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Unit 4 Reading for writing写作课件 高中英语人教版必修第一册
增强体质: build up one‘s body /strength 振奋精神，释放压力 : cheer up one's spirits and release stress
学校学生会（the Students’ Union）决定举办一次英语演讲比赛 (English Speech Contest)
这场展览给人们提供了一个了解中国电影历史的机会。 The exhibition provided us a chance to know the history of Chinese films. 体育文化节提供机会给学生展示自己，挑战自己。 The festival will provide a chance for students to show themselves and challenge themselves.
The activity can not only… but also…
拓展视野: broaden one's horizons/ view 加深对...的理解 : deepen the understanding of.../ have a better understanding of 丰富生活: enrich one's life 提供某人机会做某事：provide sb. a chance to do sth. 培养兴趣：develop one’s interest in… 有重要作用：play an important in…
3、内容 The activity includes/will include ...
学校学生会（the Students’ Union）决定举办一次英语演讲比赛 (English Speech Contest)
比赛内容 1. 演讲（三分钟） 2. 问答（两分钟） 3. 表演（三分钟）
学校学生会（the Students’ Union）决定举办一次英语演讲比赛 (English Speech Contest)
这场展览给人们提供了一个了解中国电影历史的机会。 The exhibition provided us a chance to know the history of Chinese films. 体育文化节提供机会给学生展示自己，挑战自己。 The festival will provide a chance for students to show themselves and challenge themselves.
The activity can not only… but also…
拓展视野: broaden one's horizons/ view 加深对...的理解 : deepen the understanding of.../ have a better understanding of 丰富生活: enrich one's life 提供某人机会做某事：provide sb. a chance to do sth. 培养兴趣：develop one’s interest in… 有重要作用：play an important in…
3、内容 The activity includes/will include ...
学校学生会（the Students’ Union）决定举办一次英语演讲比赛 (English Speech Contest)
比赛内容 1. 演讲（三分钟） 2. 问答（两分钟） 3. 表演（三分钟）
高中英语记叙文写作 教学课件(共40张PPT)
meeting to discuss it.
8. It is reported that the river has been polluted (污染).
9. She tried to remind (提醒) us not to throw rubbish anywhere.
10. We can breathe fresh (新鲜的) air and enjoy ourselves.
Last Sunday, we had a picnic in a mountain near our school.
Spring is coming. let’s have a picnic.
What can we eat?
What are they cooking, fish or pork?
When our monitor suggested having a picnic , we were all pleased.
由词到句
4) 我们带了各种食品和饮料。 bring /bring…with… kinds of/all kinds of/various/a variety of/varieties of food and drinks We brought all kinds of food and drinks.
Li Hai told such a funny story that we couldn’t help laughing.
由词到句
6) 赵娟在跳舞时摔了一跤。 dance fall/have a fall Zhao Juan fell when she danced.
Zhao Juan had a fall when she danced.
8. It is reported that the river has been polluted (污染).
9. She tried to remind (提醒) us not to throw rubbish anywhere.
10. We can breathe fresh (新鲜的) air and enjoy ourselves.
Last Sunday, we had a picnic in a mountain near our school.
Spring is coming. let’s have a picnic.
What can we eat?
What are they cooking, fish or pork?
When our monitor suggested having a picnic , we were all pleased.
由词到句
4) 我们带了各种食品和饮料。 bring /bring…with… kinds of/all kinds of/various/a variety of/varieties of food and drinks We brought all kinds of food and drinks.
Li Hai told such a funny story that we couldn’t help laughing.
由词到句
6) 赵娟在跳舞时摔了一跤。 dance fall/have a fall Zhao Juan fell when she danced.
Zhao Juan had a fall when she danced.
高中英语写作Module 1 My First Day at Senior High优秀课件
2.Feelings of learning the news
Sulin was born three years ago. Baiyun was her mother. I was happy to learn the news .
I was happy/delighted to learn the news that Baiyun gave birth to Sulin three years ago.
根底写作步骤
五、查错改错
要尽量剔除错误
如要点齐全、句法、语法有 无问题；单词拼写、大小写
和标点符号；句数
根底写作步骤
六、誊写
卷面要工整
怎样得高分
第一招：肃清语言错误 第二招：让句式多变起来
Eg. We should pay attention to reducing air pollution.
I am a middle school student. ______________________________________________________ ________________________________
Yours, Li Hua
Thank you very much. Thank you for your hard work. I would like to express my thanks to you for your hard work.
