福州市时代中学书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析

福州市时代中学书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·辽宁中考模拟）（B）根据要求完成大作文,词数:80-100

体育运动是中学生的共同爱好.请根据下面提示写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 的短文,应该包含以下要点:

1,学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同,理由各异.

2.多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己.

3.男孩参加各项体育运动,希望运动能使自己更强壮.

4.女孩也喜欢运动，希望运动使自己减肥和保持健康,苗条.

5.你对运动的观点.

6.注意:文中不得出现自己的名字和学校的名字

7.短文开头已给出,不计入词数.

8.参考词语:keep slim （保持苗条）

What We Get from Sports

Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in

sports._________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________

【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.

Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.

In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.

【解析】

【详解】

本篇写作主要是谈论自己对运动的观点和看法，应该用一般现在时态，写作要点要包括：1.提出目前学生对运动的不同看法及原因。2.具体分析（多数学生的观点、男生的观点、女生的观点）。3.提出自己对运动的观点。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，在文中使用了时间状语从句，定语从句，特别使用一些亮点词句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。

2．（·安徽中考模拟）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Johnson打算暑假来合肥玩，而合肥

的夏天经常持续高温，请你根据以下提示，用英文给他写一封邮件，告诉他防暑降温的方

● 清淡饮食；● 合理休息；● 适当运动；● ……

注意: 1.词数80-100；2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名和地名；4.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Johnson

Welcome to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat.____________________________________________

I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday!

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jack,

Welcome to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat.

First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What's more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat.

I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday!

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇关于防暑的建议，所以写作时，比较多地用到表示建议的句型，比如You’d better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….? 提出建议时要条理清晰，可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的词。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。写完后记得对文章检查复合，避免单词拼写及语法错误。本篇文章首先第一段对别人的到来表示欢迎，接着对合肥的天气进行总的描述，并引出下文自己的建议。第二段也是文章的主体部分。用first of all, Next, What's more, Finally,提出了四点建议，其中用到建议的句型，例如you should，you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to….., Why not…., please…...等。结构清晰，层次分明，词语及句型使用正确，很不错的一篇文章。

3．（·东莞市虎门智升学校中考模拟）书面表达

如今的交通已经成了许多城市的主要困扰。假如你是一名工程师，请你设计一种交通工具，既可以解决部分交通运行的问题，又有助于环保。