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作文训练comparison_and_contrast ppt课件
The purposes of Comparison and Contrast
With comparison and contrast, the purpose is not just to point out similarities and differences or advantages and disadvantages, but to present information about something unfamiliar by comparing it with something familiar; to show the superiority of one thing by contrasting it with another; to show the similarities or differences of two things to help the reader evaluate them.
A comparison paragraph focuses on similarities, while a contrast paragraph on differences.
Comparison and contrast are frequently combined to give a full treatment of a topic. However, A paragraph usually concentrates only on similarities or differences, not both at the same time.
If you are figuring out the differences, you are making a contra or contrast paragraphs are used to show similarities or differences between two things.
comparison and contrast英语专业。写作PPT
My high school teacher and my college history teacher have different methods of getting important facts across.
Supporting Details
Parallel
eg: Compare
two cities
II. Emphasis in comparison or contrast
A comparison paragraph focuses on similarities, while a contrast paragraph on differences. dissimilar things: focus on the differences. similar things: emphasize the similarities.
外语教育系
逯凌虹
I. Usage of Comparison and Contrast
Comparison or contrast paragraphs are used to show similarities or differences between two things. Comparison: show similarities Contrast: show dissimilarities
IV. Organization of the Paragraph
Topic sentence
The topic sentence introduces the two things to be discussed and the controlling idea.
Supporting sentences
comparison and contrast对比英文写作ppt课件
which contrasts KFC and McDonald’s. ________________________________________________
Activity 2: Look at your topic sentence once again. Does it
generalize the central idea in your writing? Is it a point of
Other suggested topics
Dalian Department Store vs. MACAL (Victory Plaza) Hymall vs. Walmart (or Carrefour) Two big hotels you’ve worked for
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15
Activity 2: Discuss with your classmates on the chart above.
When a writer is comparing, he is pointing out the similarities that exist between subjects or items (such as persons, things, or ideas).
When a writer is contrasting, he is pointing out the differences between subjects or items, even the two different aspects of the same subject (e.g., the advantages vs. the disadvantages of a personal computer).
Activity 2: Look at your topic sentence once again. Does it
generalize the central idea in your writing? Is it a point of
Other suggested topics
Dalian Department Store vs. MACAL (Victory Plaza) Hymall vs. Walmart (or Carrefour) Two big hotels you’ve worked for
.
15
Activity 2: Discuss with your classmates on the chart above.
When a writer is comparing, he is pointing out the similarities that exist between subjects or items (such as persons, things, or ideas).
When a writer is contrasting, he is pointing out the differences between subjects or items, even the two different aspects of the same subject (e.g., the advantages vs. the disadvantages of a personal computer).
写作与修辞contrast and comparison的用法与比较PPT精选文档
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Subject-by-subject Pattern
1. stress is caused by daily having to contend with crowds of people and restricted space.
2.Travel in rush hour can be a real headache.
4. Ther is ample space for everyone, and fresh air to breathe.
3
Subject-by-subject Pattern
For Americans ‘a long time’ may be anything from forty years to forty minutes, depending on the circumstances. To an American businessman a proposal that could be completed within forty years might be ‘too far into the future’ to be considered. A motorist who gets involved in a traffic accident would be in great trouble with the police if he waited twentyfour hours to report the accident. An hour would be too long a time to be late for a business appointment or a date. Americans are so timeconscious that promptness is not only a virtue; it is an obligation.
Subject-by-subject Pattern
1. stress is caused by daily having to contend with crowds of people and restricted space.
2.Travel in rush hour can be a real headache.
4. Ther is ample space for everyone, and fresh air to breathe.
3
Subject-by-subject Pattern
For Americans ‘a long time’ may be anything from forty years to forty minutes, depending on the circumstances. To an American businessman a proposal that could be completed within forty years might be ‘too far into the future’ to be considered. A motorist who gets involved in a traffic accident would be in great trouble with the police if he waited twentyfour hours to report the accident. An hour would be too long a time to be late for a business appointment or a date. Americans are so timeconscious that promptness is not only a virtue; it is an obligation.
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• Pattern: A1, B1;A2, B2;A3,B3 (Seesaw Pattern) • Example: comparison. • 1]Despite their obvious differences in length, the paragraph and the
essay are quite similar structurally. • A（1）: 2]For example, the paragraph is introduced by either a topic
COMPARISONANDCONTRAST
• • • • • • • • • •
1. Pictures
Brainstorming – Generating Ideas
2. Writing Strategies
• In making contrast, we have to compare. There is no other way to point out the difference, i.e. the contrast. What is of great importance is to know that professional writers frequently use these two strategies to develop paragraphs.
