高考英语写作指导地点描写2

7.other expressions: 名胜古迹、
places of interest/ historical spots
特色鲜明的地方文化 distinct local culture
基础写作---情景说明
西山镇依山傍水。过去，这里的人们生活极其平困。 解放后人们的生活在个个方面都发生了很大的变化。
•style （文章题材） practical writing应用文 •the important points (list them out or underline them to make sure you won’t leave out one)（要 点要全）
List the important points out : 过去，这里的人们生活极其平困。 In the past, people there lived a hard life. 解放后人们的生活发生了很大的变化。
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Basic
Writing
How to describe a place
Suppose you are a guide
to describe a place to
tourists, what subjects
(主题）will you intruduce ?
Possible subjects： living economy
with a long history
5.Transportation:坐汽车、火车、飞机到… take a bus, a train or a plane to… go to …by bus/train/plane
水陆交通便利
with/has convenient transportation both on land and water 6.Comparison between
Since liberation great changes have taken place
in people’s life 西山镇的人口约10万；
Xishan town has a population of about 100,000
The population of Xishan town is about…
坐落于……脚下/顶部 …stands at the foot of/ on the top of…
面临一条大河
…faces a big river/ in front of …flows a big river
2.Population:有…人口 …has a population of…, with a population of… 3.Area:占地…平方公里
the past and the present：发生了很大变化 great changes have taken place…
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新建了许多…
…have been built/set up
经济迅速发展
…economy has been developing rapidly 多次进入全国经济十强城市 …has been listed among the top ten strongest cities in economy several times
面积约126平方公里
• It covers/has an area of about126 square kilometers. • The size of it is about 126 square kilometers.
坐落在粤北一山脚下，面临一条大河，
• Xishan town is at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong Province and faces a big river. • Xishan town is located /stands at the • foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river.
5.After work people go shoping, see films, go dancing and have sports .
One possible version :
1.Xishan town is a small town, which is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river. It has a population of about 100,000 and covers an area of about 126 square kilometers. Before liberation, people there lived a hard life but great changes have taken place since liberation and now many factories, shops, hospitals and schools have been built.
* 语法，句法高分tips
1.使用定语从句或同位语优化句子表达
南极洲世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆盖
Antarctica, which is covered with cold thick ice and deep snow all（the) year round, is the coldest continent in the world. Antarctica, the coldest continent in the world, is covered with cold thick ice and deep snow all year round.
conditions
location
education
history
population
culture
area
Revision：Some key words and expressions about different subjects 1.Location:位于……，
be located in…/lie in…/be situated in…
1. Read the directions and get the following information: Great Changes in Xishan Town •title if necessary(标题）
•tense and voice （时态和语态） the present tense, the past tense, the present perfect tense (一般现在、一般过去、现在完成时） •person （人称） the third person 第三人称
has/covers an area of…square kilometres
with an area of…square kilometres 海岸线总长……公里 Its coastline has a total length of …kilometers.
4.History: 历史悠久 …has a long history
The school education has also improved, for example , before liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy families, but now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school. After work people go shoping, see films, go dancing and have sports .
for children from wealthy families.
现在有10所学校，每个孩子都可以上学；
Now there are 10 schools and every child can
go to school.
人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、参 加体育活动等
After work people go shoping, see films, go
人口 约10万 面积 约126平方公里 地理概括 坐落在粤北一山脚下，面临一条 大河，新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校 解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以 教育状况 上学，现在有10所学校，每个孩子都可以 上学； 生活状况 人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳 舞、参加体育活动等
写作要求： 1.短文标题自拟 2必须使用５个句子介绍全部所给的内容； 3将５个句子组织成连贯的短文
新建有许多工厂商店、医院学校
• Many factories, shops, hospitals and schools have been built/ set up.
解放前只有一所学校且只有富家子弟可以上学。
Before liberation there was only one school
多种表达法灵活表达
2.Xishan town has a population of about and 100,000 _______ covers an area of about 126 square kilometers. covering Xishan town, _________ an area of about 126 square kilometers, has a population of… .
4.Before liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy but now there are 10 schools families______ and every child can go to school.
dancing and have sports.
Organize the messages in 5 sentences adding some conjunctions or change the sentence structure where necessary.
which is • 1.Xishan town is a small town,______ located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river.
Xishan town covers an area of about 126 with a population of square kilometers______________________ 100,000 .
3.Before liberation, people there lived a hard but life _______ since liberation great changes and now many factories, have taken place___________ shops, hospitals and schools have been built.
1.How to analyze the directions (审题)?
Read the directions for the following information: •title if necessary(标题） •tense and voice （时态和语态） •person （人称） •style （文章题材） •the important points (list them out or underline them to make sure you won’t leave out one)（要 点要全）