中考语法：代词和限定词的用法归纳

中考语法：代词和限定词的用法归纳
代词和限定词
Pronoun and Determiner
How our family could turn its back on its own?
我们家族怎么能闹内讧？
Being Human
They didn’t want their own robotic rebellion on their hands.
他们可不想他们自己的机器起来造反。

Battlestar Galactica
代词定义：
代词是代替名词的一种词类。

大多数代词具有名词和形容词的功能。

限定词定义：
限定词是对名词词组中名词起特指或泛指、定量或不定量等限制作用的一类词。

I本章要点
II代词限定词语法点分述
一、人称代词
1.用法
a.性的一致
单数第三人称代词有阳性、阴性和中性之分，它们的使用决定于所指对象的自然性别。

b.关于it
★小试身手★
1)Do you see that good-looking young man? _____ is Professor Du, who comes from the star.
2)A teacher should offer_____ students challenging projects.
3)I love China very much. _____ is very beautiful.
4)I have a pet dog. _____ follows me wherever I go.
5)Who is it? –It’s (I/_____).
6)_____ illegal to drive without a license.
7)_____ no use arguing with him.
二、物主代词和物主限定词
★小试身手★
1)My husband’s father is a doctor. ______(My/Mine) is a lawyer.
2)I plan to enter for a summer camp with a friend of ______. (me)
三、反身代词
1.形式
2.用法
★小试身手★
填空并判断以下句中反身代词的成分：
1)The queen ______attended the meeting.
2)I cut ______shaving this morning.
3)I could hardly believe she had made a video about water pollution by ______. (her)
4)Frank is not quite ______today. (upset or ill)
5)Just between ______, he is a selfish man.
6)Those who smoke heavily should remind ______ of health, the bad smell and the feelings of other people.
A. theirs
B. them
C. themselves
D. oneself
3.中考常考固定搭配连线：
1)help oneself to……别客气！
2)enjoy oneself 过得愉快，玩得高兴
3)(all) by oneself 随便取，随便吃，随便喝
4)say to oneself 自言自语
5)teach oneself = learn by oneself 自首
6)make yourself at home. 单独地，独自地
7)play with oneself 自娱自乐
8)turn oneself in 自学
9)find oneself 找到自我
四、指示代词和指示限定词 1.指近还是指远
1)These are new books. (These/Those) are old ones. 2)Life is not easy in the US (these/those) days. 3)Life was not easy in the US (these/those) days.
2.指人还是指物
指示代词通常指物，但在介绍人或电话交谈时，可以指人。

1)______is my sister Mandy. ______are my cousins Joe and Tom. 2)Who is ______speaking?
♥Attention ♥
指示限定词既可指人也可指物。

3.指上文还是指下文
1)M any stu
dents were absent this morning. ______made the teacher very angry. 2)Let me tell you ______. No one has ever beaten me at chess.
3)My friend has promised to do it, but ______ doesn’t mean he can do it well.
4.that/those 作替代词：that=the one; those=the ones
1)The climate of Russia is not as mild as ______of France.
2)The lives of animals are in many ways like ______of human beings.
5.such作为代词可作单数或复数，such也可做限定词。

Please send us your latest samples if such are available.
Such was the way he spoke to me.
★小试身手★
选词填空：such a, such an, such
1)The house was so untidy. I’ve never seen ______ mess.
2)______ questions shouldn't be asked on ______occasion (场合).
3)My trip in Kenya is ______ interesting experience that I want to share it with my friends.
4)Every ______ possibility must be considered.
5)One ______ dictionary is enough for me.
6)I hate to live in a place with ______ unpleasant weather.
7)Now my job has become ______ burden（负担）that I don't want to do it any more.
五、疑问代词和疑问限定词
★区分用法★
1.疑问限定词：
1)______ car is this?
2)______ countries are you going to visit?
2.疑问代词what还可用于简短提问。

