大学英语写作讲解PPT课件
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College English Writing 《大学英语写作》.ppt
2. Practice more and write more （勤写多练）
Writing is always profitable. 各种形式的写作实践：写英文日记diary、 书
信letters、 做汉译英练习translation、 写文 章摘要abstracts、 写读后感、 缩写短篇名著、 写各种命题作文compositions、 写观后感等 等。 多读胸中有本， 勤写笔下生花
6. Acronym(首字母缩略词):
WTO — World Trade Organization UNESCO; OPEC; NBA
不及物动词汇 + 介词：
depend on, rely on, insist on, concentrate on, focus on
believe in, persist in, participate in, succeed in, specialize in
and some few to be chewed and digested…（有些 书可以一尝， 有些书可以吞下， 有不多的几部书 则应当咀嚼消化， ….. 对于少数好书， 则要精读、 细读、 反复地读。）
阅读时要注意下面四点：
1）语篇结构 2）句法结构 3）词汇惯用法和固定搭配 4）英汉两种语言在表达方面的异同
do me a favor, do one’s job
acquire knowledge 获得知识
get a job
Hale Waihona Puke 获得工作 achieve success 获得成功
gain reputation 获得声誉
attain one’s end 达到目的
大学英语写作教案ppt课件
freeways connect the many communities that are part of Los
Angeles.The city has grown higher.Office buildings, hotels and
stores are now taller. Public places, such as sports stadiums, have
Moreover Namely Nevertheless Next Nonetheless Now Otherwise similarly
Still Subsequently Then Thereafter Therefore Thus undoubtedly
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第二章 段落的构成
段落是指一组相互关联，用来阐述某一中心思想的句子群。 一 段落和提纲 我们在写文章之前应该拟出一个提纲，而提纲的每一个
因此，我们在写作时要摈弃一切与本段的中心、主题无关 的句子。
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The bright children is patient. He can tolerate uncertainty and failure and will keep trying until he gets an answer. When all his experiments fail, he can even admit to himself and others that for the time being he is not going to get an answer. This may annoy him, but he can wait. Very often, he does not want to be told how to do the problem or solve the puzzle he has struggled with. because he does not want to be cheated out of the chance to figure It out for himself in the failure. This is not so for the dull child. He can’t stand uncertainty or failure. To him, an unanswered question Is not a challenge or an opportunity, but a threat. If he can’t find the answer quickly, it must be given to him, and quickly; and he must have answers for everything.
实用大学英语写作PPT
该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分的给低分，包括零分。
第一章节
三．评分标准
满分15分。 阅卷标准共分五档次：2分、5 分、8分、11分及14分，依作文水平可在本档次内上下浮动1分。
3.细化评分标准：
2分 --- 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
连贯性的处理
添加副标题
原因 for; as; since; now that; on account of; given that; owing to; due to; thanks to; because; because of; in that…; considering that…; seeing that…
4.字数不足酌情扣分
累计字数
110-119
100-109
90-99
80-89
70-79
60-69
50-59
低于49
扣分
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四．题型把握
学习与校园生活
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社会发展变化
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常识、格言
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社会热点
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命题范围
2.命题体裁
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论说文
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记叙文
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图表作文
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应用文
3.作文类型模块化
对立观点型
遣词
干涩、枯燥文句的处理
are obliged to effective efficient and immediately serious / water
We should take measures against pollution. We take measures against pollution.
大学英语专业写作基础PPT
According to the Teaching Syllabus, English majors should learn to write compositions concerning their daily life and commonly disces are normally asked to write both free compositions and guided ones as well. Now you are freshmen, and the long-felt TEM-4 is just on its way, therefore, learning to write English compositions step by step has already come to the agenda. With the deepening of reforms and opening to the outside world, our country has now entered a new historical period. More and more professionals with higher ability of English are needed. In order to keep up with the changing situation, you should work arduously.
starting from scratch; but don’t be over-optimistic, for the road to effective writing is long and arduous. Long and arduous as it is, I still hope that my lecture will bring to you the pleasure, the help and the confidence in writing all types of articles in English.
大学英语写作PPT课件
was out of order. I had them -all.
