中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
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Yi Ke's hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer. She thinks writing makes her relaxed and it brings her pleasure and success.
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A Lesson of Writing
假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、 理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇报。 请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员 及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。
Names Yi Ke Li Rui
Hobbies writing trave11ing
• 表转折：but, yet, however, though，although… • 表因果关系：because, so, therefore, as a result…
• 表先后顺序：First, Second, Third, Next, Then, Finally… • 表时间关系：when, while, after, before, then, …
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
well work well. （the ending）
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
美(beautify)
• mHooswt pdeoopeleopclheoosspeentdo trhaevierl vtaocgaettion? We awmayadferoam stuhrevebyusaynwdohrledreduirsinogurthreeport.(the hoblidegayinsn. ing) • A lot of people travel.
中考英语写作指导
学学习习目目标标：：
1.了解中考作文要求及命题特点。 2.学习如何组织作文。 3.如何有效地使用连词。
1. 中考作文要求及命题特点
要求：要求学生在15-20分钟内，根据所给提
示，写一篇语言正确、内容完整，语句连贯的 短文。词数控制在80个左右。
特点：1.贴近生活，贴近时代，有充分的思维
加谚语(Proverb)
集中注意力于学习
We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents. A few
people work.
(th and enjoy your vacation. People who relax
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
美(beautify)
• mHooswt pdeoopeleopclheoosspeentdo trhaevierl vtaocgaettion? We awmayadferoam stuhrevebyusaynwdohrledreduirsinogurthreeport.(the hoblidegayinsn. ing) • A lot of people travel.
中考英语写作指导
学学习习目目标标：：
1.了解中考作文要求及命题特点。 2.学习如何组织作文。 3.如何有效地使用连词。
1. 中考作文要求及命题特点
要求：要求学生在15-20分钟内，根据所给提
示，写一篇语言正确、内容完整，语句连贯的 短文。词数控制在80个左右。
特点：1.贴近生活，贴近时代，有充分的思维
加谚语(Proverb)
集中注意力于学习
We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents. A few
people work.
(th and enjoy your vacation. People who relax
初三英语总复习英语写作指导ppt课件
会，并在今年的暑假里打算为家里做什么。
• 提示词：family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, feel proud of
举例 审清主题
• 人称：第一人称 • 时态：一般现在时，一般将来时
（个别使用一般过去时也可。） • 主题：做家务 • 文体：记叙文
teacher at school ,and so do I. My favorite teacher, Miss Lu, is a 30year-old young lady of medium height, with big eyes and long straight hair. She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes. And a big smile can always be found on her round face.
举例 初写文章
Summer vacation is coming, I want to learn how to cook. I want to cook for them. I think they will feel proud of me.
人物故事类的一些句子感受
• She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes.
大作文—复习策略 选题
人物故事 自己，家人，朋友，老师… 学习提高 学习的科目，遇到的困难和麻烦… 健康生活 疾病和卫生，食品健康… 计划愿望 暑假计划，学习计划…
大作文—复习策略 选题
• 提示词：family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, feel proud of
举例 审清主题
• 人称：第一人称 • 时态：一般现在时，一般将来时
（个别使用一般过去时也可。） • 主题：做家务 • 文体：记叙文
teacher at school ,and so do I. My favorite teacher, Miss Lu, is a 30year-old young lady of medium height, with big eyes and long straight hair. She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes. And a big smile can always be found on her round face.
举例 初写文章
Summer vacation is coming, I want to learn how to cook. I want to cook for them. I think they will feel proud of me.
人物故事类的一些句子感受
• She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes.
大作文—复习策略 选题
人物故事 自己，家人，朋友，老师… 学习提高 学习的科目，遇到的困难和麻烦… 健康生活 疾病和卫生，食品健康… 计划愿望 暑假计划，学习计划…
大作文—复习策略 选题
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
断句
Stage2: 抓
动词 短语语块
句式结构
(mind map)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
（1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)Βιβλιοθήκη (preview)审
书面 表达
连
(link)
抓 (focus) 扩
(expand)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
因并果列
顺序
Stage4: 连
观点 原句美化
Stage3: 扩
造句
Stage5、6:查改和誊写
Stage1:审
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体裁 维 时态 导 人称 图
2.“他们给他很多零花钱。” 3.“他（Jim）理解父母的不容易” 4.“他不多花钱，想办法省钱。” 5.“他喜欢阅读，在网上买书” 6.“他有时去图书馆借书” 7.“别人买饮料他却带水上学” 8.“他从不花钱买零食” 9.“有人认为他的做法很怪异，但我.....”