1)______ about doing some shopping this afternoon?
2)______ about this size? Does it fit you?
3)______we fail to raise the fund?
六、关系代词和关系限定词
♥Attention♥
1)关系代词（that, who, whom, which）所代替的先行词是人或物的名词或代词，并在句中充当主语、宾语等成分。

2)关系限定词（whose, which）相当于形容词，在句中起到定语的作用。

★小试身手★
1)The student ______ got the prize was from Shanghai.
2)The building the roof of ______ we see is China Construction Bank.
3)The man ______ son lent you the money is my friend.
4)Tomorrow morning the flight may be delayed by a heavy fog, in ______ case we will have to go by train if we don’t want to miss the meeting.
七、不定代词和不定限定词
1.难点一：
All of us have to attend the meeting. （all of +人称代词）
All the students would like to go camping. （all+名词）
All of the family members are music lovers. （all of +the+名词）
2.难点二：
a.Some -合成词是“肯定词”，通常用于肯定陈述句以及期待肯定回答的疑问句。

1)I can’t connect my computer t o the Internet. There must be ____ wrong with it.
A.something
B. everything
C. anything
D. nothing
2)Would you like ______ to eat?
b. Any-合成词是“非肯定词”，常用于否定句和疑问句。

1)I have hardly ______ to eat today.
2)Is there ______ wrong?
3.难点三：
Every-合成词是肯定词，通常用于肯定句；而No-合成词是否定词，通常构成否定句。

1)______ knows what they have to do, don’t they?
2)______ is left undone for the party.
八、几组不定代词的用法
1.every, each
★小试身手★
1)On ______ side of the street there are shops and restaurants. (街道只有两边)
2)On ______ side of the square there are tall buildings. (广场是多边的)
3)______ of them is from Australia.
4)I gave the boys two cakes______.
5)I go abroad to visit fashion shows ______two months.
2.either, neither
★小试身手★
1)______ course is open to you. （两门课中选一门）
2)______ course is open to you. （多门课中选一门）
3)There are tall buildings on ______ side of the Huangpu River. （浦江两岸高楼林立）
4)There are tall buildings on ______ sides of Huangpu River.
5)They offered me two jobs, but I accepted ______ of them.
6)They offered me several jobs, but I accepted ______ of them.
3.little, (a) few
♥Attention♥
a few和a little带有肯定含义，few和little带有否定含义。

★小试身手★
1)He has ______ patience. （他已经没什么耐心了）
2)You must have ______ patience. （你必须有点耐心）
3)He has got ______ friends here. （他在这儿没什么朋友）
4)He has got few friends here, ______ ______? （他在这儿有些朋友）
4.“other”大观园
★小试身手★
1.填空：
1)He has two daughters. ______ is a nurse, and ______ is a bank clerk.
2)Can you show me some ______ samples?
3)Some friends will agree to this arrangement; ______ may have different views.
4)The story is not interesting. Tell me ______ one. (再讲一个)
5)They had to wait for ______ five hours. (再等五小时)
2.选择
1)There are 60 students in our class. Forty of them are boys, are girls.
A. another
B. the other
C. other
D. the others
2)Some wheat is from America, and is from Japan.
A. the others
B. the other
C. another
D. the rest
5.none, nothing, no one
And no one, no one stops being a Death Eater.
没有一个食死徒可以改邪归正。

Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire None of this matters!
这些都不重要！
Lost
★小试身手★
1)I have brothers. (= I don’t have any brothers.)
2)There is milk in the fridge.
3)A: Do you have any new plans?
B: We have got at the moment.
4)A: Did you find in the room?
B: No, I found there.
5) should ever kill a seagull.
★经典分享★
It is my considered view that no one can invent fictional characters without first having made
a lengthy study of people, just as it is impossible for anyone to speak a language that has not been properly mastered.
La Dame aux camélias (Camille)茶花女IIIReview what you have learnt
1. Won’t you let ________ help you?
A. I and your friend
B. your friend and I
C. me and your friend
D. your friend and me
2. If I were __________, I would take the advice.
A. she
B. he
C. her
D. us
3. I don’t think __________ worthwhile taking so much trouble to do this matter.
A. this
B. that
C. those
D. it
4. Was __________ in 1997 _________ this happened?
A. it; when
B. that; that
C. it; that
D. that; in which
5. John and his sister went on holiday with a cousin of _________.
A. their
B. theirs
C. her
D. his
6. The little girl is too young to look after __________.
A. her
B. hers
C. herself
D. her own body
7. The days in summer are longer than __________ in winter.
A. that
B. one
C. those
D. these
8. They left for Hong Kong on __________ day.
A. same
B. the same
C. such
D. a such
9. Our feelings were __________.
A. the same as they
B. same as their
C. the same as theirs
D. such as theirs
10. _________ like skiing. I like it, too.
A. All of friends
B. All my friends
C. All they
D. These all friends
11. There are four windows in the room. They __________ face east.
A. all
B. both
C. every
D. either
12. __________ do their homework carefully.
A. No all students
B. Not all the students
C. None the students
D. Not every student
13. -- How many magazines are there on the shelf?
-- ____________.
A. Nothing
B. No one
C. No
D. None
14. -- What’s in the desk?
-- ___________.
A. No one
B. Nothing
C. None
D. No
15. Come on Satur day or Sunday. __________ is all right.
A. Both days
B. Either of days
C. Neither day
D. Either day
16. On ___________ bank of the river there are trees and flowers.
A. every
B. either
C. both
17. Come ___________ you like.
A. some day
B. one day
C. some days
D. any day
18. My uncle gave me two pictures. One is the Great Wall; __________ is the Summer Palace.
A. another
B. other
C. the other
D. another one
19. I’ve got ___________ holiday. Let’s go for an outing.
A. another t wo days’
B. other two days
C. two other days
D. another days
20. -- What does your father usually do after dinner?
-- He usually listens to ________.
A. little music
B. few music
C. a few music
D. a little music
21. If our parents do everything for us children, we won't learn to depend on_____
A. themselves
B. them
C. us
D. ourselves
22. __________ that she went to sleep.
A. It was until midnight
B. That was until midnight
C. It was not until midnight
D. This was not until midnight
23. It is difficult to stay indoors on _________ lovely day.
A. so a
B. very a
C. such a
D. a such
24. -- __________ would you like to study in next term’s literature course?
-- Shakespeare’s plays.
-- Very good, __________ would you like?
A. Which; what
B. What; which plays
C. What; which
D. What play; which of plays
25. Sorry there’s _________ smoking in the waiting-room.
A. not
B. no
C. not a
D. none
26. This furniture is different from __________.
A. ones
B. your
C. that one
D. yours
27. -- Does she speak Japanese or English?
-- She doesn’t speak _________.
A. neither
B. both
C. none
D. either
28. Why don’t you read __________ easi er?
A. anything
B. everything
C. something
D. any books
29. There was __________ in the library.
A. anybody
B. no persons
C. nobody
30. - Have you any relatives in Europe?
-- Yes, I have __________.
A. few
B. little
C. a little
D. some
31. You’d better ask the teacher __________ about ___________ good deeds.
A. himself; his
B. oneself; him
C. him; his
D. his; him
32. You may help and learn from __________ other.
A. one
B. each
C. every
D. all
33. Our principal knows __________ but talks _________.
A. few; many
B. little; little
C. much; few
D. a lot; little
34. Our hometown has changed __________ since last year.
A. many
B. more
C. a great deal
D. a great number
35. D on’t lose hope. Have ___________ try.
A. one
B. other
C. another
D. the other
36. Elections take place __________ four years in that country.
A. other
B. each
C. every
D. the other
37. Helping others is a habit, _______ you can learn even at an early age.
A. it
B. that
C. what
D. one
38. ___________ have known each other for ten years.
A. I, you and he
B. I, he and you
C. He, you and I
D. You, he and I
39. Betty dances better than ___________ of the other girls in her class. She dances best.
A. some
B. any
C. no
D. either
40. Betty is older than __________ of the other girls in her class. She is not the oldest.
A. some
B. any
C. no
D. either
二、英语书面表达专项训练
2．同学们，初中生活即将结束，本次考试后，盼望已久的假期就要到来！请你根据以下提示，制定出度假计
划，可以结合自己的实际发挥。