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2.Concluding Paragraph:
2.1 Symptoms
I followed the directions, with the happy result---speaking for myself---that my life was preserved. And is still going on.
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2.Concluding Paragraph:
2.4 The Wisdom of Socrates
–By reason of examination, Anthenians, I have made enemies of a very bitter and fierce kind, who have spread a great number of slanders about me. People say that I am a “wise man”, thinking that I am wise myself in any matter in which I believe that only God is really wise, and that by this Oracle he meant that man’s wisdom is worth little or nothing. I do not think he meant that Socrates was wise. He only took me as an example as though he would say to me. “He among you is the wisest who, like Socrates, knows that his wisdom is worth little at all.”
英语四级作文写作技巧 精品 PPT课件
2. good的替换词: positive, favorable, rosy (美好 的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding
3. bad的替换词: dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的) 如果 bad 做表语，可以有 be less impressive 代替
21. have的替换词: enjoy, possess
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24个经典替换词
22. communication的替换词: interaction
23. be against, disagree with sth 的替换词： frown on sth
24. for example 的替换词： to name only a few, as an example
➢ 如果再提升一步，我们还学过一个常用的词组“play an important role in---”。
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句型多样
➢ 简单句，并列句和复合句交替使用，灵活使用各种句 子结构如：插入语，倒装句，强调句，非谓语动词， 疑问句等。
➢ 若要写好作文，要写好句子，首先要掌握句子结构和 句式变化及句子类型，可通过对泛读课文经典句子的 背诵提高应用语言基本句型的能力。
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24个经典替换词
4. many的替换词: an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of , many… if not most.
Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….
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3. bad的替换词: dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的) 如果 bad 做表语，可以有 be less impressive 代替
21. have的替换词: enjoy, possess
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24个经典替换词
22. communication的替换词: interaction
23. be against, disagree with sth 的替换词： frown on sth
24. for example 的替换词： to name only a few, as an example
➢ 如果再提升一步，我们还学过一个常用的词组“play an important role in---”。
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句型多样
➢ 简单句，并列句和复合句交替使用，灵活使用各种句 子结构如：插入语，倒装句，强调句，非谓语动词， 疑问句等。
➢ 若要写好作文，要写好句子，首先要掌握句子结构和 句式变化及句子类型，可通过对泛读课文经典句子的 背诵提高应用语言基本句型的能力。
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24个经典替换词
4. many的替换词: an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of , many… if not most.
Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….
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大学英语作文写作技巧ppt课件
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• Model Presently, one phenomenon calls for people’ s attention that ____. In general, ______. For one thing, _____. (For example, _____.) For another, _____. As far as I am concerned, _____. To sum up, _____.
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Writing task
• Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below：
Recreational activities
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• P3 As college students, we should strike a balance between work and rest. Recreation is of great importance to our life, but study is our primary task. If we want to play, we need to know clearly which activities are good and which are bad. At the same time, we should exercise self-control so that we won't get addicted to some bad activities.
• Model Presently, one phenomenon calls for people’ s attention that ____. In general, ______. For one thing, _____. (For example, _____.) For another, _____. As far as I am concerned, _____. To sum up, _____.
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Writing task
• Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below：
Recreational activities
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• P3 As college students, we should strike a balance between work and rest. Recreation is of great importance to our life, but study is our primary task. If we want to play, we need to know clearly which activities are good and which are bad. At the same time, we should exercise self-control so that we won't get addicted to some bad activities.
大学英语写作课件1 chapter 1
1. Some Requirements on This Course
• 1) Attend every writing lesson; • 2) Devote your efforts to meeting the requirements of this course; • 3) Be active in class (Volunteers are always welcome & will be given more); • 4) Finish assignments in time; • 5) Prepare two exercise books, one for in-class exercises; the other for afterclass exercises;
具体的学习内容
第一章 文稿格式和标点符号 (Manuscript Form and Punctuation) 第二章 用词(Using Proper Words) 第三章 造句 (Making Correct and Effective Sentences) 第四章 段落(Developing Paragraphs) 第五章 摘要(Summarizing) 第六章 完整的作文(Composing Essays) 第七章 应用文(Writing for Practical Purposes) 第八章 学术论文写作(Preparing Research Papers)
• 5) Your teacher will not correct your compositions word by word, but judge them as a whole.
