类常见论证方式
To start with, young children using a computer would destroy their physical performance. It has been proved by the scientists that seeing computer screens for a long time could hurt eye sights of the youths. And also, it is obviously that some serious diseases have been gradually formed by means of successive hours for a continuous period. For example, headache, backache, lumbago and so on.
Living today in the golden age of technology, computer seems to be a crucial household item in our daily lives. Every difficult task can be done with the help of computers. Many researches and assignments can be finished faster with lesser mistakes in accuracies. Some people believe that computer provides fruitful benefits toward children’s life, while many others totally disagree.
大作文观点类常见论证方式
Based on my personal experience, I always use computer to improve my
English skills such as visiting useful websites. As a result, my English score
大作文观点类常见论证方式
Secondly, indulging in computer world regularly is a threat to the mental and emotional development for a young child. If a young kid sits all day and plays computer games, he/she certainly would lose the chance to communicate with his/her peers and parents. In addition, such children, who would like to regard computers as their friends, in the virtual world become not active .
大作文观点类常见论证方式
一、一边倒 2. 例题及分析
例：smoking should be banned from the public. 论证如下：
大作文观点类常见论证方式
一、一边倒 3. 总结 优点： 1）结构清晰，一目了然 2）论据充分，段落整齐 缺点： 1）需要的论据比较多，思路要求高 2）对文章逻辑严密度要求高，段落和句子之间层次要求高 总评：适合思路丰富的学生，适合观点倾斜度高的题材
大作文观点类常见论证方式
一、一边倒 4. 一边倒范文
Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?
There is a controversial issue about whether young children are benefit from using a computer every day. And now, a widespread view believed that sitting on the computer screens longer are passive. As far as I am concerned, I do agree with this opinion.
大作文观点类常见论证方式
To sum up, using the computer for young children regularly, just like a bird is jailed in a cage and has no freedom. Overall, parenting is the most important aspect on educating their children for using computers correctly. And I would conclude that the young children should be led and taught by means of education publicize.
大作文观点类常见论证方式
二、两边论证 3. 总结 优点： 1）结构清晰，一目了然 2）框架整齐，容易想论据
缺点： 1）开头段会比较难驾驭 2）对文章的过渡要求比较高，段落的安排要注意 总评：适合思路不充分，从一个方面找不到充分论据的学生
大作文观点类常见论证方式
二、两边论证 4. 两边论证范文
Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?