Suiln and Baiyun are living a happy life. So I would like to express my thanks to you for your hard work.
判断文章格式、人称、要点、时态、
高中英语写作课教学ppt课件
2) It may bring about severe unpredicted consequence.
3）It does us much harm// It is harmful to us．// It is bad for us.
4) It brings more harm than good to us.
they benefit people’s health greatly by giving them due physical exercise．
From what has been mentioned above, we have good
reason to believe that the bike will soon become people’s
English Writing
细化写作 化繁为简
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1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this can be listed as
follows:
3 ） The reason for this is obvious ．
练吧
近年来，人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的 变化。电脑在今天已经进入寻常百姓家，请 简单阐述其原因。
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Three reasons may account for the
changes that have taken place in our
life．First of all，people’s living
While I admit that it is sometimes inconvenient for one to go on a long trip by bike, bicycles still have more advantages than disadvantages, compared with cars. There are several reasons accounting for my opinion.
高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件
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句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
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基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
句子1 翻译
句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的： 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
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基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时：要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
高中英语说明文写作(景点和城市介绍) PPT课件 图文
hot pot be famous all over the world tourist industry places of interest / scenic spots/ tourist attractions
风光旖旎 四方游客
beautiful scenery tourist from different places
• 中国加入 WTO 后，有一大批外国人来我直辖市— —重庆市参观。假设你是导游，请根据以下内容，向 外宾简单介绍我市的情况。 ［写作内容］
概况
天气 交通 饮食 旅游
位于中国西南，总面积8.24万平方千米 ， 人口约3千万 天气多变，时常下雨
交通方便、发达 特色小吃很多，火锅名扬天下
景点很多, 风光旖旎，吸引了四方游客。
第一关：正确审题
1、审语境
中国加入 WTO 后……假设你是导游……
读懂语境
2、审人称
假设你是导游……外宾简单介绍我市的情况。
第一人称
3、审时态
Present Simple Tense (一般现在时)
第二关：语言知识
related words/phrases相关词汇/短语 related sentence patterns相关句型
相关词汇和短语
位于 面积 多变 交通 便利发达 饮食 特色小吃
lie / be located/be situated area changeable transportation convenient and advanced foods special foods
火锅 名扬天下 旅游业 景点
Dear Jim, I’m happy receive your letter and know
人教版高中英语必修三《Diverse Cultures》写作指导 PPT课件
14. settle v.定居；解决→__s_e_t_tl_e_m_e_n_t_ n.定居；解决→___s_e_t_tl_e_r__n.移民
15. construction n.建筑→__c_o_n_s_tr_u_c_t__v.建造
16. material n. 材料；布料；
materialize
17. suiБайду номын сангаас v.适合 n.西装→___________adj. 合适的 → _________ n. 合适；适宜
c
language diversity
语言差异
a great/wide diversity of 多种多样的
2. The land is home to a great diversity of rare plants and animals.
3. San Francisco has diverse cultures and the cultural diversity shows in many
Bye-bye!
Unit 3 Diverse Cultures
Word formations
1. fortune n. 运气；巨款→_fo_r_t_u_n_a_t_e_ adj. 幸运的→_f_o_r_tu_n__at_e_l_y_ adv. 幸运 地→_u_n_f_o_rt_u_n_a_t_e adj. 不幸的→_u_n_f_o_r_tu_n__at_e_l_y_ adv. 不幸地 2. admit v.承认;允许进入；录取→__a_d_m_i_s_si_o_n___ n. 承认;录取;允许进入 3. definitely adv. 肯定；确实→_d_e_fi_n_it_e_adj. 肯定的；确定的 4. ___o_c_c_u_r_____vi. 发生 ( 过去式、过去分词：occurred) →__o_c_c_u_rr_e_n_c_e_ n. 发生的事；事件 5. historical adj. 历史的；→__h_i_st_o_r_ic_a_l_ly__adv. 在历史上→__h_is_t_o_r_y_n. 历史 →___h_is_t_o_r_ia_n___ n. 历史学家 6. select vt. 选择；挑选→__s_e_le_c_t_io_n__ n. 选择→_s_e_l_e_ct_i_v_e adj. 选择性的 7. minority n. 少数 →_m__in__o_r__adj. 次要的，小的; n.辅修科目 →___m__aj_o_r_it_y_ n. 大多数→__m__a_jo_r__adj．主要的，大的， n.主修科目
人教高中英语必修3Unit5写作课件(共26张PPT)
famous for
population
climate
resources
Located in the North America, Canada is the second largest country in the world，larger than the United States. It covers a total area of 9.98 million square kilometers with a population of about 35 million in 2013. It is mainly a cold country in winter, where temperature falls below freezing point throughout most of the area with only the south western coast having a relatively mild climate. Its capital is Ottawa and Toronto is one of the largest cities. Much of the country is covered by forests, so this country is rich in forestry . Also well known for its fishing and wildlife, Canada attracts the tourists from all over the world to enjoy its charming scenery. 划出介绍地点时常用的词句
高分作文要求：（1）书写美观，卷面整洁； （2）信息内容完整，句子结构; （3）篇章结构连贯。
高中英语作文讲解 PPT课件(共59张)
I’m very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.