• 6) You can know how to write good articles not through your teacher‟s correcting the grammar mistakes in your exercises, but through your daily practice. • 7) Writing cannot be simplified to a set of rules or guideline, and people can never learn to write once and for all, because works change according to the people, purposes, and places involved.
大学英语写作教程第九单元》ppt课件讲义
The simple sentence is useful in expressing haste, excitement, exactness or simplicity of idea.
Compound sentence
▪ You leave at once. ▪ I shall call the police. ▪ Either you leave at once, or I shall call the police.
artist. The book (that I mean) has a red cover. You may have it (after I have read it).
The complex sentence ties together related ideas of unequal importance. The less
Different types of sentences
▪ Simple sentence ▪ Compound sentence ▪ Complex sentence
Simple sentence
▪ Lights flashed. Doors banged. Buzzers sounded madly. People rushed past, eyes straight. I stood there, amazed and frightened.
▪ Down the street came the marchers.
subject after verb
2. Vary sentence beginnings.
1) Begin a sentence with there when it seems natural to do so. e.g. There is nothing more to be said.
Compound sentence
▪ You leave at once. ▪ I shall call the police. ▪ Either you leave at once, or I shall call the police.
artist. The book (that I mean) has a red cover. You may have it (after I have read it).
The complex sentence ties together related ideas of unequal importance. The less
Different types of sentences
▪ Simple sentence ▪ Compound sentence ▪ Complex sentence
Simple sentence
▪ Lights flashed. Doors banged. Buzzers sounded madly. People rushed past, eyes straight. I stood there, amazed and frightened.
▪ Down the street came the marchers.
subject after verb
2. Vary sentence beginnings.
1) Begin a sentence with there when it seems natural to do so. e.g. There is nothing more to be said.
大学英语四级写作完整ppt课件
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如何结尾？——你的看法和打算
• 我的看法和打算 (结论)
基本结构： Your thought + The meaning of your choice 例：我认为应该举办英语口试 + 这么做的意义何在
In my opinion, a test of spoken English will do more good than harm. Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society. Whether I take the test or not, I shall spare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study.
• 11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 • 14分——切题。表达思想清楚，内容丰富，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本
上无语言错误。
• 另外，字数不足，也酌情扣分，如累计字数为110－119扣1分，100－ 109扣2分，90—99扣3分，70－79扣5分，50－59扣7分，少于49扣9分。 累计字数不包括题目中给出的主题句、起始句和结尾句中的字数。
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具体评分标准如下：
• 0分 —— 白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而思想无法 表达。
• 2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误， 且多为严重错误。
现代大学英语基础写作课件
of view
Observer
objective
Narration
The third person point of view
the objective/dramatic —只叙述故事, 不描写心理
the limited omniscient(=all knowing)/limited —仅描写其中一 个角色心理
• 2.subordination • (从属)
Subordinating conjunctions
After,although,as,b ecause,before,if,si nce,though,unless, until,when,where,w hile
Relative pronouns
Differences between summarizing
essay The main ideas
story The main action
In logical order (逻辑顺序)
In chronological order (事情发展顺序)
Summary--Use narration to describe a person
• Summary • Paragraph • Narration • Description
Content
Summary Writing
• 1.What a short piece of writing----the main facts or ideas of a story or article
• 2.How • it is complete (beginning-middle-end) • only important details • as little conversation as possible • link words and expressions
Observer
objective
Narration
The third person point of view
the objective/dramatic —只叙述故事, 不描写心理
the limited omniscient(=all knowing)/limited —仅描写其中一 个角色心理
• 2.subordination • (从属)
Subordinating conjunctions
After,although,as,b ecause,before,if,si nce,though,unless, until,when,where,w hile
Relative pronouns
Differences between summarizing
essay The main ideas
story The main action
In logical order (逻辑顺序)
In chronological order (事情发展顺序)
Summary--Use narration to describe a person
• Summary • Paragraph • Narration • Description
Content
Summary Writing
• 1.What a short piece of writing----the main facts or ideas of a story or article
• 2.How • it is complete (beginning-middle-end) • only important details • as little conversation as possible • link words and expressions
英语专业写作课件ppt
Variety in presence length and structure
Use short, medium, and long senses to create interest and momentum in your writing
Introduction, body, and conclusion
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Plot
Setting : Describe the setting vividly, painting a mental picture for the reader
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Poetry writing
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Meter : Use rhyme, rhyme, and meter effectively
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Advanced English Writing
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Results
Presents the findings and analysis
Conclusion
Wraps up the paper, summarizing the main points and implications
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Fundamentals of English Writing
Correct usage of articles
Distinguish between "a," "an," and "the" and use them appropriately in your writing
+Reorganize attention: Ensure attention flow logically and are not jumbled or out of order
大学四级英语写作解析PPT课件
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四级作文2分样卷
I saw the Traffic Accident in Tianjin Road. The Traffic Accident has been at the morning, May 1 Two children by bike went to school. A car is so fast, the streel. And the car touched two children by bike, and the Traffic Accident has happened. One is touched so far way and the other is put down. Mary people come here, and they sent to two children who go to Hospiton.
