浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式-训练13
浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式-训练10
Fake Buttons
假按钮
(概写原文)Whenever we see a button, we desire to press it because we know that something will happen. This is true in most cases, for example on a doorbell and on the "on/off"' button on the TV. But some buttons are actually fake, like the "close" button on an elevator in the US-the doors will not close any faster no matter how hard you press.
It started in the 1990s when the Americans with Disabilities Act was passed in the US, making sure that all elevators stayed open long enough so that people with disabilities could enter. Only US firefighters and repair workers can use the buttons to speed up the door-closing process if they have a code(密码)or special keys.
浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式-训练5
Step 4：通读修改。要考虑句首连接词的使用、高级词汇的替换、 句式的多样、语法是否正确以及字数的多少等
Step 5：用衡水体抄到试卷上，力求清楚美观。
句法训练(中译英)
1. 如今，屋顶花园和绿色墙壁已被世界各地用于城市绿化。 Nowadays, rooftop gardens and green walls have been used worldwide to fill cities with greenery. 2. 一个优点是可以美化城市环境和装饰办公楼。 One advantage is that they can beautify the city environment and decorate office buildings.
4. 此外，它们对学校有教育上的价值，因为孩子们很高兴探索周围的 绿色世界。 Additionally, they are of educational value to schools because kids are excited to explore the green world around them.
3. 另一个优点是它们甚至可以通过为我们提供荫蔽来帮助降低能 源成本。 Another is that they can even help cut energy costs by providing shade for us.
In New York City, public schools plant rooftop gardens that can reduce heating and cooling costs. In addition to saving the school money, teachers and parents love the gardens because of their educational value —it's a fun and healthy way for their kids to investigate the world around them. "For the children, it's exciting when you grow something edible (可食用的)," said Lauren Fontana, principal of a New York public school.
浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式-训练9
Research supports the view that adolescents spend a great deal of time with their peers. Reed Larson and his colleagues examined adolescents' daily activities and found that they spend more time talking to their friends than engaging in any other activity. In a typical week, high school students will spend twice as much time with their peers as with adults. This gradual withdrawal from adults begins in early adolescence. In sixth grade, adults (excluding parents) account for only 25 percent of adolescent social networks. Another important characteristic of adolescent peer culture is its increasingly autonomous (自治的) function. While childhood peer groups are conducted under the close supervision of parents, adolescent peer groups typically make an effort to escape adult supervision and usually succeed in doing so.
浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式
用替换词与短语对例句不断进行替换与转述，具体要求：
1.记住并掌握替换词及短语的词义与用法； 2.理解句意，用替换词对例句进行替换或改写； 3.只看例句中文，再做中译英练习，巩固所学词汇与短语；
4.背诵并默写例句，每次10句左右； 5.在此基础上做相关的摘记，不断补充你想要的替换词。
1. Nowadays, online shopping has become increasingly popular as.... 2. At present, shopping online has grown/gained in popularity .... 3. At present, online shopping has won favor with people... 4. Currently, with the increasing popularity of online shopping, we can purchase cheaper products. 5. Nowadays, online shopping has become a trend as we can buy cheaper products. 6. Nowadays, shopping online is increasingly popular with people in China...
受到...青睐 find/win/gain favor(with sb)
疯狂传播；十分流行 go viral
如今，网购越来越流行，因为我们能买到比较便宜的产品。 Nowadays, shopping online has gained increasing popularity as we can get cheaper products.
浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式-训练4
Take more control of what you are doing. "Setting the phone alarm to go off(响起来) every hour is my way of creating awareness of my behavior," Mr. Bregman says. "You have to inform yourself that you've lost focus in order to do something about it." Starting the day with a to-do list is important, such as when to eat, when to go to the gym or take a walk. But if it's overly ambitious(雄心勃勃的) you will put yourself in a state of anxiety, which makes it hard for the brain to concentrate. "Choosing three or four things as your priority(优先事项) for the day allows your brain to settle down and focus," he says.
4. 此外，适当地管理你的时间，优先考虑你需要做的事情，也会帮助 你保持专注。 In addition, managing your time properly and giving priority to things you need to do will also help you keep focused.
浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式-训练11
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
Finally, take small steps toward conquering your fears. If you fear public speaking, start by giving a small talk to a few people. If your talk doesn't go well, try again. Each small success will increase your confidence and persistence is one of the keys to success.