• There are two major ways of organizing paragraphs of comparison and contrast.
• One way is to examine one thing thoroughly and then start the other– Allabout pattern; The other way is to examine two things at the same time, discussing them point by point– Seesaw pattern.
essay are quite similar structurally. • A（1）: 2]For example, the paragraph is introduced by either a topic
COMPARISONANDCONTRAST
• • • • • • • • • •
1. Pictures
Brainstorming – Generating Ideas
2. Writing Strategies
• In making contrast, we have to compare. There is no other way to point out the difference, i.e. the contrast. What is of great importance is to know that professional writers frequently use these two strategies to develop paragraphs.
• There are two major ways of organizing paragraphs of comparison and contrast.
• One way is to examine one thing thoroughly and then start the other– Allabout pattern; The other way is to examine two things at the same time, discussing them point by point– Seesaw pattern.
写作与修辞contrast and comparison的用法与比较PPT课件
considered. A motorist who gets
involved in a traffic accident would be
in great trouble with the police if he
waited twenty-four hours to report the
accident. An hour would be too long a
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Subject-by-subject Pattern
• 1. stress is caused by daily having to contend with crowds of people and restricted space.
• 2.Travel in rush hour can be a real headache.
• 1. Here the pace of life is gentle.
• 2. There is time to reflect on the beauty of the world.
• 3. In a village,life is closer to nature.The changing seasons can be clearly observed.
• 3. Pollution of various kinds is the result of industrialization.
• 4. Cars spew toxic fumes into the atmosphere.
• 5. Noise bellows out from every side.
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• A brief consideration of Egyptian mythology and the mythology of the Greeks is enough to convince us of the revolution in thought that must have taken place from one age to the other. The Egyptian gods had no resemblance to anything in the real world; the Greek gods were fashioned after real Greek people. The Egyptian artists’ interpretations of the divine were horrid bestial shapes that combined men’s heads with bird’s bodies or terrifying nightmares. The monstrosities of an invisible world were what the Egyptians worshiped. The Greek interpretation of divinity is not so dark a picture.
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• In this structure, you say everything about one item, then everything about the other.
• For instance, say everything about the characters, settings and plots for the book then everything about the characters, settings and plots for the film.
2).Similarities-to-Differences
• In this structure, you explain all the similarities about the items being compared and then you explain all the differences.
Methods of Development
1).Whole-to-Whole, or Block to Block Book, Film
2).Similarities-to-Differences
A---B
3).Point by Point
AB, AB, AB, AB
1). Whole-to-Whole, or Block to Block
• Whole-to-Whole comparison and contrast uses a separate section or paragraph for each item you’re discussing.
• The points in each of the sections should be the same and they should be explained in the same order (for instance, you might discuss characters, settings, and plots for both, and in that order for both).
• For instance, say everything about the characters, settings and plots for the book then everything about the characters, settings and plots for the film.
2).Similarities-to-Differences
• In this structure, you explain all the similarities about the items being compared and then you explain all the differences.
Methods of Development
1).Whole-to-Whole, or Block to Block Book, Film
2).Similarities-to-Differences
A---B
3).Point by Point
AB, AB, AB, AB
1). Whole-to-Whole, or Block to Block
• Whole-to-Whole comparison and contrast uses a separate section or paragraph for each item you’re discussing.
• The points in each of the sections should be the same and they should be explained in the same order (for instance, you might discuss characters, settings, and plots for both, and in that order for both).
comparison and contrast对比 英文写作 ppt课件
Broad Categories two books two authors two TV programs two restaurants two athletes
Narrowed-down Topics
comparison and contrast对比 英文写作
• Informative comparisons: to explain differences between subjects. This type of writing generally does not recommend one item as being better than the others.
buying a car vs. leasing a car oranges and bananas Shakespeare and Lu Xun a musician and an architect male and female attitudes about marriage
Activity
Professor Pr
Professor Pr
Professor
Steps to Writing
Step 1: Brainstorming
Activity 1: Group Discussion
Please work with your fellow students to find out everything that you know about KFC and McDonald’s.
You may use the following chart to help you find out the useful information.
Location Food Price Serontrast对比 英文写作
comparisonandcontrast精品PPT课件
Comparison & Contrast
Warm-up activity: Please find out the similarities and differences in the following two pictures:
If you are figuring out the similarities, you are making a comparison of these two pictures.
Some sample expressions: There are several similarities between A and B. A and B have the same view of the world. A and B have a lot in common. In common with A, B prefers meat to fish. A resembles B in that A is also interested in collecting stamps. Just as A likes to be quiet, B likes to stay alone. Like A, B likes outdoor sports. A likes swimming. The same with A, B also likes swimming. A and B are the same in that they both like swimming in the
A comparison paragraph focuses on similarities, while a contrast paragraph on differences.