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四级作文8分样卷
I think the accident mostly attributed to such
reasons: Firstly and the foremost, it was the
carelessness of both of the drivers that mostly
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四级作文题目
• Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eye-witn ess account of a traffic accident. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
四级作文2分样卷
I saw the Traffic Accident in Tianjin Road. The Traffic Accident has been at the morning, May 1 Two children by bike went to school. A car is so fast, the streel. And the car touched two children by bike, and the Traffic Accident has happened. One is touched so far way and the other is put down. Mary people come here, and they sent to two children who go to Hospiton.
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四级作文8分样卷
I think the accident mostly attributed to such
reasons: Firstly and the foremost, it was the
carelessness of both of the drivers that mostly
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四级作文题目
• Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eye-witn ess account of a traffic accident. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
大学英语四六级写作PPT优秀课件
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小强版
Should we expect a reward when doing a good deed? Different people have different answers.
Some say that there should be a reward for a good deed. They think that if there is no reward, it will be difficult for people to do good deeds. For example, in order to help people in need, they often have to give some money to these people, and they will live a poor life themselves.
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作文存在的障碍和问题
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a. 翻译式作文。 例:
The Study of English
There are various kinds of books. History books tell people about the history of human society. Scientific and technological books make people understand the unknown world and make the society progress. Books about art and literature help us enjoy nature and people.
得 到 get — obtain/acquire/ achieve/ gain/win/earn 有 趣 interesting — fascinating/attractive/entertaining/
Only
小强版
Should we expect a reward when doing a good deed? Different people have different answers.
Some say that there should be a reward for a good deed. They think that if there is no reward, it will be difficult for people to do good deeds. For example, in order to help people in need, they often have to give some money to these people, and they will live a poor life themselves.
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作文存在的障碍和问题
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a. 翻译式作文。 例:
The Study of English
There are various kinds of books. History books tell people about the history of human society. Scientific and technological books make people understand the unknown world and make the society progress. Books about art and literature help us enjoy nature and people.
得 到 get — obtain/acquire/ achieve/ gain/win/earn 有 趣 interesting — fascinating/attractive/entertaining/
大学英语四级写作专题讲解ppt课件
Cultivate students' critical thinking
require them to be able to analyze problems, propose viewpoints, and provide arguments.
Adapt to the needs of international communication
Writing is one of the four basic skills in English learning: listening, speaking, reading, and writing are complementary and indispensable.
Writing is an important criterion for measuring English proficiency: it can reflect students' English proficiency and is also an important component of various English exams.
strategies
Advanced vocabulary selection and replacement
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Use emotionally charged vocabulary such as "significant" instead of "important" and "financing" instead of "interesting" to enhance the infectiousness of the article.
require them to be able to analyze problems, propose viewpoints, and provide arguments.
Adapt to the needs of international communication
Writing is one of the four basic skills in English learning: listening, speaking, reading, and writing are complementary and indispensable.