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
第五档（13-15分） 能写明全部或绝大部分内容要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达
2023年中考英语写作讲评课件(24张PPT)
• 严以律己，自尊自立 be strict with yourself, be a confident and independent person
• 勤于思考，勇于实践 use my head as often as possible≈think in a creative way, take action for my dream
you, mom, i love you.”
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河南开封2021一模书面表达
人设，矛盾，影响
my mother and i my mother was a doctor. she was always busy in my memory. when i was little, she sometimes brought me to her office. while she was wor , i played by myself. busy as she was, she always spared as much time as she could to be with me. i was happy then. however, the situation that she was busy seemed unchanged as i entered junior high school. i met some problems at school. but most of the time, she wasn’t there when i wanted to talk with her about my problems. one day, i yelled at her because i thought she didn’t care about me enough. she had a long talk with me. i understood her more and felt so sorry about yelling at her. i knew she loved me deeply. soon, i will graduate from junior high school. as i look back, i can pick up all pieces of memories of her love for me. i want to say, “thank
• 勤于思考，勇于实践 use my head as often as possible≈think in a creative way, take action for my dream
you, mom, i love you.”
02
河南开封2021一模书面表达
人设，矛盾，影响
my mother and i my mother was a doctor. she was always busy in my memory. when i was little, she sometimes brought me to her office. while she was wor , i played by myself. busy as she was, she always spared as much time as she could to be with me. i was happy then. however, the situation that she was busy seemed unchanged as i entered junior high school. i met some problems at school. but most of the time, she wasn’t there when i wanted to talk with her about my problems. one day, i yelled at her because i thought she didn’t care about me enough. she had a long talk with me. i understood her more and felt so sorry about yelling at her. i knew she loved me deeply. soon, i will graduate from junior high school. as i look back, i can pick up all pieces of memories of her love for me. i want to say, “thank
2024年中考英语书面表达之作文写作指导课件
coin has two sides.; prefer…to…; would rather do…than do…;
议论文常用连接词:
表示转折的：however; but; 表示举例的：for example; for instance; such as…; like…; that is to say… 表示总结的：in all/short; in a word; in brief/ total; last but not least; last; 表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; …have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb.; 表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…; be fond of…; be interested in…; show great interest in…; lose oneself in…; put one’s heart into…; be good at; be poor上下文要连贯。因此同学们应把写好的句子， 根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空 间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工 整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意过 渡词的用法。
叙事文常用的句子间连接词： At first; at last; in the end… then/next/after that… when/while/as soon as/not… until… at the same time; at times; once in a while; so that To one’s surprise/joy Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately… in a word/in all
议论文常用连接词:
表示转折的：however; but; 表示举例的：for example; for instance; such as…; like…; that is to say… 表示总结的：in all/short; in a word; in brief/ total; last but not least; last; 表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; …have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb.; 表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…; be fond of…; be interested in…; show great interest in…; lose oneself in…; put one’s heart into…; be good at; be poor上下文要连贯。因此同学们应把写好的句子， 根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空 间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工 整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意过 渡词的用法。
叙事文常用的句子间连接词： At first; at last; in the end… then/next/after that… when/while/as soon as/not… until… at the same time; at times; once in a while; so that To one’s surprise/joy Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately… in a word/in all
2025年中考英语写作复习课课件(共25张PPT)
Write your story about growth according to your story line.
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correctly. • I write my story in 3 parts.