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
第三步：根据所划内容，结合理解，理清句内逻辑关系，然 后转述或合成句子。
第四步：通读修改。要考虑句首连接词的使用、高级词汇的 替换、句式的多样、语法是否正确以及字数的多少等。
第五步：用自信衡水体抄到试卷上，力求清楚美观。
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
A psychologist once said, "If you've conquered every one of your fears, congratulations-you're dead." This humorous quote points to a simple truth-no one can escape fear completely.
④最后，从小事做起，你也可以起到很大的作用。 Lastly, by doing small things, you can also make a considerable difference.
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懒人经济
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
Nowadays, an increasing number of young Chinese spend money because they are "lazy". According to a report issued in December by China's ecommerce platform Taobao on China's" lazy economy", Chinese people spent 16 billion yuan on products and services online in 2018.The post-1995 generation was the "laziest" as its consumption increased by 82 percent, compared with that in 2017.
圣林英语(Cslenglish)
Young people are willing to spend money on such products because they want to enjoy hard-earned leisure time after a busy and stressful day at work or school, reported Global Times. Because they need to focus on their studies or jobs, these so-called lazy people tend to use their leisure time more efficiently. For example, Wei Duo, a 21-year-old college student, is a frequent user of take-out food delivery services. "I once had a birthday cake delivered to my friend who lives far from my home. It cost me 50 yuan but it saved me almost half a day that would have been needed to deliver it myself. My friend was also happy because she got to eat the cake instantly," Wei told the Global Times.
浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(二十)写作指导(含范文)
浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(二十)写作指导(含范文)2022届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习（二十）写作指导一、概写原文阅读下面短文,按照其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Have you ever intended to be fully absorbed in your work but found yourself distracted（被分心）by e-mail, the Internet and other things throughout the day? "People often lose their concentration when they are bored or when they are engaged in several challenging tasks at the same time." says Peter Bregman. "They sometimes feel the need to escape from what's difficult or boring, so they jump out," he says.The part of the brain devoted to attention is connected to the brain's emotional center. Any strong emotion--quarrels with colleagues, problems at home –can interrupt our attention. Studies over the last decade have shown that too much work to do at a time can easily lead to distraction.Refocusing is hard for many people. Robert Epstein suggests the following, "Stop and listen to music for a few minutes. Go for a short walk or take a deep breath. While you breathe in deeply, count to five slowly, hold it and breathe out very slowly." This can blow out all the tension and the unwanted in your mind to restore your focus.Take more control of what you are doing. "Setting the phone alarm to go off(响起来) every hour is my way of creating awareness of my behavior," Mr. Bregman says. "You have to inform yourself that you'velost focus inorder to do something about it." Starting the day with a to-do list is important, such as when to eat, when to go to the gym or take a walk. But if it's overly ambitious(雄心勃勃的) you will put yourself in a state of anxiety, which makes it hard for the brain to concentrate. "Choosing three or four things as your priority(优先事项) for the day allows your brain to settle down and focus," he says.二、词汇讲解1. intend to do sth 决定…,想要做…It is still far from clear what they intend to do.现在还彻低不清晰他们毕竟想做什么。
高中英语 浙江高考概要写作技巧指导-改写(二)
Though Jack failed to pass theto.
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2. 词性转换法
Patience is very important. Patience is of great importance. The pollution makes people very anxious about their living environment. People show great _a_n_x_ie_t_y_ about their living environment.
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7. 细节省略法
Recordings of angry bees are enough to send big, tough African elephants running away!
Recordings of angry bees can send African elephants running away!
概要写作技巧指导
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What is a summary?
A summary is a shortened passage which keeps the important information of the original in your own words but without your opinion.
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8. 句意理解法
Because he played carelessly we lost the game. _B_u_t__fo_r__h_is__ca_r_e_l_e_ss_n_e_s_s, we wouldn’t have lost the match. Shopping on the internet is becoming increasingly popular. More and more people prefer Internet shopping.