Writing is an important criterion for measuring English proficiency: it can reflect students' English proficiency and is also an important component of various English exams.
strategies
Advanced vocabulary selection and replacement
01
Use emotionally charged vocabulary such as "significant" instead of "important" and "financing" instead of "interesting" to enhance the infectiousness of the article.
大学英语写作讲解PPT课件
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At lunch time，I left my purse on a bus and lost all the money that as in it. After lunch， my boss was angry because I hadn’t gone to the meeting. Then I didn’t notice a sign on a door that said “wet Paint” and so I spoilt my jacket too. When I got home I couldn’t get into my flat because I had left my key in my office. So I broke a window to get in and cut my hand.
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根据本段主题句中关键词组everything I did went wrong，作者列举了8点内容，分别由first，then， during the coffee break，after lunch time等连 接词语引出，使得该文条理清楚、脉络分明、内 容连贯。
常用于列举法过渡连接词有：for one thing ，for another，finally，besides，moreover，one another ，still another，first，second，also等。
大学英语写作
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段落的写作 主题句与推展句 1． 主题句 主题句（topic sentence）是表达段
落主题的句子。它用以概括段落大意， 要求全段其他文字都围绕它展开。请 看下例：
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Байду номын сангаас
My mother has passed along to me
At lunch time，I left my purse on a bus and lost all the money that as in it. After lunch， my boss was angry because I hadn’t gone to the meeting. Then I didn’t notice a sign on a door that said “wet Paint” and so I spoilt my jacket too. When I got home I couldn’t get into my flat because I had left my key in my office. So I broke a window to get in and cut my hand.
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根据本段主题句中关键词组everything I did went wrong，作者列举了8点内容，分别由first，then， during the coffee break，after lunch time等连 接词语引出，使得该文条理清楚、脉络分明、内 容连贯。
常用于列举法过渡连接词有：for one thing ，for another，finally，besides，moreover，one another ，still another，first，second，also等。
大学英语写作
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段落的写作 主题句与推展句 1． 主题句 主题句（topic sentence）是表达段
落主题的句子。它用以概括段落大意， 要求全段其他文字都围绕它展开。请 看下例：
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Байду номын сангаас
My mother has passed along to me
大学英语四级作文精品PPT课件
教育与娱乐
recreation, relax, entertainment; cultivate, foster, enlighten, give inspiration to ,motivate, expand one’s horizon
促进学生身心展
promote the student’s physical, intellectual and emotional development (well-rounded/ versatile) mould one’s character;team spirit —2009.06(博物馆免费开放的目的）-2008.06（娱 乐使人们受益）/2007.12(学生选课不同原因 )/2007.06( 参加社团的好处)/2006.12( 看春晚)
社会热点话题
社会热点话题与普通百姓社会生活紧密相关的 话题，如：环境话题、交通话题、休闲娱乐、疾病 与健康等话题。
Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags (2008. 12) Spring Festival Gala on CCTV (2006. 12) How Should Parents Help Children to be Independent? （2010） An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident（2003, 6） It Pays to Be Honest （2003, 1） Don’t Hesitate to Say “No”（1999, 1） Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck？ （1998, 6）
最新CET-4专题讲解：
四级写作题材－常考话题
大学英语专业英语写作课件(英文版)
• The topic sentence with a definite controlling idea is the first requisite for ultimate paragraph unity. For the sake of unity, keep in mind the controlling idea, raise a general question about and answer it with the supporting details.
This paragraph begins with the topic sentence “students have different ideas about the best atmosphere for studying”. The controlling idea is “different ideas”. The general question about the controlling idea: -- How different? The specific topic-related questions: 1. What kind of ideas do some students have? 2. How about others? 3. What conclusion can be drawn about the controlling idea?
1. TOPIC: regular exercise LIST: 1. To strengthen the heart muscle 2. To improve blood circulation 3. To increase the intake of oxygen TOPIC SENTENCE: Doing regular
This paragraph begins with the topic sentence “students have different ideas about the best atmosphere for studying”. The controlling idea is “different ideas”. The general question about the controlling idea: -- How different? The specific topic-related questions: 1. What kind of ideas do some students have? 2. How about others? 3. What conclusion can be drawn about the controlling idea?