Homework
1. Finish writing the composition. 2. Polish your writing according to the checklist.
中考英语书面表达指南-完整版PPT课件
中考英语书面表达中常见的错误
1、审题不到位引起的错误 ①人称错位 ②时态误用 ③要点遗漏 ④格式错误
2、因语言水平引起的错误 ①单词拼写，特别是不规则变化动词 ②写不出完整的句子 ③基本语言知识错误较多
④逻辑A性基不本强词或汇缺、乏短逻语辑意性义不明确； B 基本短语搭配运用错误； C 名词的单复数使用不当。
能仿照学过的题材和所给的范例写简单 的书信、便条、通知等。
中考英语书面表达评分标准中的要求
（一）评分原则： 在评分时要以作文的整体谋篇和语言水平（看其是否 地道）来评判。先确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的 要求来衡量，微调得分。最后，看其词数和卷面整洁 程度。词数太少（不到50个词的）或书写欠整洁的应 酌情再扣1—2分。但不倒扣分。 （二）内容要点： 内容必须切合题意，可适当发挥。
行文连贯
表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then 表示递进关系的： besides，what’s more 表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 表示目的的：in order to/ that , so as to/ that… 表示列举的：for eample , such as… 表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaing…
What a good holiday I 汇 自然的连接 书写工整 卷面整洁
My Unforgettable Holiday
What can you thin of
人称、时态、格式 内容（生动描写）： 时间、地点、人物，活动，感情 语言结构
初中英语中考作文指导PPT优秀课件
• According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
初中英语中考作文指导PPT优秀课件
初中英语中考作文指导PPT优秀课件
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法一:善用词汇 甚至善用高级词汇
初中英语中考作文指导PPT优秀课件
初中英语中考作文指导PPT优秀课件
初中英语中考作文指导PPT优秀课件
My favorite sport
I like many sports, such as swim, fish and so on. But of all the sports, basketball is my fasvworimitemsipnogr,tf.ishing
I like basketball best because it can help me keep
health. I play basketball with my classmates at school healthy
twice a week. I make a lot of good friends when I play
初中英语中考作文指导PPT优秀课件
初中英语中考作文指导PPT优秀课件
我认为学英语很有趣。
• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
初中英语中考作文指导PPT优秀课件
初中英语中考作文指导PPT优秀课件
Writing skills （“写”的技巧）
方法一:善用词汇 甚至善用高级词汇
初中英语中考作文指导PPT优秀课件
初中英语中考作文指导PPT优秀课件
初中英语中考作文指导PPT优秀课件
My favorite sport
I like many sports, such as swim, fish and so on. But of all the sports, basketball is my fasvworimitemsipnogr,tf.ishing
I like basketball best because it can help me keep
health. I play basketball with my classmates at school healthy
twice a week. I make a lot of good friends when I play
初中英语中考作文指导PPT优秀课件
初中英语中考作文指导PPT优秀课件
我认为学英语很有趣。
初中英语作文讲解 PPT课件(共29张)
修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。 卷面不工整要扣分!
六、誊写
（2004年陕西省中考试题） VII. 书面表达（共1题，计10分） 假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。 要求：1. 认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。 2. 词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。 Dear friend, Hello！I’m your new friend. My name is Bob. I’m fifteen. I’m American. I live in New York. I am a middle school student. I’m good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friends and I often sing pop songs together. After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I’m learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day. Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Bob Dear Bob,
中考英语作文指导优秀课件(共27张PPT)
高级词汇替换 1．but替换very The film we saw last night was very interesting. The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting. The film we saw last night was anything but boring. 2．suppose 替换should He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.
我们应该保护环境。
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We should protect the environment.
It’s our duty to prot词
• Dear Daddy, • It’s a gift for Father’s Day when you are reading it. • I still remember the day last summer when I climbed the At first mountain with you. _______ , it was sunny and warm. Unluckily ________, it began raining on the half way. I complained to so you about the bad weather. I felt _____ cold ______I wanted However to give that up. _______, you put your coat on me and told me not Finallyand to give up. _______, I reached the top of the mountain enjoyed the beauty of the nature there. • Now I want to say: I love you. Daddy. You raise me up! • Happy Father’s Day! • Yours, • Mike
中考英语写作指导ppt课件
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•作文是会呼吸的痛• 它活在试卷最后的角落• o别w人to r会ite痛a good artile?•看自己写会痛•反正都会痛......