Comparison and contrast are frequently combined to give a full treatment of a topic. However, A paragraph usually concentrates only on similarities or differences, not both at the same time.
Warm-up activity: Please find out the similarities and differences in the following two pictures:
If you are figuring out the similarities, you are making a comparison of these two pictures.
Some sample expressions: There are several similarities between A and B. A and B have the same view of the world. A and B have a lot in common. In common with A, B prefers meat to fish. A resembles B in that A is also interested in collecting stamps. Just as A likes to be quiet, B likes to stay alone. Like A, B likes outdoor sports. A likes swimming. The same with A, B also likes swimming. A and B are the same in that they both like swimming in the
A comparison paragraph focuses on similarities, while a contrast paragraph on differences.
Comparison and contrast are frequently combined to give a full treatment of a topic. However, A paragraph usually concentrates only on similarities or differences, not both at the same time.
写作与修辞contrast and comparison的用法与比较(课堂PPT)
Development by Comparison and
Contrast
1
Comparison and contrast are two thinking processes we constantly perform in our daily life. We might compare and contrast two cities, two products, two books, two plays or films, etc. although comparison usually indentifies similarities and contrast points out differences, the two are structurally similar and can be discussed together. The purpose of comparing or contrasting is to understand either of the two things more clearly and, at times, to make judgments about them.
1. Here the pace of life is gentle.
2. There is time to reflect on the beauty of the world.
3. In a village,life is closer to nature.The changing seasons can be clearly observed.
The point-by-point pattern works best with subjects that contain a lot of points. It can bring into sharp focus the similarities and differences for the reader to see as he reads along.
Contrast
1
Comparison and contrast are two thinking processes we constantly perform in our daily life. We might compare and contrast two cities, two products, two books, two plays or films, etc. although comparison usually indentifies similarities and contrast points out differences, the two are structurally similar and can be discussed together. The purpose of comparing or contrasting is to understand either of the two things more clearly and, at times, to make judgments about them.
1. Here the pace of life is gentle.
2. There is time to reflect on the beauty of the world.
3. In a village,life is closer to nature.The changing seasons can be clearly observed.
The point-by-point pattern works best with subjects that contain a lot of points. It can bring into sharp focus the similarities and differences for the reader to see as he reads along.
Compare and Contrast 对比比较作文 ppt课件
essay should be 80/20 in favor of one strategy, not 50/50.
Your job is to interest the reader. Choose points to discuss that are not immediately obvious.
A Brief Overview
Comparison/Contrast Essay Similarities and Differences
Definition
„
Writing a comparison/contrast paper involves comparing and contrasting two subjects. „ A comparison shows how two things are alike.
Always choose two equal items—two cars, two Jobs, two people—not two unequal
items, like a car and an octopus.
Next, decide if you want to compare or contrast as your primary strategy. The
Do I want
this new
car … ?
… or do I want my
old car?
Do you want
this guy … ?
… or do you
want that guy?
Do I prefer
this girl … ?
… or do I
prefer this girl?
Your job is to interest the reader. Choose points to discuss that are not immediately obvious.
A Brief Overview
Comparison/Contrast Essay Similarities and Differences
Definition
„
Writing a comparison/contrast paper involves comparing and contrasting two subjects. „ A comparison shows how two things are alike.
Always choose two equal items—two cars, two Jobs, two people—not two unequal
items, like a car and an octopus.
Next, decide if you want to compare or contrast as your primary strategy. The
Do I want
this new
car … ?
… or do I want my
old car?
Do you want
this guy … ?
… or do you
want that guy?
Do I prefer
this girl … ?
… or do I
prefer this girl?
comparison and contrast 写作方法 ppt课件
• B（2）: 3]The streets, whether long or short, are straight, spacious, and well-shaded.
• B（3）: 3] Crowds of people can be found here and there, hurrying, noisy, and well-dressed.
• A（3）: 2] Finally, a terminator---whether a restatement, conclusion, or observation---ends the paragraph.
• Pattern: A1, A2, A3; B1, B2, B3. （Allabout Pattern） • Example: Contrast • 1]My hometown is quite different from what it used to be. • Subtopic: 2]Just a little more that ten years ago my
hometown was a small quiet place. • A（1） 3]The houses were small and mean. • A（2） 3]The streets were for the most part narrow
and winding. • A（3） 3]There were few people in the streets and
• Pattern: A1, B1;A2, B2;A3,B3 (Seesaw Pattern) • Example: comparison. • 1]Despite their obvious differences in length, the paragraph and the
comparisonandcontrast对比英文写作课件
• Steps to Writing:
– Brainstorming – Drafting – Revising
• Suggested Activities/Homework
What You Should Know
Comparison-contrast is a common method of development that involves focusing on similarities and differences---or more likely on one or the other---in order to make a point.