1. TOPIC: regular exercise LIST: 1. To strengthen the heart muscle 2. To improve blood circulation 3. To increase the intake of oxygen TOPIC SENTENCE: Doing regular
大学英语专业英语写作PPT课件
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Instructions
Write a composition of about 200 words. You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate
For the first, our contrair has to develop. So it calls us to use more money to let the nation develop. And then, that may make our life more comfortable. For example, I heard a story. There are two man. A use tomorrow’s money to buy a new house—as he has to pay money to the bank every months—while B start keeping money.Twenty years later, B finally keeping enough money to buy a new house, but A has been lived in it for twenty years and pay enough money to the bank.
If some thing happen one day, you must use some money to solve the problem, but nobody can lend to you the money. Your saving money can help solve the problem. Nowdays, some students use their parents’ money to buy a lot of unnessary things. Such as, Some students change their mobil phone every month. It’s not a good habit. Although their parents have a lot of money, they can’t use money in that way. It’s waste of money.
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tiresome mate. Don't argue with strangers;
they will think you are not friendly. My
mother's rules, in fact, can be summed up in
two words: Don't argue.
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推展句 主要推展句(major supporting statement) 的主要特点是：围绕段落主题句展 开的每一个推展句本身都不要求作进一步的说 明或证明，句与句之间的关系是相互独立又是 互相连接的。
例如：
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(主题句) There are several factors affecting climate. (推展句1)One factor is the mount of sunlight received. (推展句2)Altitude, or the height above sea level, also determines climate. (推展句3)The oceans have an effect on the climate of adjacent land. (推展句4)In addition, climate is influenced by the general circulation of the atmosphere.
meeting with my bossຫໍສະໝຸດ During the coffee
break，I dropped my coffee cup and spoilt
my new skirt.
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At lunch time，I left my purse on a bus and lost all the money that as in it. After lunch， my boss was angry because I hadn’t gone to the meeting. Then I didn’t notice a sign on a door that said “wet Paint” and so I spoilt my jacket too. When I got home I couldn’t get into my flat because I had left my key in my office. So I broke a window to get in and cut my hand.
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1． 主题句 1．1 主题句的位置 主题句通常放在段落的开端，其
特点是开门见山地摆出问题，然后加 以详细说明。
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例1 Our life today depends very much on energy. In towns and in villages, on farms and in factories, machines have made life easier than it used to be. The machines use energy, and energy is needed for heating, lighting, communications, carrying goods --everything. Factories and industrial plants use a great deal of energy to make the things that we use and buy and sell.
Don't argue with parents; they will think you
don't love them. Don't argue with children;
they will think themselves victimized. Don't
argue with spouses; they will think you are a
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（次要推展句2）Sweaty-palm，because I’m always nervous before I enter the classroom， sure that I will be found out for the fool that I am.（次要推展句3）Sinking-stomach， because I leave the classroom an hour later convinced that I was even more boring than usual.
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段落发展的几种手段
1． 列举法(details) 作者运用列举法，是通过列 举一系列的论据对topic sentence中摆出的论点 进行广泛、全面地陈述或解释，列举的顺序可以 按照所列各点内容的相对重要性、时间、空间等 进行。
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Yesterday as one of those awful days for
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次要推展句
次要推展句（minor supporting statement） 是指对主要推展句作进一步事实分析和举例说明。 它从属于某一个或某几个推展句。
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（主题句）I don’t teach because teaching is not easy for me.（主要推展句1）Teaching is the most difficult of the various ways I have attempted to earn my living： mechanic， carpenter，writer.（主要推展句2）For me， teaching is a red-eye，sweaty-palm， sinking-stomach profession.（次要推展句1） Red-eye，because I never feel ready to teach no matter how late I stay up preparing.
me when everything I did went wrong. First，
I didn’t hear my alarm clock and arrived late
for work. Then，I didn’t read my diary
properly and forgot to get to an important
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段落的写作 主题句与推展句
1． 主题句
主题句（topic sentence）是表达段 落主题的句子。它用以概括段落大意， 要求全段其他文字都围绕它展开。请 看下例：
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My mother has passed along to me
certain rules for getting along with others.