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Practice makes perfect .---敦能生巧。
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学习目标：1.通过考情分析，能说出词中考作文的写作技巧。2.通过典例分析，尝试运用写作技巧进行写作练 习。3.通过对写作技巧的训练，能克服畏难情绪，树 立写作信心。
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• We should keep us happy, it is the most important.• Iபைடு நூலகம் we keep us happy all the time, we will be much healthier.
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• We should have good eating habits.• We should have some eating habits which are good for us.
What is the most painful part while you are taking an English exam?
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作文 想说爱你不容易
Lillian2
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• Writing is a kind of breathing pain• It lives in the last corner of the paper• It is painful to watch others write• While it is more painful to write myself• Anyway, writing is a kind of breathing pain ...
•作文是会呼吸的痛• 它活在试卷最后的角落• o别w人to r会ite痛a good artile?•看自己写会痛•反正都会痛......
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Practice makes perfect .---敦能生巧。
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学习目标：1.通过考情分析，能说出词中考作文的写作技巧。2.通过典例分析，尝试运用写作技巧进行写作练 习。3.通过对写作技巧的训练，能克服畏难情绪，树 立写作信心。
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• We should keep us happy, it is the most important.• Iபைடு நூலகம் we keep us happy all the time, we will be much healthier.
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• We should have good eating habits.• We should have some eating habits which are good for us.
What is the most painful part while you are taking an English exam?
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作文 想说爱你不容易
Lillian2
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• Writing is a kind of breathing pain• It lives in the last corner of the paper• It is painful to watch others write• While it is more painful to write myself• Anyway, writing is a kind of breathing pain ...
中考英语作文写作指导 优质课件
牢记关联词
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, not only…but also, neither…nor;
2.表示选择: or, either…or; 3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, so…that 5.表示对比: instead, not only…but also,while 6.表示解释: for example, such as, in other words; 7.表示顺序: first (of all), firstly…secondly…finally,
housework during our daily life. Para2: 根据提示，概述家务。
I help my mother sweep the floor. Para3: 给出评论，发表己见。
In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.
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时态
人称
体裁 （记述文，应用文，议论文）
一．审题
写好作文必先审题，明确所给的提示或 图表的内容要求，确定写什么，怎么写， 怎样在适当的地方提出所写文章的健康 积极的中心论点；视角新颖也可使文章增 色不少。
若审题不清
依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切 题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确， 都会被判为零分。例如:一篇以 “我的健康 饮食”为标题的文章学生如果写成了以某种 菜的做法或感谢妈妈为他每天做饭的文章, 不管用词多么恰当,语言多么感人,都不能获 得高分.所以写作文之前要先审题,最好列出 提纲.做到要写什么一目了然.
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• 词汇—>短语—>句式
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• [学生习作A]
1
•
My hobby is read books. When I was seven
years old, I became interested in reading books.
I like reading books because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can learn a lot2of
knowledge from books. Books also can teach
me how to be a good person. Books even can
solve many problems for me. I will read more
good books to improve myself.
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• In my life, I will thank my mother forever. My mother is busy everyday. she does housework and works hard in the factory. I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. I am ill, she looks after me carefully. I will thank my mother for giving me life. I will thank her for helping me. I love my mother very much.
learn much knowledge and many interesting things all
over the world. When I read books, I can enjoy the
beautiful sentences. At the same time I can improve
•What exactly your hobby is; •When and how you became interested in this hobby; •Why you enjoy your hobby; •About your hopes and plans for the future. 写作要求： 1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将 提供的信息体现在文章中。 2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。 3.词数60-80.
①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。
②also的位置应放在can之后。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• [点评]：档次10-15分。 • ①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。 • ②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者
但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自 然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。 • ③有少量错误。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
修改润色全文做到三查
• 要点、拼写、语法是否连贯 • 看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，
有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括 单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、 语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
扩写
• The girl likes reading. • The pretty girl likes reading novels. • The pretty girl likes reading novels
carefully. • The pretty girl who I talked to just
•
①开门见山、点题。
•
②真情流露，理由充分。
•
③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡
自然、
•
④巧妙使用句型以表决心。
[点评]：档次15-25分。
•
①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。
•
②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实
感，文章有感染力。
•
③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错
误，是一 篇高质量的作文。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• In my life, I will thank my mother forever. My mother is busy everyday. (But) she does housework and works hard in the factory. (When) I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. (When) I am ill, she looks after me carefully. (In a word), I will (not only) thank my mother for giving me life, (but also) thank her for helping me. (So) I love my mother very much.