• Persuasive comparisons: to persuade readers that one subject is superior to others.
Organize your ideas
subject-by-subject point-by-point
Subject-by-subject organization
Select your topics
Activity : Examine the following groups of topics. Please
pick out the groups that you think are appropriate for discussing similarities and differences, and explain why you think they are appropriate for comparison/contrast.
Example
• Classroom instruction
• • • Homework • • • Exam • • • Grading •
– Brainstorming – Drafting – Revising
• Suggested Activities/Homework
What You Should Know
Comparison-contrast is a common method of development that involves focusing on similarities and differences---or more likely on one or the other---in order to make a point.
• Persuasive comparisons: to persuade readers that one subject is superior to others.
Organize your ideas
subject-by-subject point-by-point
Subject-by-subject organization
Select your topics
Activity : Examine the following groups of topics. Please
pick out the groups that you think are appropriate for discussing similarities and differences, and explain why you think they are appropriate for comparison/contrast.
Example
• Classroom instruction
• • • Homework • • • Exam • • • Grading •
Comparison-Contrast-对比与对照PPT课件
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a good comparison/ contrast essay?
CONTENTS
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2
3
Definition
.
What is comparison/contrison/contrast?
What is comparison/contrast?
Point-by-Point
Classroom instruction Homework Exam Grading
The area of the Pacific Ocean is 19 times the size of China
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What is comparison/contrast used for?
emphasize changing
.
emphasize scale
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11
Three Patterns
What is comparison/contrast
used for?
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7
Purpose
What is comparison/contrast used for?
• To clarify something unknown or not well understood.
• To lead to a new way of viewing something familiar.
.
How to organize a comparison/ contrast essay?
How to organize a comparison/ contrast essay?
Subject by Subject
Comparison-Contrast-对比与对照PPT课件
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How to write a good comparison/ contrast essay?
Keep in mind the following questions
• Do you stick to the pattern you choose? • Do you select the significant points?
relevant/specific/sufficient details • Do you deal equally with both subjects?
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Similarities
How to write a good comparison/ contrast essay?
Short Conjunctions
How to write a good comparison/ contrast essay?
to explain differences between subjects. This type of writing generally does not recommend one item as being better than the others.
Point 1 Point 2 Point 3
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12
How to organize a comparison/ contrast essay?
Point by Point
Point 1
Subject A Subject B
Point 2
Subject A Subject B
Point 3
Subject A Subject B
..., but
whereas + [sentence]
Compare and Contrast 1对比比较作文PPT精选文档
wearing, saying and acting. We Compare and Contrast them to
ourselves…wondering…if we are like them or we different.
5
Compare & Contrasting
Helps us Identify who we are. Helps us choose norms and values Helps us learn Helps us interact Helps us to perceive Helps us to motivate Without it we would not be able to
Do I want
this new
car … ?
… or do I want my
old car?
10
Do you want
o you
want that guy?
11
Do I prefer
this girl … ?
… or do I
prefer this girl?
Next, decide if you want to compare or contrast as your primary strategy. The
essay should be 80/20 in favor of one strategy, not 50/50.
Your job is to interest the reader. Choose points to discuss that are not immediately obvious.
A Brief Overview Comparison/Contrast Essay Similarities and Differences
ourselves…wondering…if we are like them or we different.
5
Compare & Contrasting
Helps us Identify who we are. Helps us choose norms and values Helps us learn Helps us interact Helps us to perceive Helps us to motivate Without it we would not be able to
Do I want
this new
car … ?
… or do I want my
old car?
10
Do you want
o you
want that guy?
11
Do I prefer
this girl … ?
… or do I
prefer this girl?
Next, decide if you want to compare or contrast as your primary strategy. The
essay should be 80/20 in favor of one strategy, not 50/50.
Your job is to interest the reader. Choose points to discuss that are not immediately obvious.
A Brief Overview Comparison/Contrast Essay Similarities and Differences
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What should the paragraph include?