浙江省新高考英语写作学法指导
高考英语写作指导一、应用文写作评分标准总分15分，按5个档次给分。
1.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
（先锁定档次，再具体给分）2.词数少于60词和多余100的，从总分减去2分。
3.评分时，应注意的主要内容：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
4.拼写和标点符号（切忌逗号不能连接两个完整的句子，要么用分号，要么用连词）是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
5.如书写较差，以致影响评阅，将分数降低一个档次。
（注意保证书面整洁，不要有太多乱涂乱画的痕迹。
）档次描述第五档（13-15分）完全覆盖了试题规定的任务；覆盖所有要点；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用复杂语法结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言能力；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档（10-12分）完全完成了试题规定的任务；虽漏掉了1-2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容；应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求；语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，有些许错误主要因尝试使用较复杂语法结构或词汇所致；应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档（7-9分）基本完成了试题规定的任务；虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有内容；应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求；有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解；全文内容连贯，整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
写作步骤（1）仔细审题，明确写作要求。
那审题需要审什么？一审文体要求。
了解题目要求写作的文体是应用文之书信、通知，演讲稿等。
熟悉文体后即可确定全篇的写作格式与写作风格及段落结构之间的逻辑关系等。
二审人称与时态。
浏览题干要求后明确全文写作时态和人称，行文中做到两条主线贯穿始终：上下文人称统一，时态前后照应。
英语概要写作(浙江省高考英语新题型)
3. 词数少于40或多于80的，从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时，应主要从以下4个方面考虑： (1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况； (2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性； (3)上下文的连贯性； (4)对各要点表达的独立性情况。 5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应 视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
概要写作
提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基 于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。阅卷 时将主要考虑以下内容： (1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况； (2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性； (3)上下文的连贯性； (4)对各要点表达的独立性情况。
评分原则
1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次， 然后以该档次的要求来文的不同类型，分别给出几种参考模板： l.描写某事物的性质功用。即“对象＋性质功用＋利好 ” ： ( In the passage ) the writer introduces (对象 )to us , especially its ...(性质或功用)， from which we know...(对象带来的利好) 2.针对某个问题提出解决方法或措施。即“问题十解决方 法”： The passage tells us...(问题)，including...(方法1)，二 ，(方法2 ) and...(方法3)． 3.介绍某现象及其原因和结果。即“现象＋原因＋结果” ： ( The author/writer said/talks about)…(现象)of 二because /but...(原因／本质1)，and.。 二(原因／本质2).
第四档 (16-20)
第三档 (11-15)
第二档 (6-10)
浙江省新高考概要写作
dirt about 200 years ago. People have been told that washing dirt
off our body can keep us healthy. (要点3) However, some
l thought of a longer composition. It reproduces the
• theme of the original with as few words as possible. • II：Tips on summary writing • While reading
???????a?summary?is?a?brief?restatement?of?the?essential?thought?of?a?longer?composition
杭州学军中学高二英新题型 写作练习一：
概要写作
summary
• I：What is a summary? • A summary is a brief restatement of the essentia
People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. (要点1)
For a long time in history, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected people from getting
Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many firsttime parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫 学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining
新高考英语写作精讲+解题演示：概要写作 (解析)
专题10概要写作-新高考英语写作精讲+解题演示距离高考还有一段时间，不少有经验的老师都会提醒考生，愈是临近高考，能否咬紧牙关、学会自我调节，态度是否主动积极，安排是否科学合理，能不能保持良好的心态、以饱满的情绪迎接挑战，其效果往往大不一样。
以下是本人从事10多年教学经验总结出的以下学习资料，希望可以帮助大家提高答题的正确率，希望对你有所帮助，有志者事竟成！养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。
做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。
总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习量。
在这个时候，学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式，最重要的是以平常心去面对考试。
英语最后的复习要树立信心，考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”，遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。
越到最后，考生越要回归基础，单词最好再梳理一遍，这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。
另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺复习方法。