简要内容 介绍减负前后变化 公园是否该收门票 介绍住房信息 介绍才艺大赛
时态 综合 现在 现在 现在 将来 现在 现在 现在
2005 表格
2006 提纲 2007 提纲 2008 提纲 2009 提纲
议论
书信记叙 说明
高中英语作文 PPT课件 图文
• Reason 1:高考临近，没有心情玩
• Sentence pattern: • They say/believe/hold the opinion… that…. • Eg: They say that with college entrance
examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere.
that…,since it tends to…,which is unfavorable to … Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.
Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空 气，有利健康
英语写作讲解
影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面
漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
影响给分的因素之二： 文中所采用的语言材料
人靠衣装，文靠词装
A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜； B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;
Practice
Conclusion: 小段总结，进一步亮 明观点，前后呼应。
• Eg: They think it will do good to their students.
• Point 2:３５％的学生认为不应该 春游（亮明观点）
• 注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落 （承上启下）
• Sentence pattern:
表示观点对比类写作套语
A.总起: Opinions are divided on this question. Different people hold different / opposite opinions. People have taken/adopted different attitudes
人教版高中英语必修一Unit1_Writing课件
It is important to try to make the stranger feel _e_a_sy_/_c_o_m_f_o_r_t_a_b_le_. If you have different opinions, you can _d_is_c_u_s_s_w__it_h_ others. It’s not necessary to _q_u_a_r_r_e_l _w_i_th__ them.
Yours Sincerely, …
You have trouble in _m__a_k_i_n_g_f_r_ie_n_d_s_ with others, and you do want to _c_h_a_n_g_e_ this situation.
You must _b_e_f_r_i_en__d_ly__to_ others if you want to make friends with them. You’d better look after others more than _y_o_u_r_s_el_f_.
规范书写，落笔成文: 上述四个步骤是构思写作的基础，而 规范书写是落笔成文的关键。在这个 环节中，切不可因为书写潦草、乱涂 乱改而让人看不出个所以然，结果使 整篇文章黯然失色。
Jim is addicted to smoking. He wants to give up but doesn’t know how. He asks you for advice. Please give him a letter.
In my opinion I don’t think
表达个人观点 贴切委婉
I don’t trust those people who leave you when you are in trouble, because a friend in need is a friend indeed.
高中英语写作课说课(获奖) PPT 课件
• Ending
•
_________________________________
•
_________________________________
•
……
Homework
Work in groups of two, each designing
a writing task -a letter of inquiry and asking the other to finish it.
回答问题，故用词要fea礼tu貌re、s 恳of切th，e 且助无都Pofu论应Drp对该eos方事siDge是先insc否表us愿示siSn意感liaiengmctq或谢ttiieluva能。rierrsi够yttoihefb提isny供karts
Work in groups of four
Knowledge:
Structure/lexi cal chunks
Ability: 1)Writing skill/ 2) Solve problems with English
基本思路
11 ATded YaocurhTeixnt g materials 2 Students
3 Teaching methods 4 Procedures
gratitude
Part 3
wish for an early reply
The ending
Group work
1. Work in groups of four. One of you acts as a recorder.
2. Find out the lexical chunks(词 块）in the three letters .
高中英语写作公开课(共61张PPT)
表示选择关系的并列句
常用的连词有or , either…or…..，otherwise, or else(否则）, 等连接.如：
Either you are mad or I am. You must go early, otherwise you will miss the bus.
Will he still be there or will he have gone away? Take this bus or else you won’t get there in time.
第五种句型：S+V+P
She is a student. He has become an engineer.
It tastes sweet.
His face goes red.
注意：系动词除了be 动词外，还包括become, turn, look, seem, appear, sound, taste, smell, remain, prove, keep, fall.