A There are some distinct similarities between fast food and home cooked meals. The first similarity is that they both provide a variety of choices. There are a number of selections available in restaurants; salads, burgers, sandwiches and more. Similarly, if the ingredients are available, anything can be cooked in your own kitchen. Another similarity is that each can be relatively inexpensive. Fast food can be very cheap since many meals are under five dollars. In the same way, home cooked meals also can be reasonable especially if ingredients are carefully considered for the cost. Thirdly, both fast food and home cooked meals can be delicious. We know that many people enjoy the taste of fast food because it is popular around the world. Likewise, home cooked meals can certainly be yummy if they are prepared just as you like them.
early life
took a post as a junior clerk
sailing, playing the violin,
iห้องสมุดไป่ตู้terest/hobbies …
father of hybrid rice
graduate teach devote himself to…
reading books, listening to music …
B. Although there are a number of similarities, there are several differences between fast and home cooked meals. The first difference is that fast food is generally more fattening since oil is frequently used in the cooking process. In contrast, the fat content can be controlled in home cooking. Another important difference is the amount of time
Can you find connecting words to show contrast?
nationality
Jewish
Chinese
family background born of Jewish parents born into a poor farmer’s family
main achievements Theories of Relativity
Fast food can be very checaopmsinpcae rmisanoynmeals are under
five dollars. In the same way, home cooked meals also can be reasonable especially if ingredients are carefully considered for the cost. Thirdly, both fast food and home cooked meals can be delicious. We know that many people enjoy the taste of fast food because it is popular around the world. Likewise, home cooked meals can certainly be yummy if they are prepared just as you like them. Can you find connecting words to show comparison?
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preparation and cooking process. However, home cooked meals take longer to complete since one person is usually responsible for the entire meal. The third difference is convenience. Fast food is ready-made and always available while home cooked meals are not instant.
comparison contrast
Task 1: Read the following passage and answer the questions.
A. There are some distinct similarities between fast food and home cooked meals. The first similarity is that they both provide a variety of choices. There are a number of selections available in restaurants; salads, burgers, sandwiches and more. Similarly, if the ingredients are available, anything can be cooked in your own kitchen. Another similarity is that each can be relatively inexpensive.
Waysoforganization comparison&contrast
ByChenJie 2015/5/6
Write a paragraph about Einstein and Yuan Longping by comparison and contrast
1. Can you find some similarities? 2. Can you find some differences?
nationality family background main achievements
early life interest/hobbies outstanding qualities
How to write a paragraph by comparison and contrast?
A There are some distinct similarities between fast food and home cooked meals. The first similarity is that they both provide a variety of choices. There are a number of selections available in restaurants; salads, burgers, sandwiches and more. Similarly, if the ingredients are available, anything can be cooked in your own kitchen. Another similarity is that each can be relatively inexpensive. Fast food can be very cheap since many meals are under five dollars. In the same way, home cooked meals also can be reasonable especially if ingredients are carefully considered for the cost. Thirdly, both fast food and home cooked meals can be delicious. We know that many people enjoy the taste of fast food because it is popular around the world. Likewise, home cooked meals can certainly be yummy if they are prepared just as you like them.
early life
took a post as a junior clerk
sailing, playing the violin,
iห้องสมุดไป่ตู้terest/hobbies …
father of hybrid rice
graduate teach devote himself to…
reading books, listening to music …
B. Although there are a number of similarities, there are several differences between fast and home cooked meals. The first difference is that fast food is generally more fattening since oil is frequently used in the cooking process. In contrast, the fat content can be controlled in home cooking. Another important difference is the amount of time
Can you find connecting words to show contrast?
nationality
Jewish
Chinese
family background born of Jewish parents born into a poor farmer’s family
main achievements Theories of Relativity
Fast food can be very checaopmsinpcae rmisanoynmeals are under
five dollars. In the same way, home cooked meals also can be reasonable especially if ingredients are carefully considered for the cost. Thirdly, both fast food and home cooked meals can be delicious. We know that many people enjoy the taste of fast food because it is popular around the world. Likewise, home cooked meals can certainly be yummy if they are prepared just as you like them. Can you find connecting words to show comparison?
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preparation and cooking process. However, home cooked meals take longer to complete since one person is usually responsible for the entire meal. The third difference is convenience. Fast food is ready-made and always available while home cooked meals are not instant.
comparison contrast
Task 1: Read the following passage and answer the questions.
A. There are some distinct similarities between fast food and home cooked meals. The first similarity is that they both provide a variety of choices. There are a number of selections available in restaurants; salads, burgers, sandwiches and more. Similarly, if the ingredients are available, anything can be cooked in your own kitchen. Another similarity is that each can be relatively inexpensive.
Waysoforganization comparison&contrast
ByChenJie 2015/5/6
Write a paragraph about Einstein and Yuan Longping by comparison and contrast
1. Can you find some similarities? 2. Can you find some differences?
nationality family background main achievements
early life interest/hobbies outstanding qualities
How to write a paragraph by comparison and contrast?