写作内容：
1.和家长/同学一起旅游，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。

2.参加志愿活动，帮家长做家务。

3.读自己喜欢的书。

4.远离危险的地方。

写作要求：
1.80 词左右，开头部分已给出，但不计入规定字数。

2.内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。

3.不得出现自己的校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。

My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.
【答案】My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.
Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous places.Besides, I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.
I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
【解析】
试题分析：短文要制定出度假计划，文章需要用第一人称“I”进行书写，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人称。

文章主要内容为计划的书写，主要使用一般将来时态。

所写的句子要符合英语语法，不能遗漏要点。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：come to an end结束；on the way在途中；get close to nature亲近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth帮助某人做某事；take part in sth参加活动。

用了一些衔接词besides等，句子过度自然。

用了because引导的原因状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。

考点：考查提纲作文。

3．手机在生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色，许多中学生沉迷于手机无法自拔，比如你的好友Miller.请根据以下提示点写一篇短文：
1. 去年，Miller对手机游戏非常入迷，而且花大量时间用手机聊天看电影；
2. Miller与家人和朋友交流甚少，离开手机会很焦虑；
3. 昨天还因为走路看手机被自行车撞了，膝盖受伤；
4. 你的建议……
参考词汇：mobile games手机游戏anxious焦虑be crazy about对……入迷要求：
1字数80-100个2开头已经给出不计入总词数3要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥
Today more and more people are addicted to(沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year, My friend Miller was
【答案】Today more and more people are addicted to(沉迷）playing the mobile phones. Last year，My friend Miller was crazy about mobile games as well. He spent too much time in chatting and watching films on the phone. Miller hardly talked with his family and friends. He lived in his own world. He felt very anxious without mobile phones. Yesterday he was hit by a bike, because he was watching his phone at that moment. As a result, he hurt his knees badly.
In my opinion, I think we can’t use the mobile phones for a long time, I mean, no more than half an hour a day. Don’t take mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；再紧扣要点，动笔写作，可适当发挥。

在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

4．为提升南京城市形象，我市已启动老小区出新改造工程。

假设你是 Tim，请根据下面表格内容的提示，用英文向你的外国笔友 Jack 做简单的介绍。

注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3 词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old communities” in Nanjing.
_______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________
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【答案】Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old communities” in Nanjing. This project is aim to improve the environment. After this project, there will be more beautiful buildings, some parks and a big shopping store. Our life will be more convenient. But there are some problems which influence our life. For example, lots of noise is around us all day long, and we can see the building rubbish anywhere. In my opinion, the project team only work in daytime and the building rubbish can be put at a fixed place. Of course, everyone in the old communities can do what they can do to renovate our communities.
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达是描述老社区改造工程，话题较新。

【详解】
这是篇材料作文，所给的内容要点给的比较零碎，不完整，所以考生需要结合实际情况补
充完整，是文章内容充实。

在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。

同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

5．书面表达
在本周班会课上，同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。

大部分同学认为初中生应该在5点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。

请你写一篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。

注意：（1）短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数：80-100；
（4）短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。

短文开头：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.
_______________________________________________________________________________ ____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ ____________
【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.
Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.
Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.
A few think 5 o 'clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.
I am in favor of leaving school at five o'clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。

而复杂并列结构They can
exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.和Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化；同时Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使叙述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

