高考英语书面表达分类汇编

1.北京

第四部分：书面表达（共两节，15 分）第一节情景作文（20 分）

假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇周记。记述爸爸出差期间，妈妈生病，你照顾她的过程。

注意： 1. 周记的开头已经为你写好。

2. 词数不少于 60.

Last Monday,

第二节开放作文（15 分）请根据下面提示。写一篇作文。词数不少于 50.

You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.

第一节：情景作文

北京卷情景作文延续了之前的传统，仍然以四幅图的记叙文写作为出题点。在内容上，并没有超出五大主题，即“校园拓展类、好人好事类、社会公益类、旅游接待类、家庭生活类”的范围。图画内容比较简单，四幅图中并没有出现超纲或者生僻词汇。可以说，本次考题属于难度较低的考场作文。考生在写作时，重点关注两个细节即可：1. 本文的体裁是周记，所以整篇文章的主语是“我”，而不是“我们”；2. 周记要求在写作时，多出现心理活动描写和感情描写。主要能注意这两点，相信考生可以在考场上写出一篇不错的考场作文。

高分范文：

LastMonday, my father would be on a business trip for five days.Having gotten my promise of being great at home and taking care of my mother,he rest assured and put his luggage into the trunk of his car. Seeing my father’sdriving away, my mother and I waved our hands and said goodbye to him. For amoment, I began to miss my father, wishing that he would be safe and well thenext days。

I thoughteverything would go well, as this was not the first time that my father had beenaway for several days. Yet, unfortunately, my mother caught a cold the nextmorning. Looking at her pale face, I experienced high levels of anxiety.However, I told myself that I had to calm down and look after my mum, as Ipromised to my dad. The moment I got my mum to sleep, I put cold towel on herforehead, found pills in the medicine box, and made some noodles for her. Luckily,she waked up and felt better, after taking the pills and the noodles. That herfever was gone relieved and satisfied me a lot。

In the nextfour days, I was taking her body temperature twice a day, ensuring that she wascompletely well. To our delight, my dad went back home safely and healthily onSaturday. On hearing what I had done to my mum, he, as well as my mum,

beamedat me and gave me a big thumb. Hearing their praises and seeing bright smileson their faces, I really felt overjoyed and thrilled. Conceivably, taking careof my parents was, indeed and definitely, my mission and obligation。

第二节：开放作文

北京卷开放作文的难度与往年持平，图画比较简单，容易理解。通过“大鱼”和“小鱼”的对比，能看出来图画的立意应该与“理想”和“现实”有关。从描图的角度上来说，除了“鱼竿”这个单词在写作时稍微有点难度之外，其他的要素都是比较容易处理的。在写作时，请注意；两个个方面：

1. 由于在英文提示部分，要求的是先“理解图画”，所以写作时请考生在首段直接提出立意。

2. 开放作文在写作时，一定要有“带图议论”的环节。所以，虽然提示部分并不像往年的题目一样，明确出现“描图”两个字，但在首段提出立意之后，第二段还是要有描图的语言，否则会失分。

高分范文：

Hi, Jim,there is an interesting picture conveying a message vividly that a differencebetween reality and dream may as well be recognized in our life. Evidently,realizing this difference and trying to shorten this gap is the key toachieving our accomplishment, otherwise nothing will be gotten in the end。

In our dailylife, some people are aware of their ability, making great efforts to improvethemselves, while others ignore the disparity between their earnest wish andpoorest actuality, doing nothing but complaining. Conceivably, the confused manin the picture is exactly the latter one. In this picture, a man is fishing ona big stone, waiting and waiting. However, the small fish he has caught istotally different from the big one he is longing for. Now, there are twooptions in front of him: face the reality and keep trying till get the dreamyfish, or drop his fishing rod and feel desperate. Apparently, he chooses thesecond one. Such a situation seems fairly common in our society. We are facedwith this kind of intriguing question all the time, and every choice we makehas great influence on our way to success. Making an accurate estimate of ourrealities and dreams, then sparing no efforts to approach the tip is the onlyoption for us to make, provided that we are in great want of achieving ourgoals。a