1.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Migrant workers(2022秋·全国高三阶段练)In the past twenty years, there has been an increasing tendency for workers to move from one country to another. While some newly independent countries have restricted most jobs to local people, others have attracted and welcomed migrant workers. This is particularly the case in the Middle East, where increased oil incomes have enabled many countries to call in outsiders to improve local facilities. Thus the Middle East has attracted oil-workers from the USA and Europe. It has brought in construction workers and technicians from many countries, including South Korea and Japan.In view of the difficult living and working conditions in the Middle East, surprising it is not that the pay is high to attract suitable workers. Many engineers and technicians can earn at least twice as much money in the Middle East as they can in their own country, and this is a major attraction. An allied(联合的)benefit is the low taxation or a complete lack of it. This increases the amount of pay received by visiting workers and is very popular with them.Sometimes a disadvantage has a compensating(补偿的)advantage. For example, the difficult living conditions often lead to increased friendship when workers have to depend on each other for safety and comfort. In addition, many migrant workers can save large sum of money partly because of the lack of entertainment facilities. The workis often complex and full of problems but this merely presents greater challenge to engineers who prefer to find solutions to problems rather than do routine work in their home country.One major problem which affects migrant workers in the Middle East is that their jobs are temporary ones. (They are nearly always on contract, so it is not easy for them to plan ahead with great confidence. This is to be expected since no country welcomes a large number of foreign workers as permanent residents.) In any case, migrant workers accept this disadvantage along with others, because of the considerable financial benefits which they receive.________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________【答案】For two decades, migrant workers, including construction workers and technicians from South Korea and Japan, are becoming more common, particularly in the Middle East. Working there, they can earn more due to low taxation or a complete lack of it, and harvest the friendship while working with others. However, a major problem they must overcome is the temporary job.【文本导读】本文是一篇说明文。
浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式
lead to water shortage.
7、..., which... 非限制性定语从句或定语从句 (整合句 子，体现句式多样)
因此，北京发起了一项规范自行车停放的运动，这有望为 其它城市树立榜样。 Therefore, Beijing has launched a campaign to regulate
3、doing/done作名词的后置定语 (整合句子，减少谓语动 词的使用)
英语被称为一Biblioteka 国际性语言在世界上广泛使用。English, ____K_n_o_w__n__ (know) as an international
language, is widely used in the world.
bike-parking, __w__h_ic_h_____ will hopefully set a good
example to other cities.
8、what引导的名词性从句 …的东西、事、物 (整合句子， 体现句式多样)
然而，人们常常忽视的是素食也会影响环境。
However, __W__h_a_t_p_e_o__p_le__te_n_d__t_o_i_g_n_o_r_e__ is that
12、形容词或介词短语作后置定语 (整合句子，减少谓语 动词的使用）
那些具有高情商的人能够积极地面对生活中的失败，这些 失败对每个人来说，都是不可避免的
___T_h_o_s_e_w__it_h__high EQ can face failures positively in life,
最新高考英语概要写作指导及训练记叙文
高考英语概要写作指导及训练一、写作指导摘要是对一篇文章的主题思想的简单陈述。
它用最简洁的语言概括了原文的主题。
写摘要主要包括三个步骤：（1）阅读；（2）写作；（3）修改成文。
第一步：阅读A．认真阅读给定的原文材料。
如果一遍不能理解，就多读两遍。
阅读次数越多，你对原文的理解就越深刻。
B．给摘要起一个标题。
用那些能概括文章主题思想的单词、短语或短句子作为标题。
也可以采用文中的主题句作为标题。
主题句往往出现在文章的开头或结尾。
一个好标题有助于确定文章的中心思想。
C．现在，就该决定原文中哪些部分重要，哪些部分次重要了。
对重要部分的主要观点进行概括。
D．简要地记下主要观点——主题、标题、细节等你认为对概括摘要重要的东西。
第二步：动手写作A. 摘要应尽量用自己的话完成。
不要直接引用原文的句子。
B. 应该遵循原文的逻辑顺序。
这样你就不必重新组织观点、事实。
C. 摘要必须全面、清晰地表明原文所载的信息，以便你的读者不需翻阅原文就可以完全掌握材料的原意。
D. 写摘要时可以采用下列几种小技巧：1) 删除细节。
只保留主要观点。
2) 选择一至两个例子。
原文中可能包括5个或更多的例子，你只需从中筛选一至二个例子。
3) 把长段的描述变成短小、简单的句子。
如果材料中描述某人或某事用了十个句子，那么你只要把它们变成一两句即可。
4) 避免重复。
在原文中，为了强调某个主题，可能会重复论证说明。
但是这在摘要中是不能使用的。
应该删除那些突出强调的重述句。
5) 压缩长的句子。
如下列两例：“His courage in battle might without exaggeration be called lion-like.”可以概括为：”He was very brave in battle.”“He was hard up for money and was being pressed by his creditor.”可以概括为：“He was in financial difficulties.”6) 你还可以使用词组代替整句或者从句。
浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式-训练3
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Step 1：通读理解全文，了解文章结构，理清各段落之间的逻 辑关系，提取全文中心词，尤其是名词与动词。
Advertising plays a major role in the competitive
business world.