并列句：由并列连词把两个或两个以上的简单句 连在一起的句子叫做并列句。
He helps me and I help him. He not only gave us a lot of advice , but also helped us to study English.
注意：不同的并列连词表示并列分句之间的不同关系， 根据并列分句之间的关系不同，并列分句可以分为四种。
Once, she teached in India for many years . In 1950, she set up the Missionaries of charity to help the poor in Calcutta. She devoted to help the poor 、 the patiences、the homeless persons and the dead persons. Because of those, in 1979, she got the Nobel peace prize in 1997. she died in India.
高中英语写作课ppt课件
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DISCUSSION:
What is a good writing？
Content: everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整)
Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)
next to our natural resources. 4) I fleofrtgot my dictionary at home. 5) It will tcaokste us much money to buy one.
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改错
I∧t built in the 1980s. was
Since the program of reducing learning load was
introduced, my life, however, has become much more
interesting. I frequently pay a visit to museums, drop
Before that, I was often exhausted at weekends. I
attended school and had classes the whole day. In the
evening，I was often forced to do my boring
homework and I could not go to bed until 11:30.
besides; However ; because ; Therefore
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DISCUSSION:
What is a good writing？
Content: everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整)
Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)
next to our natural resources. 4) I fleofrtgot my dictionary at home. 5) It will tcaokste us much money to buy one.
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改错
I∧t built in the 1980s. was
Since the program of reducing learning load was
introduced, my life, however, has become much more
interesting. I frequently pay a visit to museums, drop
Before that, I was often exhausted at weekends. I
attended school and had classes the whole day. In the
evening，I was often forced to do my boring
homework and I could not go to bed until 11:30.
besides; However ; because ; Therefore
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高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
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_I__co_u__ld_n_’_t_h_a_v__e_p_a_s_s_e_d___the physics exam
第一档(差)：(1-5分)
• 1. 未完成试题规定的任务。 • 2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题
要求。 • 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 • 4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。 • 5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 • 6. 信息未能传达给读者。
较强的语言运用能力。 • 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 • 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好)：(16-20分)
• 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 • 2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 • 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 • 4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇
dictionary.
look up
2.The ability to read English passages is slowly.
low
3.There is no doubt that English Study needs lots
of time and efforts.
learning
4.Only by this way, can we keep up with other students.in
5.I'm LiHua, a new student of you.
Li Hua
yours
6.My English level is common and I can't speak∧very
well.
average
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
it
7.I believe we can get alone well with each other.
along
8.Besides, I think speaking English is as important as writing English. spoken
written
9.I study English for 12 years so I think I know
havEensgtluisdhievdery well.
afternoon. 3. Not until yesterday afternoon did he
come here. 4. It was yesterday afternoon that he came
here.
二、感知典型范例
——句型层面2
• 令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道这么多事情。 1. He is surprised that the little girl knows so
Avoid Chinglish!
1) Traffic in Shanghai is too chreoawvdye. d. 2) There ihsas a highway connected with
Beijing. 3) Though she's almost 40，but she still
many things. 2. To his surprise , the little girl knows so
many things. 3. What surprises him is that the little girl
knows so many things.
二、感知典型范例
——段落层面1
二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面2
•adj.令人惊奇的 • surprising •→amazing •→astonishing
二、感知典型范例
——句型层面1
• 他昨天下午来的。
1. He came here yesterday afternoon. 2. He didn’t come here until yesterday
_I_t_w_a_s__n_o_t_u_n_t_i_l _he had read the news in the newspaper _th__a_t_ he knew what had
happened.
6. I passed the physics exam because of your help. (用虚拟语气）
定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确 定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去
2分。 4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，
应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性
及上下文的连贯性。
高考英语评分原则：
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。
评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英， 美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降 低一个档次。
7. 语言首先要求准确通顺。 8. 鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。
英语各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(很好);(21-25分)
• 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 • 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 • 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 • 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备
所致。 • 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 • 6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)
• 1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 • 2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 • 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 • 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 • 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 • 6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!
DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？
Content:
Everything which is related to your view needs to includ.(内容要完整) （内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字 提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人 家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都 要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）
plans to compete. 4) I floerfgt ot my dictionary at home. 5) It will tcaokset us much money to buy one.
改错
1.I can't understand them when I meet new
words,so I have to refer to themmeinetthweith
总结：什么样的作文是一篇好作文
• 无遗漏信息点，即要点全面 • 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词 • 句式复杂多样 • 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
接下来，我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。
二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面1
• adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever •→ wise •→ smart •→ bright •→ intelligent
This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.
