高考二轮(通用版)英语复习对点练：专题十六 短文改错 短文改错2

第二部分专题十六

短文改错(二)

A

Dear Sir or Madam，

My name is Li Hua. I am writing this letter to tell you my terribly flight experience on BA793 on March 3rd, 2016. The first trouble started when a flight was listed as “delayed”. We were stuck at the airport but no one come to offer us any explanation. Seven hours before, when all the passengers finally got on board the plane, we were told we had to keep on waiting for another hours due to the bad weather! If we had informed earlier, we would have chosen to stay in the wait room. What was worse, upon my arrival, I found my suitcase buying by my best friend out of shape, and its handle were broken!

I am looking forward to an explanation about this unpleasant experience and I strongly suggest your company did something to provide good service to passengers.

Yours，

Li Hua 1．第二句中的terribly改为terrible考查形容词。那是一次非常糟糕的经历，应该使用形容词修饰名词。

2．第三句中的a改为the考查冠词。上文已提到作者的航班，所以此处应使用定冠词。

3．第四句中的come改为came考查时态。根据上下文可知此处用一般过去时。

4．第五句中的before改为later考查行文逻辑。七个小时后，作者和其他乘客登上了飞机。

5．第五句中的hours改为hour考查名词的数。句中的another后应该接可数名词的单数形式，而不是可数名词的复数形式。

6．第六句中的had后加been考查被动语态。如果乘客被提前通知，他们就会选择在候

车室里等着。

7．第六句中的wait改为waiting考查固定短语。waiting room等候室。

8．第七句中的buying改为bought考查非谓语动词。根据本句中的by my best friend可知，箱子是我最好的朋友买的，所以用过去分词作后置定语。

9．第七句中的were改为was考查主谓一致。主语是its handle，是第三人称单数。

10．第八句中的did改为do考查虚拟语气。根据本句中的动词suggest可知，其后的宾语从句要使用虚拟语气，从句中谓语动词要使用(should＋)动词原形。

B

Early one morning in April, 2016, it was raining hardly. I was seating in my classroom by myself. “We shall soon leave Beijing and return back to Sichuan. You'll say goodbye to your new

classmates.” That my father told me the other day sounded once again on my ears. Although I had studied at school for only two months, I really loved everything there. What's more, the teaching conditions here is much better than those in Sichuan. As a child which was born in Sichuan, I knew almost nothing about the world outside. Therefore, after I came to Beijing, I saw so many things I had never seen.

1．第一句中的hardly改为hard考查副词。此处修饰raining，表示“雨下得大”，应用副词hard；hardly表示“几乎不”，不符合句意。

2．第二句中的seating改为sitting/seated考查动词。seat使就座，表示“就座”可用be seated；另外，也可将seating改为sitting，表示“正坐在”。

3．第三句中的back去掉考查动词词义。return返回，其后不加back。

4．第五句中的That改为What考查从句引导词。此处为主语从句，引导词在从句中作宾语，且指物，应用what引导。

5．第五句中的on改为in考查介词。此处表示“在耳边响起”，用介词in。

6．第六句中的at后加the考查冠词。school后有时间状语for only two months，特指我才读了两个月的学校，故在school前加定冠词the。

7．第六句中的there改为here考查副词。此处表示现在的学校，应用here。

8．第七句中的is改为are考查主谓一致。主语是复数形式conditions，故谓语动词用复数are。

9．第八句中的which改为who/that考查定语从句。child后为定语从句，先行词为a child，指人，且在从句中作主语，故可用who或that引导。

10．第九句中的Therefore改为However考查行文逻辑。句意：但是，我来到北京后，我见到了很多以前从未见到过的事物。根据语境，上下文表转折，故应用however 衔接。

C

(2016·辽宁大连高三调考)Nothing is impossible! If you have a dream, your dream will must come true as long as you always work hard. To tell you truth, my dream is common. I want to be a doctor. There was a time that I was in hospital. I saw with my own eyes that a doctor fights all night to save a baby's life. I was touched by the kindly behavior of the doctor. I think doctors are the greatest. We can make patients recover from a disease. However, I am determined to be a doctor to help whomever suffers from illnesses. I hope that I am able to help people keep healthy. At the same time, I will devote myself to treat patients. In a word, if I become a doctor in the future, I will try my best to help each patient. From now on, I will spare no effort to study every subjects so that I can go to a key university.

1．第二句中的must去掉考查条件状语从句。在if引导的条件状语从句里，用一般现在时代替一般将来时，而主句用一般将来时，谓语动词用will do，故将must去掉。

2．第三句中的truth前加the考查定冠词。to tell you the truth说实话。

3．第五句中的that改为when考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知本句含定语从句，修饰