6．书面表达
初中的生活美好而短暂。

临近中考，压力骤增，父母的唠叨，老师的殷殷期望，自己的学业与梦想……倾诉是一副良方。

请给七月的你写一封信，谈谈你身边存在的问题，你打算如何解决，鼓励自己生活还有诗和远方。

请根据以下提示写一封给自己的信。

要求：1．表达清楚，语法正确，语句通顺，上下文连贯；
2．必须包括思维导图中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3．词数：100词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Future Me,
It is pleasant to spare my free time to communicate with you．I am so worried that …
Your sincerely
【答案】It is pleasant to spare my free time to communicate with you．I am so worried that I can’t deal with all the problems present, which are mainly caused by two aspects.First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation .With the price of houses rising, they always work hard. However,
they are more worried about their children’s exam as the final exam is approaching. Second, there is endless homework and tests every day. Therefore, I need change myself.
In order to adapt to the situation better, I should develop good life habits to keep healthy. Then making friends and communicating with them can make me happier. What’s more, there e xist dreams and beautiful future waiting for us. I should not be pessimistic (悲观的). So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily. I believe I deserve having success.
【解析】
【详解】
本文写给未来的自己，目的在于倾诉压力，寻求方法，并重拾信心。

第一段指出导致压力的两个方面First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation . Second, there is endless homework and tests every day.用First, Second点出。

第二自然段提到释放压力的方法，应用In order to表目的。

用What’s more表递进结构。

并用祈使句So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily点题呼吁。

整篇文章层次分明，结构紧凑。

7．假如你是李华，作为活动主持人，你打算邀请外教 Smith 先生来参加本周末学校开展的“英语戏剧展示”活动，请用英语给他写一封邀请函，告诉他本次活动的具体时间和地点，安排了哪些内容，以及需要他做哪些事情。

提示词语:wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos
提示问题:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show?
What are you going to do on the show?
What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show?
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm glad to tell you there'll be an English drama show this weekend.
______________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________
We’re looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.
I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with your help.
We’re looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，邀请外教史密斯先生参加英语戏剧展示活动。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

8．人类只有一个地球。

根据提示，以“Saving the Earth”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。

提示: 1.如何保护环境已成为世界最大难题之一；
2.各种污染破坏环境，损害健康；
3.不要乱倒垃圾，乱排废水；
4.我们应该保护环境，使我们的家园更加美丽。

【答案】Saving the Earth
The earth is our home. We should take care of it. But some things we have done are bad for the earth. We have polluted the earth and made it sick. We cut down too many trees and change rich land into desert. Many factories pour waste water into rivers and lakes. Pollution has caused some serious problems. For example, much of the land is poor, some rivers and lakes are dirty. Even the temperature of the earth is rising. The earth is crying for help.
What shall we do to save it? My suggestions are that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories from pouring waste water directly into rivers. After all, we have only one earth. We should do everything we can to protect it, or we’ll be punished and lose our home.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文,动笔前首先要认真审题,弄清题意。

然后根据主题组织材料，确定写作内容。

写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。

语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文包含了所有要点，能围绕内容要点适当发挥，内容具体、丰富。

应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，具有较强的语言运用能力。

层次清晰，语言地道，主题鲜明，内容翔实，格式正确，结构紧凑。

使用了一些比较好的字句。

比如：one of the biggest problems in the world；such as比如；not only……but also……；We must try our best to……等。

学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

考点：考查提纲类作文
9．“苔花如米小，也学牡丹开。

”我们大多数人虽微不足道，但也能有所作为。

请以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。

要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数80左右。

One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of
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【答案】I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.
To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.
I felt proud of cooking on my own.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇话题作文。

【详解】
根据题干““苔花如米小，也学牡丹开。

”我们大多数人虽微不足道，但也能有所作为。

请以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。

”要求可知，本文用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。

英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：开篇点题——我将介绍曾做过的引以自豪的一件事情。

第二部分：文章主体——具体介绍这件事情的始末。

根据事情发展顺序，从先到后交代事情的经过，我做了什么，为什么引以为傲。

这些内容用一般过去时，注意动词的过去式变形。

第三部分：总结全文——我为自己感到骄傲。