Step 2：细读原文，划出各段的主题句与关键词，关键词以动 词与名词为主，涵盖段落全部要点。
1. 广告对许多行业至关重要，其目的是赢得更多的客户。 Advertising is vital to many industries and its purpose is to gain more customers.
Advertising encourages people to buy things they don't want through misleading ideas. Advertising is proven to be a successful tool to stress the features of their product to the public even though it's regarded undesirable such as cigarettes, drugs, alcohols and so on. For example, Dunhill, a cigarette company which sponsors many football teams, seems to be promoting cigarettes to the public. Without the sponsorship(资助), the company will be less known to the public, resulting in fewer sales of cigare理解，理清句内逻辑关系，然后转 述或合成句子。
浙江新高考英语概要写作指导与训练-概要写作逆向训练法概写常用句式-训练12
In fact, being a high schooler nowadays is more stressful than ever. Students are burdened with extra hours of homework. They stay up every night till 1:00 a.m. finishing homework on their third Red Bull. Anxiety is increasing at a faster rate than depression (抑郁) as the leading mentalhealth issue affecting teenagers, a recent study in the Journal of Developmental and Behavioral Pediatrics found.
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For many high school students, giving an in-class presentation is an approach to their growth. Teachers will call up students, one by one, to present their work in front of the class, and, though it is often tense, many people say it has helped turn them into more confident public speakers. Some educators also credit it with building leadership skills and increasing students' confidence and understanding of materials.
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第一步：通读理解全文，了解文章结构，明确各段落之间的逻辑关 系，提取全文中心词(尤其是名词与动词)。
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第二步：细读原文，划出各段的主题句与关键词，关键词以动词与 名词为主，涵盖段落全部要点与次要点。
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These laughter clubs are very popular in hospitals and nursing homes nowadays in India, where participants can forget about their aches and pains while laughing. It seems that laughing may be just as important as eating right and exercising.
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According to a study at the University of Marland Medical Center in Baltimore, researchers found that people who had a good sense of humor and laughed a lot, not only at home but also at work, had fewer heart problems than people who laughed less, and laughing people tend to live a longer life than the ones who are not.
After reading plenty of information about the benefits of laughing and a careful study of previous papers in this area, a doctor in India started a laughter club. Dr. Mandan Damaris's laughter club quickly grew into 1 800 groups throughout India and over 6 000 around the world. The laughter club had even inspired World Laughter Day, which people celebrate on the first Sunday of May every year. Instructors at the clubs get people laughing not only through jokes but through simple laughing exercises. For example, instructors and participants repeat the chant" ho- ho-ho" and "ha-ha-ha" together. What's more, participants also do the "Lion laugh" by sticking out their tongues and waving their hands around their ears. Other exercises focus on breathing and simple yoga exercises. In a word, all the activities that can cause laugh are included in the clubs.
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第三步：根据所划内容，结合理解，重新组织语言。可用中文概括出 段落大意，然后用一句话翻译出来。
第四步：通读修改。修改是一个重要的环节，要考虑连接词的使用； 高级词汇的替换；句式的多样；语法是否正确以及字数的多少。
第五步：用自信衡水体抄到试卷上，力求清楚美观。
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Laughter Clubs
笑声俱乐部
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According to a study at the University of Marland Medical Center in Baltimore, researchers found that people who had a good sense of humor and laughed a lot, nrk, had fewer heart problems than people who laughed less, and laughing people tend to live a longer life than the ones who are not.
Not everyone can join a laughter club, but we all can take part in the same practice. According to the doctor, besides taking part in the clubs, everyone can do something to make themselves laugh. How can you make laughing a part of your daily routine? If you feel funny about joining a laughter club, you can rent a funny movie, remember a funny experience, do some sports, go to the zoo, watch the monkeys or even, just make yourself laugh. You will not be able to keep a straight face all the time.