• ●同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么； • ●我的压力是什么； • ●我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
中考英语作文指导
九 （2） 2017年4月26日
英语写作在中考英语中占据重要 的地位，写作分值的高低直接影 响到英语测试的成绩，怎样才能 写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获
取高分呢？
习作范例
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.
卷面、书写
Homework
• 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生 压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在 的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以 'Less Pressure, Better Life'为主题的 英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的 一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容 包括：
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
三、提高写作的方法（造句）
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• 句型转换，句式多样性
Tom is a student. He is 16 years old. He likes running Tom, a 16-year-old student, likes running.
now likes reading novels carefully.
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
句子的衔接词
并列关系：and，or，either ... or，both ... and，not only ... but also. as well as
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• [学生习作B]
•
My hobby is reading. Reading books is very
enjoyable. When I was young ,my mother used to tell
me a story before. I went to bed every night. The
转折关系：but，however，yet，although 条件关系：if, whether，unless 时间关系：when，as，before，after，
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• [学生习作A]
1
•
My hobby is read books. When I was seven
years old, I became interested in reading books.
I like reading books because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can learn a lot2of
knowledge from books. Books also can teach
me how to be a good person. Books even can
solve many problems for me. I will read more
good books to improve myself.
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• In my life, I will thank my mother forever. My mother is busy everyday. she does housework and works hard in the factory. I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. I am ill, she looks after me carefully. I will thank my mother for giving me life. I will thank her for helping me. I love my mother very much.
learn much knowledge and many interesting things all
over the world. When I read books, I can enjoy the
beautiful sentences. At the same time I can improve
•What exactly your hobby is; •When and how you became interested in this hobby; •Why you enjoy your hobby; •About your hopes and plans for the future. 写作要求： 1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将 提供的信息体现在文章中。 2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。 3.词数60-80.
①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。
②also的位置应放在can之后。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• [点评]：档次10-15分。 • ①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。 • ②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者
但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自 然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。 • ③有少量错误。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
修改润色全文做到三查
• 要点、拼写、语法是否连贯 • 看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，
有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括 单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、 语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
扩写
• The girl likes reading. • The pretty girl likes reading novels. • The pretty girl likes reading novels
carefully. • The pretty girl who I talked to just
•
①开门见山、点题。
•
②真情流露，理由充分。
•
③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡
自然、
•
④巧妙使用句型以表决心。
[点评]：档次15-25分。
•
①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。
•
②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实
感，文章有感染力。
•
③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错
误，是一 篇高质量的作文。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• In my life, I will thank my mother forever. My mother is busy everyday. (But) she does housework and works hard in the factory. (When) I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties. (When) I am ill, she looks after me carefully. (In a word), I will (not only) thank my mother for giving me life, (but also) thank her for helping me. (So) I love my mother very much.
• ●同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么； • ●我的压力是什么； • ●我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
中考英语作文指导
九 （2） 2017年4月26日
英语写作在中考英语中占据重要 的地位，写作分值的高低直接影 响到英语测试的成绩，怎样才能 写出一篇优秀作文，在中考中获
取高分呢？
习作范例
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.
卷面、书写
Homework
• 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生 压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在 的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以 'Less Pressure, Better Life'为主题的 英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的 一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容 包括：
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
三、提高写作的方法（造句）
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• 句型转换，句式多样性
Tom is a student. He is 16 years old. He likes running Tom, a 16-year-old student, likes running.
now likes reading novels carefully.
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
句子的衔接词
并列关系：and，or，either ... or，both ... and，not only ... but also. as well as
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• [学生习作B]
•
My hobby is reading. Reading books is very
enjoyable. When I was young ,my mother used to tell
me a story before. I went to bed every night. The
转折关系：but，however，yet，although 条件关系：if, whether，unless 时间关系：when，as，before，after，