英语漫画作文(共4页)

二．漫画类先描述图画再发表自己看法

范文：简要描述图片，并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。

（一）内容要点：

1．描述文字说明：

1）学生被迫上很多补习班

2）无兴趣可言

2．议论文字说明：

1）太多的补习班是浪费时间

2）学习要有兴趣

3）家长不要强迫孩子参加补习

4）表达希望

（二）One possible version:

Look at this picture. You will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to go to so many training classes besides his school classes. Life is no fun at all for him. Holidays and weekends have become dull work-days. He is too tired to learn these lessons well with no interest.

In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. They might do better when they show interest in what they are learning. Please don’t force these students to do what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they will do better than we expect!

（三）文章结构和套语：

Look at this picture. You will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to… besides his school classes. Life is …. … have become …. He is …

In my opinion, … for many students. They might …when they … what they are learning. Please don’t …what they…, and when learning is fun, surely …

1）. 开头：

Look at this picture.

The picture shows that…

From this picture, we can see…

2）．衔接句：

1. As we all know, …

2. As is well-known, …

3. It is well known that…

4. In my opinion, …

5. As far as I am concerned, …

6. This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.

3）．衔接词

1．表示时间顺序：first/ firstly, then, next, after, after that, during, throughout, before, later, while, meanwhile, at present, by now, finally, in the end, at last, at that time, in the past, immediately等。

2．表示递进关系：and, also, furthermore, moreover, besides, in addition, above all, what’s more, what’s better, in the same way等。

3．表示方位：near (to), far (from), in (the) front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside等。

4．表示因果关系：as, since, for, so, because, thus, accordingly, consequently, as a result, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to, therefore等。

5．表示目的：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to/ that, for the sake of等。

6．表示列举和顺序关系：first, second, third, next, then, finally, lastly, after that, first of all, to begin with, for one thing......, for another......等。

7．表示解释和说明：for example, for instance, that is, namely, that is to say, such as, in other words, and so on等。

8．表示转折和对比关系：but, yet, sill, anyway, while, however, (al)though, on the contrary, only, on the other hand, for all that, in contrast, similarly, at the same time, just like, just as等。

9．表示概括和总结：altogether, therefore, in conclusion, in brief, on the whole, in short, in a word, generally speaking, generally, as has been stated等。

练习1．

根据图画内容，以“We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter”题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。短文须包括以下要点，不得逐条翻译。

1.简单描述漫画的内容；

2.作业负担过重；

3.精讲精练；

4.参加体育锻炼和社会活动。

We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter

The picture shows that a girl is wearing a pair of glasses and

carrying a big heavy schoolbag, and a woman is doing some exercise.

The girl says to the woman, “If you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure

you will lose some weight.”

As is well-known, we Chinese students are overburdened with lessons and homework which our teachers have given us. All that we do every day is to listen to our teachers’lessons, to take notes and do our homework which seems endless.