概要写作写作指导

概要写作写作指导篇一：周永鹏概要写作教学设计概要写作教学设计台州一中周永鹏Learning Goals:1. Learn about the main features of an exposition2. Learn how to find the main points in each paragraph3. Learn to use various ways to express the main points4. Learn to use transition to make the summary coherent5. Learn to use checklist to make comment on a summary6. Learn about the importance of safe drivingTeaching Procedure:Step 1 Lead-inT: First, I want to show you somepictures. What do you think of these traffic accidents?S: Traffic accidents are dangerous.T: Yes, they are not only dangerous but also very common. According to a survey, most causes of traffic accidents are related with drivers. Can you list some reasons?S: Speeding; Tired driving; Drunk driving; Careless driving; Using cell phones while drivingStep2 Determine the text type and main aspect of each paragraphT: Today we will focus on a passage on a social phenomenon, which is using cell phones while driving. Do you think what aspects will be mentioned in the passage?S: cause; effect; solution; opinion and so on.Cause: Not mentionedNegative effect: Para2Solution: Para3/4Opinion: Para1/5T: What is the style of the passage?S: A. Narration B. Exposition C. ArgumentationStep3 Display the basic requirement of a summaryA Summary Writing on Using cell phones while driving should be:1. CompleteIt includes all the main & supporting points using your own words.2. ConciseIt omits unnecessary details like examples, explanations and other unimportant information;3. CoherentIt is a paragraph with necessary transitions to make it flow.4. CorrectIt should be written in a grammatically correct way5. ObjectiveIt doesn’t contain your own ideas or emotions on the topic.Step4 Find the main points and make the outline[Para 1&5: author’s opinion]Para1 Cell phones are used everywhere, but John Andretti says, “Driving safely is your first responsibility.”[Para 2: negative effect]Para2 The New England Journal of Medicine reported that “” The major problem is that the driver is not focused on the road, but on his or her conversation. Cell phone drivers are very unpredictable: they drive too fast or too slow, make improper turns, run red lights, and even stop at green ones. It’s not only annoying; it’s dangerous. Accidents related to cell phones include rear-ending other vehicles, running off a road and crashing into trees,fences, and buildings, and even turning over.[Para 3&4: solution]Para3 In October at the California Traffic Safety Summit, experts showed that “cell phones used by drivers lead to at least 1,000 deaths per year in Califo rnia.” These are the same problems that occur with drunk driving, which is against the law and strictly enforced a dangerous distraction to:1. distract the drivers’ attention2. cause/contribute to/bring about harmful distraction to3. drivers tend to be distractedusing cell phones while driving should be forbidden:1. phones shouldn’t be allowed on the road2. put a ban on using phones on the road3. should be prevented from usingphonesCell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.1. Using cell phones while driving can distract the drivers’ attention and should be banned.2. Cell phones shouldn’t be allowed on the road because they cause harmful distraction to drivers.3. Drivers should be prevented from using cellphones while driving because they tend to be distracted.Step6 Have a try to write a summaryStep7 Learn to use transition to make the summary coherentUsing cell phones while driving can distract the drivers’ attention and should be banned. Drivers have a higher rate of accidents due to a lack of concentration on the road. 1__________________, we need law to limit the cell phones use.2_____________, they should use cell phones in a more responsible way. 3____________, cell phones are important and should be used wisely. We had better not use them while driving.Transition：1.后果与措施之间：1) therefore; so（连词）2) to solve the problem; to handle this case; to deal with itto reduce accidents/death; because the accidents happen frequently; because of the large number of accidents; because of the bad effect（问题出发）3) to make driving safe; to ensure driving safety（安全目的）2.措施与措施之间:1. as for drivers;2. before laws are carried out/come out/passed/introduced/put into effect3.正文与结尾之间: in conclusion; all in all; to sum up; in a wordStep 8 Learn to use checklist to makecomment on a summary典型错误分析Cell phones are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden. The rate of the accidents increases because the drivers pay little attention on the road while use phones. It leads to various accidents include running off a road and crashing intotrees, fences, and buildings. California will use law to limit the use of phones in cars because it causes more than 1, 000 deaths per year. Drivers should take the responsible to use phones safely and wisely. After all, we only have one life at all.篇二：周永鹏概要写作教学材料概要写作教学材料台州一中周永鹏Cell phones are used everywhere, but on the road they are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should beforbidden.The New England Journal of Medicine reported that “drivers using a cell phone were four times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone.” The major problem is that the driver is not focused on the road, but on his or her conversation. Cell phone drivers are very unpredictable: they drive too fast or too slow, make improper turns, run red lights, and even stop at green ones. It’s not only annoying; it’s dangerous. Accidents related to cell phones include rear-ending other vehicles, running off a road and crashing into trees, fences, and buildings, and even turning over.In October at the California Traffic Safety Summit, experts showed that “cell phones used by drivers lead to at least 1,000 deaths per year in California.” These are the same problems that occur with drunk driving, which is against the law andstrictly enforced. For the same reasons, California needs law that restrict the use of cell phones in cars.Until we take action to pass new laws, drivers at least need to be more responsible when using cell phones. The American Automobile Association recommends that drivers pull off the road before using a cell phone, have a passenger use it for them, or use voice mail to answer calls. Another suggestion is to keep the phone off while moving or simply not to use it in the car. Before using a cell phone, drivers should ask themselves, “Is this call really that important?”Cell phones can be a very important link in emergencies, but drivers need to use them wisely. As professional NASCAR racer John Andretti says, “Driving safely is your first responsibilit y.” The best road to safety is to just hang up and drive.（裁剪线）答题区域__________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ ____________________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ ________________________________________________________ _________________________________（____ words）篇三：高考英语概要写作指导及训练记叙文高考英语概要写作指导及训练一、写作指导摘要是对一篇文章的主题思想的简单陈述。