英语作文 (summary)

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评分标准(assessing criteria)
1. 概括的准确性。
语言简洁明了，能客观、准确、全面地转述 所给文字材料。 2. 语言的规范性。 语言合乎语法，地道自然。（无中国式英语） 3. 内容的合适性。 选材必需切题；内容符合写作要求；论据能 证明论点
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EX: In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. I caught some fish.
1). He likes swimming, running, playing football, basketball and so on.
He likes sports. 2). She bought a few copies of China Daily, English Weekly and People Daily.
Skill2: Omit the examples
Skill3: Use general(概括性) words instead of specific(具体的) words
Skill4: Put the main points of a dialogue in indirect speech (间接引语，第三人称)
She bought some newspapers.
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Skill 3 Paraphrase
Patience is the secret of success.
The secret of success is patience. Patience is very important to success. Patience leads to success. The key to success is patience. Patience is the key to success.
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Identify the style of the passage
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Narration (记叙文)
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Exposition (说明文)
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Argumentation (议论文)
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Skills of writing a summary?
Skill1: Omit (省略) the details
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• When Sam first got to his boarding school with his parents, he was very happy. He thought he would be able to go home every weekend. When he was told he would not, he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy. He was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the term.
• He started crying when it was time for his parents to leave. He was then taken to the dorm, where he saw other children happy. He tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home. He started feeling homesick(想家)and wanted to go home as soon as possible. He got sick soon because he could not eat the school food. He could not concentrate in the classroom. All he could think was being at home with his family. He had no mobile phone or other means to get in touch with his parents. He was angry and felt lonely. He thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.
I met a friend. 2). She bought a lot of vegetables such as cabbage, carrots, cucumbers and tomatoes .
She bought a lot of vegetables.
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Skill 2 Use general (概括性)words instead of specific(具体的) words
Task-writing
How to write a summary
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读写任务评分原则(assessing principles)
1、本试题总分为25分，分两部分给分 ① 短文概 括5分 ② 主题写作 20分。
2、强调内容健康，观点鲜明，说服力强，表述清 晰。可参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原 文中的句子。
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Skill 1 Omit the details , examples
EX: Last Sunday, I went fishing. I went fishing.
1).Yesterday, I met an old friend on the way to the bus station.
3、评分时，选根据文章语言的规范、内容的合适 及篇章的连贯性初步确定其所属档次，然后以该 档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4、语言规范：拼写与标点符号是语言规范的一个 方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考 虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个