高考英语作文公开课-推荐

((2010·湖北高考)结合生活中的一个事例，用 英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。 内容包括： (1)你是如何看待微笑的作用的； (2)谈谈你所经历的让你最感动或给你印象最 深刻的一次微笑； (3)你对微笑的感悟。
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
No one could tell how delighted I was at that time. From the experience, I learned that on the one hand, I should be careful enough in future, and on the other hand, we should be ready to help each other and care for each other.
英语书面表达
English Composition Writing
淮阳中学高三英语组： 胡丹
Teaching goals 1.引导学生认识写作中常出现的错误
并改正。 2.引导学生掌握基本的写作步骤和要领。 3. 鼓励学生通过当堂写作训练，提高 记叙文（夹叙夹议）写作能力和兴趣。
check your classwork
Once I failed in my history exam. I was very sad. Later, I told my grandma this thing and said even though I studied hard, I couldn't achieve high grades . I didn't know what I could do. I couldn’t have passed the exam but for her encouragement. " Don't give up becuase failure is the mother of success." my grandma said .
Discussion-- 找出这篇作文的错误并改正
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encouragement."You don't give up becuase failure is the mother of
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中式中文
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One rainy afternoon, I came to the school library, hoping to kill time. hardly had I noticed it when I returned, only to find the library closed. The next day when I went back to the library, I found they were gone. I was worried. My classmates also helped me . A short while later, a teacher called me and told me a piece of good news.
高级句式：As the saying goes,"A smile can make you ten years younger."
2. 一般句式：
I passed the exam becuase of her smile and
encouragement.
(用虚拟语气）
高级句式：
I couldn’t have passed the exam but for her smile and encouragement.
I know the kind smile can make us feel warm like the sun.
修改前的作文
People often say,"A smile can make you ten years younger." Not only smile can help us forget the unhappy things, but also it help us keep good mood. Once I failed in my history exam. I are very sad. Later, I tell my grandma this thing say I hard-working history every day,but history still not good. I didn't know what I could do. Finally, I passed the exam becuase of her smile and encouragement."You don't give up becuase failure is the mother of success." my grandma said . I know the kindness smile is likes the sun, can warmed our heart.
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记叙文 物品失而复得的经过和感想
一般过去时为主 第一人称
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writing (1)我仍然记得上学期我在学校的那一天 (2)我丢了眼镜。 (3)一个下雨的下午，我来到学校图书馆，希望去消磨时 间。
(4) 我一意识到(丢眼镜)就返书馆时发现眼镜不见了。 (6)我感到烦恼。 (7)我的同班同学也帮忙了. (8)一会儿之后，一位老师打电话告诉了我一个好消息。 (9)没有人会知道那时我多么高兴。 ( 1 0 )我体会到，一方面，今后我应该更加细心，另一方面
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Conclusion
书面表达有方法 三段结构把架搭 十句中文心中划 主谓时态要一致 每句短语，句型化 特殊句型锦添花
如何句型锦添花？
看看同学们的作文中哪些句子可以锦添花？
1.一般句式：People often say,"A smile can make you ten years younger."
Practice
(2012·湖南高考)
生活中，你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失
而又找回的经历，其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感
慨……请就此写一篇英语短文。
主要内容包括：1)丢失的物品；
2)物品失而复得的经过；
3)你的感想。
注意：1. 词数不少于120个；
2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
【审题——抓准信息·快速推断】
小试牛刀 1.When they got to the station, they met the young man.
hardly...when... 一。。。就。。 Hardly had they got to the station
when they met the young man.
2. He is a very good boy.(改为感叹句)
1（1）统一东方六国。公元前230年 —公元 前221 年，秦 国采取 远交近 攻、分 化瓦解 ，相继 灭掉东 方六国 。
（2）征服南方越族地区，加强对滇、 黔一带 西南夷 的控制 。 （3）北击匈奴，修筑长城 4、知道自己要干什么，夜深人静， 问问自 己，将 来的打 算，并 朝着那 个方向 去实现 。而不 是无所 事事和 做一些 无谓的 事。 5、修改自己就是修改世界，天生我 材必有 用，自 己是整 个宇宙 中很重 要的一 个程序 ，要相 信自己 的潜力 。 6、建立起幅员辽阔的统一的国家； 7、建立起封建的专制主义中央集权国 家，是 历史发 展的必 然，也 是客观 需要； 8、促进了各民族的交往和交融，推动 了统一 多民族 国家政 治、经 济、社 会的发 展. 9、有利于中央对地方的垂直管理，加 强了中 央集权 ；
Conclusion
书面表达有方法 三段结构把架搭 十句中文心中划 主谓时态要一致 每句短语，句型化 特殊句型锦添花
homework
(2012·南京模拟) 一年一度的寒假即将来临，《中学 生英语》杂志准备出版专刊“快乐寒假”。请你为此 写一篇英文稿件。你的叙述须包括下列要点： 1．往年寒假难忘的一件事(过程及感想)； 2．今年寒假的打算(至少3点，娱乐、学习等)； 3．你的愿望。