高中英语写作课课件
近几年来，在新课标试卷中，书面表 达趋向于提纲式作文，但是这些提纲 只给出了大致的写作方向，没有限制 具体内容，属于半开放式的提示；考 查应用中的书信，话题与中学生的学 习生活密切相关，考生会觉得有话可 说，有利于考生的自由发挥。
高考英语评分原则：
1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确
10.There are some advice in teaching English.
is
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
1. They even threw rubbish into the lake. They totally ignored the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby. (使用V-ing形式)
第二档(较差)：(6-10分)
• 1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 • 2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。 • 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 • 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。 • 5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 • 6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
This village is very small， which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are leading a richer and happier life than before. Now it is taking on a new look.
They even threw rubbish into the lake, _to_t_a_ll_y_i_g_n_o_r_i_n_g the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby.
第一档(差)：(1-5分)
• 1. 未完成试题规定的任务。 • 2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题
要求。 • 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 • 4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。 • 5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 • 6. 信息未能传达给读者。
较强的语言运用能力。 • 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 • 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好)：(16-20分)
• 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 • 2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 • 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 • 4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇
dictionary.
look up
2.The ability to read English passages is slowly.
low
3.There is no doubt that English Study needs lots
of time and efforts.
learning
4.Only by this way, can we keep up with other students.in
5.I'm LiHua, a new student of you.
Li Hua
yours
6.My English level is common and I can't speak∧very
well.
average
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
it
7.I believe we can get alone well with each other.
along
8.Besides, I think speaking English is as important as writing English. spoken
written
9.I study English for 12 years so I think I know
havEensgtluisdhievdery well.
afternoon. 3. Not until yesterday afternoon did he
come here. 4. It was yesterday afternoon that he came
here.
二、感知典型范例
——句型层面2
• 令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道这么多事情。 1. He is surprised that the little girl knows so
Avoid Chinglish!
1) Traffic in Shanghai is too chreoawvdye. d. 2) There ihsas a highway connected with
Beijing. 3) Though she's almost 40，but she still
many things. 2. To his surprise , the little girl knows so
many things. 3. What surprises him is that the little girl
knows so many things.
二、感知典型范例
——段落层面1
二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面2
•adj.令人惊奇的 • surprising •→amazing •→astonishing
二、感知典型范例
——句型层面1
• 他昨天下午来的。
1. He came here yesterday afternoon. 2. He didn’t come here until yesterday
_I_t_w_a_s__n_o_t_u_n_t_i_l _he had read the news in the newspaper _th__a_t_ he knew what had
happened.
6. I passed the physics exam because of your help. (用虚拟语气）
定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确 定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去
2分。 4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，
应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性
及上下文的连贯性。
高考英语评分原则：
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。
评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英， 美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降 低一个档次。
7. 语言首先要求准确通顺。 8. 鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。
英语各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(很好);(21-25分)
• 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 • 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 • 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 • 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备
所致。 • 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 • 6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)
• 1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 • 2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 • 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 • 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 • 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 • 6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!
DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？
Content:
Everything which is related to your view needs to includ.(内容要完整) （内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字 提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人 家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都 要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）
plans to compete. 4) I floerfgt ot my dictionary at home. 5) It will tcaokset us much money to buy one.
改错
1.I can't understand them when I meet new
words,so I have to refer to themmeinetthweith
总结：什么样的作文是一篇好作文
• 无遗漏信息点，即要点全面 • 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词 • 句式复杂多样 • 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
接下来，我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。
二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面1
• adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever •→ wise •→ smart •→ bright •→ intelligent
This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.
高中英语写作课课件
近几年来，在新课标试卷中，书面表 达趋向于提纲式作文，但是这些提纲 只给出了大致的写作方向，没有限制 具体内容，属于半开放式的提示；考 查应用中的书信，话题与中学生的学 习生活密切相关，考生会觉得有话可 说，有利于考生的自由发挥。
高考英语评分原则：
1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确
10.There are some advice in teaching English.
is
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
1. They even threw rubbish into the lake. They totally ignored the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby. (使用V-ing形式)
第二档(较差)：(6-10分)
• 1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 • 2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。 • 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 • 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。 • 5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 • 6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
This village is very small， which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are leading a richer and happier life than before. Now it is taking on a new look.
They even threw rubbish into the lake, _to_t_a_ll_y_i_g_n_o_r_i_n_g the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby.